Poetry Lesson Erika Miller Objective: Students will understand how to connect poetry with sports. Students will work on a poetry assignment focusing on the theme of an athlete’s relationship with a piece of equipment from their sport. Instructions: Students will have the opportunity to complete a pre-reading activity, read a poem about a boy and his relationship with his soccer ball, and then create a poem of their own. You may NOT do your project on a soccer ball as that is the example that is provided. I. Pick a sport and one piece of equipment to focus on from that sport. You will write down at least 5 descriptive words about your piece of equipment. You will also write down at least 5 different descriptive actions you can do with your piece of equipment. You will then define these words and actions. You will use Webspiration to complete this activity. II. Read the poem “A Boy Juggling a Soccer Ball” by Christopher Merrill. This story demonstrates the relationship a young boy has with his soccer ball. III. Create your poem. Now it’s your turn to put together your words and the actions of the piece of equipment you have chosen to create your own poem. Your poem should describe your relationship with your piece of equipment. Assessment: Student Checklist Be sure to include the following: Did I come up with 5 words and 5 actions with definitions? Did I use correct spelling? Did I use my 5 words and 5 actions in my poem? Are my words and actions used in correct context? Is the overall look of the project good? Yes No Rubric: 6+1 Trait Writing Model : Sports Poetry Project Teacher Name: Ms. Miller Student Name: ________________________________________ 2 1 Focus on Topic (Content) There is one clear, Main idea is clear but well-focused topic. the supporting Main idea stands information is general. out and is supported by detailed information. Main idea is somewhat clear but there is a need for more supporting information. The main idea is not clear. There is a seemingly random collection of information. Adding Personality (Voice) The writer seems to be writing from knowledge or experience. The author has taken the ideas and made them "his own." The writer seems to be drawing on knowledge or experience, but there is some lack of ownership of the topic. The writer relates some of his own knowledge or experience, but it adds nothing to the discussion of the topic. The writer has not tried to transform the information in a personal way. The ideas and the way they are expressed seem to belong to someone else. Sequencing (Organization) Details are placed in a logical order and the way they are presented effectively keeps the interest of the reader. Details are placed in a logical order, but the way in which they are presented/introduced sometimes makes the writing less interesting. Some details are not in a logical or expected order, and this distracts the reader. Many details are not in a logical or expected order. There is little sense that the writing is organized. Word Choice Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the reader's mind, and the choice and placement of the words seems accurate, natural and not forced. Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the reader's mind, but occasionally the words are used inaccurately or seem overdone. Writer uses words that communicate clearly, but the writing lacks variety, punch or flair. Writer uses a limited vocabulary that does not communicate strongly or capture the reader's interest. Jargon or cliches may be present and detract from the meaning. Grammar & Spelling (Conventions) Writer makes no errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Writer makes 1-2 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Writer makes 3-4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. Writer makes more than 4 errors in grammar or spelling that distract the reader from the content. CATEGORY 4 3 Example: Sport: Soccer Piece of Equipment: Soccer Ball I. Webspiration of 5 words and 5 actions and definitions II. “Boy Juggling a Soccer Ball” Poem A Boy Juggling a Soccer Ball by Christopher Merrill after practice: right foot to left foot, stepping forward and back, to right foot and left foot, and left foot up to his thigh, holding it on his thigh as he twists around in a circle, until it rolls down the inside of his leg, like a tickle of sweat, not catching and tapping on the soft side of his foot, and juggling once, twice, three times, hopping on one foot like a jump-roper in the gym, now trapping and holding the ball in midair, balancing it on the instep of his weak left foot, stepping forward and forward and back, then lifting it overhead until it hangs there; and squaring off his body, he keeps the ball aloft with a nudge of his neck, heading it from side to side, softer and softer, like a dying refrain, until the ball, slowing, balances itself on his hairline, the hot sun and sweat filling his eyes as he jiggles this way and that, then flicking it up gently, hunching his shoulders and tilting his head back, he traps it in the hollow of his neck, and bending at the waist, sees his shadow, his dangling T-shirt, the bent blades of brown grass in summer heat; and relaxing, the ball slipping down his back. . .and missing his foot. He wheels around, he marches over the ball, as if it were a rock he stumbled into, and pressing his left foot against it, he pushes it against the inside of his right until it pops into the air, is heeled over his head--the rainbow!-and settles on his extended thigh before rolling over his knee and down his shin, so he can juggle it again from his left foot to his right foot --and right foot to left foot to thigh-as he wanders, on the last day of summer, around the empty field. III. Create your poem. Here is an example of a poem I have created as an example for you! I have the ball at my feet, this amazing sphere that makes me so free. With each step I take, I’m dribbling the ball closer to my goal. The feeling of leather on the instep of my foot, is thrilling and exhilarating all at once. I see my teammate up ahead, a simple flick of the ball and he’s moving with it now. Oh no, a blue shirt, the opponent, he’s trapping the sphere. My teammate is trying, but he’s losing his balance. He passes the ball, back to me. I know I must move quick, blue shirts are coming towards me. I take a shot and it’s off, a flying hexagon towards the goal. And just like that, it’s blocked. I fall to the ground as the whistle blows, discouraged and deflated like a flat soccer ball.