Name _____________________________
Personal Narrative
Questions to ask yourself as you revise
Question
What type of lead/hook
did you use to engage
your reader?
Answer
Type of hook:
Have you stayed focused
on one event/experience?
What is the event/experience?
What are some of the
details you used to
develop your ideas about
the event/experience?
Example:
What emotion(s),
thought(s), and insight(s)
have you described?
Emotion(s):
Have you used dialogue
effectively?
Thought(s):
Insight(s):
Example:
Have you used sensory
details?
Example:
Will your reader be able
to understand why this
event/experience was so
important to you?
Explain: