Writing Terminology Thesis sentence with subject and opinion; in introductory paragraph Prewriting getting ideas and concrete details down on paper before you begin organizing; options include bubble clusters, spider diagrams, line clustering, etc. Note break to explore options. Concrete detail (CD) (evidence/support) specific details -- usually what we see and hear; in literature essays, concrete detail means examples or quotations from the story Commentary (opinion) your opinion about something; not a concrete detail Topic sentence first sentence in a body paragraph; must include commentary to guide the whole paragraph Outline (shaping your essay) final stage of prewriting; will include the following: 1) thesis; 2) topic sentence for each body paragraph; 3) first sentence of conclusion Conclusion final paragraph; it should do one or more of the following: 1) sum up your ideas; 2) reflect on what you said in your essay; 3) provide more commentary about your subject; 4) give a personal statement about the subject; 5) make predictions Peer response written responses and reactions to a partner’s paper