Issues relating to a derivational theory of binding Jan-Wouter Zwart Here are some comments and questions that I had about your work. I could be mixedup in my interpretation in some places, sorry if that’s the case. I wrote comments in the margins, and an R.A. typed up the comments as sentences. If the tone of any of the comments comes off as strange, that’s probably the reason why. The comments are listed in order of appearance by page, paragraph, and line of the version that I received. The more important comments are denoted with NB. All comments are intended SOLELY to be helpful— Hope they are! Thanks again for being part of this project. NB1 p. 10, Sec. 3.3 “An anaphor must be bound…” Wout: Are there derivations where X acts like a pronoun through part of the derivation, then gets Merged with its antecedent and then in the middle of the derivation—‘changes to’ a pronoun? NB2 p. 10, Sec. 3.3, ln 2 “anaphoricity is an acquired property” Should this instead be “anaphoricity is a non-lexical, syntactically induced, or transformationally-induced property”? Or a “derivationally-induced property”? NB3 p. 10, Sec. 3.4, para 2, ln 1 “the structure (21)” As opposed to the MERGER OPERATION that creates the output structure? I.e. Merge is an OPERATION that relates two categories? NB4 p. 13, last line of Sec. 3.6 “On our theory, the locality of anaphor binding is likewise a result of Greed.” So CONDITION A is deduced, i.e. it follows from (21), GREED, and the DERIVATIONAL Approach, yes? As opposed to non-explanatorily defining GOVERNING CATEGORY on tree representations? NB5 p. 13, Footnote 27 Please put the material in this footnote in the text! NB6 p. 13, Footnote 27 This is also CYCLIC—i.e. strongly derivational with RIGID RULE Application Order. NOT Move-alpha and FILTERS. NB7 p. 13, Footnote 27 This is strongly derivational! I.e. one no longer has the Y-model with just a single LF and PF representation; rather there are multiple Spellouts to PF and LF THROUGHOUT the DERIVATION (AS IN DASR). NB8 p. 20, Footnote 38, ln 4 “but John himself would.” WOUT—Sorry. I don’t understand when [John him] does or doesn’t get a theta-role in its original position? 1 NB9 p. 24, para 2, ln 2 “[+coreferential] PRONOUN” So is it the case that Spellout needs to know if something is +coreferential? IF SO, LF notions like coreferentiality must be indicated BEFORE Spellout. This is NOT possible if the LF representation is reached only after all transformations are applied and the DERIVATION is complete. Does this imply the abandonment of the Ymodel, and the use of DASR architecture? NB10 p. 24, para 3, ln 4 “in case of nonreciprocity as zichzelf” Again—must the LF interpretation be known to the Speller-outer? I.e. do semantic property determine the PHONETIC form? NB11 p. 25, para 2, ln 1-2 “In our theory, de ander would be the form returned by Morphology when encountering a RECIPROCAL that was never merged with an antecedent” WOUT: Again, what architecture captures this syntax (21), semantics (reciprocal versus non-reciprocal interpretation), and phonology (Spell out as X not Y)? Would the Standard Y-model work here? NB12 p. 25, para 2, ln 2 “RECIPROCAL” Is this a semantic notion? NB13 p. 25, para 1, ln 2 “never merged with” Is this a Derivational-History, i.e. Transformational-Rule notion? NB14 p. 26, para 2, ln 3 “morphology-after-syntax” Please clarify the architecture here. NB15 p. 28, Sec. 5, para 1, ln 4-5 “coreference is established once and for all at the moment of merger of the antecedent and the dependent element.” Please see DASR p. 14, ex. D and p. 63, Sec 2.4. NB16 p. 28, Sec. 5, para 1, ln 4-5 “coreference is established once and for all at the moment of merger of the antecedent and the dependent element.” Does this require that LF looks in throughout the DERIVATION—as opposed to LFinterpretation happening only after all Transformations apply, as in the Y-model? I.e. are you arguing against the Y-model? Do you have evidence for incremental interpretation? NB17 p. 28, Sec. 5, para 2, ln 5 “[+coreferential], which leads to spell-out as an anaphor at PF” See DASR Chapter 2? What is the architecture assumed here, what is the relation between PF and LF? [+coreferential] is an LF notion/feature which feeds spell-out. So, this is NOT the Y-model, right? 2 NB18 p. 30, para 3, ln 6 “that the ‘positive’ binding condition Principle A applies at LF” Please see DASR p. 62, ex. 49; i.e. it does not say ‘Principle A’ at LF, it says “at any point”. NB19 p. 31, para 2, ln 5-6 “until the interface levels PF/LF” What does it mean to say COREFERENCE, i.e. a semantic relation, is established BEFORE LF (i.e. semantic interpretation) is performed? Please see DASR p. 14 ex D—is it relevant to this? NB20 p. 31, para 2, ln 7 “various factors” Are these Transformational Operations that relate two elements by Merging them? NB21 p. 31, para 3, ln 3 “anaphoric relation established at LF” I thought the anaphoric relation was ESTABLISHED by MERGE, i.e. NOT AT LF? NB22 p.31, para 3, ln 3-6 “an anaphoric relation established at LF would have the effect that an element not spelled out as an anaphor at PF (i.e., an element spelled out as an ordinary pronoun) be interpreted as an anaphor at LF. Indeed, evidence showing that anaphoricity can be established at LF appears to be hard to come by.” What is the architecture assumed here? The Y-model? DASR? Something else? 1) Question p. 21 re Experiencers—see Torrego paper to appear in this volume? 2) How many pages is this single-spaced ms? Do the book-length restrictions require shortening it? Could the Notes in Section 4 (Consequences) be shortened perhaps? 3) p. 1, Title “Issues relation to a derivational theory of binding” Would it be OK if this were changed to “A derivational theory of anaphora”? 4) p. 1, para 1, ln 1 “see Epstein 1995” Please also cite here Epstein 1999, UN-Principled Syntax and the Derivation of Syntactic Relations, in Working Minimalism, Epstein and Hornstein eds., MIT Press. 5) p. 1, para 1, ln 4-10 “In many cases, it appears to be impossible…” Yes: Sisterhood is simpler than C-command. 6) p. 1, para 4 “In (3), the interpretive relation between who and <who> (namely that one is a ‘trace’ of the other) is not a function of the merger of who to <who>, but of merger of who to a constituent containing <who>.” Groat and Epstein et al said this is sisterhood. In (3), where sisterhood is symmetric ccommand, C c-commands who before who moves. Then who moves and who c- 3 commands C. Thus C and who (derivationally) c-command each other. But this is sisterhood, i.e. X c-commands Y and Y c-commands X. This “DERIVATIONAL sisterhood”, since X c-commands Y and Y c-commands X, “happens” at two different points in the DERIVATION. We seek to derive the Proper Binding Condition and the Spec-Head relation from DERIVATIONAL SISTERHOOD. 7) p. 2. para 1, ln 3 “if we consider who to be a single element which is merged more than once” DASR postulates “REMERGE”. 8) p. 2, para 1, ln 11 “chain” And as Epstein and Seely note: chains are NOT “syntactic objects” as restrictively defined so as to satisfy Inclusiveness. 9) p. 2, (6a) “He loves John” Is it OK to call ‘John’ the “dependent element” in the binding relation? 10) p. 2, para 4, ln 3 “ensues if and only if” Would you perhaps want to replace ‘ensues’ with ‘is possible’? I.e. the b) examples do NOT require coreference, but instead allow it. 11) p. 2, para 5, ln 3 “out of reach before” Maybe you should replace with “to elude satisfying explanation thus far”? 12) p. 2, Footnote 3, ln 3 “ca” Please replace with ‘can’. 13) p. 2, Footnote 3 WOUT: We’ve been working on deducing the PBC. Shall I send you the ms? It’s easy to read and will be part of Epstein and Seely. 14) p. 3, (7) “Fundamental questions of binding theory” Should you perhaps change this to Some fundamental questions of binding theory? 15) p. 3, (7b) “Why is there a morphological distinction…” Should you perhaps change this to “Why is there an overt morphological distinction...” 16) p. 3, para 4, ln 6 “and no information can be gathered from these entities.” Maybe replace with “and no derivational information can be representationally encoded into these Inclusiveness-violating entities”? 17) p. 3, para 5, ln 8 “discuss” Please replace with ‘discusses’. 18) p. 3, sec. 2, ln 1 “it is taken for granted that there are” 4 Maybe you should replace this with “it is taken for granted that in the lexicon there are”? 19) p. 3, sec. 2, ln 2 “three types of noun phrases” Perhaps replace this with “three types of noun phrases (i.e. feature-bundle types)”? 20) p. 4, para 1, ln 4 “was directed towards” Change to ‘addressed’? 21) p. 4, para 1, ln 6 “and onwards” Please add the citations here. 22) p. 4, (13) “What makes an element an…” Should you perhaps replace this with “What is an…”? 23) p. 4, para 2, ln 1 “relatively easy to answer” Is this true, given the (somewhat) unspecified answer? 24) p. 4, para 2, ln 2-4 “represent some concept, some projection… lexico-semantic features of some kind” Are these clear notions? 25) p. 4, Footnote 5, ln 2 “their own systematicity” Maybe replace with “a unique distribution and interpretation”? 26) p. 4, Footnote 5, ln 3 “anaphora” Please put scare quotes around anaphora (‘anaphora’) to introduce it as a new term. 27) p. 4, Footnote 6, ln 3 “on reflexives” Please replace ‘on’ with ‘of’. 28) p. 4, Footnote 7, ln 1 & para 1, ln 7 “c-commands it and corefers with it” & “apply at LF” This is not a standard interpretation of a binder. Is coreference represented inside the syntactic derivation? With LF ‘looking in’? Or does coreference occur only at the LF representation or later? 29) p. 4, Footnote 8, ln 1 “A projection is created by the mind on the impulse of sensory data or thought processes” Is this intended in a behavioristic, stimulus-response sense? 30) p. 4, Footnote 8, ln 1-3 “The linguistic entities that have referential properties are taken not to refer to real world entities, but to projections, which may or may not be based on real world entities.” 5 Sorry, I don’t understand how, if the entities with referential properties do not refer to real world entities, projections can be based on real world entities? Also, what is the relation between ‘referring’ and ‘being based on’. 31) p. 5, (14) “Overt Anaphoric Pronominal” Is this deducibly non-existant since [-gov] implies [-Case]? 32) p. 5, para 1, ln 2 “maximally opposed to each other” Please change to “maximally distinct in feature-value specifications”. 33) p. 5, para 1, ln 4-5 “as anaphors are either pronouns with added focus markers” This is a phono-morphological observation or an analysis,. But you state it as a selfevident truth. “Anaphors are…” ? 34) p. 5, (15) “anaphor him-self” himself (?) / \ / \ Pronoun Focus-marker him self Is ‘addition’ a derivational process/rule of morphology? This is an analysis/hypothesis. 35) p. 5, (16) WOUT: This may cause terminological confusion, i.e. PRONOUN vs. pronoun. 36) p. 6, para 2, ln 1 “[variable referential] elements” Maybe change to “[+variable +referential] elements”? 37) p. 6, para 2, ln 4-7 “Since pronouns are the underspecified category…” Should you say the following? So the basic idea is that these features are not lexically stipulated but are syntactically deducible. Is this a little like Functional Determination in Chomsky 1982, i.e. features are deducible from Phrase-Structure geometry—like [p] versus [ph] is syllabically determined? 38) p. 6, para 3, ln 3 “Sylla” This author is not in the references. Please check all your citations! 39) p. 6, (17) “Fulani” Please place parentheses around ‘Fulani’. 40) p. 6, para 4, ln 4 “property” Is anaphoricity a feature or just a configuration? 41) p. 6, Footnote 11, ln 4 “kataphoric” 6 Please define this term. 42) p. 6, Footnote 11, ln 8 “recording of her speech” Should you perhaps change this to “recording of her own speech”? 43) p. 7, (18) & para 3, ln 2 “coreferential with” “invariably spelled out and interpreted as an anaphor” Please explain the difference here. 44) p. 7, (19) Are there traces? Chains? How does theta-role assignment work? Does John move to a [+theta] position from a [–theta] position? 45) p. 7, para 3, ln 3 “feature [+coreferential]” Does this violate Inclusiveness? 46) p. 7, para 4, ln 2 “involving” Replace this with “including”? 47) p. 7, para 4, ln 6 “return” What does it mean for the Morphology to ‘return’ an anaphor? 48) p. 7, para 4, ln 6 “would interpret the PRONOUN as an anaphor and return and anaphor instead of a pronoun.” So this would incorrectly generate the morphological anaphoric form, i.e. we overgenerate *John think that I like himself. 49) p. 7, sec. 4, ln 2 “anaphors are merged with their antecedent” Maybe replace with “an anaphor is syntactically derived from a transformational operation whereby a pronoun is merged with its antecedent”? 50) p. 7, Footnote 14, ln 3 ‘anaphoricity” Should you perhaps replace this with “overt anaphoricity”? 51) p. 7, Footnote 14 Is this a case of overt versus ‘Abstract’? Like overt Case versus Abstract Case? 52) p. 7, Footnote 14, (i), (ii), (iii) Please place the names of the languages in parentheses. 53) p. 8, para 1, ln 2 “preceded/c-commanded by” Please explain exactly what this means? 54) p. 8, (22b) “*I expect himself to like John” 7 Is this a violation of Condition C, versus a violation of Condition A, versus a violation of both conditions? 55) p. 8, para 2 I’m not sure the internal structure of (21) is clear. (?) 56) p. 8, para 2, ln 3 “merging” Maybe change this to “Re-merging”? 57) p. 8, Sec 3.2, para 1, ln 3 “together in a constituent” Maybe change this to “together yielding a representation like (21)”? 58) p. 8, Sec 3.2, para 1, ln 4-5 “can only be interpreted as coreferential by accident” Maybe change this to “can be interpreted as coreferential only by accident”? 59) p. 8, Sec 3.2, para 1, ln 5 “fact of grammar” Is an interpretation ‘a fact of grammar’? 60) p. 8, para 6, ln 1 “neither instance of John is a variable referential element” I’m confused about the lexical versus syntactic aspects of the account of disjoint reference. 61) p. 9, (26) What if you don’t move? 62) p. 9, para 3, ln 1-4 “The relevance of these examples…” Jan-Wouter—can you PLEASE expand this? I’m not sure how compelling this important argument is. 63) p. 9, para 5, ln 4 “likes John” Should this be “like John”, as in (28a)? 64) p. 9, para 5, ln 7 “do we seem to get” Please delete ‘do’. 65) p. 9, para 5, ln 9 – p. 10, para 1, ln, 7 & Footnote 18 I think somehow the font size on the above text passage was made the same as the Footnote font size. 66) p. 10, sec. 3.3, ln 3 “anaphoricity is an acquired property, acquired only by a variable referential element (a PRONOUN) when merged with an antecedent (as in (21)).” Maybe you should change to “anaphoricity is a property acquired by a variable referential element (a PRONOUN) only by virtue of undergoing a particular transformational operation, i.e. Merger with an antecedent (as in (21)) in the course of the derivation”? 8 67) p. 10, (30) Please put a space between this line and the next. 68) p. 10, sec 3.4, para 2, ln 2 “the structure (21), which” Does this involve a constraint on REPRESENTATIONS, or is it deducible from the form of RULES that create representations? 69) p. 10, Footnote 19, ln 3 “although John may like John, the information that John is a ‘self-lover’ is not conveyed.” I don’t understand this—sorry. Also, should ‘self-lover’ be changed to ‘self-liker’? 70) p. 10, Footnote 20, ln 5-7 “I now believe that the strongest implementation of the derivational approach to binding should eliminate Principle C altogether, and should not involve any mechanism of reference assignment other than the mechanism yielding coreference discussed here.” This point is very important. Can it be made more salient—i.e. NOT in a footnote— and DISCUSSED MORE? 71) p. 11, Footnote 21 Maybe make the example sentence into numbered example (i)? 72) p. 11, sec 3.6, para 1, ln 2 “strikingly similar” But not identical, e.g. the English sentences: a. *John seems that [pictures of t] are on sale. b. Johni said that [pictures of himself] are on sale. Should you add a)? Is b) a long-distance, not (21)-type anaphor? See your Footnote 34 below (OK—it’s addressed below). 73) p. 11, sec 3.6, para 2, ln 3 “grammatical function” Please clarify what you mean by this? 74) p. 12, para 1, ln 3-4 “the relevant noun phrase movement must be A-movement.” What about the stranded anaphor’s Case and theta properties? What about (21) itself—is it [+/-theta]? [+/-Case]? [+/-Agr]? [/- ref]? 75) p. 12, para 2, ln 3 “made up by” Maybe change to “composed of”? 76) p. 12, (34) Why is there a space between ‘zag’ and the rest of the sentence? Where does the second ‘Marie’ go? 77) p. 12, para 3, ln 3 “Mary” 9 Maybe change to “Marie”? 78) p. 12, (35) Please illustrate this with a tree? 79) p. 2, Footnote 24, ln 1 “such as default or inherent Case assignment, which…” Please note: in Baker (1988) incorporation of HEADS (including bare pronouns) exempts the ‘clitic’ from the Case Filter. 80) p. 12, Footnote 26 Please see Lasnik and Saito’s (1991) CLS paper “On the subject of infinitives”. 81) p. 14, para 2, ln 1 “In our theory, since there is no Principle C, (39) is unproblematic.” But is there a Condition A? I.e. haven’t you entirely deduced “an anaphor must be bound in domain (35)”? 82) p. 14, para 2, ln 3 “may” Should you change this to ‘must’? 83) p. 14, (42b) This is remnant movement. See Epstein 2001/in progress, Epstein and Seely, which say that there is NO Proper Binding condition on REPRESENTATIONS but rather “movement must be to a c-commanding position”, and this follows from the GENERAL theory of relations which entails that an Attractor is in a relation ONLY to its sister/Mergee, so it can Attract things only out of its sister, i.e. “c-command. The resulting representation—as in Remnant Movement or Head-adjunction—is irrelevant, i.e. we don’t care if there’s no c-command in REPRESENTATIONS. 84) p. 14, para 4, ln 5 “(or by any other operation)” Is improper movement, i.e. the following structure, relevant? Whoi ti is likely [ti [ti will go]]? 85) p. 14, para 6, ln 3-4 “I suggest that nothing else is wrong with (40)/(43).” Is this like the Referential Hierarchies of BINDER-BINDEE (Lasnik?)? 86) p. 14, (44) Please move (44) so it isn’t cut by the page break. 87) p. 15, (46) I keep worrying that there might be a Bach-Peters-type infinite regress if an anaphor is derived from a pronoun. How about: Which pilot who shot at himself hurt himself? I could be way off-track here. 88) p. 16, para 1, ln 3-4 “This leads me to believe that the coreference of John and he in (48) is in fact accidental.” 10 And certainly not obligatory. Do the obligatory coreference cases ever occur long distance? E.g. “John took a knife with him” seems local. Is there ever intersentential obligatory coreferenced pronouns? Footnote 34 might be relevant to this, re: longdistance anaphors, not 21-type? 89) p. 16, (50) Is the format on this OK? 90) p. 16, para 5, ln 1 “only succeed” Please change to “succeed only”. 91) p. 16, para 5, ln 2 “retains access to a position in which it may” Maybe you should change this to “can move (escape?) to a position in which it can”? 92) p. 16, Footnote 31, ln 1 “my notes of Kayne (2000)” Your notes on K vs. K’s notes that he gave to you? 93) p. 17, para 1, ln 1 “a thematic role.” So given (21), there is no Theta Criterion as a FILTER on DS REPRESENTATIONS, rather features are derivationally acquired. (DASR has no levels of representation). 94) p. 17, para 3, ln 2 “remarked” Maybe replace with ‘mentioned’ or ‘discussed’ or ‘noted’? 95) p. 17, Footnote 33, ln 4 “I leave this a subject” Please delete ‘a’. 96) p. 18, para 1, ln 1 “in line with” Maybe change to ‘consonant with’? 97) p. 18, sec. 4 Can you omit Sec 4, or reduce it? How long are pages 1-18, which look singlespaced? 98) p. 18, para 1, ln 1 “a noun phrase” Is this explained too? I.e. that an antecedent is an NP, not, e.g., a VP? 99) p. 18, para 2, ln 3 “grammatical function” Please clarify what you mean by this notion? 100) p. 18, para 3, ln 3-4 “because the antecedent in (21) needs to move to an Aposition” Please add at the end of this sentence “and stop moving (Greed).” 101) p. 18, para 3, ln 5 “coincide” 11 This is not the same as ‘strikingly similar’ on p. 11, i.e., I think ‘coincide’ means equivalent, OK? 102) p. 18, para 4, ln 1 “circumstance” Maybe replace with ‘fact’? 103) p. 18, para 4, ln 4 “equally straightforward” Are sections 1-3 really “straightforward”, versus a good deduction—it’s explanation seeking through highly abstract theories that invariably confront a million questions? What’s exciting (to me anyway) about your work is that the questions are revealed (e.g. Why A-binding?) and the answer seems highly plausible and deductive. 104) p. 18, para 6, ln 6 & Footnote 35, ln 1 “representational noun phrase” Versus a derivational noun phrase? 105) p. 19, para 6, ln 3 “inescapable” Maybe replace with “obligatory”? 106) p. 19, Footnote 36, ln 5 “properties” Does this mean ‘features’? See Boscovic and Takahashi’s Last Resort article in LI where elements start off in a scrambled position, and undergo Greed-consistent movement to get a theta role. 107) p. 21, (62b) “no idiomatic reaching” Maybe replace with “(62b) disallows an idiomatic reading”? 108) p. 21, para 4, ln 1 “the antecedent to a reciprocal experiencer” Please change ‘to’ to ‘of’. 109) p. 21, para 5 “This would be accounted for if seem loses its raising characteristics when an experiencer PP is present.” When an Experiencer PP is present or when an Experiencer PP containing an anaphor is present? 110) p. 21, para 5, ln 8 “external argument to seem” WOUT: Are there any independent tests supporting the hypothesis that in these cases there is indeed ‘Agentivity’? 111) p. 21, para 6, ln 3 “Indoeuropean” Please change to “Indo-European”. 112) p. 21, para 6, ln 3 “the the past” Please delete the second ‘the’. 12 113) p. 22, para 3, ln 1 “synthetic” Versus analytic? Please define this. I’ve never encountered this terminology, sorry. 114) p. 22, para 3, ln 3 “in the generalization” Please delete this. 115) p. 22, para 3, ln 4 “according to which” Please change to “according to whom”. 116) p. 22, (67) I think the format on this example was obscured. 117) p. 22, Footnote 39, ln 2 “standard assumption” Please give a citation and illustrate this assumption. 118) p. 23, para 2, ln 6 & para 3, ln 2 “anaphora” Please change to ‘anaphors’. 119) p. 23, para 2, ln 6 “cannot be” Maybe replace this with “is not in fact”? 120) p. 23, para 4, ln 1 “true anaphor” What is the definition of this? Does true anaphor mean a 21-type anaphor? 121) p. 23, para 5, ln 1 “the anaphor is” Should you replace ‘is’ with ‘denotes’ perhaps? (I.e. word vs. object.) 122) p. 23, para 5, ln 2 “on” Please replace with ‘of’. 123) p. 23, para 5, ln 2-4 “The anaphor in (21) heads a noun phrase independently of the antecedent, which sits in the specifier position of the noun phrase but must collect its thematic role and grammatical function elsewhere.” Perhaps illustrate this with a tree? 124) p. 23, para 6 “anaphors” Versus “true anaphors”? 125) p. 24, para 1, ln 1 “this shows” How so? Explain a little how the data bears on the constituent structure analysis. 126) p. 24, para 1, ln 1 “is not necessarily” Versus “is not”? 13 127) p. 24, para 4, ln 3, 4 “case” Please change to ‘cases’. 128) p. 25, para 6, ln 2 “true anaphors” This means 21-type anaphors, yes? 129) p. 25, para 6, ln 3 “true pronouns” What is the definition of this? 130) p. 25, para 6, ln 4 “picked up in the course of a derivation” Is there an issue concerning Move-Attract versus Merge? 131) p. 26, para 1, ln 2 “Sells 1987” There’s a learnability issue here. If (35) is universal, maybe a child can syntactically bootstrap when s/he hears lexically dependent elements with no antecedent within the domain of (35). Maybe this could be a nice argument for syntactic bootstrapping? 132) p. 26, para 5 “It is a consequence of our theory that the coreferential interpretation in (78) is accidental as well, even if much easier to obtain than in local contexts like (79).” Note that the relevant SYNTACTIC PRINCIPLE or LAW, namely Principle B (in GB) is INapplicable to (78). Thus far as SYNTAX is concerned, you “can do” whatever you want in interpreting he morphemes given their lexical semantics. 133) p. 26, para 6, ln 3 “the speaker uttering…the creator (owner)” These are clearly not mechanisms within CHL. Please delete ‘owner’. 134) p. 26, Footnote 44 “Other languages, like Dutch (anaphor zichzelf, logophor ‘mzelf) and Malayalam (anaphor tanne-tanne, logophor tanne (ACC)) do.” Perhaps change this to “Other languages, like Dutch, do (anaphor zichzelf, vs. logophor ‘mzelf) and Malayalam (anaphor tanne-tanne, vs. logophor tanne (ACC))”? 135) p. 27, para 2, ln 3 “antecedent” Add ‘at S-structure’? 136) p. 27, (82),(83) Do you want to make these two examples into minimal pairs, i.e. make the predicate in (82) “likes him”? 137) p. 27, para 5, ln 1& para 6, ln 11 “coreference” Note that coreference is not variable binding; it’s not “for any X, if X is a man then X will think X is a genius”. This isn’t reference at all (maybe—depending on what (the hell!) reference is! 138) p. 27, para 5, ln 1 “case apart” 14 Maybe replace this with “separate phenomenon”? 139) p. 27, para 6, ln 3 “the differences are clear” Is this true? 140) p. 27, para 7, ln 2 “anaphora” Please change this to “anaphors”. 141) p. 28, para 2, ln 9 “determined by its derivational history” This is a nice phrase. Could you use it in the intro? 142) p. 29, para 2, ln 3 “restore John in a position” Please change ‘in’ to ‘to’. 143) p. 29, (89a,b) Is a minimal pair with this wording semantically possible? Should you change “want us to invent” to “most object to”? 144) p. 29, para 4, ln 5 “allowing for (89a) a reading” Maybe change this to “allowing a reading of (89a)”? 145) p. 29, para 4, ln 6 “hark back at” Please change to “’hark back’ to” 146) p. 2, Footnote 49, ln 10, 12 “effected” Should this be ‘affected’? 147) p. 29, Footnote 49, ln 12 “do not again supports” Please change to “do not, again supports”. 148) p. 30, (90) Please fix the format here. 149) p. 31, para 2, ln 3 “established by merging” Should you change this to “established only by merging”? 150) p. 31, para 2, ln 3 “PRONOUN) in a constituent” Perhaps you should change this to “PRONOUN) yielding…”? Also, should ‘constituent’ be changed to ‘representation’? 151) p. 31, para 3, ln 1-3 “excludes… as argued in Branigan (2000)…” This seems ambiguous: does Branigan include or exclude? 152) Make footnotes into ENDNOTES—I think?? 15