English IV Adapted from the Terrebonne Parish School System’s Credit Recovery Exam for East Baton Rouge Parish Pre and Post Assessment Pre Assessment This test is a secure document. All policies and procedures outlined in East Baton Rouge Parish School System Test Security Policy must be followed before, during, and after administration of this test. East Baton Rouge Parish School System Department of Accountability, Assessment, and Evaluation English IV Proficiency Test SPOTLIGHT ON Women Writers in the Romantic Period 1 Critics and historians may continue to quibble over the dates and definitions of Romanticism. But all agree that the period 1798-1832 in England was characterized by profound social change and unprecedented literary productivity. These phenomena altered the position that women occupied in society and brought about new opportunities and new problems for 5 women writers. As the major male Romantic writers (the so-called Big Six) solidified their claim to poetry as the genre chat represented the highest literary achievement, women writers turned to the novel. Two of these writers, Mary Shelley and Jane Austen, can be said to be Romantics; however; their social position as women writers prevented them from simply adopting their male contemporaries’ philosophies and literary styles. 10 Romantic writers embraced certain elements of Enlightenment philosophy; for example, they applauded Enlightenment philosophers' idealism and faith in the perfectibility of human beings. However, these writers deplored insistence on reason over emotion, and an emphasis on science that discounted the spiritual and supernatural. As a result, male writers increasingly incorporated qualities associated with women--such as extreme emotional sensitivity--into 15 their own work. Inspired by Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792), literary women, on the other hand, countered the prevailing Romantic trends by writing books that portrayed women as rational as well as sensitive creatures, possessing both sense and sensibility to borrow the title of one of Jane Austen's novels. As encouraging as Wollstonecraft's Vindication must have been to some women of the day, it 20 produced quite the opposite reaction in most male, and many female, members of society: The novelist Horace Walpole (1717-1797) called her "a hyena in petticoats." The resulting backlash, which had been simmering since the publication of Vindication in 1792, reached full boil when William Godwin published Memoirs of the Author of “A Vindication of the Rights of Woman " (1798), a tribute to his late wife that scandalized the public with its accounts of her 25 illicit love affairs. In this climate, women who challenged the conventional views of marriage and women's roles were ridiculed. Those who spoke their minds in print risked being publicly renounced and having their work rejected by publishers. Jane Austen (I775-1817) 30 35 Jane Austen was already practicing her craft when Mary Shelley was born. The daughter of an Anglican minister, Austen grew up in a respectable family with social status but little money. What few resources they had were spread thin among two daughters and five sons, with the largest expenses being devoted, as was common practice, to the formal education of the boys. Jane and her sister received an education typical for girls of the gentry: two years at a boarding-school and lessons at home in the female accomplishments of drawing, music, and needlework. Jane also must have made good use of her father's library. In an era when being known as a lady novelist was often more a stigma than an honor, it is not surprising that Austen published all her novels anonymously, despite the fact that critics generally agreed her stories would not harm young female readers' moral 2 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV 40 45 Proficiency Test development. Careful readers, however, could see Austen's subtle but fierce satire of the social and educational status quo. Austen's novels about the social habits, marriage conventions, and manners of the English gentry quietly insist that women are rational creatures, much the same assertion that brought so much scorn upon the writer of A Vindication of the Rights of Woman. Furthermore, Austen's exquisitely rendered descriptions of her characters are often cloaked in an irony detectable only to those sympathetic to her critique of society's constraints on women. The opening sentences of her most famous novel, Pride and Prejudice, illustrate her trademark irony and humor: It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife. However little known the feelings or views of such a man may be on his first entering a neighborhood, this truth is so well fixed in the minds of the surrounding families that he is considered 50 as the rightful property of some one or other of their daughters. "My dear Mr. Bennet," said his lady to him one day, "have you heard that Netherfield Park is let at last?" Mr. Bennet replied that he had not. "But it is," returned she;" "for Mrs. Long has just been here, and she told me all about it.” 55 Mr. Bennet made no answer. "Do not you want to know who has taken it?" cried his wife impatiently. "You want to tell me, and I have no objection to hearing it." This was invitation enough. "Why, my dear, you must know, Mrs. Long says that Netherfield is taken by a young man of 60 large fortune from the north of England...." "Is he married or single?" "Oh! single, my dear, to be sure! A single man of large fortune ... What a fine thing for our girls!" "How so? how can it affect them?" 65 "My dear Mr. Bennet," replied his wife, “how can you be so tiresome! You must know that I am thinking of his marrying one of them." "Is that his design in settling here? "Design! nonsense, how can you talk so! But it is very likely that he may fall in love with one of them, and therefore you must visit him as soon as he comes," - Jane Austen; from Pride and Prejudice 70 The Austen family remained so protective of their daughter's reputation (and presumably their own as well) that when Jane Austen died at the age of forty-one, the headstone made for her grave made no mention of the six novels that, to this day, have never been out of print. Instead it praised "the benevolence of her heart, the sweetness of her temper, and the extraordinary endowments of her mind." Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley (1797-1851) 75 Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley, child of two of the most influential writers of the period, grew up in an unconventional and intellectual household frequented by leading artists and writers of the day. Her famous mother had died a few days after giving birth, and William Godwin remarried a woman who was everything Mary Wollstonecraft was not: dull and 3 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test conventional. Because her stepmother tried to force her into domesticity, the young girl escaped by reading in her father's library and engaging in stimulating adult conversation with the artists and intellectuals who considered themselves students of William Godwin’s philosophy. One of these guests was a brilliant young poet named Percy Bysshe Shelley, with whom Mary went on to share a brief eight years of passion, intellectual partnership, adventure, and tragedy. 80 85 In 1814, a teenage Mary Wollstonecraft Godwin eloped with Shelley (who was married at the time), and in 1816 she married him after the death of his legal wife. The couple endured the deaths of three of their four children, and in 1822, Shelley drowned in a boating accident in Italy. Mary Shelley never remarried, and when she died at age fiftythree she was survived by her son, Percy Florence Shelley, and by a literary legacy of six novels, volumes of essays, poems, travel narratives, and a comprehensive journal. Whatever her other accomplishments, however, the reputation of Mary Shelley is forever linked to her first novel, Frankenstein, which she began when she was just nineteen. 90 The “Author's Introduction” to the 1831 edition explains the origins of this most famous book. The Shelleys spent the summer of 1816 at Lake Geneva with Mary Shelley's stepsister Claire and Lord Byron. Since the weather had been cold and rainy, the group decided that for amusement and an exercise in composition each one of them would make up a ghost story. Frustrated during the daylight hours by her lack of inspiration, Mary Shelley was visited in her dreams by a vision that would become the subject of the most enduring ghost story in English literature. 95 I saw—with shut eyes, but acute mental vision—I saw the pale student of unhallowed arts kneeling beside the thing he had put together. I saw the hideous phantasm of a man stretched out and then, on the working of some powerful engine, show signs of life and stir with an uneasy, half-Vital motion. . . . He would hope that, left to itself, the slight spark of life which he had communicated would fade, that this thing which had received such imperfect animation 105 would subside into dead matter, and he might sleep in the belief that the silence of the grave would quench forever the transient existence of the hideous corpse which he had looked upon as the cradle of life. He sleeps; but he is awakened; he opens his eyes; behold, the horrid thing stands at his bedside, opening his curtains and looking on him with yellow, watery, but speculative eyes. 100 -Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley, from Frankenstein 110 115 With the story of Victor Frankenstein's monstrous, motherless creation, Mary Shelley could examine her own fears of motherhood and her own orphaned condition; in addition, she could vent an anger and violence considered especially unfeminine in her day. For today's readers, poetry dominates the literary landscape of the Romantic period; however, novelists such as Mary Shelley and Jane Austen remind us of women's participation in a flourishing genre. In the fantasies of Gothic novels, in the privacy of letters and journals, or in very public and forceful essays, women writers recorded their perspectives on the events of a turbulent age. 4 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test Answer the following questions about the above passage. 1. Analyze the content and structure of the piece. The author’s purpose is to A. Inform the reader about the Romantic Period. B. Inform about Jane Austen and Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley and entertain the reader with excerpts from these authors’ works. C. Inform the reader about the disconnect between Romantic values and women’s worth and persuade the reader by arguing that Austen and Shelley did not write like their male counterparts. D. Inform the reader about the disconnect between Romantic values and women’s worth and entertain the reader with excerpts from these Austen’s and Shelley’s works. E. None of these are correct. 2. To achieve this purpose, the author uses ______ which is effective because ____. A. First person narrator; the author is a woman which makes the reader more sympathetic to the content. B. Second person narrator; the author is talking about other people, and this point of view keeps the reader interested in the content. C. Third person limited narrator; the author is only focusing on two writers from the period. D. Third person narrator; the author wants to maintain a formal tone and come off as more objective than subjective. E. None of these are correct. 3. Read the following sample evaluation of the text. Choose the true statement. In the first paragraph, the author claims, “Two of these writers, Mary Shelley and Jane Austen, can be said to be Romantics; however; their social position as women writers prevented them from simply adopting their male contemporaries’ philosophies and literary styles.” The author of the piece begins with strong claims in each of the subsequent paragraphs. In the second paragraph, the author informs the reader about the history of women writers and claims that Mary Wollstonecraft inspired “literary women” to create “rational” and “sensitive” female characters. In the third paragraph, the author connects this with the way society viewed women at that time. Women, like those who created strong female characters, who did not follow the conventions of the day were punished with scorn and possible loss of opportunities. However, here is where the author’s writing loses focus because of the choices in structure. In the sections about Austen and Wollstonecraft, the author shifts focus from proving the claim to mostly informing. Though the author does refer to specific examples that show how these female writers acted independently and how others reacted to them, the structure does not refer back to the original claim, making the argument and the text as a whole less effective than it could be. Also, the conclusion merely wraps up the information; it, like the examples before, does not clearly connect with how their social positions influenced their literary choices. 5 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test A. The author’s claim in “Spotlight on women Writers in the Romantic Period” could be written more concisely as, “Two of these Romantic writers, Mary Shelly and Jane Austen, did not simply adopt their male contemporaries’ philosophies and literary styles because of their social positions as women.” B. The author of “Spotlight on women Writers in the Romantic Period” incorrectly used the semicolon after “however.” It should be a comma because “however” is a transitional word linking two complete sentences. C. The author of this evaluation accurately believes that the author of “Spotlight on women Writers in the Romantic Period” did not effectively achieve the purpose set out by the structure of the writing. D. All of these are true. E. None of these are true. 4. The sentence in lines 38-39 reads, “Careful readers, however, could see Austen's subtle but fierce satire of the social and educational status quo.” Choose the correct response. A. The sentence should read, “Careful readers; however, could see Austen's subtle but fierce satire of the social and educational status quo.” B. The sentence should read, “Careful readers however, could see Austen's subtle but fierce satire of the social and educational status quo C. The sentence should read, “Careful readers, however could see Austen's subtle but fierce satire of the social and educational status quo D. The sentence should read, “Careful readers, however; could see Austen's subtle but fierce satire of the social and educational status quo E. None of these are correct. Use the opening from Pride and Prejudice to correctly match the statements. 5 6 7 8 9 This stylistic choice clearly develops Mr. and Mrs. Bennet’s character. This stylistic choice in the first sentence works to create a jovially critical tone. This stylistic choice allows the author to use the characters and a narrator to both tell a story and comment on the beliefs of her society. Lines that use specific diction to emphasize the belief that women were property of men occur in lines… These lines expose the accepted assumptions about men and women of the time period and show disdain for this assumption through word choice and sentence structure. A B hyperbole 46-50 C dialogue D 46, 50 E point of view 10. The reader can infer from the style of the dialogue between Mr. And Mrs. Bennet that A. B. C. D. Mrs. Bennet is very sensible and Mr. Bennet reflects the values of the time period. Mr. Bennet is very sensible and Mrs. Bennet reflects the values of the time period. Both Mr. And Mrs. Bennet are very sensible and reflect the values of the time period. Neither Mr. nor Mrs. Bennet is very sensible and does not reflect the values of the time period. E. None of these are true. 6 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test 11. The theme of the excerpt from Pride and Prejudice is ___ as supported by ___ Women are obsessed with men; Mrs. Bennet’s words and actions. Men are obsessed with women Mr. Bennet’s words and actions. Men should pay more attention to women; Mrs. Bennet’s words and actions. Marriage is the most important institution in a person’s life; Mr. Bennet’s words and actions. E. None of these are true. A. B. C. D. 12. What is ironic about the inscription on Jane Austen’s headstone? A. B. C. D. E. It doesn’t show the rejection she experienced. It was written by someone who didn’t understand her beliefs. It was the first time her family recognized her accomplishments. All of these are true. None of these are true. Analyze the diction in this section. Use the text to correctly match the statements. 13 14 15 16 17 The writer chooses the diction “quibble” in the first line because The writer chooses the diction “deplored” in line 12 because The writer uses the word “creatures” in lines 17 and 41 because The writer uses the word “gentry” in lines 32 and 40 because A B C D The writer uses the word “cloaked” in line E 43 because it works to create a tone of disdain for those in this class who devalued women. it has a connotation of hate, which here works to enhance the author’s claim. this word implies that the argument is frivolous, or unimportant. since it is always used from the dominant point of view of that time period, this word choice emphasizes how women were devalued. None of these Use the section titled “Mary Wollstonecraft Shelley (1797-1851)” for the following questions. 18. The complete sentence in lines 91 and 92 should be rewritten like ____ to read more clearly. A. Despite her other accomplishments, Mary Shelley’s reputation is forever linked to her first novel, Frankenstein, which she began when she was just nineteen. B. Even with her other accomplishments, Mary Shelley’s reputation is forever linked to her first novel, Frankenstein, which she began when she was just nineteen. C. Mary Shelley had all these accomplishments; however, her reputation is forever linked to her first novel, Frankenstein, which she began when she was just nineteen. D. All of the above are acceptable. E. None of the above are acceptable. 7 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test 19. For better clarity in meaning, the sentences, “The Shelleys spent the summer of 1816 at Lake Geneva with Mary Shelley's stepsister Claire and Lord Byron. Since the weather had been cold and rainy, the group decided that for amusement and an exercise in composition each one of them would make up a ghost story,” should read A. The Shelleys spent the summer of 1816 at Lake Geneva with Mary Shelley's stepsister Claire and Lord Byron. Since the weather had been cold and rainy, the group decided that, for amusement and an exercise in composition, each one of them would make up a ghost story. B. The Shelleys spent the summer of 1816 at Lake Geneva with Mary Shelley's stepsister, Claire, and Lord Byron. Since the weather had been cold and rainy, the group decided that for amusement and an exercise in composition each one of them would make up a ghost story C. The Shelleys spent the summer of 1816 at Lake Geneva with Mary Shelley's stepsister, Claire, and Lord Byron. Since the weather had been cold and rainy, the group decided that, for amusement and an exercise in composition, each one of them would make up a ghost story D. All of these are acceptable E. None of these are acceptable. 20. Who is the speaker in the excerpt from Shelley’s novel, Frankenstein, in the box? A. B. C. D. E. An unknown person who is introducing the book. Mary Shelley Shelley’s character, Victor Frankenstein Shelley’s character, Frankenstein’s monster None of these are true. 21. The purpose of this excerpt from Shelley’s novel, Frankenstein, is A. To inform the reader of the lucid dream that inspired Shelley to create the Victor Frankenstein character and then write the novel. B. To inform the reader that women control all life. C. To argue that man is the most hideous creature that ever lived. D. To argue that people cannot function well without proper sleep. E. None of these are true. 22. Text evidence that supports the answer to the previous question is A. B. C. D. E. That Shelley writes in first person to tell her story. “with shut eyes but acute mental vision” refers to her dream state. “he” in the passage refers to the doctor Shelley envisioned would create a monster. All of these are acceptable. None of these are acceptable 8 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test 23. According to the author, Shelley’s creation of Frankenstein’s monster… A. B. C. D. E. represents society’s rejection of women novelists supports the horror felt by poets rationalizes the rebirth of the Enlightenment philosophy symbolizes Mary Shelley’s insecurities None of these are correct. 24. What does the author of this passage imply about Jane Austen and Mary Wollstonecraft Shelly? A. Both had been entrapped by their children. B. Both had strong beliefs about women’s roles in society. C. Both had admiration for male literary critics. D. Both had parents who were supportive of their talents. E. None of these are true. Read the passage to help you analyze the poem, “Siren Song,” by Margaret Atwood. 1 5 10 15 The Sirens were mythological creatures who were part bird and part human. The three Sirens most written about in Greek mythology were Pisinoe, Aglaope, and Thelxiepi; one played the lyre, one the flute, and the other sang. They lived in the middle of the sea on a rocky island and played music so beautiful and irresistible to men that sailors on passing ships would either crash their boats into the rocky island or jump ship to get closer to the Sirens. No matter the method of demise, the crash or ship-abandoning was not the worst part for the sailors; the Sirens would eat these men. There are two stories in Greek mythology in which men resist the Sirens. In The Odyssey, Odysseus had his men tie him to the ship’s mast and put beeswax in their ears, but not his. Therefore, Odysseus was the only sailor who could hear the song but was physically unable to leave the ship. In the story of Jason and the Argonauts, Orpheus, an extremely talented musician, played music that was even more beautiful than the Sirens’, so the sailors could hardly hear the Sirens’ would-be death call. Sirens are still used in modern media. Starbucks uses a Siren logo on all of their products. In the movie O Brother, Where Art Thou, a retelling of the classic The Odyssey, the alluring music of the three women washing clothes by the river pull the three main characters away from their quest. Adapted from http://www.kidzworld.com/article/1850-sirens# 9 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test Siren Song by Margaret Atwood This is the one song everyone would like to learn: the song that is irresistible: 5 the song that forces men to leap overboard in squadrons even though they see the beached skulls the song nobody knows because anyone who has heard it is dead, and the others can't remember. 10 15 Shall I tell you the secret and if I do, will you get me out of this bird suit? I don't enjoy it here squatting on this island looking picturesque and mythical with these two feathery maniacs, I don't enjoy singing this trio, fatal and valuable. 20 I will tell the secret to you, to you, only to you. Come closer. This song is a cry for help: Help me! Only you, only you can. you are unique 25 at last. Alas it is a boring song but it works every time. 25. Who is the speaker of “Siren Song”? A. a siren B. Margaret Atwood C. a sailor D. a young woman E. None of these 10 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test 26. What does the language structure, specifically the colons after “learn” in line 2 and “irresistible” in line 3, signal to the reader? A. B. C. D. E. That the speaker will tell an irresistible story that everyone wants to know. That the speaker will sing the irresistible song that everyone wants to know. That the speaker is harmless. That the speaker really cares about teaching people. None of these 27. Based on the text before the poem, your answer above, and the evidence in the first stanza, you can infer that the audience is A. B. C. D. E. Women. The other Sirens. Margaret Atwood A sailor passing the Sirens None of these Match the statements based on the evidence in the poem. 28. In stanza 3… A 29. In stanza 4… B 30. In stanza 6… C 31. In stanza 7… D 32. In stanza 8… E the speaker repeats a direct address, signaling to the reader that men are easily manipulated. specific diction signifies that the speaker is destined to fulfill her purpose. the reader can infer that the speaker feels purposeless. the author employs irony to emphasize the brutal complacency of the speaker. the reader can infer that the speaker would prefer to be a “whole woman” both physically and metaphorically. 33. The tone of “Siren Song” juxtaposes both ___ and ___ to enhance the author’s use of ___ to expose men’s weakness for women. A. B. C. D. E. pity; detachment; irony pity; sorrow; imagery complacency; detachment; imagery complacency; beauty; irony None of these 11 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test Use the statements in the chart below to complete this statement: A possible theme for this poem is ___ 34. 35. 36. 37. 38. based on the evidence in lines ___ Men’s egos cause their fall from grace. A man is easily manipulated by a “damsel in distress” Men don’t listen very well. Women will achieve their purpose despite circumstances. Men will act irrationally for an attractive woman. A B 4-6. 7-18. C D 19-25. 25-27. E None of these. Use every piece of text from this test to answer the following questions. 39. A stylistic feature that enhances the speaker’s boredom is… A. B. C. D. E. Simple language Alliteration Imagery All of these None of these 40. Though the speaker addresses the audience alone, the author emphasizes the power of the trio A. B. C. D. E. by employing simple language. by writing in three line stanzas. by using irony in the speaker’s language. All of these None of these Use all texts in this test to match the statements in the chart below. 41. Atwood’s writing style compared to A used to enhance the author’s purpose. Austen’s is 42. Atwood’s writing style compared to B similar to the latter because they both Shelley’s is critique the “status quo” relationships between men and women in their respective time periods. 43. The author’s use of the word “creatures” C different from the latter because the in the excerpt on Sirens and “Spotlight former example is referring to a humanon Women Writers in the Romantic animal hybrid while the latter is referring Period” is to a female human. 44. The speaker in “Siren Song” compared D similar to the latter because the authors to the narrator in the excerpt from use irony to expose the societal Austen’s Pride and Prejudice is perceptions of males and females. 45. The narrator in “Siren Song” compared E None of these to the narrator in the excerpt from the “Author’s Introduction” to Shelley’s Frankenstein is 12 East Baton Rouge Parish School System English IV Proficiency Test 13 East Baton Rouge Parish School System