Advanced Placement English Language and Composition 1 Fall Semester, 2008-2009 Instructor: Michael Thornton email: michael_thornton@dpsk12.org voicemail: 720.424.1794 website: http://dsa.dpsk12.org room: B202 office: B204 Because learning to write is best fostered by reading, reflecting, and writing about serious issues, this course is designed to extend your existing abilities to interpret and analyze a wide range of texts, to write and revise sustained arguments, to carry out independent research, and to integrate multiple sources into your essays. In addition to helping you become a skilled writer who can compose for a variety of purposes and audiences, the course is also designed to enhance your critical thinking skills. Writing skills proceed from an awareness of the composing process, the way writers explore ideas, reconsider strategies, and revise; therefore, you will be asked to write essays and revisions that progress through several stages. MATERIALS, PRODUCTS, AND EXPECTATIONS Materials Notebook (three-ring binder or divided notebook, brought to class daily): handouts from class literary terms, rhetorical terms, and vocabulary writing tips section class writing assignments writing goals Class Reading and Writing: discussions and writing exercises follow handouts and read during class participate in discussions and writing forums Required texts: Lunsford, Andrea A., John J. Ruszkiewicz, and Keith Walters. Everything's an Argument: with Readings. Boston: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2007, Fourth Edition; Cohen, Samuel. 50 Essays: A Portable Anthology. New York: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2004, First Edition; Clauss, Patrick. i-claim CD-ROM. New York: Bedford/St. Martin’s. A writing handbook or style guide is recommended – if you can’t afford to purchase one, Purdue University and the University of Colorado publish style guides online: http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/ http://www.colorado.edu/Publications/styleguide/ Required Novels: Either Angle of Repose by Wallace Stegner, The Falls by Joyce Carol Oates, or Sophie’s Choice by William Styron; and Native Son by Richard Wright. Products Independent Reading and Writing: Literacy Autobiography College Essay Expository Essay Critical Research Paper Synthesis Argument Paper Typical products for specific assignments include the following: Brainstorming and prewriting notes, diagrams, quotes, research Rough draft version with class critique, student and teacher edits Typed final draft with bibliography, MLA format Self-evaluation of reaching written goals Expectations In this class we will read nonfiction, poetry, short stories, and novels. Nonfiction pieces will comprise the majority of what we read. These pieces will provide the basis for our discussions in class and models for writing. Much of the work will be done in class, but the independent reading and writing will also demand out-of-class work. There is a textbook, a book of essays, and two novels that you will have to buy. Bring these textbooks and novels to class on the days scheduled for their discussion. More detailed assignments on the independent reading and writing will be distributed throughout the semester. All assignments will be posted on the class website, with links to downloads. In order to receive an A in this class, you must take the AP test, and all assignments must be completed. If you miss a class, you are responsible for making up missed material. Inclass essay questions and quizzes on required reading should be made up before the next class period. Late work will be penalized 10% of the grade on the assignment. This can be a significant deduction since students must write essays on a weekly basis, and many – especially seniors, due to college visits and senior projects – have a hard time submitting work when it is due. If you miss a class presentation by a group you are a member of, you will not receive the participation points that the group receives. If you are not prepared for a class editing workshop, you will not receive the participation points for it. Lateness or early departure from a class demonstrate a lack of respect for your classmates and instructor and are not acceptable. Any exceptions to these rules require the instructor’s permission in advance. The grading scale for this AP class is defined by the school district: A = 93-100% C+ = 77-79% A- = 90-92% C = 73-76% B+ = 87-89% C- = 70-72% B = 83-86% D = 60-69% B- = 80-82% F = 0-59% Advanced Placement English Language and Composition 1 Fall Semester, 2008-2009 Tentative Schedule for Course CLASS WEEK Week 1: August 18-22, 2008 Week 2: August 25-29 Week 3: September 2-5 Week 4: September 8-12 Week 5: September 15-18 Week 6: September 22-26 Week 7: September 29October 3 Week 8: October 6-10 Week 9: October 13-17 Week 10: October 20-24 Week 11: October 27-28 Week 12: November 3-7 Week 13: November 11-14 Week 14: November 17-21 Week 15: November 24-25 Weeks 16-18: December 1-18 LANGUAGE Introduction to AP Language AP website research Essay Development Techniques Close Reading Documentation 50 Essays: focus on Identity Exam Tips Brainstorming AP Pre-test Alternative Essay Formats 50 Essays: focus on Classification Representative Authors: Science, and Nature Writers Representative Authors: Autobiographers, and Diarists Biographers, and History Writers 50 Essays: focus on Comparison Representative Authors: Critics 50 Essays: focus on Definition Representative Authors: Essayists, and Fiction Writers Representative Authors: Journalists Multiple Choice and Essay Test Representative Authors: Political Writers Everything’s an Argument, 1-44 Angle of Repose, Parts I-II; Sophie’s Choice, Chaps. 1-5; The Falls, Part I 50 Essays: focus on Ethics Multiple Choice and Essay Test Everything’s an Argument, 367-410 (Style section) Angle of Repose, Parts III-IV; Sophie’s Choice, Chaps. 6-9; The Falls, Part II Everything’s an Argument, 514-582 (Documentation section) Angle of Repose, Parts V-VII; Sophie’s Choice, Chaps. 10-12; The Falls, Part III, through “Pilgrims” Angle of Repose, Parts VIII-IX; Sophie’s Choice, Chaps. 13-16; The Falls, Rest of Part III-Part IV. Multiple Choice and Essay Test Everything’s an Argument, 45-101, 137173 Synthesis Arguments COMPOSITION Rhetorical Strategies vs. Rhetorical Devices Literacy Autobiography Terminology, and Punctuation Writing Prioritization Survey Literary Terms Assignment Conferences on Writing Goals College Essay on Identity Using Classification, and Process Analysis: Woolf and Petrunkevich Timed Essays/Peer Edits (through Week 9) College Essay Revision Interrupted Reading: Rodriguez Using Comparison and Contrast: Rodriguez and Mukherjee Using Analogy, and Using Definition: Sontag on AIDS Using Description, Narration, and Reflection: Agee on Overalls; Momaday’s Rainy Mountain Interrupted Reading: Staples Using Cause and Effect: Staples and Machiavelli Using Induction and Deduction: Jefferson, Lincoln, and Sullivan Novel Assignment Research Ideas for Novel Rough Thesis for Research Paper Research Articles Planning the Paper: Strategies and Devices Novel Discussion Groups Paper Outline and Organization Research Paper Draft due Research Paper Workshop Research Paper Final due AP Essays: Grading Models Final Exam The scope and sequence of some of the included topics may be expanded, reduced or shifted to accommodate class needs. 3 Advanced Placement English Language and Composition 2 Spring Semester, 2008-2009 Tentative Schedule for Course CLASS WEEK Week 1: January 6-9, 2009 Week 2: January 12-16 Week 3: January 20-23 Week 4: January 26-30 Week 5: February 2-6 Week 6: February 9-13 Week 7: February 18-20 Week 8: February 23-27 Week 9: March 2-6 Week 10: March 9-13 Week 11: March 16-20 Week 12: March 30-April 3 Week 13: April 6-10 Week 14: April 13-16 Week 15: April 20-24 Weeks 16-19: April 27-May 22 LANGUAGE Review of Fall Semester Final Discuss weekly editorials i-claim and 50 Essays tutorials Everything’s an Argument, 174-216 50 Essays: focus on Education Everything’s an Argument, 912-978 Multiple Choice and Essay Test Rhetoric: Aristotle, Rogers, Toulmin Everything’s an Argument, 327-366 50 Essays: focus on History and Politics Everything’s an Argument, 979-1084 Rhetoric: Logical Fallacies Everything’s an Argument, 491-513 Multiple Choice and Essay Test 50 Essays: focus on Race and Culture Review of Essay Development Techniques Everything’s an Argument, 411-440, 633-671 i-claim genre and medium Rhetoric: Visual Arguments Everything’s an Argument, 792-840 Rhetoric: Word Choice and Tone Native Son by Richard Wright, Book One “Fear” American Identity in History Multiple Choice and Essay Test Everything’s an Argument, 841-911 COMPOSITION Reading Journal: Argument Analysis Terminology, and Punctuation This I Believe essay: mimic Thoreau Essay on Education Literary Terms Assignment Education Narrative (revision of Education Essay): mimic Sedaris Analysis of Rhetoric in Editorials Planning Essays: Strategies and Devices Claims and Prompts Planning for Synthesis Argument Essay on American Idealism 50 Essays: focus on Work and Class Research ideas and prompts on Language, Racism, and Existentialism in Native Son Rough thesis for research paper Three articles of research due Research Paper Draft due Timed Essays (through Week 18) Workshop Research Paper Postscript to Literacy Autobiography Research Paper Final due AP Exam Native Son, Book Two “Flight” Native Son, Book Three “Fate” AP Post-test Rhetoric: Author’s Voice 50 Essays: focus on Argument Rhetoric: Words Used to Describe Language American Idealism draft and revision Mimic Ericsson’s The Ways We Lie Prompts for Essay on American Citizen Responsibilities American Identity in Song Visual Argument Assignment American Citizen Responsibilities Draft American Citizen Responsibilities Style Revision Peer Review of American Citizen Responsibilities Essay Essay on Common Ground The scope and sequence of some of the included topics may be expanded, reduced or shifted to accommodate class needs. 4 OVERVIEW OF AP ENGLISH LANGUAGE AND COMPOSITION COURSE Students are introduced to the traditional forms of discourse and methods of writing essays during the first quarter of the course. They become familiar with terms like classification, division, process analysis, comparison and contrast, analogy, definition, description, narration, and cause and effect. They read essays employing these methods, and write essays using them. At the same time, they keep a reading journal, in which they reflect upon their own methods of reading and writing. The journals can be checked for close reading documentation; outlines and annotated texts are also used as evidence of active reading. The teacher meets with students individually, once each semester, to talk about their development as readers and writers as evinced by their journals. The teacher also meets with each student to establish writing goals at the start of the year. This is a collaborative session in which students discuss with the teacher their literacy autobiographies. Along with reading and writing essays to develop an understanding of exposition, students research and read essays by the writers listed on the AP website as representative of different genres of nonfiction writing: autobiographers, diarists, biographers, history writers, critics, essayists, journalists, political writers, and science and nature writers. They analyze and discuss the methods of discourse used by these classes of writers. Some poetry and short stories are analyzed to suggest the different methods employed by fiction writers. Through all of this, students are immersing themselves in an expanded vocabulary of analysis. They become familiar with the terminology, and learn to use the methods in their own writing. The timed essays feature various methods of writing, and the peer edits lead to revisions that focus on specific forms of discourse. Students take a released AP test at the start of the year, to witness first hand what is expected of them. Through the first semester, they take three different Multiple Choice and AP Essay tests, taken from Shea, Renee H. and Lawrence Scanlon. Teaching Nonfiction in AP English. Boston: Bedford/St.Martin’s, 2005, First Edition; to hone their skills at recognizing methods of discourse and literary terms associated with analysis, as well as to practice focused writing. Through the last half of the semester, students choose a novel to research and analyze. Ideas for a focused analysis; methods and sources of research; writing prompts and developing a thesis; outlines and structural guidelines; workshops on drafts; peer edits of revisions; and final evaluations, by the student as well as the teacher, comprise the process students follow in writing this paper. At the end of the semester, synthesis arguments are introduced as another form of research analysis and writing. During the first half of the second semester, the terms and methods of formulating an argument are introduced. Students focus on analysis of argument and persuasion in their reading journals, and write a series of essays focusing on various themes, from Education, American Idealism, and American Citizen Responsibilities, to the concept of a Common Ground. Most of the readings in Everything’s an Argument relate to these themes in some manner, or focus on techniques relevant to these synthesis arguments. 5 Students learn about rhetorical strategies used by Aristotle, Rogers, and Toulmin. They learn about logical fallacies, visual arguments, and word choice and tone. They take the tutorials and study multimedia arguments featured on the i-claim CD-ROM. They again take three versions of Multiple Choice and Essay tests through the semester, as well as the AP test that they had taken at the start of the year. They must take the official AP exam at the end of the semester to receive credit for the class. Students read Native Son by Richard Wright during the final quarter. After looking closely at some of the criticism leveled at this novel, they do further research before deciding on a topic of interest, which forms the basis for their individually devised claims, and the focus of their papers. This paper relies heavily on synthesis argument and its associated techniques. This paper undergoes a series of outlines, workshops and edits before it is finally submitted, with all the stages of brainstorming notes, research, and composition attached to it. 6 SAMPLE ASSIGNMENTS 1. Literacy Autobiography Assignment Description and Suggestions: This paper should recount the history of your literacy, emphasizing the development of your writing abilities. You may have better memories of your reading development, particularly in your primary and elementary years. But this course focuses on writing, so your paper should answer the question: How did I learn to write? Begin by exploring memories of writing events in your life. Next, select a minimum of three significant experiences – ones that illustrate how your attitudes toward writing and your ability to write evolved and developed. Remembering that good writers provide “telling details”, describe these events so that readers (your classmates and I) can understand both how and why these experiences have affected your writing development. Then analyze and interpret the meaning and cumulative effect of the experiences you have selected. Answering the following questions may help you begin your reflection and analysis: What is your earliest memory of writing? How and why did your attitude change as you encountered different writing situations and teachers? How and why did out of school writing such as diaries, letters, and poetry affect your development? What patterns do you notice in your remembered writing experiences? Were some kinds of writing typically more difficult or more engaging than others? What instructional approaches did you find helpful or discouraging? You might include some of the following information: family influences on your reading and writing; school experiences with teachers, librarians, friends, classmates; the role “self-initiated” writing has played in your development; ways that your strategies for writing have evolved or changed as you grew older; your present attitude toward writing. Structure and Organization: The best structures are usually organic and seem inherently connected with content. Analyzing the experiences and relating them to your current attitude toward writing is most effective when these insights are provided throughout the paper rather than in a general summation at the end. Many students organize this paper around a chronological structure. However, you can organize the paper by topic (positive influences, teacher responses, self-sponsored writing) or any other method that you think appropriate for your content. You may want to state directly how recounting your experience of learning to write helps you understand the process of becoming a more proficient writer, or you may prefer to leave this connection unstated. But it should at least be implied so that the reader doesn’t think that you had the experience, but missed the meaning. Format and Length: This will vary depending upon your individual story. We can discuss this. 7 American Idealism Assignment 2. Over the past century, Americans have debated the role of idealism in their government. Rising in the world as a major power has presented America with the dilemma of how it should model its foundational ideals of freedom, opportunity, and self-government. The widespread prevalence of American culture abroad has also contributed to the sometimes false impressions that world citizens have of American values. Choose one of the following prompts and write an essay about it: Should the ideals on which America was founded be the primary motivator behind foreign policy, including intervention; or should these ideals be modeled in isolation in the defense of our resources and assets? Defend, challenge, or qualify the statement that American media has had a positive effect on the United States’ world image and reputation. Defend, challenge, or qualify the statement that America has belittled the importance of religion as a guiding factor in social legislation. Discuss how this has affected the view of America in countries reputed to be more religious than America. In recent years, America has taken on the responsibility of spreading democracy in countries torn by conflict, such as Iraq. Analyze whether or not America has the authority to implement their ideals through intervention into the affairs of other countries. Use quotes from at least three of the articles from Chapter 28 in Everything’s an Argument as evidence. Use at least one additional graphic source – a photograph, drawing, cartoon, diagram – to support your claim. Either reference this in your essay if it is in Everything’s An Argument; or attach this graphic source to your paper. Include at least two definitions in your essay, to explain your terminology. Spend 1-2 hours on this – 2-3 typed, double-spaced pages. 8 3. Native Son Assignment Overview In preparing for this assignment, students talked about various topics that might serve as themes for a research paper. The psychology of racism and taboos against certain behaviors in society figured prominently in this discussion. Of course, racism is based on taboo and misconception, as is prejudice. Bigger Thomas’s fear about committing a crime to which the white population would negatively react comprises the racist presumption of rape tied to the presence of a black man in a white woman’s room. This fear based on a taboo is closely connected to racism and the psychological damage that it inflicts. Another subject batted about was the language that Wright used to create scenes and a setting that goes beyond realism: through a style reminiscent of Kafka, Poe or Dostoevsky, Wright creates an antihero who is more symbolic, more iconic than real. Again, psychology plays a major role in this thesis, for it’s an extreme form of psychological realism that gets played out here. Some literary critics call this naturalism, while others might suggest that it is existentialism that Wright explores in his characterization of Bigger. The court cases that Wright utilized to fabricate this portrait could be essential in your analysis of any philosophical claims. Choose a thesis or claim. Consider the topics that have been discussed relative to Native Son, including the information condensed in the Overview. Research the topic through different types of sources, including the library, the Internet, and the sources gathered on the website for this class. Develop an argument about this topic. It does not need to include the wording “defend, challenge, or qualify”, although those ideas should be a part of any claim made. Consider a balanced approach to the argument, but make sure that you can support whatever claim you make. Understand what your underlying assumptions or warrants are, and insure that there is consensus on the part of the reader. Integrate a variety of sources into a coherent, well-written essay. Refer to the seven articles posted on the class website, and cite at least three of these in the paper. Cite an additional three articles that you find on your own. (Definitions from a dictionary or Wikipedia will not count as additional sources.) Use the sources to support your position; avoid mere paraphrase or summary. Make your argument the center of your essay. Use parenthetical (in-text) documentation. The essay should be five pages, double-spaced, 12-point font. This is the AP English Language course – focus on Wright’s language in your paper, by quoting from Native Son at least five times. Create a Works Cited page using MLA format. Attribute both direct and indirect citations, using MLA format. 9