oENG251: Film and Literature Section C2: Thursday, 8:30-11:15, North Annex 102 (Office Hours TBD) Class web page: www.Brian-T-Murphy.com/Eng251.htm Brian T. Murphy Bradley Hall, Y-219 516-572-7185, ext. 25686 Email: brian.murphy@ncc.edu DESCRIPTION: This course compares different techniques and effects of literature and film. Students explore genre, form, structure, symbolism, myth, and convention in both media. Writing is an integral component of the course. Prerequisites: ENG 102 or ENG 109. This course explores the complex interplay between film and literature. Selected novels, short stories and plays are analyzed in relation to film versions of the same works in order to gain an understanding of the possibilities—and problems—involved in the transposition to film. As this is a course in literature and film analysis, students do not need to have taken other film courses before taking this course. However, it is assumed that students have successfully completed the prerequisites for this course, ENG 101 and ENG 102 (or their equivalent). Therefore, students are expected to have the necessary background and experience in analyzing, discussing, and responding to literature, as well as the ability to conduct independent research and to write correctly documented research essays using MLA format. Students are cautioned that this course requires extensive reading and writing in addition to viewing films and taking part in class discussions. Students not prepared to read (up to 150 pages/week) and to write on a regular basis and to take an active part in class discussions should not consider taking this course. OBJECTIVES: Students will Enhance their ability to understand, appreciate, and discuss works of literature through extensive reading and discussion of short stories, novels and plays. Analyze works of fiction and drama for plot structure, setting, characterization, theme, and narrative point of view. Develop an understanding of critical analysis of film through careful examination of cinematic adaptations of literary texts, focusing on character development, dramatic structure, and performance. Learn and utilize the terminology of film analysis, both those terms shared with literary discussion (character, plot, theme, setting) and those specific to cinema (lighting, montage, special effects, etc.). Demonstrate an understanding of the possibilities and problems involved in the transposition of literature to film, applying terminology and critical skills acquired during the semester to analyze a cinematic adaptation of a text not discussed in class. TEXTS: Required: King, Steven. Carrie. New York: Anchor, 2013. Levin, Ira. Rosemary’s Baby. New York: Norton (Pegasus), 2014. Matheson, Richard. I Am Legend. New York: Tor, 2007. Additional required readings will also be assigned and made available as photocopies or as links, including: Campbell, John W. “Who Goes There?” Langelaan, George. “The Fly.” Matheson, Richard. “Prey.” (included in I Am Legend) Recommended: Hacker, Diana and Nancy Sommers. Rules for Writers, 7 ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s, 2012, or another current college-level handbook including 2009 MLA updates. Hutchings, Peter. The Horror Film. London: Routledge, 2004. Monaco, James. How to Read a Film: Movies, Media, and Beyond, Revised 9 ed.. Oxford: Oxford UP, 2009. Zinoman, Jason. Shock Value: How a Few Eccentric Outsiders Gave Us Nightmares, Conquered Hollywood, and Invented Modern Horror. New York: Penguin, 2011. A good college-level dictionary. CLASS POLICIES: Attendance: Students must not only attend every class, but also arrive on time, be prepared, and take an active part in class (see Participation, below); students may be required to sign in each class session to verify their attendance. Moreover, once students get to class, they are expected to stay in the classroom until the class is over. Leaving class early or getting up in the middle of class is considered disruptive behavior and should happen only in extreme emergencies. Excessive absences or latenesses will affect your grade; students missing more than four classes will fail the course. Students unable to attend class should contact the instructor regarding their absence in advance or as soon as they return to school. Plagiarism and Cheating: Plagiarism includes copying or paraphrasing another’s words, ideas, or facts without crediting the source; submitting a paper written by someone else, either in whole or in part, as one’s own work; or submitting work previously submitted for another course or instructor. Plagiarism, cheating, or other forms of academic dishonesty on any assignment will result in failure (a grade of zero) for that assignment and may result in further disciplinary action, including but not limited to failure for the course and expulsion from the college. See the Nassau Community College “Policy on Academic Dishonesty and Plagiarism.” Homework/Essay Submission: All writing assignments must be received by the instructor on or before the due date, by the beginning of the class period, as indicated on the schedule, below. Essays submitted by email or otherwise submitted late will not be accepted; see below. All at-home work must be typed (in 12-point Times New Roman), double-spaced, with one-inch margins, and stapled when submitted. In-class work must be neatly printed in blue or black ink on looseleaf composition paper or in bluebooks provided by the instructor and double-spaced§. All essays must also include a proper heading (see Purdue Online Writing Lab’s Formatting and Style Guide), including Word Count; have an appropriate, original title; contain a clear, explicit, assertive, objectively worded thesis statement (thesis statements must be underlined); and (unless otherwise indicated) avoid use of I or you throughout. Finally, all work should be grammatically correct, free of errors in mechanics, grammar, usage, spelling, and documentation, and will be evaluated according to the Model for Evaluation of Student Writing. Please refer to the Paragraph Outline or Essay Outline and Revising and Editing Checklist for additional assistance. Revisions: All failing essays may be revised and resubmitted by the due dates announced when the graded essays are returned. Essays receiving a passing grade may also be revised and resubmitted, but only after the student has met with the instructor during office hours (by appointment only) to discuss revisions. Revisions must be substantially revised, not merely “corrected” versions of the original essay (revisions should be based upon the Revising and Editing Checklist and relevant information from class and the textbooks), and must be submitted with the original graded essay and/or draft(s) attached. Evidence of substantial revision may result in a better grade for the assignment. If you did not submit a completed essay on time, you will receive a grade of 0 and may not submit a “revision.” Make-up Exams/Late Work: All assignment deadlines and scheduled exam dates are provided at the beginning of the semester; therefore, late papers will not be accepted nor will make-up opportunities be offered, except under extraordinary circumstances with appropriate documentation. Excuses such as “crashed computers,” “lost flash drives,” or “empty printer ink cartridges” will not be accepted; therefore, all essays or work should be saved both on your computer’s hard drive and again on removable storage device, and students should keep backup copies of all work submitted. Disabilities and Accommodations: If you have a physical, psychological, medical, or learning disability that may impact your ability to carry out assigned course work, I urge that you contact the Center for Students with Disabilities(CSD), Building U.(516 572-7241). The counselors at CSD will review your concerns and determine reasonable accommodations you are entitled to by the Americans with Disabilities Act and Section 504 of the Rehabilitation Act of 1973. All information and documentation of disability remain confidential. ASSIGNMENTS: Attendance And Participation (10%): As this class will combine both lecture and discussion, students are expected both to attend every session and to take an active part in class—joining in discussions and raising questions. Discussion is one of the best ways to clarify your understandings and to test your conclusions. Open discussion always involves personal exposure, and thus the taking of risks: your ideas may not be the same as your fellow students’ or even the instructor’s. Yet as long as your points are honest and supportable, they need to be respected by all of us in the classroom. Questions, discussion, disagreement, and laughter are all encouraged in this class. (However, ridicule or scoffing is never tolerated.) Quizzes (10%): With the exception of the first day, class may begin with a short (five- to ten-minute) quiz or response paper on the reading(s) for the day, at the instructor’s discretion. Quizzes cannot be made up; if you miss a quiz due to absence or lateness, that grade will be regarded as a 0. At the end of the semester, the lowest quiz grade will be dropped. Total number of quizzes during the semester will determine the point value of each; that is, if 11 quizzes are given (lowest quiz grade will be dropped), each quiz is worth up to one full point. Response Papers (5 @ 8%): Students will complete at least five short essays during the semester, on topics to be assigned. Essays must be at least 23 pages long (500-750 words), typed, double-spaced, grammatically correct, and submitted on or before the due date indicated on the schedule, below. Essays will be evaluated according to the Model for Evaluation of Student Writing. Please refer to the Essay Outline and Revision and Editing Checklist. Research Paper (30% Total) Students will also complete an argumentative (persuasive) Research Essay of at least seven to twelve pages (a minimum of 1500-2500 words), using a minimum of five to seven primary or secondary sources (secondary sources must be reliable: scholarly criticism or analysis, not summaries, reviews, or “analysis” from sites such as e-Notes, SparkNotes, Wikipedia*, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com), correctly documented utilizing MLA format, with a cover page and Works Cited page (cover page and Works Cited do not count toward the six-page requirement). Topics should be selected from a list of suggestions provided (see below), or developed in consultation with the instructor. The research essay will be completed in stages during the semester; points will accrue as follows: Topic Selection (5 %): Before beginning the research essay assignment, students will develop and submit a clear, well-written, one-page explanation of the topic chosen from the list provided and the reason for selection. This proposal should include a preliminary idea of the plan of the paper, its intention or research question, and a preliminary thesis. Annotated Bibliography (5 %): Students will develop and submit an annotated bibliography for the research essay assignment, with a minimum of five to seven sources, correctly documented according to MLA format. Research Paper: Final Draft (20 %): The final draft of the research paper must be submitted in a folder, including copies of all sources used and all of the above assignments associated with the research paper. Final Exam (10%): Students will complete a final exam during the official final exam period, evaluating students’ recognition and comprehension of material studied during the previous weeks. This exam will cover specific texts and films, as well as the principles of cinematic adaptation and critical analysis, and will combine objective questions and short essay answers. Students may be entitled to use notes or textbooks for the essay portion of the exams only. Extra Credit (possibly various opportunities, at 1–2 points each): Students may be notified of opportunities for extra credit during the semester, including attendance at various cultural events related to the class (“Recommended Fieldtrips”). If students attend one or more of these events, and provide evidence of attendance (ticket stub, program, unretouched digital image, et cetera) along with a typed one- to two-page personal response (review, analysis, reflection, critique, et cetera), they can receive additional points: a single event and written response is worth 2 points extra credit; attendance at additional events will earn one additional point each. Note: you may not attend the same workshops two or more times for additional extra credit! Note: As a general rule, extra credit only helps if you have already completed all of the assigned work, and will not make up for missing an essay (or two, or three). Extra credit opportunities for Fall 2013 will be announced in class, and they will also be posted here as well as on the class Announcements page, so do not ask at the end of the semester for “extra credit” to bring your average up. GRADING: Final average will be calculated as follows: Attendance and Class Participation 10 % Quizzes 10 % Response Papers: 5 @ 8 % 40 % Research Paper: 30 % Topic Selection (5 %) Annotated Bibliography (5 %) Final Draft (20 %) Final Exam 10 % Total 100 % Extra Credit will be added to the final total. Final average will determine the grade received for the course, as follows: Final Percentage Final Grade 90–100+ A 85–89 B+ 80–84 B 75–79 C+ 70–74 C 65–69 D+ 60–64 D 0–59 F Note: Percentages ending in .5 or greater are rounded up. Therefore, 79.5 rounds to 80, a B, but 79.4 rounds to 79, a C+. SCHEDULE AND PROJECTED OUTLINE: Mon., 1 Sep. Tue., 2 Sep. Fri., 5 Sep. Mon., 8 Sep. Mon., 22 Sep. Wed., 24 Sep. Thu., 25 Sep. Fri., 26 Sep. Tue., 30 Sep. Fri., 3 Oct. Sat., 4 Oct. Sun., 12 Oct. Fri., 7 Nov. Mon., 10 Nov. Tue., 11 Nov. Tue., 18 Nov. Mon., 24 Nov. Wed., 26 Nov. Thu., 27 Nov. Fri., 28 Nov. Sat., 29 Nov. Sun., 30 Nov. Mon., 15 Dec. – Thu., 18 Dec. Sun., 21 Dec. Mon., 22 Dec. Important Dates: FALL SEMESTER 2014 Labor Day: College Holiday Day, Evening & Distance Education classes begin Weekend College classes begin Last day to Add/Drop Last day to Drop Evening classes do not meet (classes beginning after 5:01 p.m.) Rosh Hashanah: College Holiday Day classes do not meet; Evening classes (beginning after 5:01 p.m.) follow a regular schedule Evening Activity Hour: 8:30 p.m. class will not meet; all other classes follow a regular schedule Evening classes (beginning after 5:01 p.m.) do not meet Yom Kippur: classes do not meet Classes do not meet Last day automatic W Evening classes (beginning after 5:01 p.m.) do not meet Veterans’ Day: College Holiday Evening Activity Hour: 5:30 p.m. classes will not meet; all other classes follow a regular schedule Day classes meet on a Thursday schedule Day classes meet on a Friday schedule; Evening classes do not meet Thanksgiving: College Holiday Thanksgiving Recess: College Holiday Classes do not meet Classes do not meet Evening classes extended by 5 minutes for final exams; Evening classes end (18 Dec.) Weekend College classes end Day & Distance Education classes end Note: All dates subject to change; See Academic Calendar: Fall 2014 (.pdf) Projected Schedule of Readings and Assignments All readings below are required, and must be completed by the day indicated; the only exceptions are those indicated with an asterisk (*), which are recommended additional readings or resources. Note: This schedule is subject to revision according to the instructor’s discretion, the Academic Calendar for the semester, school closings due to inclement weather or other reasons, and the progress of the class. Additions or changes will be announced in class, and they will also be posted online. Mon., 1 Sep. Tues., 2 Sep. Labor Day: College Closed Day, Evening & Distance Education (online) Classes Begin Thu., 4 Sep. Introduction: Syllabus, texts, policies, assignments Problems and Possibilities of Cinematic Adaptation; What is "Horror"? Mon., 8 Sep. Last Day for Drop/Add Thu., 11 Sep. Reading: Campbell, John W. “Who Goes There?” Viewing: The Thing from Another World (1951) Thu., 18 Sep. Research Topic Due Viewing: The Thing Mon., 22 Sep. Thu., 25 Sep. (1982) Last Day to Drop Rosh Hashanah - College Holiday Thu., 2 Oct. Reading: Matheson, Richard. I Am Legend Viewing: The Last Man on Earth (1964) Thu., 9 Oct. Reading: Matheson, Richard. I Viewing: I Am Legend (2007) Thu., 16 Oct. Reading: Langelaan, George. Viewing: The Fly (1958) Thu., 23 Oct. Annotated Bibliography Due Viewing: The Fly Parts One and Two (Chapters 1–14) Am Legend Parts Three and Four (Chapters 15–21) “The Fly” (1986) Thu., 30 Oct. Viewing: TBA Thu., 6 Nov. Reading: Matheson, Richard. “Prey” (included Viewing: Trilogy of Terror (TV 1975) Fri., 7 Nov. Last Day for Automatic W Thu., 13 Nov. Reading: Levin, Ira. Rosemary’s Baby Part One *See also, Zinoman, Jason. “The Devil’s Advocate.” Shock Value: How a Few Eccentric Outsiders Gave Us Nightmares, Conquered Hollywood, and Invented Modern Horror. New York: Penguin, 2011. 11-26. Viewing: Rosemary’s Baby (1968) Thu., 20 Nov. Reading: Levin, Ira. Rosemary’s Baby Parts Viewing: Rosemary’s Baby (TV 2014) in I Am Legend) Two and Three Mon., 24 Nov. Day classes meet on a Thursday schedule Viewing: Rosemary’s Baby (TV 2014) Thu., 27 Nov. Thu., 4 Dec. Thanksgiving - College Holiday Research Paper Due Reading: King, Steven. Viewing: Carrie (1976) Carrie Part One: “Blood Sport” Thu., 11 Dec. Reading: King, Steven. Viewing: Carrie (2013) Carrie Parts Two and Three: “Prom Night” and “Carnage” Thu., 18 Dec. Final Exam Day & Distance Education classes end Mon., 22 Dec. WRITING ASSIGNMENTS: Response Paper Topics: For each week, a question or topic will be provided. You may complete any five response papers, but your response must be on the assigned topic for the week it is submitted, and must be submitted on or before the due date, by the beginning of the class period, or it will receive a zero (0). Late work will not be accepted. Students may complete more than five response papers for extra credit: only the best five scores will be utilized in determining final grades. Instructions: Respond to each question or topic in a brief, well-developed, coherent, and thoughtful essay of at least two to three pages (500-750 words). Your essay should include independent analysis and demonstrate careful thought, but no research is necessary, nor should any secondary sources be used. This is not a research essay; the only sources utilized or quoted should be the texts themselves. Use of secondary sources, whether credited or not, will be considered grounds for failure. Although these are personal responses, and therefore there is no "correct" answer, remember that they are still formal essays: in your analyses, formulate a clear, explicit, assertive (persuasive), objectively-worded thesis statement, and avoid use of "I" or "you" throughout. Do not attempt to address all aspects of the text, but carefully focus your topic, and avoid merely paraphrasing or summarizing the work. Be sure to support your answers with specific references to the work. Essays must be typed, double-spaced, and grammatically correct; essays will be evaluated according to the Model for Evaluation of Student Writing. 1) Due Thursday, 11 September: In “Who Goes There? "Real Men Only'” (The Free Library. 2005 Extrapolation 03 Sep. 2014), the author suggests that a central concern of John W. Campbell's story is the boundary between self and other, between human and non-human, and the precariousness of this boundary. The article asserts, “the thing challenges our ideas of human self in two ways: first, it challenges the idea that self is unique and contained given that the thing can imitate any self and that its 'self' only grows by taking over and becoming others; second, the thing challenges our idea of the human as something defined through its differences from animals, as the thing becomes either with equal ease.” Explore the concept of selfhood and individuality as expressed in Campbell's “Who Goes There?” How might this concern reflect elements of the culture of the late 1930s? You might consider demographic, sociological, or even political changes in the period. 1+) Additional response paper topic Due Thursday, 18 September: How does the 1951 movie The Thing from Another World differ from the original “Who Goes There?” by John W. Campbell, and why? Hw do the two versions of the same story differ in terms of plot, characters, theme, and so on? Consider especially social, poliitical, scientific, or cultural changes in the nearly fifteen years between the two works. 2) Due Thursday, 18 September: In The Thing from Another World (1951), the fear and paranoia created by the presence of the alien invader may be read as a metaphor for Communism and the Red Scare. In The Thing (1982), however, the fear takes a different form: not Communism, but contagion. How is American society, or the world, different three decades after the first film, and how does this difference inform the interpretations of “The Thing” in each film? 2+) Additional response paper topic Due Thursday, 2 October: How does Carpenter's 1982 The Thing differ from Christian Nyby's 1951 The Thing from Another World, and why? Consider not just advances in technology, changes in film production, and shifts in audience reception during the intervening thirty years, but significant social, political, scientific, or cultural changes in the three decades between the two films. Elements to consider in your analysis include textual fidelity, theme, the creature itself, characters and characterization (especially MacReady), effects, and—perhaps most important—blood and “body horror” in the context of the early eighties. 3) Due Thursday, 2 October: While Richard Matheson's I Am Legend is clearly a precursor to many of today's vampire and zombie films, it is also squarely within the traditional literary genre of survival narratives, from Daniel Defoe's Robinson Crusoe (and the story of Alexander Selkirk from which it derives) through The Swiss Family Robinson, Castaway starring Tom Hanks, and even in some ways Cormac McCarthy's novel The Road. Discuss I Am Legend [the novel, not the movie] in terms of the protagonist's struggle to survive, with reference to the basic needs of food, shelter, and so on. How is more akin to say, Robinson Crusoe than to Dracula, The Walking Dead, or other similar horror novels, movies, and programs? 4) Due Thursday, 9 October: Richard Matheson has said, in an interview originally published in Cemetery Dance, “I was disappointed in The Last Man on Earth, even though they more or less followed my story.” Why—in terms of 1964, when the movie was released, not in terms of today's movie conventions, technology, and audiences—might he have been disappointed? 5) Due Thursday, 16 October: Consider the novella I Am Legend (1954), the film The Last Man on Earth (1964), and the more recent film, I Am Legend (2007): how does the treatment or depiction of science (and scientists) and politics differ in each version? How does this shift reflect their different time periods, their different socio-cultural contexts? You may also add The Ωmega Man (1971) to your discussion, but only if you are already familiar with the film. 6) Due Thursday, 23 October: 7) Due Thursday, 6 November: 8) Due Thursday, 13 November: 9) Due Thursday, 20 November: 10) Due Monday, 24 November: 11) Due Thursday, 4 December: 12) Due Thursday, 11 December: Research Paper: Due in stages (see below) Compose a clear, well-written, properly documented (MLA format) argumentative essay of at least seven to twqelve pages (1500-2500 words minimum), with a cover page and Works Cited page (cover page and Works Cited do not count toward the five- to seven-page requirement). The paper must be argumentative (persuasive), with a clear, explicit, and assertive thesis statement, and must use a minimum of five to seven sources, including three to five secondary sources; secondary sources must be scholarly criticism or analysis, not summaries, reviews, or “analysis” from sites such as eNotes, SparkNotes, Wikipedia, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com. You must include at least one short quotation, one long—block—quotation, and one paraphrase, and these sources must be properly documented (utilizing MLA format), and integrated into your writing smoothly and correctly. Please refer to the following as well: Formatting and Style Guide (Purdue Online Writing Lab) Incorporating Sources (class handout) Class Plagiarism Policy (on syllabus), as well as the Nassau Community College Policy on Academic Dishonesty and Plagiarism (page 63 in the college catalog). You might also find the following additional resources useful: Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample) (Microsoft Word document) Avoiding Plagiarism (Houghton-Mifflin web site) Practice Incorporating Sources into Your Work (Houghton-Mifflin web site) MLA format (Purdue university’s Online Writing Lab) Topic Selection and Preliminary Thesis: Due Thursday, 18 Sep. You must establish a plan and a clear thesis before you can begin to put together a focused, well-organized, and purposeful research essay. Therefore, as your first step in the research essay assignment, you must develop and submit a clear, well-written, one-page explanation of the topic you have chosen, your reason for the selection, your focus and opinion, and a clear, well-written, explicit, and assertive preliminary thesis. This proposal may also include a preliminary idea of the plan of the paper, its intention or research question. Note: Choose your topic carefully. You will not be allowed to change your topic once you have made your selection, although you may change your position on the particular issue and will, presumably, modify your thesis during the process of research and writing. Your work should take the following form: Topic: the topic selected from the list provided. Rationale: why you have chosen to research and write about this particular topic. Focus: a narrowed form of the subject, and the issue or debate involved. Opinion: your subjective opinion on the debate or issue. Thesis: your opinion, worded objectively. For example: Topic: Multiple adaptations of I Am Legend (Note: this is not a real topic choice!) Rationale: I selected this topic because I saw the film version with Will Smith, and I am curious how other versions differ and why. Focus: How do The Last Man on Earth (1964), The Omega Man (1971), and I Am Legend with Will Smith (2007) differ in terms of textual fidelity and audience appreciation? Opinion: I think that while all three movies are okay, is the most interesting for contemporary audiences. Thesis: While Ubaldo Ragona’s The Last Man on Earth is largely faithful to the text and Boris Sagal’s The Omega Man is at least innovative and interesting for its time, Francis Lawrence’s I Am Legend captures the major conflicts and issues of the novel in an entertaining, realistic, and commercially successful manner. Topic Choices: 1) A large number of works of horror, in addition to those discussed in class, have been filmed more than once. Choose one such text, other than those on the syllabus, and analyze at least two different film versions (see Sample Introduction). How does each version adapt, revise, or alter the story? What is changed or left out, and why? How do all of these individual changes contribute to a different interpretation of the text; that is, what is the significant difference between the versions? And, finally, how does the socio-cultural milieu of each film inform these differences? Some suggested works (see me if you have others in mind): Robert Bloch, Psycho (the original 1960 version and the 1998 remake) Stephen King, The Shining (Stanley Kubrick’s 1980 classic, and the 1997 television miniseries directed by Mick Garris) Fritz Leiber, Conjure Wife (as Weird Woman, 1944, Burn, Witch, Burn, 1962, and Witches’ Brew, 1980) Mary Shelley, Frankenstein (Seriously, hundreds, at least, including the classic 1931 James Whale version and Kenneth Branagh’s 1994 version, Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein) Bram Stoker, Dracula (I mean, c’mon, how many versions are there? Like hundreds? and remember, as Homer Simpson says, “Vampires are imaginary—like elves, gremlins, and Eskimos.”) John Wyndham, The Midwich Cuckoos into the classic 1960 Village of the Damned (parodied on The Simpsons as The Bloodening), the Spanish-language Pueblo de Malditos, and the 1995 John Carpenter remake. and more to come, as I think of them..... 2) Many familiar tropes, ideas, or themes appear over and over again in horror, either in literature, in film, or both. For example, all of the texts and films for this course fall into one or more of the following categories: Alien Invaders Bad Science and Man-Made Monsters (“There are things man was not meant to know”) Creepy Dolls and Homicidal Puppets Demonic Possession Psychic Powers Vampires and Ghouls and Zombies (oh, my) When Animals Attack Select a recurrent horror trope such as one of these, and analyze how it features in at least three texts and/or films from at least three different decades, not including those from the syllabus. For example, “When Animals Attack” can range from Daphne du Maurier’s “The Birds” (filmed by Alfred Hitchcock in 1963) to Them! (1954) to Night of the Lepus (1972), Jaws (1975) and countless others. As above, your discussion should focus on the significant difference between the interpretations, how (and why) the socio-cultural milieu of each film creates and reveals these differences. *Note: Students must obtain prior approval for independent topics; speak to me before or after class or email me to set up an appointment during my office hours. Annotated Preliminary Bibliography: Due Thursday, 23 Oct. You must submit an annotated preliminary bibliography with a minimum of five to seven sources, correctly cited according to MLA style. This may include up to three primary sources and a minimum of three to five secondary sources; secondary sources must be scholarly criticism or analysis, not summaries, reviews, or “analysis” from sites such as e-Notes, SparkNotes, Wikipedia*, 123HelpMe, or Gradesaver.com; instead, use the library resources, including the available electronic databases such as Academic Search Complete, InfoTrac General OneFile, Lexis-Nexis Academic, Opposing Viewpoints in Context, Points of View Reference Center, and CQ Researcher, to locate appropriate sources. To access the databases from home, click on the individual database link. Then, when prompted, enter your username (N #) and password (PIN). In addition to a correct citation for each source, you must include a description or summary of the source, at least one paragraph long, and an explanation of how you foresee incorporating it into your essay. For additional information on Annotated Bibliographies, see the Purdue University Online Writing Lab (OWL)’s Annotated Bibliographies, as well as “Sample Annotated Bibilography” and Ebel, Kimberly, “Class and Gender in Cinderella: Annotated Bibliography.” You might also find the following additional resources useful: MLA Documentation of Films: Works Cited and In-Text Citations Works Cited page (Instructions & Sample) (Microsoft Word document) MLA format (Purdue university’s Online Writing Lab) Research Paper: Due Thursday, 4 Dec. The final research essay must be submitted, in its folder with all supporting materials: photocopies or printouts of all sources, preliminary thesis, preliminary bibliography, outline–if you have completed one–and any preliminary drafts. Failure to bring the required essay on the due date will result in a zero for the assignment. Final Exam: Thursday, 18 Dec. To be announced Last Revised: Thursday, 2 October 2014 MODEL FOR EVALUATION OF STUDENT WRITING UNSATISFACTORY SATISFACTORY ABOVE AVERAGE EXCELLENT A. CONTENT: Includes thesis statement and both quantity and quality of supporting details Thesis is lacking or incorrect, and not supported with appropriate detail. Writing is thin, including generalizations with few or no concrete examples or illustrations. Thesis is apparent but general or commonplace. Support may be sketchy or occasionally irrelevant. Generalizations are supported with examples, but content may be thin. Thesis is explicit, appropriate, and well supported. Content is both adequate and appropriate, providing examples and illustrations to support all generalizations. Thesis is explicit and significant, assertive, objectively worded, and supported with substantial and relevant information. The essay includes a wealth of relevant details, examples, or imagery. B. ORGANIZATION: Includes paragraph development and arrangement of body paragraphs, as well as coherence (introduction, body, conclusion) The plan and purpose of the essay are not apparent. It is not developed or is developed with some irrelevancy or redundancy. Paragraphs are incoherent or undeveloped. Transitions are lacking. The plan of development is apparent but not consistently followed. The writing lacks clarity or is repetitious. The paragraphs are generally effective, but transitions may be weak or mechanical. The plan of development is clear and consistently followed. The writing is concise and clear, with a minimum of repetition. Paragraphs are generally welldeveloped and effective, with appropriate transitions. It is planned logically and progresses in clearly ordered and necessary steps, and developed with originality and attention to proportion and emphasis. Paragraphs are logically and effectively developed with effective transitions. C. DICTION AND MECHANICS: Includes conventions of grammar, usage, and punctuation, as well as appropriate diction Often, sentences are not grammatically correct. Vocabulary is elementary, not college level. Words are used incorrectly. Persistent usage, spelling, or punctuation errors exist. Sentences are generally correct but may lack distinction, creativity, or style. Vocabulary is generally used correctly. Occasional lapses in grammar, punctuation, or spelling exist. Sentences are correctly constructed and demonstrate variety. The vocabulary is effective and appropriate. Errors in grammar, punctuation, or spelling are rare. The sentences are skillfully constructed, effective, and varied. Words used are vivid, accurate, and original. The writing is without flaws in grammar or mechanics. A personal style is evident. D. RESEARCH AND DOCUMENTATION: Includes documentation and incorporation of appropriate collegelevel sources Sources are lacking or inappropriate. Information from sources is not adequately incorporated into the body of the essay. Documentation is missing, inadequate, or incorrect. Sources are adequate, but may be too general. Information is occasionally weakly incorporated or is unconnected to the content of the essay. Documentation is generally correct, but may contain some minor errors. Sources are generally relevant, authoritative, and appropriate. Information is relevant and is usually incorporated correctly. In-text citations and References or Works Cited page are generally correct. Sources used are relevant, substantial, and authoritative, demonstrating creativity and scholarly research. Information is introduced and incorporated smoothly and appropriately. Documentation is clear and free of errors.