AN ERROR ANALYSIS OF ENGLISH WRITING OF ENGLISH DEPARTMENT STUDENTS’ OF TIDAR UNIVERSITY MAGELANG IN THE ACADEMIC YEAR 2014/2015 Submitted as the Final Assigment of Research Methodology DISUSUN Oleh : Bondan Eri Christianto NIM: 2013083008 PROGRAM STUDI PENDIDIKAN BAHASA INGGRIS PASCASARJANA UNIVERSITAS SARJANAWIYATA TAMANSISWA YOGYAKARTA 2014 i TABLE OF CONTENTS TITLE i TABLE OF CONTENTS ii CHAPTER I INTRODUCTION 1 A. Background of the Study 1 B. Identification of the Problem 2 C. Limitation of the Problem 3 D. Formulation of the Problem 3 E. Objective of the Study 4 F. The Significance of the Study 4 CHAPTER II LITERATURE REVIEW AND THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK 5 A. Literature Review 5 1. Errors 5 a. Definitions of Error 5 b. The Difference between Error and Mistake 5 c. Sources of Errors 6 d. The Types of Errors 7 e. The Cause of Errors 11 f. Error Analysis 12 2. Writing 13 a. Definition of Writing 13 b. The Components of Writing 14 c. The Characteristics of Good Writing 16 d. The Writing Process 16 B. Theoretical Framework 18 ii CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHODOLOGY 19 A. Type of the Research 19 B. Data and Data Sources 19 C. Sampling Technique 20 D. Data Collection Technique 20 E. Technique of Data Analysis 21 F. Procedures of Data Analysis 21 BIBLIOGRAPHY iii CHAPTER 1 INTRODUCTION A. Background of the Study Writing is one of the basic skills that must be mastered by the L2 learners, as by writing they are able to deliver their ideas more clearly. Writing skill is critically important to school success for young people, and it is deemed by society to the central importance as a basic. Writing is considered to be the most difficult to master since it needs competence in expressing ideas including the content, organization, style, grammar and mechanics. Writing is not a singular skill and it is used to convey ideas and finally, writing endures over time. Writing clear sentences requires the learners to learn the rules of English grammar and mechanics such as the correct use of verbs and pronouns, as well as commas and other marks of punctuation. There are various ways to organize the sentences in a piece of writing. The grammatical theory of learning to write hypothesizes that knowledge of structures and the rules of combining them will result in students becoming writer. Writing is a difficult skill in studying English. In the process of learning, Indonesian students surely make errors. It is understandable since the rule of Bahasa Indonesia and English is different. The students still have problems in constructing sentences. Most of them sometimes use Indonesian pattern in writing English sentences. They are still influenced by their mother tongue. They are still 1 confused to differentiate between Indonesian and English pattern. To study grammar needs a long time, because English is a foreign language. Regardless the different systems between English and Indonesian, students are expected to be able to use the rules of both languages correctly in writing. Based on this statement, the researcher will conduct a research entitled, “An Error Analysis of English Writing of English Department Students’ of Tidar University in the Academic Year 2014/205”. B. Identification of the Problem English Department students still make errors in their writing, especially the students who do not have enough knowledge of language to express what they want to write. They find it difficult to make English writing that are correct and acceptable. The main cause is that foreign language writing is linguistically different in many ways from native language writing. Besides, writing skill also cannot be acquired in a short time. It requires the students to understand the content, organisational structure, vocabulary, language use and mechanics. Because of that, they still make errors when they have to express or describe something in English. Errors play an important role in learning a foreign language. From the errors that students make, one can determine their level of mastery of language system and discover what they still have to learn. Foreign language teachers 2 should realize errors made by the students. They should analyse the errors and locate the source of these errors. Based on the background above there are many problems that arise and they can be identified as follows: 1. What are the common errors in English writing made by the English Department students? 2. What kinds of errors do the students most probably make? 3. What are the factors that influence students’ errors in English writing? 4. What are the ways to minimize students’ errors? C. Limitation of the Problem Based on the identification of the problems, it is impossible to cover all the problems in learning English as the second language. It is limited to a comparison of students’ errors in English writing. The research subject are the second, the fourth and the sixth semester students of the English Department of Teacher Training and Education Faculty, Tidar University in the Academic Year 2014/2015. D. Formulation of the Problem To make this problem which will be investigated more specific, the researcher states the problems as follows : 1. What kind of errors occur in English writing made by the students of English Department of Tidar University. 3 2. What are the possible causes of these errors. E. Objective of the Study The objectives of the research can be stated as follows : 1. To describe the common errors in English writing made by the students of English Department of Tidar University. 2. To describe the possible causes of the common errors in English writing made by the students of English Department of Tidar University. F. The Significance of the Study There are some expected advantages of the study for the lecturer and the students : 1. It will hopefully make the lecturer knows the common errors made by the students in English writing and discuss the problems with the lecturers to provide better teaching and learning processes to avoid the repetition of the errors. 2. It will hopefully make the students understand the common errors in Englishwriting. So they will have some solutions to overcome the difficulties. 4 CHAPTER II LITERATURE REVIEW AND THEORETICAL FRAMEWORK A. Literature Review 1. Errors a. Definitions of Error Errors are something done wrong or conditions of being wrong in belief or conduct. (Hornby, 1986 : 290). A learner makes errors because he/she has not internalized well the formation rules of the language being learned. In other word, a learner makes error because of his/her imperfect knowledge of the formation rules of the language being learned and therefore the utterances or sentences produced are unacceptable. The study of error dealing with the language teaching either L1 teaching or L2 teaching are very important. The errors made by the students can be explained through the error analysis in detail. A study of error can explain the background, the origins and the kinds of error. They are used as a feedback for improving the language teaching. The main goal of error study is to make the language teaching more effective and efficient. b. The Difference between Error and Mistake According to Wikipedia (en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Error) : “in linguistics, it is considered important to distinguish errors from mistakes. Distinction is always made between errors and mistakes where the former is seen 5 as resulting from learner's lack of proper grammatical knowledge and the latter as being failed to utilize a known system correctly.” Error is different from mistake in that it reflects “learner’s competence”, while mistakes occur because of some other causes such as “false start, fatigue, short memory or other physical and emotional conditions”. Errors can be used as a measurement to reveal the degree of mastery of L2. Therefore, to reveal learner’s language mastery linguists devise error analysis study (EA) which tries to reveal what systems a learner has mastered and which are still in the process of learning. c. Sources of Errors The procedure of error analysis are used to identify error in L2 learners production data, the final step is to determine the source of the errors. There are some sources : 1. Interlingual Error It has been explained before that in learning a second or foreign language, interference of L1 can create the errors in learning L2. Possible interference can be predicted partly from the knowledge of difference between L1 and L2 as revealed by contrastive analysis. Dulay (1982 : 108) defines the interlingual errors as simply refer to the L2 errors that reflect native language. Richards (1974 : 173) says that 6 interlanguage error is caused by learners’ inability to separate the two languages. 2. Intralingual Error Intralingual errors have nothing to do with the learners’ natural languages background, but they are caused by problems inherent within the target language. This type of error will be made by students with varying natural language backgrounds. Soejono (1995 : 16) states that one of the major contributions of error analysis is its recognition sources of errors that extend beyond just the interlingual errors in learning a target language. So, the incorrect generalization of rules within the target language is a major factor in second language learning. These errors show the inability at a certain level in understanding English. Richards (1974 : 173) states that intralingual error is found in English itself. The errors are caused by the failure to learn the condition under which the rules are applied. d. The Types of Errors Dulay, Burt, and Krasher (1982:138) state that there are four taxonomies that important to consider, those are : the linguistic category taxonomy, the surface strategy taxonomy, the comparative taxonomy, and the communicative effect taxonomy. 7 1. Linguistic Category Taxonomy According to linguistic category, errors are classified based on the language component or particular linguist constituent who is affected by the errors. Language components include phonology, syntax, semantic, and discourse. Constituents include the elements that comprise each language component. (Burt and Kiparsky, 1972). 2. Surface Strategy Taxonomy The Surface Strategy Taxonomy shows the ways surface structure is changed. There are four kinds of errors in this taxonomy, namely : a. Omission The first type, omission, is characterized by the absence of one or more items that must appear in a well-formed phrase or sentence. Example : I saw sun this morning. It should be : I saw the sun this morning. b. Addition It is characterized by the presence of one or more items which must not appear in a well-formed phrase or sentence, such an error usually occurs in the later stages of second language acquisition when the learner has already finished in acquiring some rules of the target language. 8 Example : A one hour. It should be : One hour. c. Misformation It is characterized by the use of wrong form of elements in a phrase or sentence. In omission errors, the items are not supplied at all, while in misformation errors, the items supplied are incorrect. Example : They can do the assignment correct. It should be : They can do the assignment correctly. d. Misordering This last type is characterized by the incorrect placement of one or more items in a phrase or sentence. Such error may occur for both source language and target language. Example : I don’t know where are the books. It should be : I don’t know where the books are. 3. Comparative Taxonomy The classificationof errors in this taxonomy is based on comparisons between the structure of of the target errors and certain other types of constructions. There are two categories: a. Development Errors Development errors (Richard, 1985 and Ellis, 1987 called first development goofs) illustrate the learners attempting to build up 9 hypothesis about the English language from his/her limited experience in the classroom or text book. Example : We not doing the task now. It should be : We are not doing the task now. b. Interlingual Errors Interlingual errors (Richard, 1985 and Ellis, 1987 called interlingual like goofs) are errors caused by the interference of the learners’ mother tongue toward second language that are learned by the learners. Example : I go to the market every day Monday. It should be : I go to the market every Monday. 4. Communicative Effect Taxonomy Based on communicative effect taxonomy, errors are classified into : a. Global Errors Global errors are errors that affect overall sentence organization and cause misunderstanding. The most systematic global errors includes: (1) Wrong of major constituents Example: English language use many people It should be : Many people use English language 10 (2) Missing or wrong sentence connector Example : We are not eat, we hungry. It should be : If we do not eat, we will be hungry. b. Local Errors Local errors are errors that affect single elements in a sentence usually does not hinder communication significantly. Example : Why like we each other? It should be : Why do we like each other? e. The Cause of Errors According to Norrish (1983), there are some possible causes of errors. He proposes the following items as the causes of errors: 1. Carelessness Carelessness is closely related to the lack of motivation. 2. First language Interferences If language is a set of habits, then when people try to learn new habits, the old one will interference with the new ones. This is called “mother tongue interference”. Brown (1987) states that principal barrier to L2 acquisition is the interference of the L1 system with the L2 system. 3. Translation Word-by-word translation of idiomatic expression in the learners’ first language can produce some errors. 11 f. Error Analysis The errors made by the students in learning second language are considered as their important part of learning process because their errors can be studied to know their weaknesses in learning the language. Besides that, students can make effort to improve their language learning by dimishing those errors. (Dulay, 1992 : 138). The lecturers of second language should realize that students’ errors need to be analyzed carefully for their possibility in getting some keys to the understanding of the process of second language acquisition. By analyzing the errors made by the students systematically, the insight of how the language is learnt maybe gained. Tarigan (1988 : 67) says that : “kesalahan berbahasa mempengaruhi pencapaian tujuan pengajaran bahasa. Bahkan ada pernyataan ekstrem mengenai kesalahan berbahasa itu yang berbunyi, “Kesalahan berbahasa yang dibuat oleh siswa menunjukkan bahwa pengajaran tidak berhasil. Oleh karena itu kesalahan berbahasa yang sering dilakukan siswa harus dikurangi”. Hal itu baru dapat dicapai setelah kesalahan berbahasa dapat dikaji secara mendalam, pengkajian itu disebut dengan istilah analisis kesalahan”. Furthermore, Ellis in Tarigan (1988 : 68) says that error analysis is work procedure which consists of collecting samples, identifying the errors in samples, describing the errors, classifying the errors based on the errors sources and evaluating the errors level that can provide significant insight into how the language is actually learned. 12 It is interesting to analyze the errors in learning first (Indonesian) or second language (English) because the students’ first language can influence in learning the target language. Dulay (1982 : 138) says that error analysis has yielded insight into the target language acquisition process. Hence, the errors made by the students are the important data in in showing their competence in practising the target language. Tarigan (1988 : 301) states that the interference of the first language or mother tongue becomes the most important error causation in practising L2. Contrastive analysis between L1 and L2 is needed for the basic preparation teaching material and test. It can be assumed that : 1. The major cause of errors in second language (English) learning is interference coming from the Indonesian as the first language. 2. Learning difficulties are the differences between L1 and L2 patterns. 3. Greater differences cause more serious problems. The first step in the process of analysis is the identification and description of errors. 2. Writing a. Definition of Writing Writing is an important skill in language learning. For a learner, writing is also an opportunity to convey something, to communicate ideas 13 to people beyond their immediate vicinity, to learn something that they do not know yet, and to reach other purposes. According to Hornby (1955: 83), there area several definitions of writing, they are: 1. a. The activity or occupation of writing, e.g. stories or article b. Books, stories, articles c. The literary style of such material 2. written works, e.g. books or essays 3. the general activity or skill of writing 4. written or printed words 5. the way in which person make letters when writing Brown (2000) says that writing is the ability of decoding ideas of feeling in written codes. There should be purposed to communicate with the readers, to express ideas without pressure and to explore experience. According to those explanation, it can be concluded that writing is the ability of expressing ideas, and thought and feeling to the the other people in written symbols to make them understand what are conveyed. b. The Components of Writing Jacobs (1981:58) states that there are five (5) significant components of writing. They are : 14 1. Content There are at least two things which can be measured in connection with content; the points that are presented and formal signals given the reader to guide in understanding the topic fully. 2. Organization The process of organizing the materials in writing involves coherence, order of importance, general to specific, specific to general, chronological order and special order patterns. 3. Vocabulary Vocabulary is one of the language aspects dealing with the process of writing. The process of writing is the process when the writer always thinks about putting words into sentence and then sentences into paragraph and with these we construct whole essay and story. We use special words, phrases, sentences, and paragraphs that relate to each other. The result is a strecth of language that we have composed writing. It is clear now that we cannot write or express our ideas if we lack of vocabulary. 4. Language Use For language use in writing, it involves correct usage and points of grammar. Grammar is one of important components in writing. It governs the utterances that we produce to be right and orderly. Therefore it has great influence in the quality of writing. 15 5. Mechanics Mechanics of writing deals with capitalization, spelling and punctuation. c. The Characteristics of Good Writing Adhelestein and Pival (1980:42) stated that there are some characteristics of good writing as follows: 1. It reflects the writers’ ability to use appropriate voice. Eventhough all good writings convey the sounds of talking else, the voice must also suit purpose and audience of the occasion. 2. It reflects the writers’ ability to organize the material into coherent whole so that it moves logically. 3. It reflects the writers’ ability to write the interest reader in the subject and to demonstrate a thought and sounds understanding of it. 4. It reflects the writers’ ability to spell and puncture accurately and to check word meaning and grammatical relationship within the sentences. d. The Writing Process The most effective way to learn to write is to go at it as a process. 1. Pre-Writing It comes to stand for all preparations the writer makes before the beginning to write or draft. This stage includes perceiving a subject, determining a point of view toward that subject, defining the purpose and the audience, gathering information, and choosing the best form. 16 2. Drafting It helps the writer to put the words, sentences, and paragraphs on a paper. It is intended to help the writer make a preliminary survey of the area the subject of our our minds. 3. Sharing This is the most important thing to do. The writer needs somebody else to read and give feedback to his work. 4. Revising Revising is the same thing as drafting. The writer looks at what is already on the page and decides whether he needs to change into contents and ordering. 5. Editing Editing is dealing with the surface errors like grammar, spelling, punctuation. The writer must eliminate the surface errors and make sure he uses appropriate verbs and correct sentences. 6. Re-writing Re-writing is the writing project that includes the revising and editing the results. 7. Evaluation Evaluation is checking to make sure about the writing that the writer has reached the best writing. 17 B. Theoretical Framework In learning English, Indonesian learners have already acquired the Indonesian language. Moreover, the language has been used for the media of insruction in all levels of schools in Indonesia. So, Indonesian learners have been accustomed to speak Indonesian in their daily life. As already explained in the literature review, many errors show the influence of mother tongue and other language possessed by the learners. The researcher then concludes that the Indonesian learner’s English is also influenced by the language that they have already acquired. Because of the differences between certain system of the Indonesian language and certain system of the English language, Indonesian learners will have difficulties in learning English. Probably they tend to use certain structure of the English. In other words, they tend to make negative transfer. Writing is actually complex activities in the use of language since it is concerned with the study of lexico-grammatical structure, communication and cultural context of the source language and the target language. Because of that reason, the researcher research concerns with the errors made by the students in writing English. 18 CHAPTER III RESEARCH METHODOLOGY A. Type of the Research On this quantitative research, the researcher wants to know the errors made by the students in writing English texts. The basic concern of this research is to identify the errors, investigate and find out the possible problems that they have faced and give some suggestions for the lecturer and the students. B. Data and Data Sources Research instrument is a mean by which something is performed or affected, and is a device for precise measurement. The instrument used to collect data in this research is a test about grammatical in translation. According to Suharsimi (1998 : 128), a test is any of series of questions or exercises to measure skill, knowledge, intelligence, capacity or attitude of an individual or a group. A test can be in the form of true-false, multiple choice, matching, completion or essay. To collect the data, the researcher used a writing activities as the technique of data collection. The students have to write an English texts. The texts consists of 75-100 sentences. . The researcher uses the instrument for collecting data because in that way the reseacher can analyze the errors in English writing easily. 19 C. Sampling Technique Research subject which becomes the whole population of the research is usually called population. Suharsimi (1998 : 102) says that population is the research subject. In addition, Sutrisno Hadi (1980 : 70) states that population is the reality of sample which is going to be generalized. The population of this research is the second, the fourth and the sixth semester students of English Department of Tidar University in the Academic Year 2014/2015. The researcher takes the students from those classes to make comparison on the students ability in writing English and the errors which they make in their writing. D. Data Collection Technique The data of this research are the errors analyses in English writing perceived by the students of of English Department of Tidar University. The data are collected by careful observation on the students’ works. In collecting the data, the researcher uses a research instrument, that is the writing activities. The instruction for the students should be made as clearly as possible in order that the students fully understand the instruction. There are four steps that are carried out by the researcher : 1. Preparing the research instrument. 2. The explanation for doing the activities. 3. Giving the activities in 90 minutes. 20 4. Collecting the students’ works. E. Technique of Data Analysis The technique used in this research is descriptive analysis. Descriptive analysis functions as a technique used to describe something in details. It means that the data were analyzed and described in details to know the errors made by the students in their writing English. In this research, the researcher tries to list, identify, and describe them. It is descriptive since the errors will be identified and described in the form of category, in this case the type of errors, and the causes of errors. F. Procedures of Data Analysis The main steps in analyzing the data are as follows: 1. Identifying of the errors The researcher identified errors that are made by the students. In this case is reading every the student‟s sentences carefully and marked each error. 2. 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