Literacy Unit Plan St. Peter’s CE JIN School Name: Mr Hilton Year Group: 6 Term: Autumn (1st half term) Resources: Prior learning: http://johnlennon.com/html/news.aspx http://www.beatles.com/core/home/ Unit: Non-fiction unit 1 Biography and autobiography (2wks) Week beginning: 19/10/09 02/10/09 http://www.johnlennon.com/html/videos.aspx Hard Days Night and Imagine songs John Lennon – Short biography John Lennon ‘Imagine’ song lyrics John Lennon powerpoint presentation John Lennon timeline John Lennon notebook Check that children can already: Identify and discuss the language and organisational features of information texts. Identify and discuss elements of persuasion when they encounter them in texts. Identify and discuss the comparative advantages of using words, images and sounds when communicating through multimodal text. Understand how texts are and can be adapted to suit different purposes and audiences. Groups: Red – Leola, Amber, Chloe H, Jonathan, Alex. Green – Helena, Ellie, Jade, Amy G. Blue – Josh, Harry, Amie H, Chloe C, Nathan. Yellow – John, Jacob, Sam, Billi-Jo. SEN: Statements – None SA+ - John Fort, Amber Midwood SA – Helena Butterworth, Chloe C, Amie Humphreys, Billi-Jo Rogers, Sam Watson. Day Objectives Whole class work Guided group tasks Differentiated independent tasks Plenary focus 1 Open Biography notebook using the IWB. Show slide 1, and ask the children to continue each of the 4 sentences on their whiteboards using the VCOP principles. Show slide 2, and challenge each table to up level the sentence. Ask the class what a biography is? Agree it is when somebody writes about someone else’s life. It’s a type of recount. Show Slide 3-5, ask the class to list the features of a recount text on the IWB such as wrote in the 3rd person, events joined with time connectives etc. In partners discuss what the key information is from the John Lennon biography. Show slide 12 on the IWB. The children will watch the video to Imagine and then comment on again, what it tells us about the man. http://www.johnlennon.com/html/v ideos.aspx 2 Listening and responding Make notes when listening for a sustained period and discuss how note-taking varies depending on context and purpose. 7 Understanding and interpreting texts Understand underlying themes, causes and points of view. They will then move on to look at John Lennon and whether anyone can recognise him from a picture. The children will also be asked what they know about him already if anything. How Children to order events from John Lennon’s life on a time line. Yellow – Supported by GH Blue – Supported by DD (VA) did they find out about this information? Visit the official John Lennon website; http://www.johnlennon.com/html/news.a spx They will then be shown a summary of his life and be asked what they can deduce if anything by what is written. The children will also jot down key pieces of information. 2 8 Engaging with and responding to texts Compare how writers from different times and places present experiences and use language. 9 Creating and shaping texts Set their own challenges to extend achievement and experience in writing. 3 10 Text structure and organisation Use varied structures to shape and organise text coherently. Open Biography notebook using the IWB. Show slide 14, The children will comment on what has been learnt so far regarding biographies and John Lennon generally. List the sections of the biography; Introduction (who, what, when and where) Events (chronological order using time connectives) Past tense, written in 3rd person, conclusion (sums up main feelings and points). The children will look at song lyrics from Imagine and how they would add their own verse, as a class, making sure the flow is not lost. Show slide 19 on the IWB showing planning a John Lennon biography. Split into 5 sections. The children will look at a series of simple sentences on the board and they will attempt to make them complex using connectives and other vocabulary. The children will complete the write up of John Lennon’s biography. Children to share their recounts. (A) Using the notes from Monday and more importantly their own views, the children will begin drafting a recount of his life. On the IWB show ‘The Life of John Lennon’ powerpoint. They will then comment on the text they have looked at and how good a biography it actually is. They will then listen to 2 contrasting songs – written by John Lennon and they will be asked what the songs say about his character – if anything. Hard Days Night and Imagine. The children will again recap the focus of the week and listen to other examples of John Lennon songs e.g. Mother, Love and Give Peace A Chance and again make their own judgements on the songs as well as what this tells us on the character. They will then look at the features required for a piece of biographical text that they will suggest. A selection of the children, all if time allows, to share their accounts to the rest of the class with the focus on the delivery of their account. The children will comment on each other’s account and the delivery of it. (A) 4 10 Text structure and organisation Use varied structures to shape and organise text coherently. Begin by once again showing the ‘Life of John Lennon’ powerpoint. The children will create a John Lennon bank of information and what generally has been learnt this week. They will then look back at the opening passage of the John Lennon’s biography and highlight what elements of it make it ‘biographical’ How can we remember that when we are asked to create another one? Hangman – The children will play hangman using key words associated with John Lennon as well as songs. 5 6 1 Speaking Use the techniques of dialogic talk to explore ideas, topics or issues. 9 Creating and shaping texts Use different narrative techniques to engage and entertain the reader. 10 Text structure and organisation Use varied structures to shape and organise text coherently. The children will attempt to turn the opening piece of biographical text into an autobiographical piece. Remembering it needs to be written in the first person. DD – To support less able group and create a group autobiography A sample of children to share their autobiography’s and comment on them e.g. difficulty etc. The children will again listen to examples of JL songs. Conrad Burdekin lesson Open the Biography and autobiography notebook using the IWB on slide 22. Show slide 23 and challenge the class to uplevel the sentences from a made up autobiography using the principles of VCOP. Use individual whiteboards to complete the sentences. As a class, discuss the children’s knowledge and understanding of biographies and autobiographies and the similarities and differences between them. On slide 25 Create a Venn diagram on the IWB labeled Biography and Autobiography and ask the children to place the features correctly. . Explain that in this lesson, they are going to use the information they have collected over the past two weeks to write an autobiographical text, as if they were John Lennon. Together, develop a list of two or three success criteria that will be used to evaluate the children’s writing. (VA) Hot seating activity Children chosen to sit in the hot seat as John Lennon. Rest of the class ask questions about his life during his childhood and teenage years from the work done in previous lessons. E.g. living with auntie, learning to play the banjo etc. Swap the child in the hot seat. (VAK) All children to write the first paragraph (birth, childhood, growing up) of their John Lennon autobiography. Children to refer back to their planning from when they wrote the John Lennon biography. Emphasise that they must take on the role of John Lennon and elaborate on his feelings CG to support yellow group. (K) Select children to read their opening paragraph of the autobiography. Rest of class to offer feedback based on the agreed success criteria and principles if VCOP. (VA) 7 1 Speaking Use the techniques of dialogic talk to explore ideas, topics or issues. 7 Understanding and interpreting texts Appraise a text quickly, deciding on its value, quality or usefulness. 9 Creating and shaping texts Select words and language drawing on their knowledge of literary features and formal and informal writing. 8 1 Speaking Use the techniques of dialogic talk to explore ideas, topics or issues. 10 Text structure and organisation Use paragraphs to achieve pace and emphasis. Model writing an autobiography of Mr Hilton. Firstly complete timeline of events on slide 27. Begin with birth (1982) sister born (1985) moved house (1986) started first school (1987) started high school (1995) champions league final (1999) lived in New Zealand (2000) began working at St Peters (2008). Ask the class for additional dates which i have not filled in such as lost first tooth, first Man United game, first holiday abroad etc. Slide 29 write the first and second paragraphs of a Mr Hilton autobiography. Refer to the time line and in first paragraph write an introduction. Second paragraph should cover birth, childhood and growing up. Remember principles of VCOP and refer to autobiographies success criteria. (VA) Model writing an autobiography of Mr Hilton. Firstly refer back to the timeline of events on slide 27. Read slide 29 the first and second paragraphs of a Mr Hilton autobiography. Check that it covers the principles of VCOP and the agreed success criteria for writing an autobiography. Refer to the time line and write the third paragraph. Third paragraph should include teenage years, university, travelling. Remember principles of VCOP and refer to autobiographies success criteria. (VA) Hot seating activity Children chosen to sit in the hot seat as John Lennon. Rest of the class ask questions about his life during the Beatles years from the work done in previous lessons. E.g. meeting Paul McCartney, Beatlemania, Yoko Ono. Swap the child in the hot seat. All children to write the second paragraph (Beatles) of their John Lennon autobiography. Children to refer back to their planning from when they wrote the John Lennon biography. Emphasise that they must take on the role of John Lennon and elaborate on his feelings Select children to read their second paragraph of the autobiography. Rest of class to offer feedback based on the agreed success criteria and principles if VCOP. (VA) GH to support yellow group. DD to support blue group. (K) (VAK) Hot seating activity Children chosen to sit in the hot seat as John Lennon. Rest of the class ask questions about his life during the solo career years from the work done in previous lessons. E.g. Leaving the Beatles, Imagine, peace activist. Swap the child in the hot seat. (VAK) All children to write the third paragraph (Solo career, death) of their John Lennon autobiography. Children to refer back to their planning from when they wrote the John Lennon biography. Emphasise that they must take on the role of John Lennon and elaborate on his feelings GH to support yellow group. DD to support blue group. (K) Select children to read their third paragraph of the autobiography. Rest of class to offer feedback based on the agreed success criteria and principles if VCOP. (VA) 9 1 Speaking Use the techniques of dialogic talk to explore ideas, topics or issues. 9 Creating and shaping texts Integrate words, images and sounds imaginatively for different purposes. 12 Presentation Select from a wide range of ICT programs to present text effectively and communicate information and ideas. 10 6 Word structure and spelling Use a range of appropriate strategies to edit, proofread and correct spelling in their own work, on paper and on screen. Model writing an autobiography of Mr Hilton. Firstly refer back to the timeline of events on slide 27. Read slide 29 the first, second and third paragraphs of a Mr Hilton autobiography. Check that it covers the principles of VCOP and the agreed success criteria for writing an autobiography. Refer to the time line and write the final paragraph. The final paragraph should include St Peters, buying first house. Remember principles of VCOP and refer to autobiographies success criteria. (VA) Hot seating activity Children chosen to sit in the hot seat as John Lennon. Rest of the class ask questions about any part of his life from the work done in previous lessons. All children to write the final paragraph (Solo career) of their John Lennon autobiography. Children to refer back to their planning from when they wrote the John Lennon biography. Emphasise that they must take on the role of John Lennon and elaborate on his feelings . Swap the child in the hot seat. Emphasise it must not include his death! (VAK) GH to support yellow group. DD to support blue group. Children to word process complete autobiographies on PCs including images. (K) Big writing Select children to read their completed autobiography. Rest of class to offer feedback based on the agreed success criteria and principles if VCOP. (VA)