Grade 1-2 Poetry Poetry writing can be used to express personal feelings about important moments and events. It offers an easy and meaningful alternative to traditional writing forms. Criteria for Poetry Writing: 1. self-selection of topics – about the everyday lives, interests, and concerns of students 2. uses the unstructured form of free-verse (nonrhyming) 3. has a unique form and shape Key Ideas for this Unit: During this unit, students will develop their understanding of the genre of poetry through discussion and writing of free verse poems. Working in free-verse allows all students to have early writing success. The goal of this unit is to deepen their knowledge of this genre and apply the traits of good writing. Students will hear, view, notice, and discuss free-verse poems written by students of similar ages. Through the context of noticing and discussing the whole poem, students explore elements of poetry. In addition, using kid’s poems as models gives students enthusiasm, confidence, and ideas for their own writing. Seeing lots of poems in original handwriting and invented spellings sends a powerful message to students: “You can do this too!” Goals and Overview: Students will learn to… experiment with language select a meaningful title focus on a single topic incorporate detail use imagery think about effective beginnings and endings create a mood express feelings with their own personal voice Note: Continue to reinforce expectations for Writing Workshop. Repeat procedural mini-lessons as needed. Also, repeat any of the following mini-lessons that discuss craft as needed. Your conferences with students will support you in determining which mini-lessons students need repeated. Lesson ideas and resources for this unit were taken from the books by Regie Routman, Kids’ Poems: Teaching First Graders to Love Writing Poetry and Kids’ Poems: Teaching Second Graders to Love Writing Poetry Getting Started: Ways to Bring Poetry to the Classroom 1. Establish a Poetry Corner have lots of books with free-verse poetry, not just rhymes o include poems related to science and nature - whatever subjects your students are interested in o include poetry anthologies 2. Read Poetry Aloud read lots of free-verse poems (students will be writing in this form) 3. Institute “Poet of the Day” (grade 2) a class poet reads a poem aloud to the class each day (poems can be written by the student or by a published poet) students practice the poem in advance can be assigned as a weekly class job Mini-Lesson #1-2 Immersion: Sharing and Discussing Children’s Poems (Gr. 1 pages 10-14, Gr. 2 pages 12-18) Begin by telling students how excited you are by what they are about to do. i.e. I am so excited! We’ve been reading and enjoying lots of poems together. Today we’re going to learn how to write poetry, and I know you will love doing it. I will be showing you lots of poems written by first/second graders just like you. That will help us get started and give you lots of ideas. But before we begin, let’s find out what you already know about poetry. Brainstorm a list of “What We Know About Poetry.” Over the course of two lessons, immerse students in free-verse poems written by children “just like them.” Share several original handwritten drafts of children’s poems as well as final versions. Read poems aloud and then ask students, “What do you notice? What did the writer do?” Comment on any of the following as you notice and discuss the whole poem. Topic Word Choice Expression of feelings Title Special or missing punctuation Rhythm/beat Shape Line breaks Ending line The goal is to dispel any notions about poetry writing being hard, constrained, or requiring strict conventions. Draw the students’ attention to the following: doesn’t have to rhyme can use few words can be about anything is easy to create has a unique form and shape often ends with a punch may or may not have rhythm or a beat has a title may use invented spelling lets us know the poet may be serious or funny taps into student’s interests usually expresses important personal feelings Mini-Lesson #3 Shared Writing – Writing a Poem Together (Gr. 1 pages 24-28) Pick a topic that students will be familiar with – i.e. pizza. Together, brainstorm words that go with the topic. Record on chart paper. - pepperoni tomato sauce hot - cheese crusty Writing: Conduct a shared writing of a poem with the students. Use any of the following prompts to guide the writing. Record the students’ ideas. Reread the poem from the beginning each time students contribute a new line, thought, or idea. What should we call our poem? Who has an idea of how we can begin? What could our first line be? How else can we say that? Let’s hear how that sounds with what we have so far. How about if we say it this way? Do you like the rhythm? Let’s clap that to hear the beat. What about an ending line? Let’s read it trying different endings. Who has another idea? Which ending do you like best? Does the poem look the way we want it? How might we change it? Let’s read it again and hear how it sounds. Does it sound right? Does the title make sense? Do we want to change anything to make our poem look or sound better? Share: With a partner, have students partner read the class poem to each other. Mini-Lesson #4 Choosing Topics (Gr. 1 page 33, Gr. 2 page 31) Encourage students to write about what really interests them – what they care about, what they know, what they observe, how they feel about things. Model writing your own list of poetry topics. i.e. “I really care about and am interested in lots of things. I might write about…” The Seasons: Summertime, Snowflakes Sports: I Like Gymnastics Pets: My Fish Nature: Flowers, Butterflies Favorite places: At the Beach Family: My Brother/Sister School/Friends: Recess, All My Friends Feelings: Surprise Party Hobbies: Playing the Piano Begin an anchor chart. “Poets …” write about their topic with big, strong feelings. Writing: Distribute “My Poetry Topics” handout (see last page). Have students begin writing their own topics list. Share: Have students share their list of poetry topics with a partner. Mini-Lesson #5 Writing the First Poems Independently (Gr. 1 pages 17-18, Gr. 2 pages 20-22) Model for students how to choose a topic you are interested in from your own list of poetry topics. Using a Think Aloud, model for students how to talk in detail about what you think you might like to write a poem about. As you begin writing your own first poem in front of the students, brainstorm possible beginnings, word choice, endings, etc. as students are “listening in.” Possible prompts to guide your think aloud include: I’m going to write about …. What do I want to say about…? Okay, so how could I start my poem? What else do I want to say? Wow! I like all those words I used. I chose action words that describe. I might want to repeat some of those words. Let’s hear how it sounds so far. Let me think about the ending line to make sure my poem sounds as if it’s ended. Writing: Have students begin writing their first poems independently. Remind students to pursue a topic they are interested in and to think about word choice, beginnings, endings, etc. Share: Have students share their poems with a partner. Note: You will use your own poem to model poetry strategies throughout the unit. Note: Typical comments to use when conferencing with students throughout this unit: I like that title. I know exactly what your poem will be about. I saw you rereading your first few lines. That’s what thoughtful writers do. You seem to be having trouble getting started. Let’s think together about the poems we looked at today. I’ll help you think about how to begin. I like the way your poem looks on the page. I can tell you’re thinking about that as you write. What an interesting topic. I can’t wait to hear how your poem turns out. I like the words you used. I can picture exactly how you were feeling. Mini-Lesson #6 Small Poems (Gr. 1 pages 33-34, Gr. 2 page 32) Share some short poems written by children just like them. i.e. “Vinnie” (Grade 1, p.48), “All My Friends” (Grade 2, p.66), “Bubbles” (Grade 1, p.62). Tell students that poems can be short. Point out how these poets don’t write a lot of words but they choose their words carefully. They choose words that match exactly to what they are trying to say – they reach for honest and precise words. Model writing a short poem. Deliberately use a few words, modeling how to choose words carefully so that you can still be descriptive and express feelings. Add to the anchor chart. “Poets…” use just the right word to say what they mean. Writing: Have students begin writing a small poem. Share: Have students share their small poem with a partner. Mini-Lesson #7 Choosing Language Carefully (Gr. 2 pages 32-33) Careful word choice can create images, moods, and depth in a poem. Share other examples of poems written by children just like them. Notice and discuss how the poets choose their words carefully to create a picture to show they feel – how they make every word count. They create the exact images or moods that they want to express. Display the poem “Rollerblading” (grade 2, pg.74). Read the poem aloud. Notice and discuss the way the poem is written on the page. Each word is emphasized on its own. You can feel the speed and energy of the poet. Display the poem “Hummingbirds” (grade 2, pg.42). Read the poem aloud. Notice and discuss how the poet beautifully describes the hummingbirds. Note the poet’s intense and lyrical observation including his simile (a comparison using like or as), “like holograms” and his metaphor (a comparison without like or as), “their tiny feathers a train.” Talk about how the poet made every word count. Using your own poem, think aloud and model how you add a word/words to create a mood or an image to show how you feel. Writing: Have students continue writing their poems. Remind students how poets choose their words carefully to create a picture to show how they feel. Share: Have students share a place in their poem where they have added a word to create a mood or an image that they want to express. Mini-Lesson #8 List Poems (Gr. 1 pages 32, 34) Through a shared writing, model how to write a very easy type of poem called a list poem. Engage students in the following conversation as you record their responses on large chart paper entitled “Mother’s Day” (You may wish to write a list poem on another topic). Let’s write a poem together about Mother’s Day. How many of you make breakfast for your moms? How about if we start with “We wake up and make breakfast” What do you make her? Write all the foods students make in a list form, stopping a few times to reread the growing list together to hear how it sounds. After several suggestions, say: How about if we now say “And a whole lot more?” And then what happens? How can we end our poem? Do you take her out to dinner? How about “And then… We take her out to dinner” Reread the poem together. Ask students if they like the way it looks and sounds. Add to the anchor chart. “Poets…” reread their poem to see if it sounds right. Writing: Have students begin writing a list poem. Remind students to reread the poem to make sure they like the way it looks and sounds. Share: Have students share their list poems with a partner. Mini-Lesson #9 Line Breaks and White Space (Gr. 1 page 35, Gr. 2 pages 35-36) Discuss how poems have their own special music. Tell students that one way to give our poems music is to divide our words into lines that go down the paper. We call them line breaks. Line breaks help set the rhythm of the poem as well as to create the white space and shape of the poem. Line breaks help your poem look and sound the way you want it to. Poets can set up the lines however they wish – however they feel their poem should sound and look. Model how to think about and apply line breaks on a sample poem written without line breaks. Read the first lines of the poem several times, each time pausing in a logical but different place so the students hear and see the different possibilities. As determined by the students, model how to insert slash marks on the poem to show where your voice stops. That will be the end of the line. i.e. Where should I place the line breaks? Do you want it to sound (this way) or (that way)? Should we end it here or there? Which way sounds better to you? So that’s where we will put our line break. Rewrite several lines from the poem with the line breaks showing students the resulting line breaks, white space, and shape of the poem. Note: There is no one “right way” to teach about line breaks and white space. What we want is for students to develop their own ear for rhythm and eye for visual form so they are able to determine what sounds and looks right to them. While you model line breaks all along and talk about it in the context of noticing and discussing kids’ poems, don’t worry about line breaks until students are editing their favorite poems. Add to the anchor chart. “Poets…” think about how they want their poems to sound and look on the page using line breaks and white space. Writing: Have students continue writing their poems, thinking about how they would like their poem to sound and look on the page. Remind students that as free-verse poets, they can set up the lines however they wish. They add slash marks to show where their voice stops. That will be the end of the line. Share: Have students share with a partner a place where they added slash marks to their poem to show where their voice stops. Mini-Lesson #10 Using Repetition to Express Feeling (Gr. 1 page 36, Gr. 2 pages 34-35) Repeating words, phrases, and lines can add much impact to a poem. Discuss how sometimes a poet wants to express strong feelings in their poetry. One way a poet can do this is by repeating certain words, phrases, or lines of a poem. Display the poem “Only One” (Grade 1, p.54). Read the poem aloud and discuss the feelings conveyed. Talk about how this poem is divided into stanzas with each ending “I hate being the Only One” and how that repetition lets us know the depth of the poet’s feelings. Display the poem “Storm” (Grade 2, p.70). Read the poem aloud and discuss the feelings conveyed. Talk about how the repetition of the word “Oh” four times as well as the poet’s repeated use of different sounds of thunder and rain gives this poem a “stormy” rhythm. Using your own poem, think aloud and model how you repeat a word, phrase, or line to add feeling. Add to the anchor chart. “Poets…” repeat words or lines to add feeling. Writing: Have students continue writing their poems. Remind students to think about a word, phrase, or line that they might like to repeat to help them better express a strong feeling. Share: Have students share with a partner a place where they have used repetition as a way to convey strong feeling. Mini-Lesson #11 Ending Lines (Gr. 1 page 36, Gr. 2 pages 33-34) Discuss how poems often end with a punch. We can tell when a poem is over by the way the ending line sounds. Ending lines often have a different beat. Display the poem “Bubbles” (Grade 1, p.63). Read the poem aloud. Notice and discuss how the poet uses the ending line “no more bubbles” to change the rhythm and shape of the poem. It sounds like the poem has ended. Display the poem “I’m the Pilot” (Grade 2, p.77). Read the poem aloud. Notice and discuss how the poet uses the ending line “All in my reading room” to surprise the reader and let us in on what the poem is really about. Using your own poem, model how you think about your ending line and how you end the poem with a punch. Add to the anchor chart. “Poets…” end their poems with a punch. Writing: Have students continue writing their poems. Remind students that good poets think about their ending lines and often end their poems with a punch. Share: Have students share their endings with a partner. Mini-Lesson #12 Fancying Up Your Poem: Revising – Word Choice and Feelings (repeat as needed) Display the original draft of “Bubbles” (Grade 1, p.62). Notice and discuss how the poet crossed out his first written ending line “that’s the bubble” and changed it to “no more bubbles” This shows that he reread his poem and asked himself, “Am I saying exactly what I want to say?” Using your own poem, model how you reread the poem. Think aloud how you ask yourself three questions: Am I saying exactly what I want to say? Do I show big, strong feelings? What can I add? (You can add big, strong feelings. You can add a meaningful title) Writing: Have students choose their own poem they wish to publish. Remind students to reread the poem and ask themselves the three questions. Share: Have students share the poem they wish to publish with a partner. Mini-Lesson #13 Choosing a Meaningful Title Discuss the importance of meaningful titles. Using your own poem, model how you put in a title that goes with your poem. Think aloud how you ask yourself, “Does the title make sense?” Writing: Have students add a title to the poem they wish to publish. Remind students to ask themselves, “Does the title make sense?” Share: Have students share the poem they wish to publish with a partner. Mini-Lesson #14 Fancying Up Your Poem: Editing – Form and Shape Using your own poem, model how to include lines breaks and white space to be sure that the poem looks and sounds good to you. Show how you reread. Think aloud how you ask yourself: Do I like the way it looks and sounds on the page? What can I add? (You can add line breaks and white space.) Note: The unstructured form of free-verse poetry allows students the possibility for using phrases and words instead of full sentences. Exactness in capitalization and punctuation – although these remain important – is eased somewhat. You may revisit the mini-lesson on the use of the word wall for the spelling of high frequency words. Writing: Have partners read aloud one another’s poems - the poems they have chosen to publish. Remind students to listen and decide if their poem sounds the way they’d like it to sound. Have students ask themselves, “Do I like the way it looks and sounds on the page?” Have students make changes to the shape of their poem if needed. Share: Have students share the poem they wish to publish with a partner. Mini-Lesson #15 Creating an Anthology (done over several lessons) (Gr. 1 pages 37-38, Gr. 2 pages 37-39) Tell students that a poetry anthology is a collection of poems. Explore some commercially published poetry anthologies. Together, brainstorm the different features noticed in the anthologies. Ask, “What did you notice about the anthologies we looked at?” Record on large chart paper. i.e. Cover and title Dedication Table of contents Illustrations Poet profiles –information about each poet Poets’ photographs Index Tell students that they will be creating a classroom anthology that will contain one poem from every student. Tell students they will need to decide as a class which features they would like to include and also how they would like to organize their anthology. Writing: Have students continue to work on the poem they wish to publish. Share: Have students share the poem they wish to publish with a partner. Mini-Lesson #16 Creating an Anthology (done over several days) (Gr. 1 pages 37-38, Gr. 2 pages 37-39) Brainstorm possibilities for what the class anthology will include. Decide as a class which of the following features you would like to include as well as the format of the anthology. Record on large chart paper. Possibilities may include: A lot of different poems by different authors Acknowledgements – at front or back – give thanks to those who helped Index at back – can be titles, authors, first lines, subjects Contents at front – title of poem, author, page format (whole page, columns) Title page Introduction or About This Book section Illustrations – (format – two pages for each poem, can use colored pencils) Dedication Back cover About The Poet page Writing of poems – word processed Title (ex. First Poems of First Grade) Cover Note: The anthology you and your students create can be as simple or complex as you decide. Students might each bring one poem to final copy with an accompanying illustration. These can be bound simply into a classroom book, and each student gets a photocopy to read and keep. You may also include an “About the Poet” page (from the teacher too) to go along with each poem. Mini-Lesson #17 Writing Celebration To honor the students’ writing efforts, end the unit with a celebratory sharing. Because poems are usually fairly short, all students may have the chance to read their poems to the whole group. Enjoy a snack. Consider inviting another class or other adults in the building. My Poetry Topics 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. 10. Poetry Unit of Study Grades 1 and 2 Lessons 1-2: Immersion: Sharing and Discussing Children’s Poems Lesson 3: Shared Writing – Writing a Poem Together Lesson 4: Choosing Topics Lesson 5: Writing the First Poems Independently Lesson 6: Small Poems Lesson 7: Choosing Language Carefully Lesson 8: List Poems Lesson 9: Line Breaks and White Space Lesson 10: Using Repetition to Express Feeling Lesson 11: Ending Lines Lesson 12: Fancying Up Your Poem: Revising – Word Choice and Feelings Lesson 13: Choosing a Meaningful Title Lesson 14: Fancying Up Your Poem: Editing – Form and Shape Lessons 15-16: Creating an Anthology Lesson 17: Writing Celebration