Fix and analyze wrong sentence
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In line # 3: Tanima asked a question to Kashfi
“you like it.”
This does not have question format. It should have
“Do you like it?”
I think it’s a common mistake and most of the time I made this kind of mistake in my speaking.
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In line # 9: Tanima made same mistake and ask
“It looks ugly”
which should be
“Is it looks ugly?”
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In line # 11: Tanima made two mistakes she asked
“By the way, When you gonna go to Bangladesh?”
First of all she did not use question format to ask question and secondly she didn’t have correct tense. The correct one is
“By the way, when will you go to Bangladesh?”
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Line #12: Kashfi made a mistake, she said
“November 20.”
Which is not
Standard English and it should be
“20 th November.”

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Line #15 Tanima asked
“When you come back?”
Which should be
“When will you come back?”
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In line # 16 Kashfi made same mistake and she said
“December 29.”
Which should be “ 29 th December?”
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In line # 17 Tanima said that
“So you go just Bangladesh or you stop somewhere between that?” which should be
“You will go just Bangladesh or you will stop between some where?”
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In line # 18 Kashfi said that
“First I go to Italy then Germany and then Bangladesh.”
It should be like that
“First I will go to Italy then Germany and Then Bangladesh.”
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Line # 21 Tanima asked that
“you have any relatives over there or just?” but the correct one is
“do you have any relatives over there or not?”

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Line # 25 Tanima said
“Relatives like your kith and kin like your blood connected you know somebody over there.”
It has wrong sentence structure and she also need to combine her sentence. I think tried to say
“Relatives means your kith and kin that you connected with blood. Do you know some body over there?”
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Line # 29 Tanima asked
“You ever saw them or you”
the correct one should be
“Did you ever see them or not?”
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Line # 30 Kashfi said
“I forgot if I saw them if I don’t.”
she needs to correct the tense
“I forget if I saw them or may be I didn’t.”
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Line # 33 Tanima said that
“Tell me something Kashfi what you gonna do to go to Bangladesh like you have relativities over there or you have friends over there like your aunt, uncle or grand pa, grand ma?”
I think she needs to use future tense and combine the sentence with transitions or separate the sentence and make two complete sentences.
“What will you do when you go to Bangladesh? You have relatives over there like your aunts, uncles, grand ma

and grand pa. So what will you do? Do you have any plan for them?”
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Line # 38 Kashfi said that
“Yea I went Bangladesh a lots of time and I got scared because my little brother likes our relatives farm so that like lots of goat my brother was hit gut of the goat and then like the goat you know they have like horns”
I think the sentence is incomplete it needs to combine with transitions and also has plural problem.
“Yes I went to Bangladesh lots of time and once a time I got scare because my little brother liked our relative’s farm and they had lots of goats in their farm so my brother was hitting the gut of the goat and as you know, goats have long horns.”
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Line # 40 Kashfi said
“ Yea but they can not hit him.”
Which should be
“Yea but they could not hit him.”

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Line # 42 Kashfi said
“I got so scared.”
She used dabble past form in one sentence and the correct one is
“I got so scare.”
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Line # 55 Tanima said
“Do you know that what you gonna see in
Italy because as I know Italy is like very tourist sight and yea good site to see.”
The correct one is
“Do you know that what you will see in Italy because as I know, that Italy has very good tourist site and yes it’s also a nice country to see.”
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In line #63 Tanima said
“In Italy you gonna come to your relatives house or some where else?” and the correct one is
“In Italy are you going to stay in your relative’s house or some where else?”
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In line #68 Tanima said
“Three country so after Italy you gonna go
Germany.”
She use wrong transition word, she should use
“Three country and after Italy you will go to see Germany.”

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In line #70 Tanima said
“ Let me tell you one thing it’s cold country now it’s gonna like snow fall over there.” and the correct one is
“let me tell you one thing it’s very cold country and now there is snow falling in Germany.”
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In line #73 Kashfi said
“O no I am gonna do my birth day in
Bangladesh and when I do my birth day snow is gonna fall down? I don’t want to go Bangladesh.”
I think the correct one is
“O no I am going to do my birth day in Bangladesh so when I will do my birth day in Bangladesh, will the snow fall down?”
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In line #78 Tanima asked her
“When your birth day?”
She missed the verb in this sentence and the correct one is
“When is your birth day?”
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In line #80 Tanima said
“I miss your birth day.”
Here she made same mistake. The correct sentence is
“I will miss your birth day.”

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In line #81 Kashfi said that
“I think I am gonna do it in
Bangladesh.”
The correct sentence is
“I think I will do it in
Bangladesh.”
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In line #82 Tanima said that
“I hope you gonna have lots of fun more than here.”
The correct one is
“I hope you will have lots of fun more than here.”