English 9 Thinking about Poetry Imagine that friends from out of town come into New York for the weekend. “Show us the city,” they say. On one level this request is a simple one – you can get them to Manhattan in no time – but it also poses its share of challenges. There’s so much in the city, so many “right ways” to respond to their request - what will you show them, and how? When they go back home, what is it that you want them to remember, to wonder about, to share with their friends? Now imagine that someone has asked you to show them a poem. How would you help them? This assignment asks you to act as a tour guide through one of the poems included in this packet. Your job is not to solve the poem, to finish it, to close down any and all discussion about it. Instead, your task is to show us how and where to start thinking about and responding to it. Take us through the poem systematically, pointing out interesting and important details along the way. Help us get to a point where we start asking questions that matter, and give us strategies for developing answers. Remind us of the tools at our disposal as we try to understand all that is going on in the poem. In the end, we, your audience, should have a sense of how you’ve made sense of the poem, and what you hope we’ll take away and remember from our “tour.” Your presentation of the poem will between two and three minutes long, and while your audience will have a copy of your poem to follow, all you’ll have to work with is an index card with a few key things to discuss and your understanding and enthusiasm for the poem you’ve chosen. Over the next few weeks, we’ll be discussing ways to think and talk about poems, and we’ll have the chance to practice locating and making sense of some of the moves that poets like to make. By the time we’re through, you’ll be armed with a number of really helpful strategies for entering into a discussion of, or with, a poem; all you’ll have to do in your presentation is to decide which ones work best for you in terms of the poem you’ve chosen. “To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow/Creeps in this petty pace from day to day, /To the last syllable of recorded time;/And all our yesterdays have lighted fools/The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle! /Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player,/ That struts and frets his hour upon the stage,/ And then is heard no more. It is a tale/Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,/ Signifying nothing.” Macbeth (V,v,22-31) “Out, Out - -“ The buzz-saw snarled and rattled in the yard And made dust and dropped stove-length sticks of wood, Sweet-scented stuff when the breeze drew across it. And from there those that lifted eyes could count Five mountain ranges one behind the other Under the sunset far into Vermont. And the saw snarled and rattled, snarled and rattled, As it ran light, or had to bear a load. And nothing happened: day was all but done. Call it a day, I wish they might have said To please the boy by giving him the half hour That a boy counts so much when saved from work. His sister stood beside them in her apron To tell them 'Supper'. At the word, the saw, As if to prove saws knew what supper meant, Leaped out at the boy's hand, or seemed to leap-He must have given the hand. However it was, Neither refused the meeting. But the hand! The boy's first outcry was a rueful laugh. As he swung toward them holding up the hand Half in appeal, but half as if to keep The life from spilling. Then the boy saw all-Since he was old enough to know, big boy Doing a man's work, though a child at heart-He saw all spoiled. 'Don't let him cut my hand off The doctor, when he comes. Don't let him, sister!' So. But the hand was gone already. The doctor put him in the dark of ether. He lay and puffed his lips out with his breath. And then -- the watcher at his pulse took fright. No one believed. They listened at his heart. Little -- less -- nothing! -- and that ended it. No more to build on there. And they, since they Were not the one dead, turned to their affairs - Robert Frost Ozymandias I met a traveler from an antique land Who said: Two vast and trunkless legs of stone Stand in the desert…Near them, on the sand, Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown, And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command, Tell that its sculptor well those passions read, Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things, The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed, And on the pedestal these words appear: "My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings: Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!" Nothing beside remains. Round the decay Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare The lone and level sands stretch far away. -Percy Bysshe Shelley 1792-1822 * ***************************************************** Some strategies you can use to talk to and about a poem “Notice What You Notice” – The Power of Association – sharing the “sensory constellations” that are lit when you read the poem can help to bring both the poem and your sense of it to life for your audience. Start with the Literal – Before you begin writing, try to paraphrase the poem. If you can’t put the story it’s telling or the image it’s presenting into your own words, you probably don’t understand it as well as you could or should. Remember – you can’t even think about what a poem (or any piece of writing) means until you understand what it says. Examining the Title – Does the title work with or against the poem itself? Is it meant to clue you in or to keep you off balance? Think about the Four Questions: 1. Who is the speaker? 2. What is/are the poem’s primary subject(s)? 3. How does the poem feel about its subject? 4. What are the “Hot Spots” that animate and complicate the poem? Consider the major binaries in the poem - Locating the binaries or points of tension will often reveal the moments of the greatest interest or importance in any piece of literature. Think about the tone of the Speaker’s Voice – what does it suggest? Think about the mood the poem sets for its audience- what does it suggest? Identify the moments of ambiguity, ambivalence, and irony – how do they work in the poem? How do they deepen and complicate your sense of what’s interesting or important in the piece? Pay attention to figurative language – metaphor, simile, symbolism, hyperbole, understatement, imagery, etc. Does it play a significant role in the poem? How and where does it contribute to your appreciation and understanding of the poem? What’s the “Take-away” from the poem? In the end, what part(s) of the poem – what ideas, moments, images or questions – have stayed with you since you’ve finished reading it? What questions are you asking now -what do you see, feel, or know now - that you didn’t before? And remember to ask yourself– What conversation(s) does the poem want to enter? What questions does it answer? What questions does it ask? Day 1 - English 9 Poetry Unit Do Now: 10-15 mins. 1. Please describe the first lesson you ever remember learning? 2. What do you imagine a poem entitled “First Lesson” might be about? Why? Please complete question #3 on the back of this page: 3. Imagine that you are the parent of a child who is leaving home for the first time, and describe what you are doing, thinking, feeling, going through, etc. from the perspective and in the voice of that parent. When you’re not sure how or where to start, you can always ask yourself these Four Questions: 1. Who is the speaker? What do we know about him or her? What can we reasonably assume or infer? What can’t we know? 2. What is/are the poem’s primary subject(s)? What does the poem address literally or directly? What other more figurative subjects or issues are addressed or suggested? 3. How does the poem feel about its subject? How do the tone of the speaker’s voice, the language the poem uses, the mood it creates help us to understand about how the poem feels about its subject(s) and perhaps why it is discussing it(them)? 4. What are the “Hot Spots” that animate and complicate the poem? What words, phrases, lines, or sections are most interesting, most confusing, most important, and most meaningful to you and your understanding and appreciation of the poem? Key Terms: Ambiguity - vagueness, uncertainty, doubt. Writers and poets often use ambiguity to illustrate complexity in their subjects, or in their experiences of their subjects. Ambivalence - the co-existence of strong, conflicting emotions; the experience of feeling conflicting emotions simultaneously. Writers and poets often discuss or consider their own ambivalence, or attempt to generate it in their audiences, in order to illustrate the complexity of their subjects or their own feelings about their subjects. Binary - a “controlling opposite”; a binary is made up of a pair of things that seem different, yet help define one another. Hyperbole - intentional exaggeration in order to make a point. Imagery - any word, phrase or set of lines that engages the senses and helps us to see, feel, hear, smell or even taste what a poem is describing for ourselves. Imagery can also illustrate the TONE of a piece and help to establish its MOOD. Irony - simply put, irony presents the opposite of what might normally be expected in any situation. Sarcasm is a form of irony, where, thanks to the TONE in which they are said, suggest the opposite of their normal or literal definition. Irony is often used to surprise an audience or to highlight things that might otherwise get missed. Metaphor – a situation in which one person, object, action or idea is substituted for something else in order to illustrate their similarities. The best metaphors are surprising and leave the audience with a new sense of the “original” item, sometimes called the “tenor,” the “substitute,” also known as the “vehicle” and the ways in which they are like and not like one another. Mood – the emotions or atmosphere generated by a poem. Mood describes how a poem feels or makes the reader feel. Simile – a comparison using “like” or “as.” Symbol – an object with both literal and figurative/suggestive value. symbol “means” both itself and something else. In a poem, a Tone - the “vocal attitude” of the speaker of a poem. It is often a poem’s tone rather than its content that reflects how the speaker thinks or feels about the poem’s subject. In other words, how something is said often reveals what a speaker means by what s/he is saying. Understatement – the opposite of hyperbole; when something is intentionally downplayed or given less emphasis and attention than might be expected in order to inspire a certain response from the audience. Day 2 First Lesson Lie back, daughter, let your head be tipped back in the cup of my hand. Gently, and I will hold you. Spread your arms wide, lie out on the stream and look high at the gulls. A deadman's-float is face down. You will dive and swim soon enough where this tidewater ebbs to the sea. Daughter, believe me, when you tire on the long thrash to your island, lie up, and survive. As you float now, where I held you and let go, remember when fear cramps your heart what I told you: lie gently and wide to the light-year stars, lie back, and the sea will hold you. ~ Philip Booth Day 2 To a Daughter Leaving Home When I taught you at eight to ride a bicycle, loping along beside you as you wobbled away on two round wheels, my own mouth rounding in surprise when you pulled ahead down the curved path of the park, I kept waiting for the thud of your crash as I sprinted to catch up, while you grew smaller, more breakable with distance, pumping, pumping for your life, screaming with laughter, the hair flapping behind you like a handkerchief waving goodbye. ~ Linda Pastan Day 3 Rite of Passage As the guests arrive at our son’s party they gather in the living room— short men, men in first grade with smooth jaws and chins. Hands in pockets, they stand around jostling, jockeying for place, small fights breaking out and calming. One says to another How old are you? —Six. —I’m seven. —So? They eye each other, seeing themselves tiny in the other’s pupils. They clear their throats a lot, a room of small bankers, they fold their arms and frown. I could beat you up, a seven says to a six, the midnight cake, round and heavy as a turret behind them on the table. My son, freckles like specks of nutmeg on his cheeks, chest narrow as the balsa keel of a model boat, long hands cool and thin as the day they guided him out of me, speaks up as a host for the sake of the group. We could easily kill a two-year-old, he says in his clear voice. The other men agree, they clear their throats like Generals, they relax and get down to playing war, celebrating my son’s life. ~ Sharon Olds Day 3 The Writer In her room at the prow of the house Where light breaks, and the windows are tossed with linden, My daughter is writing a story. the forward part of a ship’s bow that cuts the water I pause in the stairwell, hearing From her shut door a commotion of typewriter-keys Like a chain hauled over a gunwale. the top edge of a side of a boat Young as she is, the stuff Of her life is a great cargo, and some of it heavy. I wish her a lucky passage. the freight carried by a ship, train or other vehicle . trip, journey, voyage. But now it is she who pauses, As if to reject my thought and its easy figure. A stillness greatens, in which The whole house seems to be thinking, And then she is at it again with a bunched clamor Of strokes, and again is silent. I remember the dazed starling Which was trapped in that very room, two years ago; How we stole in, lifted a sash a small bird And retreated, not to affright it; And how for a heedless hour, through the crack of the door, We watched the sleek, wild, dark And iridescent creature Batter against the brilliance, drop like a glove To the hard floor, or the desk-top, And wait then, humped and bloody, For the wits to try it again; and how our spirits Rose when, suddenly sure, It lifted off from a chair-back, Beating a smooth course for the right window And clearing the sill of the world. It is always a matter, my darling, Of life or death, as I had forgotten. I wish What I wished you before, but harder. ~ Richard Wilbur Three Plans for Effective Use of Quotations The “Three C’s” ICE ICE BABY The “SQUAT” Method Context Introduction Set Up Content Citation Quote Commentary Explanation Understanding Analysis Tie-back When you’re writing a quotation-based response to a poem, you must include these five things: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. An introduction to the poem (Title, Author) and the issue that you’re addressing Some back-ground/set up/CONTEXT for the lines you will be discussing. The lines themselves, set up and punctuated properly – as they appear in the poem, or with /’s showing line separations. Your explanation of what the quotation says and what it means in the context of the poem A tie back or reminder of how and why this quotation has shaped your understanding of the issue you’re considering here. Day 4 My Papa's Waltz The whiskey on your breath Could make a small boy dizzy; But I hung on like death: Such waltzing was not easy. We romped until the pans Slid from the kitchen shelf; My mother's countenance Could not unfrown itself. The hand that held my wrist Was battered on one knuckle; At every step you missed My right ear scraped a buckle. You beat time on my head With a palm caked hard by dirt, Then waltzed me off to bed Still clinging to your shirt. ~ Theodore Roethke Day 5 Failure To pay for my father's funeral I borrowed money from people he already owed money to. One called him a nobody. No, I said, he was a failure. You can't remember a nobody's name, that's why they're called nobodies. Failures are unforgettable. The rabbi who read a stock eulogy about a man who didn't belong to or believe in anything was both a failure and a nobody. He failed to imagine the son and wife of the dead man being shamed by each word. To understand that not believing in or belonging to anything demanded a kind of faith and buoyancy. An uncle, counting on his fingers my father's business failures— a parking lot that raised geese, a motel that raffled honeymoons, a bowling alley with roving mariachis— failed to love and honor his brother, who showed him how to whistle under covers, steal apples with his right or left hand. Indeed, my father was comical. His watches pinched, he tripped on his pant cuffs and snored loudly in movies, where his weariness overcame him finally. He didn't believe in: savings insurance newspapers vegetables good or evil human frailty history or God. Our family avoided us, fearing boils. I left town but failed to get away. ~ Philip Schultz Day 5 Do Not Go Gentle into That Good Night Do not go gentle into that good night, Old age should burn and rave at close of day; Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Though wise men at their end know dark is right, Because their words had forked no lightning they Do not go gentle into that good night. Good men, the last wave by, crying how bright Their frail deeds might have danced in a green bay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. Wild men who caught and sang the sun in flight, And learn, too late, they grieved it on its way, Do not go gentle into that good night. Grave men, near death, who see with blinding sight Blind eyes could blaze like meteors and be gay, Rage, rage against the dying of the light. And you, my father, there on the sad height, Curse, bless, me now with your fierce tears, I pray. Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light. ~ Dylan Thomas Day 6 I Go Back to May 1937 I see them standing at the formal gates of their colleges, I see my father strolling out under the ochre sandstone arch, the red tiles glinting like bent plates of blood behind his head, I see my mother with a few light books at her hip standing at the pillar made of tiny bricks with the wrought-iron gate still open behind her, its sword-tips black in the May air, they are about to graduate, they are about to get married, they are kids, they are dumb, all they know is they are innocent, they would never hurt anybody. I want to go up to them and say Stop, don't do it--she's the wrong woman, he's the wrong man, you are going to do things you cannot imagine you would ever do, you are going to do bad things to children, you are going to suffer in ways you never heard of, you are going to want to die. I want to go up to them there in the late May sunlight and say it, her hungry pretty blank face turning to me, her pitiful beautiful untouched body, his arrogant handsome blind face turning to me, his pitiful beautiful untouched body, but I don't do it. I want to live. I take them up like the male and female paper dolls and bang them together at the hips like chips of flint as if to strike sparks from them, I say Do what you are going to do, and I will tell about it. ~ Sharon Olds Day 6 On the Subway The boy and I face each other. His feet are huge, in black sneakers laced with white in a complex pattern like a set of intentional scars. We are stuck on opposite sides of the car, a couple of molecules stuck in a rod of light rapidly moving through darkness. He has the casual cold look of a mugger, alert under hooded lids. He is wearing red, like the inside of the body exposed. I am wearing dark fur, the whole skin of an animal taken and used. I look at his raw face, he looks at my fur coat, and I don't know if I am in his powerhe could take my coat so easily, my briefcase, my lifeof if he is in my power, the way I am living off his life, eating the steak he does not eat, as if I am taking the food from his mouth. And he is black and I am white, and without meaning or trying to I must profit from his darkness, the way he absorbs the murderous beams of the nation's heart, as black cotton absorbs the heat of the sun and holds it. There is no way to know how easy this white skin makes my life, this life he could take so easily and break across his knee like a stick the way his own back is being broken, the rod of his soul that at birth was dark and fluid and rich as the heart of a seedling ready to thrust up into any available light. ~ Sharon Olds POEMS TO CONSIDER FOR THE TOUR GUIDE PRSENTATION After My Arrest among the everyday pieces lost a bright Indian cotton shirt worn through months of nursing, quickly unbuttoned to bring the rooting baby to my breast her head in its soft, filmy folds set adrift among the debris of police searches, overturned lives tossed into a pile of orphaned clothes and taken to a tag sale 5 10 where my friend, recognizing it, bought it to keep me close 15 and wore it one day to bring my daughter for a visit, greeting me cheerfully, “Remember this?” and I laughed, scooping up my baby to carry her into the toy-filled playroom where she rode me, her horsey among the other oversized stuffed animals until visitors hours were over when I stood at the great divide, the visitor’s exit gate, and watched my shirt and my child leave with my friend 20 25 30 ~ Judith Clark A Blessing from My Sixteen Years’ Son I have this son who assembled inside me during Hurricane Gloria. In a flash, he appeared, in a tiny blaze. Outside, pines toppled. Phone lines snapped and hissed like cobras. Inside, he was a raw pearl: microscopic, luminous. Look at the muscled obelisk of him now 5 pawing through the icebox for more grapes. Sixteen years and not a bone broken, nor single stitch. By his age, I was marked more ways, and small. He’s a slouching six-foot three, with implausible blue eyes, which settle on the pages of Emerson’s “Self-Reliance” with profound belligerence. A girl with a navel ring 10 15 could make his cell phone go buzz, or an Afro-ed boy leaning on a mop at Taco Bell-creatures strange to me as dragons or eels. Balanced on a kitchen stool, each gives counsel arcane as any oracle’s. Rodney claims school is harshing my mellow. Case longs to date 20 a tattooed girl, because he wants a woman willing to do stuff she’ll regret. They’ve come to lead my son into his broadening spiral. Someday soon, the tether will snap. I birthed my own mom into oblivion. The night my son smashed the car fender then rode home in the rain-streaked cop car, he asked, Did you and Dad screw up so much? He’d let me tuck him in, my grandmother’s wedding quilt 25 30 from 1912 drawn to his goateed chin. Don’t blame us, I said. You’re your own idiot now. At which he grinned. 35 The cop said the girl in the crimped Chevy took it hard. He’d found my son awkwardly holding her in the canted headlights, where he’d draped his own coat over her shaking shoulders. My fault, he’d confessed right off. 40 Nice kid, said the cop. - Mary Karr What lips my lips have kissed… What lips my lips have kissed, and where, and why, I have forgotten, and what arms have lain Under my head till morning; but the rain Is full of ghosts tonight, that tap and sigh Upon the glass and listen for reply And in my heart there is a quiet pain For unremembered lads that not again Will turn to me at midnight with a cry. Thus in the winter stands the lonely tree, Nor knows what birds have vanished one by one, Yet knows its boughs more silent than before: I cannot say what loves have come and gone; I only know that summer sang in me A little while, that in me sings no more. Edna St. Vincent Millay 5 10 Eating Poetry Ink runs from the corners of my mouth. There is no happiness like mine. I have been eating poetry. The librarian does not believe what she sees. Her eyes are sad and she walks with her hands in her dress. 5 The poems are gone. The light is dim. The dogs are on the basement stairs and coming up. Their eyeballs roll, their blond legs burn like brush. The poor librarian begins to stamp her feet and weep. She does not understand. When I get on my knees and lick her hand, she screams. I am a new man. I snarl at her and bark. I romp with joy in the bookish dark. ~ Mark Strand 10 15 An Irish Airman Foresees His Death I know that I shall meet my fate Somewhere among the clouds above; Those that I fight I do not hate, Those that I guard I do not love; My country is Kiltartan Cross, My countrymen Kiltartan's poor, No likely end could bring them loss Or leave them happier than before. Nor law, nor duty bade me fight, Nor public men, nor cheering crowds, A lonely impulse of delight Drove to this tumult in the clouds; I balanced all, brought all to mind, The years to come seemed waste of breath, A waste of breath the years behind In balance with this life, this death. ~ William Butler Yeats 5 10 15 A Blessing Just off the highway to Rochester, Minnesota, Twilight bounds softly forth on the grass. And the eyes of those two Indian ponies Darken with kindness. They have come gladly out of the willows 5 To welcome my friend and me. We step over the barbed wire into the pasture Where they have been grazing all day, alone. They ripple tensely, they can hardly contain their happiness That we have come. 10 They bow shyly as wet swans. They love each other. There is no loneliness like theirs. At home once more, They begin munching the young tufts of spring in the darkness. I would like to hold the slenderer one in my arms, 15 For she has walked over to me And nuzzled my left hand. She is black and white, Her mane falls wild on her forehead, And the light breeze moves me to caress her long ear 20 That is delicate as the skin over a girl's wrist. Suddenly I realize That if I stepped out of my body I would break Into blossom. ~ James Wright Novice Tour Guide Presentation Apprentice Makes Effort to Engage the Audience Attempts to engage the audience through personal anecdotes, contextual references, or relevant connections with other texts, ideas, or issues that might appeal to them. Subjective reactions – Discussion of specific elements from the poem and the way they work for or on you Objective Responses – Literary elements and their function and value in the poem Take Away Makes no personal references to moments from the poem and seems to have no personal connection to or interest in the poem Refers to only one moment from the poem on a personal level, or refers to two or more moments without clearly explaining their significance. Makes no references to literary elements from the poem Presentation Skills Introduction Practitioner Expert Engages the audience through accurate and appropriate use of personal anecdotes, contextual references, or relevant connections with other texts, ideas, or issues that might appeal to them. Refers to two or more moments from the poem and offers clear, logical explanations of their “subjective” or personal significance. Engages the audience through insightful, original, energetic presentation of personal anecdotes, contextual references, or relevant connections with other texts, ideas, or issues that might appeal to them. Refers to only one literary element from the poem, or refers to two or more literary elements without explaining, clearly and convincingly, how they work within the context of the poem. Refers to two or more literary elements and offers clear, accurate explanations of these elements and how they work within the context of the poem. Refers to three or more literary elements; offers accurate, articulate descriptions of these elements and original, sophisticated explanations of how they work within the context of the poem Seems unclear about what the audience should take from the presentation Attempts to summarize the presentation and to provide an appropriate “take away” for the audience to consider once the presentation has concluded. Offers a brief summary of the presentation and clear and logical “take away” for the audience to consider once the presentation has concluded. Offers a concise summary of the presentation and a thoughtful, sophisticated, compelling “take away” for the audience to consider once the presentation has concluded. No clear organizational plan Offers an organizational plan that is vague or illogical Offers a clear and logical organizational plan, including appropriate transitional words or phrases. Follows an organizational plan that includes appropriate transitional words or phrased and is organic and compelling. Does not highlight the most important moments Begins to highlight the most important moments Emphasizes the presentation’s strongest points and most important moments Grabbing the Attention of the Audience Does not engage the audience through a clear, confident voice, appropriate changes in tone and tempo, or eye contact. Struggles to consistently engage the audience through a clear, confident voice, appropriate changes in tone and tempo, or eye contact. Engages the audience through a clear voice, appropriate changes in tone and tempo, or eye contact. Refers to two or more moments from the poem and provides insightful, articulate explanations of their “subjective” or personal significance Gracefully highlights the presentation’s strongest points and most significant moments Involves and engages the audience through a clear, confident voice, appropriate changes in tone and tempo, or eye contact. Poem:______________________________ Paragraph Introduction Point #1 Point #2 Point #3 Take Away Subject Author:________________________ Significance