Paragraph Coherence: Gluing Sentences Together Sentence glue is necessary to provide coherence to your paragraph. These transitions help the reader understand how each sentence supports your topic. Between each sentence, there must be word glue and logic glue. Word Glue These are actual words a writer uses to join two sentences together. Key Words: repeated words or synonyms that refer to the previous idea. Pronouns: [it, here, they those] use to refer to nouns in previous sentences Traditional transitional words: For example Furthermore In addition First, second, third Logic Glue These might not be words that you actually use, but they represent the relationship between two sentences. Quite often, this relationship is implied rather than stated. For example: AND Continues the same idea with new facts Aluminum is a cheap metal to make. It’s cost-effective for consumers. BUT A change in the idea of the previous sentence It’s cost-effective for consumers. Aluminum is not the strongest metal, however. OR An alternative for the earlier sentence Aluminum foil can be used to wrap leftover food. My nephew uses it to make a space helmet. THAT IS A definition or restatement of the earlier sentence The laborious extraction of copper is a costly process. Paying the workers and running the machinery is very expensive. FOR EXAMPLE An example of the earlier sentence Aluminum foil is both cheap and useful. I got some at the store, and it only cost $1.29. THEREFORE A conclusion or effect based on the earlier sentence My nephew uses foil to make a space helmet and protect himself from alien laser beams. We plan to take him to see the doctor very soon. FOR A reason or cause for the earlier sentence I am so annoyed about these crummy grocery store sacks. My sack broke on the way to the car. More Examples of Transitional Language LOGICAL RELATIONSHIP TRANSITIONAL EXPRESSION Similarity also, in the same way, just as ... so too, likewise, similarly Exception/Contrast but, however, in spite of, on the one hand ... on the other hand, nevertheless, nonetheless, notwithstanding, in contrast, on the contrary, still, yet Sequence/Order first, second, third, ... next, then, finally Time after, afterward, at last, before, currently, during, earlier, immediately, later, meanwhile, now, recently, simultaneously, subsequently, then Example for example, for instance, namely, specifically, to illustrate Emphasis even, indeed, in fact, of course, truly Place/Position above, adjacent, below, beyond, here, in front, in back, nearby, there Cause and Effect accordingly, consequently, hence, so, therefore, thus Additional Support or Evidence additionally, again, also, and, as well, besides, equally important, further, furthermore, in addition, moreover, then Conclusion/Summary finally, in a word, in brief, in conclusion, in the end, in the final analysis, on the whole, thus, to conclude, to summarize, in sum, in summary http://www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/transitions.html Helpful Tip: When paraphrasing a direct quote (something someone actually said), it’s wise to give them credit in your paper. Remember the Jacques Cousteau quote we practiced in class. “According to _________...” “____________ states that…” “_________ believes that….” “______ explains…” “As __________ said…” “______ has documented…” “Based on what _____ said…” “_______ shares the idea of…” “_______ found that…” “________ expresses…” “_______ remarks that…”