Compose and Create (CC). Students will extend their abilities to speak, write, and use other forms of representation to explore and present thoughts, feelings, and experiences in a variety of forms for a variety of purposes and audiences. Grade Outcome: Using the traits and techniques of composing and creating Grade 6 CC6.1 Create with clarity various visual, multimedia, oral, and written texts that explore: identity social responsibility efficacy *These Big Ideas are developed within each unit Grade 7 CC7.1 Create with clarity and correctness various visual, multimedia, oral, and written texts that explore: identity social responsibility efficacy Grade 8 CC8.1 Create with clarity, correctness, and variety, various visual, multimedia, oral, written texts that explore: identity social responsibility efficacy Grade 9 CC9.1 Create with clarity, correctness and effect various visual, multimedia, oral, and written texts that explore: identity social responsibility efficacy Enduring I can use specific traits of language to enhance the expression of my ideas on identity, social responsibility and efficacy. Understanding Essential Am I able to use the traits of language to enhance my expression of ideas?/Is what I am saying clear and intriguing?/How do I say what I want to say? Question Indicators Message Content or Ideas (Meaning) Does my message demonstrate a deep understanding? Focuses on straightforward ideas and information relevant to audience and purpose CC6.2, 7,8,9.3 student choose audience (peers or family) student choose audience (community-town student collectively develop a short list of students choose an audience with teacher assistance purpose is determined mayor, school SLC president) audience to choose from students determine the appropriate (explain) with teacher assistance purpose is determined with teacher assistance purpose is determined purpose (explain, describe, persuade) (explain, describe, persuade) Provides relevant details, examples, and explanations 5 points that explain 5 points that explain, describe, or persuade 3 major points supported by examples or 5 major points supported by purposeful evidence examples or evidence Uses own words to accurately explain topic to accurately explain, describe or persuade to make effective arguments to articulate the key points to match their purpose and audience Organization and Coherence (Form): What form suits my purpose and audience? What are the conventions of those forms? Adheres to the features particular to the product see Appendix #1 (form features) see CC6.7, 7,8,9.8 Organization see CC6.4, 7,8,9.4 Textual Word Choice CC6.2, 7,8,9.3 What is the power of a word? word selection is appropriate to audience and purpose chooses succinct words (strong message in few words chosen to have an emotional impact words) use coordinating conjunctions accurately use order conjunctions appropriately (first, (and, so, but, nor, so, for, yet) CC6.3 Syntactical next, last) CC7.4 Syntactical Author Voice What do I care about and how do I express that? tone is consistent tone is consistent and adds interest earnest, pleasing manner honest and sincere manner the writer makes the topic interesting writer cares about the topic begins to build credibility takes some risks by revealing self moments of enthusiasm curious and enthusiastic chooses Key Words that encourage the listener or reader to ignite thinking use subordinate conjunctions CC7.4 Syntactical experiment with conjunctive adverbs strong adjectives and verbs (fighting words) tone is consistent and add interest honest, personal and engaging writer is passionate about the topic the writer shows feelings and emotions in the paper. the reader gets a sense of humor, sadness, happiness, suspense, excitement, etc. from the writing. tone enhanced through personal insights honest and sincere manner; it is written from the heart strong commitment to topic convictions come out through the words language intrigues, delights or moves the reader in a few instances use a variety of conjunctive adverbs CC7.4 Syntactical Sentence Fluency What’s a good sentence? see CC6.3, 7,8,9.4 - Syntactical Conventions Why are there conventions? Written/Visual CC6.3, 7,8,9.4 - Other chooses the print type to make message clear chooses the print type to make message clear (font choice, handwriting, etc.) (font choice, handwriting, etc.) product is visually accurate Indicators (con’t) Written CC6.3, 7,8,9.4 - Syntactical correct punctuation with a focus on: hyphen (connects words) exclamation marks quotation marks (direct) Evidence of Understanding Oral CC6.3, 7,8,9.4 - Other articulation expression - sincerity, intensity fluency timing - pace eye contact Written explanations Visual diagrams Oral instructions Multimedia cartoons Sept. 27, 2010 Living Sky School Division No. 202 chooses a variety of print type to make message chooses a variety of print type to make clear (font choice, handwriting, etc.) message effective (font choice, handwriting, clarifies elements of script through print variety etc.) (italics, bold, etc.) chooses print technique (highlight, colour, multidimensional) that ‘pops’ words for effect correct punctuation with a focus on: comma apostrophe quotation marks (indirect) correct punctuation with a focus on: comma colons quotation marks (embedded, direct and indirect) correct punctuation with a focus on colon and semi-colon dash and hyphen quotation marks (embedded, direct and indirect) parenthesis articulation expression – experiments with a variety of volumes fluency timing - pauses eye contact Written letters to editor Visual pamphlets Oral personal narratives –with story elements (speaking) Multimedia i.e Voicethread articulation expression – tonal/emotional quality fluency timing – pace and pauses eye contact articulation uses a variety of expressive techniques for emphasis fluency timing - use of anticipation eye contact Written Persuasive essay Written and Oral Debates Visual and Multimedia Promotional Ad (opinion) Written and Oral Persuasive speeches Written, Oral, Visual, responses or reactions to texts Multimedia short video scripts Compose and Create (CC). Students will extend their abilities to speak, write, and use other forms of representation to explore and present thoughts, feelings, and experiences in a variety of forms for a variety of purposes and audiences. Grade Outcome: Inquiry process Grade Six Grade Seven CC6.9 Create a teacher-guided inquiry CC7.2 Create and present a teacher-guided project related to a stand on a topic, theme, inquiry project related to a topic, theme, or or issue studied in English Language Arts. issue studied in English language arts. Finding the answer to a question is a process. Grade 8 CC8.2 Create and present a group inquiry project related to a topic, theme, or issue studied in English language arts. Grade 9 CC9.2a and CC9.2b Create and present an individual researched inquiry project related to a topic, theme, or issue studied in English Enduring Understanding Essential How can I ask the right questions and then find the answers? Question Indicators Use a teacher provided inquiry model, directed by teacher Use a teacher provided inquiry model, supported Adapt a teacher provided inquiry model Use an inquiry model independently by teacher guidance Preparing Use the language of inquiry to examine personal knowledge of and experiences related to a topic to determine information needs. What experiences have I had… What do I know? Activate personal knowledge through a Activate personal knowledge through a Activate personal knowledge to bring to the Independently use a variety of methods to activate classroom activity such as classroom activity such as collective group knowledge personal knowledge Brainstorming Brainstorming Collaborative online webbing tools webbing webbing Reflective skills Doodle/visual Jot notes Use the language of inquiry to develop general background knowledge I wonder if…., What do I want to find out? What do others know? Explore general sources provided by teacher Explore general sources compiled by the class As a group, determine or create a data collection Individually, determine or create a data collection Class video Class video tool and the sources to gather general background tool and the sources to gather general background Short reading Short reading knowledge knowledge Asking significant others Asking significant others class KWL chart KWL chart or other data collection tool Use the language of inquiry to formulate a variety of relevant questions on a topic to establish a purpose for seeking information What inquiry question(s) would focus my task? Teacher provides essential question and the teacher provides a few essential questions on a group determines the essential questions create essential and guiding questions class develops guiding questions topic, issue or theme group determines guiding questions class chooses one essential questions and develops guiding questions Create an inquiry plan How will I get answers to my question? teacher provides the plan that includes: teacher provides the essential components of group determines the essential plan components individual determines the essential components source types that support the question and the plan and student: with guidance from teacher on the plan, develops the data collection tool, and their location (web sources, online databases, chooses source types that support the group develops the data collection tool considers the product that best shares their print, etc.) question and their location (web sources, group considers the product that best shares their response to the questions the data collection tool where students record online databases, print, etc.) response to the questions references chooses the data collection tool from those notes provided by teacher a pre-determined product that shares the final online, graphic organizers response to question considers products that best shares their response to the questions Finding Where would I find information and ideas about this topic, question, problem, or issue? How will I access these sources? Understand the differences in sources and Use basic features of search tools: Use basic features of search tools: when it is appropriate to use each Computer library catalogue Computer library catalogue Use basic features of search tools: Online magazine search engine Online magazine search engine Computer library catalogue Online encyclopedias Online encyclopedias Online magazine search engine Search engines Search engines Online encyclopedias Expand the repertoire of search tools and utilize Expand the repertoire of search tools and utilize Search engines advanced features of all search tools, including advanced features of all search tools, including Expand the repertoire of search tools database search engines database search engines Search social media ie. blogging, micro blogging (Twitter) Evaluate information within found sources How do I know if this information is suitable? Understand triangulation - the comparison of Use triangulation - the comparison of three Use strategies to initially determine value of Use strategies to initially determine value of three different sources to assess accuracy and different sources to assess accuracy and relevance source source relevance of ideas and information of ideas and information Skim/scan Skim/scan Use strategies to initially determine value of Use strategies to initially determine value of Text features Text features source source Review and practice the pre-established criteria Review and practice the pre-established criteria Skim/scan Skim/scan to evaluate the currency, relevance, and to evaluate the currency, relevance, and Text features Text features reliability of information sources in answering reliability of information sources in answering Review and practice the pre-established criteria Review and practice the pre-established criteria inquiry or research questions. inquiry or research questions. to evaluate the currency, relevance, and to evaluate the currency, relevance, and Evaluate the appropriateness of information for Evaluate the appropriateness of information reliability of information sources in answering reliability of information sources in answering a particular audience and purpose for a particular audience and purpose inquiry or research questions. inquiry or research questions. Assess completeness and relevance of ideas and Assess completeness and relevance of ideas Evaluate the appropriateness of information for a Evaluate the appropriateness of information for a information within different sources and information within different sources particular audience and purpose particular audience and purpose Using Takes notes using one or more of a variety of note-taking strategies such as: note-taking cards, jot notes, colour coding, graphic organizers, two-column notes, outline CR .6 With teacher direction Selects a tool from a teacher selected As a group, determine note-taking strategies to Choose a note-making strategy to suit purpose repertoire meet needs and personal preference Determine relevance and importance of information in a chosen source Is the information useful and valid? summarizing major ideas and supporting details Paraphrase Quote Enhances meaning by connecting ideas across texts How does my information connect? Formal outline tool Graphic organizers web Identify gaps Do I have enough information to fully answer my question? Identify gaps in information and collect and gather additional information Contribute ideas, knowledge, and strategies to help identify class, group, or individual information needs and sources Locating information Develop ability to identify purposeful key words to use in search Use basic features of search tools: Computer library catalogue Online magazine search engine Online encyclopedias Search engines Reflect on and synthesize information gathered Reflect on question: What do we/I already know? Match the sharing format What have we/I foundwith out?the audience and purpose of the inquiry What did others say? (group discussions, interviews and social media conversations) What is our/my conclusion? What is our/my point of view? Adjust inquiry and research strategies as needed to answer my question. Create and compose first draft: written, storyboard, script, sketch What is the answer my question? What is the best way to share my response to the question? How will I organize the information? Evidence of Understanding use a teacher chosen format for sharing based on Choose from a teacher created list of formats for As a group, jointly choose a format for sharing Choose from an ever-expanding repertoire of audience and purpose sharing based on audience and purpose based on audience and purpose formats for sharing based on audience and purpose Ethical use and acknowledgement of other’s ideas and words: CC6.2 7,8,9.3 During CC6.4 7,8,9.5 How have I used others’ ideas to support my point of view? Cite(acknowledging the use of another person’s idea and words within presentations and composition using a format such as MLA or APA) Use quotation marks when using someone Use quotation marks when using someone Appropriately cite in text quotes: Give credit for ideas as well as directly quoted else’s words else’s words and use indentation when using material Short – quotation marks a longer quote use and acknowledge other people’s ideas to use and acknowledge other people’s ideas to Long - indentation support a point of view including non-print use and acknowledge other people’s ideas to support a point of view including non-print use and acknowledge other people’s ideas to sources (interviews, videos, pictures, etc.) support a point of view including non-print sources (interviews, videos, etc.) support a point of view including non-print sources (interviews, videos, pictures, etc.) Use different sentence structures to cite sources (interviews, videos, etc.) Experiment in using different sentence Experiment in using different sentence structures to cite structures to cite Reference(providing all the bibliographic data on a separate page at the end using a specified format such as MLA or APA) Understand that online citation generators Identify, with teacher support, source creators Identify, with support, source creators Independently identify source creators require an understanding of source creators (organization, author, editors, interviews, (organization, author, editors, interviews, (organization, author, editors, interviews, (organization, author, editors, interviews, photographer, etc.) for the purpose of using an photographer, etc.) for the purpose of using an photographer, etc.) for the purpose of using an photographer, etc.) as modeled by teacher online citation generator online citation generator online citation generator Understand that there needs to be an exact Understand that there needs to be an exact Understand that there needs to be an exact match Understand that there needs to be an exact match match of the sources cited within the match of the sources cited within the of the sources cited within the composition or of the sources cited within the composition or composition or presentation and the reference composition or presentation and the reference presentation and the reference page presentation and the reference page page page Understand the difference between a Understand the difference between a Understand the difference between a Understand the difference between a reference/work cited page and a bibliography reference/work cited page and a bibliography reference/work cited page and a bibliography reference/work cited page and a bibliography Demonstrate that they understand they own Demonstrate an understanding of the process of Use a process for copyrighting own work Use a process for copyrighting own work copyright for their own work copyrighting their own work Sharing How can we prepare a presentation suitable for the purpose, audience, and situation that we identified? Construct the final product based on rough draft Present and share with appropriate audience Evaluating Reflect on Questions: What did we learn? What new questions do I want to pursue? What is left unanswered? Appropriate technology tools are used throughout the inquiry process to prepare, to find, to use and to share information and ideas Establish criteria for process Criteria determined by inquiry project format Sept. 27, 2010 Living Sky School Division No. 202 Compose and Create (CC). Students will extend their abilities to speak, write, and use other forms of representation to explore and present thoughts, feelings, and experiences in a variety of forms for a variety of purposes and audiences. Grade Grade 6 CC6.2 Select and use the appropriate strategies to Outcome: communicate meaning with clarity Composing and before creating during process after speaking, writing, and other representing activities. Grade 7 CC7.3 Select and use the appropriate strategies to communicate meaning with clarity and correctness before during after speaking, writing, and other representing activities. Grade 8 CC8.3 Select and use the appropriate strategies to communicate meaning with clarity, correctness and variety before during after speaking, writing, and other representing activities. Enduring Understanding Essential Question Proficient writers and creators develop a process. Indicators Progress through stages/phases of the creating process (planning, drafting, revising, presenting) as needed. CC.1 What is my compose and create process? Does composing need a process? Before: Consider prompt or find a topic and activate prior knowledge What do I write about? Gather ideas and topics found in personal categorize ideas and topics found in personal idea journal, other means of collecting ideas experiences – idea journal experiences – idea journal Use RAFTS to refine the purpose of writing choose a topic that is significant – narrow topic form questions about chosen topic Consider purpose and audience understand audience as all viewers, listeners, readers rather than just the teacher understand that writing needs a purpose identify and define stance/role/voice Grade 9 CC9.3.a and CC9.3b Select and use appropriate strategies to communicate meaning with clarity, correctness and effect before during after speaking, writing, and other representing activities. Who is my audience? Why am I writing to them? determine specific audience ask questions to analyze purpose and audience determine specific purpose develop a prompt to focus purpose and audience plan and organize information for the intended viewer, listener, reader) play with general idea and refine and narrow it considering and valuing own observations, experiences, ideas, and opinions as sources for ideas develop purposeful Role Audience Format Topic Strong verb determine timelines and deadlines engage intended audience and what response is wanted from them choose to write to a purpose of: entertaining, explaining, surprising, persuading, describing, or narrating Consider and generate specific ideas and information that might be included What do others say about my idea? generate and expand ideas through talk with peers get ideas from books and others formulate pertinent questions to explore and develop the own observations, experiences, ideas, and opinions as sources for ideas and teacher topic use free writing, clustering, or another selecting activity to explore and find a focus Consider and choose/adapt a possible form What form will help me achieve my purpose and suit my audience? review and adapt models select a form that will serve purpose choose the best pattern to present ideas including cause Choose the frame or form that could be used to best organize ideas to fit purpose of the composition choose underlying structures – temporal sequence, and effect, problem/solution, opinion/reason, present ideas and that would be appropriate to inform, describe, explain, persuade time sequence, compare and contrast, problem and fact/proof, sharing experience pattern audience and purpose solution to present different kinds of information Collect and focus ideas and information How do I decide what to say about my idea? select details that will support the topic select details that will support the topic collect details about the topic and plan how to use them how much is already known about the subject create a list, graphic organizer, character map, identify gaps in ideas and information what additional information is available timeline, or sketch where it may be found Plan and organize ideas for drafting What is the best way to organize my idea and details? mapping and authoring plan and organize ideas to fit format plan, organize, and sequence ideas to fit purpose, point mapping and authoring establish a logical sequence for ideas mapping and authoring of view, and format state focus for communication in sentence create an outline, flow chart, map, or other mapping and authoring map or outline a plan that might develop that focus organizer to plan create a pre-writing plan as a guide consider alternative ways to organize and present ideas Consider qualities of effective communication and the language to use What tone and style of language will support my idea? use dialogue to draw readers in consider strong verbs to use best register and point of view to use what to emphasize in the communication consider technology to emphasize ideas match stance/role/voice to audience purpose what tone or voice could be used Create draft(s) and experiment with possible product(s) create a “discovery” draft and then revise it develop a clear main idea around which a composition will be developed Confer with others change writing in response to peer or teacher feedback During: How do I get my idea and details started? arouse interest with a strong lead develop main idea with sufficient supporting detail develop a clear main idea supported by significant change any ideas that are not clear or complete and sufficient detail use and maintain appropriate point of view for create a coherent sequence audience and purpose Do others understand my message? draft multiple leads and endings and consult peers use a peer response sheet to seek the most effective Use language and its conventions to construct message Can I make my message clearer if I use a different convention? experiment with language that is particular to a write a variety of complex sentences using attend to the tone and sincerity setting conventions of word order and punctuation communicate in a way that sounds informative and use formal and informal voice vary the structure and length for reasons of craft confident use transition words Reflect, clarify, self-monitor, self-correct, and use a variety of “fix-up” strategies What do I think about my own composition? Reflect on the lead choice Check for a strong lead Check for clear transitions that increase flow and Review the beginning middle and ending structure Look for details that develop the main idea fluency Check that ideas are expressed in a variety of ways Acknowledge sources How do I use and acknowledge others’ ideas and thoughts? cite (ideas, quotes and facts) and reference (source) CC.6.9 7,8,9. 2 Using develop a first draft that introduces the topic and gives the focus statement covers each part of the topic uses details explaining the topic ends in a way that gives the viewer, listener, reader a final thought shape and reshape draft with audience and purpose in mind articulate hopes for composition and solicit feedback and suggestions from peers and others use the right level of language for purpose and audience check for active, forward-moving sentences cut, clarify, and condense CC6,4 7,8,9.5 Experiment with communication features and techniques see CC.1 Traits of Language How can I make my message understood? After: Revise for content and meaning (adding, deleting, substituting, and rethinking) Are there changes I can make to strengthen my composition? check for a clear message or idea in the beginning, ensure the beginning attracts the viewer, listener, or consider the assumptions and values presented reader, the middle part supports the focus, and the middle and end ensure that there are a variety of sentence types closing connects everything word choice is interesting and varied check for a logical and deliberate order of ideas and details Revise for organization Do my ideas flow for the reader? reorganize paragraphs or sections for better move information to increase suspense or move the check that the text patterns and features are sequence or logical progression action appropriate to the form of representation review for consistent point of view make choppy communications fluent look for a smooth flow of ideas between the revise to eliminate unnecessary repetition beginning, middle and end by using transitions Revise for sentence structure and flow Are my sentences interesting? check that sentences are clear eliminate run- on sentences use a variety of sentences that flow smoothly and eliminate run-on sentences check that punctuation supports the sentence clearly from one idea to the next Revise for word choice, spelling, and usage use transitional words for flow use correct terminology to establish authority check for the rules of punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and usage Are the words the best they can be? consult a variety of resources to find appropriate use vivid verbs, specific subjects, and well-chosen and precise words to reflect what students want to qualifiers say check for the rules of punctuation, capitalization, check for the rules of punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and usage spelling, and usage cut information that does not support focus add information if additional points need to be made refine so ideas are interesting, colourful, and understood consider what parts are working together well review method of development consider if the opening and closing are appropriate consider if a written composition reads smoothly and clearly test and revise sentences for variety, verb choice, and length choose sentences to make the desired effect Consider clarity and quality of words check for the rules of punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and usage Do the mechanics support or impede the meaning? polish to enhance legibility include an appropriate variety of print features that use white space, font, bold to communicate suit text form and purpose meaning Do others ‘get’ my message? provide editing help to peers use pre-determined and/or student-developed criteria seek feedback from peers and teacher for revision revise with peers’ and others’ responses in mind Polish, practise, and decide how work will be shared and published How shall I share my work? Choose which sharing form best suits the audience Choose which sharing form best suits the audience Choose from a small repertoire of sharing formats and purpose, with teacher support and purpose, with teacher guidance Enhance for clarity, correctness and variety enhance for clarity enhance for clarity and correctness create necessary supports: illustrations, charts, create necessary supports: illustrations, charts, create necessary supports: illustrations, charts, graphics, expression, voice pitch, etc. graphics, expression, voice pitch, etc. graphics, expression, voice pitch, etc. Share final product, reflect, consider feedback, and celebrate learning What have I learned that will improve my next work? present present present collect feedback using a teacher selected method collect feedback using a method from a teacher collect feedback using a method from a personal reflect and set goals for future work selected repertoire repertoire reflect and set goals for future work use a reflection sheet to think about the product, delivery, and planning for future communications Use the composing process strategies to create products defined in other outcomes Proofread for mechanics and appearance write fluently and legibly in cursive handwriting with appropriate spacing choose appropriate font style and size Confer with peers, teacher, or others provide editing and proofreading help to peers Evidence of Understanding Sept. 27, 2010 Living Sky School Division No. 202 Review overall effect of the look of the composition – neatness, organized, includes variety provide meaningful feedback based on specific observations; keep comments positive and constructive review purpose and choose a sharing format from a large repertoire enhance for effect create necessary supports: illustrations, charts, graphics, expression, voice pitch, etc. present collect feedback using a self-created method reflect and set goals for future work prepare a portfolio Compose and Create (CC). Students will extend their abilities to speak, write, and use other forms of representation to explore and present thoughts, feelings, and experiences in a variety of forms for a variety of purposes and audiences. Grade Grade 6 CC6.3 Use cues to construct and communicate Outcome: meaning with clarity Cueing Systems pragmatic textual syntactic semantic/lexical/morphological graphophonic other cues Grade 7 Grade 8 CC7.4 Use cues to construct and communicate meaning with clarity and correctness pragmatic textual syntactical semantic/lexical/morphological graphophonic other cues CC8.4 Use cues to construct and communicate meaning with clarity, correctness, and variety pragmatic textual syntactical semantic/lexical/morphological graphophonic other cues Enduring Understanding Essential Question Understanding how language works allows authors and creators to communicate clearly and effectively. Indicators Use the cues and conventions of language to deliberately convey meaning when engaging in speaking, writing, and other forms of representing. How can I use language to help me communicate clearly and effectively? Grade 9 CC9.4a, 9.4b Use cues to construct and communicate meaning with clarity, correctness and effect pragmatic textual syntactic semantic/lexical/morphological graphophonic other cues Am I using language effectively? Pragmatic: purpose (Gr. 6), intended audience, and register What is the context of my composition? Who is Audience? What is my Purpose? Use inclusive language that demonstrates respect for others (Gr. 7) ‘polite’ phrases gender different ages, abilities, genders and cultures cultures, genders, ages, and abilities Use standard Canadian English that follows accepted rules of usage (American/Canadian) or/our er/re ise/ize-yze licence/license and practice/practise usage e.g. favor/favour e.g. center/centre e.g. realise/realize analyse/analyze check/cheque Adjust use of language to suit audiences and purposes meeting and greeting guests and visitors celebration of special events and accomplishments use appropriate language to participate in public use emotional appeal or persuasive language: events, occasions, or traditions testimonials, emotional appeals, bandwagon effects recognize the five registers of language determine the register of language for a specific use appropriate language register use formal, informal, colloquial/casual to suit see Appendix #2 Registers of Language audience see Appendix #2 Registers of Language see Appendix #2 Registers of Language audience and purpose Appendix #2 Registers of Language avoid the use of slang terms avoid use of ‘text’ terms Textual: Understand and use a range of standard forms for texts Paragraphs (Gr. 6) and multi-paragraph compositions Use appropriate point of view for purpose first person third person Use common organizational patterns within texts CC6.7 7,8,9.8 Organization and CC.1 Organization use a logical sequence for ideas. chronological chronological enumerative problem/solution Develop ideas through effective use of universal text structures: opening, body, conclusion craft strong leads craft strong leads and effective conclusions avoid the personal “I/you” in formal communication How are texts organized? Maintain focus and ensure unity and coherence in text from beginning to end use clear transition words use transition words that suit the text and content Use structures and features of texts form/genre form/genre artistic devices artistic devices personification personification figurative language: similes, exaggeration figurative language: similes and metaphors, elements: point of view, conflict, theme, exaggeration, alliteration, onomatopoeia supporting arguments elements: point of view, conflict, theme, supporting text features: credits, headings, diagrams, arguments columns, sidebars text features: credits, headings, diagrams, columns, sidebars second person chronological problem/solution comparison/contrast use slang and jargon only for effect multiple points of view enumerative cause/effect chronological problem/solution comparison/contrast enumerative cause/effect procedural craft strong leads, coherent bodies and effective conclusions craft strong leads, coherent bodies, and effective conclusions use a variety of transition words Use effective transition words form/genre artistic devices personification figurative language: similes and metaphors, exaggeration, symbolism elements: point of view, conflict, theme, supporting arguments text features: credits, headings, diagrams, columns, sidebars use language and techniques to create a dominant impression, mood, tone, and style. avoid wordiness, mixed metaphors, or “fancy” words Syntactical: predictable structure of a sentence and the ways words are combined to form phrases, clauses, and sentences What is the best structure for my sentence? Use clear sentence structures that contain a verb and its subject average spoken sentence length - 9.5 words average spoken sentence length - 9.5 words average spoken sentence length – 10.5 words average spoken sentence length – 10.5 words written sentence length - 9.0 words written sentence length - 9.0 words average length of sentences in freewriting – 10..2 average length of sentences in freewriting – 10.2 in rewriting – 9.8 in rewriting – 9.8 Combine closely related ideas into compound structures using conjunctions or joining words CC.1 Word Choice *Coordination combines two ideas that are equally important. *Subordination combines two ideas in a way that makes one idea more important than the other. *Modification is a word or word group that changes the meaning of another word or word group that is more basic to the sentence use complete sentences with some appropriate use subordination and modification use subordination and coordination to show more use subordination to show more precisely subordination and modification reduce, when appropriate, subordinate clause to a precisely the relationship between ideas (e.g., the relationship between ideas (e.g., because, make sentences more precise by reducing a phrase or single word because, although, when) and to avoid a string of although, when) and to avoid a string of main idea (clause) to a subordinate idea compound sentences compound sentences (clause) make sentences more precise by reducing a main idea make sentences more precise by reducing a main (clause) to a subordinate idea (clause) idea (clause) to a subordinate idea (clause) reduce, when appropriate, subordinate clause to a reduce, when appropriate, a subordinate clause to phrase or single word a phrase or single word recognize that effective co-ordination, subordination, and apposition of ideas make sentences clear and varied recognize and use parallel structure or balanced sentences for parallel ideas Use effective punctuation and capitalization including: periods, commas, quotation marks, colons, periods, commas, quotation marks, colons, dashes, periods, commas, semi-colons, quotation marks, periods, commas, semi-colons, quotation marks, dashes, and hyphens and hyphens colons, dashes, and hyphens colons, dashes, and hyphens Punctuate correctly titles of various media Vary sentence beginnings noun, pronoun, or article at beginning adverb and adjective at beginning prepositional phrase a the beginning dependent clause at the beginning Ensure agreement of subject, verbs, and pronouns singular pronouns agree with singular nouns correctly aligns the various types of plural pronouns pronouns acting as subjects and objects (e.g., “He and pronouns acting as subjects and objects (me, with plural nouns his brother …”) myself and I) Use correct verb forms simple present (I go), past (I went) future (I will continuous present (He is working) part (He was present perfect (I have eaten), past perfect ( I had use active versus passive verbs go) working) and future (He will be working) eaten), and future perfect (I will have eaten) Semantic/Lexical/Morphological: all the words or vocabulary and their meaningful parts(morphemes) Do the words I use convey my intended meaning? Use words that are appropriate for audience, purpose, and context and capture a particular aspect of intended meaning Word Usage CC 6.3 7,8,9.4 Textual, Structure & features CC.1 Word Choice avoid overused and misused words (‘really avoid overused and misused words( “could of’) use specific words and synonyms for variety avoid overused and misused words (irregardless, good’, ‘very good’) use common homonyms ( their/they’re /there; use common homonyms (whose/who’s) anyways, among/between) use words figuratively and for imagery its/it’s; too/two/to) use often confused words (lend/borrow) correctly use specific words and synonyms for variety use commonly confused words (who/whom) use words that capture a particular aspect of use common homonyms (through/threw) correctly intended meaning use often confused words (affect/effect) correctly use words figuratively and for imagery avoid wordiness, mixed metaphors or ‘fancy’ words Use reference tools (both online and hard copy) including dictionaries and thesauri, to determine meaning of words, to check spelling, and to verify usage Vocabulary ever expanding repertoire/personal lexicon ever expanding repertoire/personal lexicon ever expanding repertoire/personal lexicon ever expanding repertoire/personal lexicon (An average student learns some 3,000 words (An average student learns some 3,000 words per (An average student learns some 3,000 words per (An average student learns some 3,000 words per year, or approximately eight words per day) year, or approximately eight words per day) year, or approximately eight words per day) per year, or approximately eight words per day) demonstrate and use new vocabulary apply new words in everyday use use new vocabulary while speaking & writing in use new vocabulary while speaking & writing in appropriately. a variety of settings a variety of settings examines word usage and effectiveness to expand descriptive vocabulary considers both the Graphophonic: relationship between the symbols and sounds; letter or sound relationships and patterns enunciate clearly and carefully, and correctly enunciate clearly and carefully and pronounce words pronounce words correctly Spelling use basic spelling strategies, rules, and word utilize a variety of spelling rules and strategies to families to spell words correctly at grade level correctly spell appropriate words. understand the structure of base words and spell derivatives correctly by applying the spellings affixes of bases and some affixes correctly spell common words using Canadian spell most words correctly using Canadian spelling spelling correctly apply the rules to spelling plurals Other Cues: graphics, layouts, colour, sounds, movement, font choices, and handwriting Presentation skills CC.1 Conventions use appropriate volume and intonation use volume and presentation techniques appropriate use appropriate non-verbal cues and body to audience and purpose language use appropriate gestures, physical movements, facial use appropriate gestures, facial expressions, expressions, sounds, visuals, and multimedia aids to sounds, visuals, and multimedia aids to enhance enhance presentation presentation include clear representations: electronic, choose appropriate font size and style when illustration using technology. denotative and connotative meaning of words Can I use the relationships and patterns in words to ensure accuracy? enunciate clearly and carefully, and correctly enunciate clearly and carefully, and correctly pronounce words pronounce words with proper emphasis use knowledge of a range of spelling patterns, including sound-symbol relationships and rules, to help identify, analyze, and correct spelling errors. spell derivatives correctly by applying the spellings of bases and most affixes spell most words correctly using Canadian spelling use knowledge of spelling generalizations. What features enhance my meaning? use volume and presentation techniques appropriate to audience and purpose use appropriate non-verbal cues (including gestures, physical movements, facial expressions, eye contact, and body language), sound effects, visuals, and multimedia aids to enhance presentation arrange and balance words and visuals as well as fonts (typefaces/print) in order to send a coherent and clear message to specific audiences combine print and visuals Handwriting CC6.2 7,8,9.3 After; Mechanics and Appearance use printing and cursive writing appropriate to purpose – labels, notes, report, poster, etc. write(manual and cursive) legibly with appropriate speed and control These skills are assessed in the context of other products listed in other outcomes. Evidence of Understanding The outcome must be summatively assessed only in an authentic context. Skills practiced in specific spelling and grammar programs should be formatively assessed. Sept.27, 2010 Living Sky School Division No. 202 use knowledge of a range of spelling patterns, including sound-symbol relationships and rules, to help identify, analyze, and correct spelling errors. spell derivatives correctly by applying the spellings of bases and affixes spell words correctly using Canadian spelling use knowledge of spelling generalizations use volume and presentation techniques appropriate to audience and purpose use appropriate non-verbal cues (including gestures, physical movements, facial expressions, eye contact, and body language), sound effects, visuals, and multimedia aids to enhance presentation arrange and balance words and visuals as well as fonts (typefaces/print) in order to send a coherent and clear message to specific audiences combine print and visuals to enhance presentation ensure that graphics, sound, and technology enhance representations. Compose and Create (CC). Students will extend their abilities to speak, write, and use other forms of representation to explore and present thoughts, feelings, and experiences in a variety of forms for a variety of purposes and audiences. Grade Outcome: Representing Grade 6 CC6.4 Create and present a variety of representations with clarity the Purpose explain persuade entertain Grade 7 CC7.5 Create and present a variety of representations with clarity and correctness Purpose explain persuade entertain Ideas can be represented in a variety of ways. Enduring Understanding What is the best way to represent my ideas? Essential Question Key ideas and understandings are represented with Indicators Grade 8 CC8.5 Create and present a variety of representations with clarity, correctness and variety Purpose explain persuade entertain Grade 9 CC9.5a and 5b Create and present a variety of representations with clarity, correctness and effect Purpose explain persuade entertain Are my ideas clear and correct? clarity clarity and correctness clarity, correctness and variety clarity, correctness and effect Represent ideas and demonstrate understanding of forms and techniques How can I share my ideas? poster Cartoon sequences storyboarding storyboarding tableau contextual dramas illustrating scripting physical movement Posters role playing concept mapping graphic organizer advertisements e-mailing chart concept mapping graph table Consider appropriate technology to communicate or enhance representations. (See LSSD Digital Citizenship Continuum) Will technology help make the ideas clear? copyright copyright copyright copyright see CC 6.9 7,8,9..2 Using see CC 6.9 7,8,9..2 Using see CC 6.9 7,8,9..2 Using see CC 6.9 7,8,9..2 Using camera use/software – photo sharing design applications use sophisticated video editing software choose from a personal repertoire of technological skills and tools to suit purpose and match online tools with purpose create and edit sound and video files. Current examples: Premier Elements, iMovie audience current examples: MS Paint, TuxPaint, Big current examples: PPT, Windows Movie match online tools with purpose create, edit, and use sound and video files Huge Labs, ToonDoo video camera use/software YouTube Channel/applications match online tools with purpose websites/blogs as a multimedia in a presentation use more than one type of media in a presentation Utilize a variety of elements to enhance oral and written communications Which elements will give clarity and effect to my message? graphics appropriate graphic organizers music sound effects photographs charts diagram mime models circle graphs mime graphics artifacts timelines video clips physical movement illustrations maps illustrations short video clip sound effects role play elements of design illustrations visual and multimedia presentation illustrated report address various audiences for one proposal Evidence of displays Logo diagrams role play that ends with a tableau Understanding illustrations visual plot line posters dramatization videos Documentary on social issue? displays visual and multimedia presentation Flow chart cartoons newscast Caricature Adapt a print work to another medium Sept. 27, 2010 Living Sky School Division No. 202 Compose and Create (CC). Students will extend their abilities to speak, write, and use other forms of representation to explore and present thoughts, feelings, and experiences in a variety of forms for a variety of purposes and audiences. Grade 6 Grade 7 Outcome: Speaking informally in discussions and groups Grade CC6.5 Use oral language to interact appropriately with others in pairs, and small and large group situations asking questions to explore others’ ideas and viewpoints discussing and comparing ideas and opinions completing tasks and contributing to group success CC7.6 Use oral language to interact purposefully and appropriately with others in pairs, small groups, and large group situations contributing to sustaining dialogue expressing support for others and their viewpoints discussing and analyzing ideas and opinions completing a variety of tasks contributing to group consensus building Enduring Understanding Essential Question Indicators Interacting with others requires the use of discussion skills. Evidence of Understanding Grade 8 CC8.6 Use oral language to interact purposefully, confidently, and respectfully in a variety of situations including one-to-one, small group, and large group discussions expressing feelings and viewpoints contributing to group harmony Grade 9 CC9.6a and CC9.6b Use oral language to interact purposefully, confidently, and appropriately in a variety of situations including participating in one-to-one, small group, and large group discussions prompting and supporting others solving problems resolving conflicts building consensus articulating and explaining personal viewpoint discussing preferences speaking to extend current understanding What skills do I use to contribute to a discussion? Speak in partners, small groups and whole class to accomplish a goal take on an assigned role (e.g., leader, recorder, assume a variety of assigned roles in group encourager, reporter) to accomplish a task work (e.g., leader, recorder, encourager, reporter) reach consensus or conclusions. What group roles help achieve our goal? acknowledge and encourage the roles (e.g., create group roles using consensus to ensure task leader, recorder, encourager, reporter) of all group is understood and completed members apply rules for co-operative or whole class debate express and share personal feelings, ideas, and discussion on controversial issues. opinions, and responses use talk to explore own and others’ ideas and to express understanding solve a problem or understand a task through group co-operation. Maintain group harmony through the discussion and exploration of ideas and knowledge contribute to structured discussion and share ideas/knowledge clearly and logically dialogues to explore perspectives, ideas, and add to others’ ideas issues and to complete tasks. repeat points for clarification encourage the contributions of others relate points already made for emphasis and disagree courteously/sensitively reconsideration. give reasons for opinions recognize when conflicts and tensions arise in group work and negotiate a return to a productive and respectful atmosphere. Am I respectful of others’ ideas? engage in dialogue to understand the feelings and demonstrate respect for the needs, rights, and viewpoints of others and contribute to group feelings of others. harmony. Asking and Responding ask and respond to questions to guide the process and complete the task answer others’ questions clearly and politely Do my questions focus the discussion? contribute ideas and information and pose confidently ask the difficult questions in a questions to probe for understanding. respectful manner thoughtfully respond to difficult questions questions and responses are concise, clear, and appropriate. Maintain conversations in small and whole groups with peers and adults and consistently follow guidelines for interacting listening to others without interrupting speaking respectfully to peers using appropriate language and tone to disagree Indicators are used in the context of discussions and meetings What helps everyone participate? Outcome: Speaking in a formal presentation style Essential Understanding Essential Question Indicators CC6.6 Use oral language appropriately to express a range of information and ideas in formal and informal situations CC7.7 Use oral language to express effectively information and ideas of some complexity in formal and informal situations CC8.7 Use oral language to effectively express information and ideas of complexity in formal and informal situations Speaking clearly and with purpose allows our ideas and opinions to be understood. What does an audience understand from my formal presentation? Experiment with speaking in formal situations prepare and give oral presentations (e.g., inquiry project topic). How will I share my ideas and opinions? create and deliver oral responses to texts and give oral presentations to different audiences for inquiry projects various purposes, such as summaries, inquiry projects, and impromptu speeches Organize ideas in appropriate format and sequence ideas and information clearly and logically. Will my audience ‘get’ my message? formal introduction/body / conclusion introduction/ logical body/ effective conclusion introduction/ logical body/ effective conclusion present ideas effectively demonstrating an transitions develop voice through expressions and word awareness of audience (e.g., attempt to make defend and/or support opinion with evidence choice in all segments of format the material interesting and appropriate to summarize main ideas discussed and give reasons for opinions and points of view audience and purpose) conclusions drawn summarize ideas discussed and state own view in light of discussion Adjust language and tone to suit audience, purpose, and situation. CC.1 Conventions What makes an oral presentation interesting? speak clearly and expressively in classroom speak clearly and expressively in classroom speak clearly and expressively in classroom presentations presentations presentations use appropriate language register use appropriate language register use appropriate language register use body language and gestures, modification effective use of body language and gestures, effective use of gestures, facial expressions, and of voice, or facial expressions to respond to the modification of voice, or facial expressions to visual aids to enhance meaning of talk. audience. respond to the audience Using language for dramatic effect – creative expression What is the response I want from my audience? word choice capture the audience’s attention use voice modulation, tone, and gestures emphasized beliefs create an audience response (empathy, laughter) expressively to enhance the meaning gestures & body language gesture, voice, body language, animation use performance qualities to inspire belief (vocal language register tone, eye contact, pace) Evidence of Understanding CC9.7a and CC9.7b Use oral language intentionally to express a range of information and ideas in formal and informal situations presenting findings from an inquiry project a demonstration a short dramatization. Sept. 27, 2010 Living Sky School Division No. 202 a retelling of a personal experience a demonstration a persuasive speech a dramatization debate a point participate in a meeting give a dramatic reading of a poem or play excerpt Give oral presentations to different audiences for various purposes, such as summaries, narratives, persuasive topics, inquiry projects, and impromptu and dramatic speeches establish a controlling impression or coherent thesis that conveys a clear and distinctive perspective on the subject and maintain a consistent tone and focus through the presentation support a position acknowledging opposing views move smoothly and logically from one point to another analyze oral statements made by self and others generalize from several comments and points made Hold audience’s attention. Intentionally adjust volume, tone, pitch, and pace of speech to create effect and enhance communication. Use gestures, facial expressions, visual aids, and other non- verbal cues effectively to enhance meaning of talk. colloquialism voice modulation emphasis of spoken punctuation satire and humour dramatic readings of poems, monologues, scenes from plays, and stories presenting reasoned arguments of opposing viewpoints debate Compose and Create (CC). Students will extend their abilities to speak, write, and use other forms of representation to explore and present thoughts, feelings, and experiences in a variety of forms for a variety of purposes and audiences. Grade Grade 6 Grade 7 Grade 8 Outcome: Writing for a purpose CC6.7 Write to 1. describe a place 2. narrate an incident from own experience in a multi-paragraph composition in a friendly letter/blog 3. to explain and inform in multi-step directions a short report explaining a problem and providing a solution 4. persuade to support a viewpoint or stand. CC7.8 Write to 1. describe a person 2. narrate an imaginary incident or story 3. explain and inform in a news story a factual account a business letter 4. persuade in a letter interpretation of a text. CC8.8 Write to 1. describe a landscape scene 2. narrate a personal story or anecdote a historical narrative 3. explain and inform in a presentation of findings data report a biography a documented research (inquiry)report a résumé and covering letter 4. persuade in a mini-debate a review. Variety of text forms and techniques CC6.8 Experiment with a variety of Text forms, for example: peer interview presentation at an assembly poem letter to parents short review poster tableau graphic organizer Techniques: surprise ending CC7.9 Experiment with a variety of Text forms, for example: meeting presentation to adults descriptive poem opinion piece review front page of a newspaper short script Techniques: dialogue figurative language CC8.9 Experiment with a variety of Text forms, for example : Readers’ Theatre role play humourous instructions an electronic presentation a dramatization a mini-debate Techniques: imagery music graphics and statistics in a multimedia presentation Enduring Understanding Essential Question I write for different purposes. Effective writers utilize techniques to make their meaning clear. Why do I write? What are the techniques I can use to make my ideas meaningful? Indicators Write clear multi-paragraph texts for the following purposes: What is my purpose for writing? narrative narrative narrative expository expository expository persuasive persuasive persuasive descriptive texts descriptive texts descriptive texts one of which will be 400 to 600 words. one of which will be 500-700 words. one of which will be 600 to 800 words. Organization CC.1 Organization CC6..3 7,8,9.4 Textual How do I organize my writing? Write clear, focused texts that contain an Organize ideas to fit format and purpose (e.g., Write texts that relate clear ideas or events in a introduction, supporting details (information, chronological, enumerative, problem/solution, coherent and sequential manner using specific events, evidence, etc.), and a conclusion. cause/effect, comparison/contrast). details Grade 9 CC9.8 Write to 1. describe a profile of a character (sem 1) a description of a scene (sem 2) 2. narrate a narrative essay (sem 1) third person point of view a personal essay (sem 2) second point of view 3. explain and inform a researched inquiry report (sem 1) a multi-paragraph consumer letter (sem 2) 4. persuade a review (sem 1) a letter to the editor (sem 2) CC9.9 Experiment with a variety of Text forms, for example : debates meetings presentations to unfamiliar audiences poetry précis short script advice column video documentary comic strip Techniques: tone persona point of view imagery dialogue figurative language narrative expository persuasive descriptive texts one of which will be 1000 - 1500 words Organization of text creates desired effect Anticipation Surprise suspense Writing with a purpose Create narratives about a personal incident from own experience as follows: establish a plot, setting and point of view develop narrative details use a range of narrative devices (e.g., dialogue, suspense, tension). include sensory details Create expository, informational, and procedural texts, multi-step directions, and a problem/solution presentation as follows: pose relevant questions state purpose explain the situation and develop topic with facts, details, examples, and explanations follow an organizational pattern Create descriptive texts about a place as follows: present a clear picture of the place include sensory details (five senses) description flows in a logical order use relevant placement or location prepositions Create persuasive texts on a stand or viewpoint as follows: state stand or viewpoint give reasons, facts, and expert opinion to support stand maintain a sincere tone What format best suits my purpose? Narrative Texts Create an imaginary narrative texts as follows: Create narrative texts as follows: establish a setting, plot, and point of view establish a setting, plot, and point of view develop the narrative systematically leading to develop narrative systematically leading to a a climax or conclusion. climax or conclusion. use a range of narrative devices (e.g., dialogue, use a range of narrative devices (e.g., dialogue, tension, suspense) tension, suspense, humour, voice) make the narrative engaging make the narrative engaging develop character attributes Expository, Informational, and Procedural Texts Create expository, informational, and Create expository, informational, and procedural procedural texts (factual account, news story, texts (presentation of findings, a biography, a business letter) as follows: résumé and covering letter) as follows: pose relevant questions to limit scope of text pose relevant questions to limit scope of text introduce the purpose introduce the purpose, and define a thesis develop topic with facts, details, examples, and develop topic/thesis with important facts, details, explanations from at least two authoritative examples, and explanations from multiple sources authoritative sources include several paragraphs organized in logical include several paragraphs or sections organized sequences in logical sequences use transitions use transitions state conclusion(s). organize and display information on charts, maps, and graphs state conclusion(s). Descriptive Texts Create descriptive texts (character or person) as Create descriptive texts (a landscape scene) as follows: follows: present a clear and colourful picture of a present a clear and colourful picture of the person place include sensory details and vivid words develop the mood by using precise adjectives use a logical order (e.g., head to foot). include multiple features of the landscape include sensory details and vivid words use a logical order (e.g., near to far). Persuasive Texts Create persuasive texts as follows: Create persuasive texts (e.g., mini-debate, a give opinions and make judgements review) as follows: provide support by reasons, explanations, and state a position clearly and convincingly evidence provide support by reasons, explanations, and support opinions with examples from text evidence maintain a matter-of-fact tone support opinion with examples from text explain and justify reactions and personal connections to texts viewed, heard, and read maintain a respectful tone Create personal narrative texts as follows: depict scenes and incidents in specific places describe with concrete sensory details the sights, sounds, and smells of the scene and the specific actions, movements, and feelings of the characters (use interior monologue to depict characters’ feelings) employ narrative and descriptive devices (e.g., relevant dialogue, specific action, physical description, comparison or contrast) develop narrative systematically leading to a climax or conclusion reveal the significance of and the subject’s attitude about the incident, event, or situation. Create expository, informational, and procedural texts (an inquiry presentation a consumer letter) as follows: pose relevant questions to limit scope of text introduce the purpose and define a thesis develop topic with important facts, details, examples, and explanations from multiple authoritative sources include several paragraphs or sections organized in logical sequences use transitions organize and display information on charts, maps, or graphs offer conclusion(s) anticipate and address viewer’s, listener’s and reader’s potential misunderstandings, biases, and expectations. Create descriptive texts (a profile of a character and a descriptive of scene) as follows: present a clear and colourful picture of the person interpret and describe the details of the scene include sensory details and vivid words use dialogue when appropriate develop a logical order (e.g., background, physical description). Create persuasive texts (e.g., a persuasive essay, a letter to the editor) as follows: include a well-defined thesis (i.e., one that makes a clear and knowledgeable judgement) provide support by fact, reasons, examples, explanations, and evidence to support position address viewer’s, listener’s, or reader’s concerns, biases, expectations, and counterclaims. maintain a rationale tone Evidence of Understanding Design and publish documents by using a variety of tools, including publishing software and graphics programs. How do I make my writing ‘look good’? see CC.1 – Writtem/Visual Conventions utilize current software and programs understand principle sof design (Arts. Education curriculum) These outcomes have products embedded in them. Sept. 27, 2010 Living Sky School Division No. 202