Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Week 1 Tuesday Week 1 Monday Objectives Text/Speaking/Listening Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Word/Sentence Independent group activities Outcomes This unit uses the period of WW2 as a setting. It would be easy to adapt the unit to use an alternative period that chn are currently studying. During this unit read a longer story set in World War II (or the appropriate period). Examples for WW2 include: When Hitler stole Pink Rabbit by Judith Kerr, Thunder and Lightnings by Jan Mark, Friend or Foe by Michael Morpurgo or Blitzed by Robert Swindells. You will also need a collection of short stories set in the past, eg Britannia 100 Great Stories from British History by Geraldine McCaughrean & Richard Brassey, The Fib & other stories by George Layton & The Story Shop compiled by Nikki Gamble. 2. Listen to a speaker, Show chn the front cover of The Lion and the Unicorn by Easy/Medium/Hard Children can: make notes on the talk. Shirley Hughes. What do chn think the story is about? Explain While chn are listening to the story they should make a note on a 1. Identify 7. Identify and that it is a long story and as you read it, you want chn to listen whiteboard of any features that show the story is set in the features of a summarise evidence carefully with a notepad or whiteboard in front of them. They past. Also note things seen in illustrations. When the teacher has story set in from a text to support will need to listen carefully & identify any features of the finished reading, chn spend a little time discussing with a talking the past. a hypothesis. story that show it is based at an earlier time in history and partner the features that they noticed. TD as required 2. Make Investigate how when they think the story is supposed to have happened, eg a notes to Plenary settings & characters distinctive setting, historical facts, clothing worn or support Discuss features that chn noticed, eg bombs, evacuees, labelled are built up from small vocabulary used. They can just make a note to remind hypothesis. child, black-out, rationed water & sweets. Also pictures showing details. (T1) themselves of something they notice. Read the story, turning gas masks, chn wearing berets, caps & hats, boys in shorts, girls pages and showing illustrations as you do so. Help chn to follow in skirts & dresses, coats, not anoraks or denim jackets, boys the narrative as well as noticing the story setting. with braces, lamps not electric light, playing skipping, marbles, NB Reading this story will take about 30 - 40 minutes. etc. 9. Choose and combine words for particular effects. Identify the use of powerful verbs. (S3) Identify adverbs and understand their functions in sentences. (S4) Chn retell the story from yesterday, taking it in turns to add details or describe next event. Did chn enjoy story? Is it easier to understand the meaning of the story if you know something about WWII? What did Mick think about the war? How do we know? He understood that it was not the German people we were fighting, but the ideas of a few Germans who lead the country at that time. Discuss how Mick’s dad had fought in a different war (WW1). Write two sentences on f/c: ‘She came into the room and said…’ & ‘Joyce stomped noisily into the kitchen and yelled…’ Which sentence tells us more about the character & setting? Powerful verbs & adverb - shows how character is feeling. ‘Joyce was angry’ would be a much less effective way of describing the character. Write two further sentences ‘The sun shone through the trees’ & ‘The sun peeped brightly through the trees.’ The second setting is easier to picture in your mind – it implies there are dark shadows where the sun can’t reach. (Grammar for Writing, Unit 22) © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Easy Find & underline powerful verbs in extract from book (week’s resources). What other technique is used to make the description more effective? Alliteration. TD Medium/Hard Find & underline powerful verbs & adverbs in extracts from book (week’s resources). Notice how the adverbs make the meanings of the verbs clearer. Children can: 1. Identify & use powerful verbs when describing settings or characters. Medium/Hard 2. Identify & use adverbs. Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Week 1 Friday Week 1 Thursday Week 1 Wednesday Objectives Text/Speaking/Listening Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Word/Sentence Independent group activities Outcomes Look at the description (week’s Look again at the powerful verbs Easy/Medium/Hard that are used, eg scolded & With the help of the chn label the black and white resources) of the first grizzled. They help to describe image of Mick (week’s resources) to describe his breakfast the evacuees had in the other characters. More is character. Show his feelings and describe some of his the big house. How did Lenny shown about the characters by actions and why he does those things, as well as his feel? How do we know? Discuss what they said and their appearance. Chn draw one of the characters in the issue of Lenny not eating bacon. appearance, eg we know Mrs B. is book (or use week’s resources) and label them in a Were other characters sympathetic to his religion? How cross because she said ‘There’s similar way. Encourage chn to use powerful verbs and good food wasted! I’ll not have do we know? What happened to adverbs. TD with Easy that!’ The exclamation marks Jews in Germany during WWII? Plenary help us to understand how she Which character did show some Does the author make the reader feel sympathy for or said it too. kindness to Lenny? Nelly. How dislike of your character? Why do you think that? do we know? She smiled. Before Friday’s lesson Read The Brave Little Boats of Dunkirk from Britannia (see booklist) and discuss who is telling the story (a soldier). 6. Develop a range of Teach this second: Teach this first: Easy/Medium/Hard personal strategies for Rotate chn through both activities in groups. Look again at the breakfast Past tense is used a lot in stories with learning new/irregular Activity 1: Chn identify past tense of scene in The Lion and the historical settings (except when characters words. Understand changes irregular verbs (see plan resources). Unicorn. How do we know are speaking). Write on f/c some irregular in tense and use past tense. Activity 2: Chn write a character sketch of what the characters are tense changes taken from text, eg know – (S2) 7. Use evidence from the person they drew and labelled like? What indications or knew, can – could, sit – sat, have – had, stink the text to support a hints are we given as to their – stank, tread – trod, is – was, see – saw, run yesterday. Use evidence from the text to hypothesis. Spell irregular justify their opinions. Use powerful verbs personality – whether they – ran. Can chn think of other irregular egs? tense changes. (W8) Write and adverbs. will turn out to be nice and Perhaps they can find verbs that change in character sketch. (T11) TD with Activity 2 as each group does it. sympathetic or quite nasty? same way as verbs above. Spelling Bank p24 7. Identify and summarise evidence from a text to support a hypothesis. (T2) 7. Deduce characters' reasons for behaviour from their actions. 7. Explain how writers use expresive language to create images. 9. Choose and combine words for particular effects. Identify the use of powerful verbs. (S3) 4. Create roles showing how behaviour can be interpreted from different viewpoints. 7. Deduce characters' reasons for behaviour from their actions. 8. Interrogate texts to deepen and clarify understanding and response. Teach this second: Read The Little Ships by Louise Borden (available to buy from Hamilton Education). This is another version of the Dunkirk story told from a different viewpoint: a young girl who went with her father to rescue soldiers. Discuss the different emotions and feelings that the characters might have experienced, eg fear, hunger, thirst, misery, cold, wet, etc. But perhaps also relief, excitement, anger, pride. Include ideas from yesterday’s text. How does the book make chn feel? Why? Teach this first: Write war, towards, water on f/c. Ask chn to say each word in turn. What sound does the ‘wa’ make? Repeat with woman, wound, sword and ‘wo’. As a class look at the use of the letter strings at beginnings, middles & endings of words. Can chn think of other words with those letter strings? Can we make any generalisations? Repeat with other letter combinations (see resources). © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Easy/Medium/Hard Hot-seat confident chn as the little girl, her father, one of the soldiers who was rescued (teacher might be hot-seated as a French soldier with little English!). Chn ask questions to find out how the characters felt and what they did at different points in the story. Children can: 1. Identify evidence from the text to describe characters. 2. Use powerful verbs & adverbs to describe characters. Children can: 1. Recognise and use past tense. 2. Spell irregular verb changes. 3. Write a character sketch from notes. Children can: 1. Explore the occurrence of certain letter strings 2. Ask relevant questions. Hard 3. Respond to questions in role. Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Week 2 Wednesday Week 2 Tuesday Week 2 Monday Objectives Text/Speaking/Listening Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Word/Sentence Independent group activities Outcomes Watch a short extract from a film Writers use adjectives to describe Easy Medium Hard or TV programme set in the past settings and characters. Use exciting Chn work with first Same as Easy, but Same as (see list of suggested websites adjectives not boring words that 6 nice sentences, give more than one Medium, make the setting or the character copying them out alternative but try all below). When did this story take difficult to imagine. Write nice on and replacing the adjective for nice. sentences place? How do chn know? Discuss – last four Chn could use a features that paper-based stories f/c. What do chn think it means? Find word nice with one dictionary definitions. Write some alternative (not phrase instead of a are do not have, for example trickier! nice (!) sentences on f/c (week’s the class choice). single word. costumes, music and scenery. TD Books may include illustrations resources). What can we use to that help with understanding the replace nice in each sentence? What Plenary text, and include descriptive is meant by the word nice in each Have chn found different meanings for the word nice? passages to create settings and case? Ask Hard group to share their last four sentences. introduce characters. 8. Read Show chn the cover of Rose Blanche and ask them This is another historical story told over a Easy/Medium/Hard extensively to predict the content. Who is Rose? What does number of months. How does the author show Working in mixed ability groups, favourite her name mean? What is reflected in the window? that time has passed? Write words & phrases on look at the main stages of the genres. Look at page 1 - where is the book set? Read up to f/c: when, winter was coming, then, still, after narrative (week’s resources). Map 10. Use the page where Rose goes into the forest. What do supper, early in the morning, one day, suddenly, the stages on a timeline – chn could conjunctions to chn think will happen next? Finish reading book & all through the bitter winter, even at night, then do this using ICT to drag & drop or establish discuss chn’s reactions to it. What do chn think one morning, meanwhile, as the weeks went by. cut & paste the stages into place cohesion within happened to Rose? Who are the new soldiers that Time connectives have been used (often at the (week’s resources). Then decide on paragraphs. have arrived? Does book make chn feel optimistic? beginning of a paragraph) to show how much time a time connective to introduce that Explore Why/why not? When is the story set? How do chn has passed (Grammar for Writing Unit 25). part of the narrative. Chn can use chronology in know? How does it differ from the other short Sometimes there are jumps in time, some events list of suggested words & phrases narrative. (T3) stories we have read? are skimmed over quickly & others told in detail. (week’s resources). 10. Organise text Show story structure using Explain how a story can be structured Easy/Medium/Hard In pairs chn choose one of story structure aides (week’s into paragraphs to Story Hill structure of The into paragraphs using the Story Hill or resources) to show stages of the story of The Lion and the distinguish Little Ships (week’s resources) Five Finger model (Grammar for Unicorn. Write in notes or sentences. What time connective between & model how to use Five Fingers Writing Unit 25). Discuss reasons why could be used to start each paragraph? different structure for Rose Blanche. Use a new paragraph is started: change of TD visit pairs as appropriate information, the timeline list from yesterday place, change of time, (new speaker Plenary events or (chn write inside the fingers). hard group can include this). Share some of the story stages and establish that everyone processes. (T15) On IWB reveal each stage one Concentrate on change of time for has divided the story into similar sections. Explore narrative by one. Can chn predict what today’s activity. NB there may be more order. (T4) each stage will include? than one paragraph for each section. 2. Compare the different contributions of music, words and images in short extracts from TV programmes/films. Explore chronology in other media texts. (T3) Investigate play scene. (T6) Investigate how settings & characters are built up from small details. (T1) © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Children can: 1. Compare the features of film with written narrative. 2. Use interesting adjectives to replace common words like nice. Children can: 1. Use connectives to show passage of time in a narrative. Children can: 1. Understand the structure of a story: introduction, build up, problem or dilemma, resolution and ending. Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Week 2 Friday Week 2 Thursday Objectives 10. Organise text into paragraphs to distinguish between different information, events or processes. (T15) 6. Use knowledge of phonics, morphology and etymology to spell new and unfamiliar words. 7. Use knowledge of word structures and origins to develop their understanding of word meanings. Text/Speaking/Listening Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Word/Sentence Independent group activities Outcomes Retell the story of The Lion and the Unicorn emphasising the Easy Medium Hard Children can: main stages and the timing of the different stages in relation Chn rewrite the As Easy group, but As Easy group, but 1. Write a to each other. Model writing the introductory paragraph of introductory chn can choose chn must not choose paragraph The Lion and the Unicorn in their own words. Ask chn for paragraph of The which of the stages the introductory beginning with a Lion and the suggestions. Think about which time connective should be used identified yesterday paragraph. Go onto a time Unicorn in their own to start the paragraph, eg The morning after a bomb to rewrite in their second paragraph if connective. words. destroyed the Robinson’s house, mum decided that Lenny had own words. time. to be evacuated to the country. Look at some details of the stories The childhood of evacuees was very Easy/Medium Hard Children can: read during the last two weeks – different from that of the chn in Using the list of root Can chn find any Easy check chn’s understanding: shelter, class. Note the suffix hood. Write words (week’s resources), words with two 1. Recognise & spell attic room, gargoyle waterspout, suffixes, ending these sentences on the board: The can the chn add one of suffixes: ship, hood, ness synagogue, scullery, summerhouse, with ness, eg effects of war changed their the four suffixes (ness, & ment. pedestal, nits, canteen (The Lion and neighbourhood. Lots of kindness was worthlessness, Medium hood, ship & ment) to the Unicorn), geometry, motley, shown to the evacuees. A partnership 2. Recognise, use & spell make a word? Medium use absentconvoy, sullen, minesweeper, bail, was formed between the men. The mindedness? suffixes: ship, hood, ness longer list of root words. mole (The Little Ships), mayor, government encouraged men to join & ment. Plenary barbed wire, dispirited, shrouded the army. Underline the suffixes. Hard Read the poem The Evacuee (week’s (Rose Blanche). Read the words in Discuss what happens to words such 3. Recognise, use & spell resources) taken from the BBC People’s War context to help in understanding. as lovely when ness is added as a suffixes: ship, hood, ness site. Ask for reactions from chn. Discuss the importance of expanding suffix: ‘y’ becomes an ‘i’ to give & ment, including words chn’s vocabulary and using vocabulary loveliness. (Spelling Bank p26) with two suffixes. that matches the historical setting. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Week 3 Wednesday Week 3 Tuesday Week 3 Monday Objectives 9. Develop and refine ideas in writing using planning and problemsolving strategies. Use settings and characterisation to engage readers' interest. Plan a story identifying stages. (T10) 9. Develop and refine ideas in writing using planning and problemsolving strategies. Use settings and characterisation to engage readers' interest. Text/Speaking/Listening Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Word/Sentence Independent group activities Outcomes Explain to chn that this week they will be writing their own story – Easy/Medium/Hard based on a photograph taken during World War II (week’s In mixed ability groups chn think about and discuss the people who live or work in the setting. Imagine a main character – resources). Show the series of photographs and discuss ideas of perhaps one of the people in the photograph. What do they do? possible story lines (these can be based on the short stories How do they get on with the other characters? What kind of a shared during the last two weeks or the longer story that should person are they? be completed this week). Try to imagine being in the scene. What TD visit groups in turn can you see, hear, smell, feel or taste? Who is there? What are they thinking? What might they be saying? Choose one photograph Plenary for everyone to work with this week – class vote after ideas have List the main character ideas on f/c. Add descriptive words or been shared. phrases. Select a name. Enlarge it and prepare copies for the groups to use. Look again at the chosen photograph in detail. Describe the Easy/Medium/Hard setting. Write descriptive words and phrases on f/c. What Chn work in pairs to tell their own version of the story using the events have taken place? What might happen next? Use the story plan. Remind them to make links between each event, to blank Story Hill or Five Finger model (week’s resources) to include historical detail and to tell their stories effectively, for example using gestures or repetition. model how to bring these ideas together as a story plan. Introduce the characters and the setting. Build-up towards a Plenary climax – the dilemma or problem, that is then resolved. Bring Share chn’s stories – choose different pairs to describe the the story to an end, linking back to the start. characters, the setting, the build-up and the resolution. 10. Organise text into paragraphs to distinguish between different information, events or processes. (T15) Write independently linking own experience to situations in historical stories. (T12) Explore chronology in narrative. (T3) Model how to write the opening paragraph based on the story plan in an interesting way – perhaps a surprising event, or some dialogue. Use some vivid descriptive words and powerful verbs. Use some of the words and phrases collected on the f/c over the last two days. Use some historical detail. Remind the chn about paragraphs – at least one for each stage of the story. Paragraphs can indicate a change of place or time. Refer back to the list of time connectives for chn to link their paragraphs together in sequence and to show the changes in time. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Easy/Medium/Hard Chn start to write their own versions of the story based on the plan and using their oral stories to structure the written versions. Chn will have further time tomorrow to finish their stories. Remember to use historical details. Children can: 1. Use a photograph as a stimulus for a story. 2. Describe a character and a setting. Children can: 1. Tell an oral story based on a plan. Children can: 1. Use historical details in their own writing. 2. Use paragraphs to distinguish between different events. Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Week 3 Friday Week 3 Thursday Objectives Text/Speaking/Listening 9. Show imagination through the language used to create emphasis, humour, atmosphere or suspense. Use powerful verbs. (S3) 1. Use and reflect on some ground rules for sustaining talk and interactions. 8. Read extensively favourite authors or genres and experiment with other types of text. Interrogate texts to deepen and clarify understanding and response. Compare & contrast poems on similar themes. (T7) Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Word/Sentence Independent group activities Outcomes Remind chn of the criteria for the story by writing on f/c: Easy/Medium/Hard Introduce character(s), Chn finish writing their own version of the story based on the Describe setting(s), story plan. Then read their finished story to a partner and Use some historical detail, give one another feedback. Three stars to a wish! Use powerful verbs, Use vivid descriptive words, Plenary Use at least one paragraph for each stage of the story. Share some extracts from the stories chn have written. Discuss how to give feedback – positive criticism. For every wish give three good points about the story. Read the poem extract at the very beginning of The Little Ships Easy/Medium/Hard from To The Seaman by John Masefield (see week’s resources). In pairs chn discuss which poem they liked the best and why? Do the poems create an image in Focus on the words ‘little ships’, and explain that this expression has chn’s minds? Is it similar to that created by the come to be used to refer to the boats that evacuated Dunkirk. Why story of The Little Ships? do chn think the word ‘ship’ was used in the poem and not ‘boat’? Read the whole poem to chn (week’s resources) & explain any vocabulary or Plenary ideas they find difficult. Read two poems (week’s resources) taken Have chn heard the phrase the ‘spirit of Dunkirk’ from the BBC People’s War site - written by soldiers who were there and if so do they know what it means? If not can at Dunkirk. they make some suggestions? Children can: 1. Use powerful verbs and vivid adjectives. 2. Respond appropriately to each other’s work. Children can: 1. Explain why they like a particular poem. Scroll down for Success Criteria and book and website lists. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Success criteria for the plan – these should be selected & adjusted to match the specific needs of the class being taught. Easy Medium Hard Identify features of a story set in the past Make notes to support hypothesis Identify & begin to use powerful verbs when describing settings or characters Begin to identify evidence from the text to describe characters Spell common irregular verb changes With help ask relevant questions Compare the features of film with written narrative Use interesting adjectives to replace the word nice Use connectives to show passage of time in a narrative Recognise & spell suffixes: ship, hood, ness & ment Use a photograph as a stimulus for a story Describe a character and a setting Tell an oral story based on a plan Begin to use vivid adjectives Respond appropriately to each other’s work Explain why they like a particular poem Identify features of a story set in the past Make notes to support hypothesis Identify & use powerful verbs when describing settings or characters Identify evidence from the text to describe characters Spell common irregular verb changes Ask relevant questions Compare the features of film with written narrative Use interesting adjectives to replace common words like nice Use connectives (single words & phrases) to show passage of time in a narrative Understand the structure of a story: introduction, build up, problem or dilemma, resolution and ending Recognise, use & spell suffixes: ship, hood, ness & ment Use a photograph as a stimulus for a story Describe a character and a setting Tell an oral story based on a plan Use vivid adjectives Respond appropriately to each other’s work Explain why they like a particular poem © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Identify features of a story set in the past Make notes to support hypothesis Identify & use powerful verbs & adverbs when describing settings or characters Identify & quote evidence from the text to describe characters Spell irregular verb changes Ask relevant questions Respond to questions in role Compare the features of film with written narrative Use interesting adjectives to replace common words like nice Use connectives (single words & phrases) to show passage of time in a narrative Understand the structure of a story: introduction, build up, problem or dilemma, resolution and ending Recognise, use & spell suffixes: ship, hood, ness & ment, including words with two suffixes Use a photograph as a stimulus for a story Describe a character and a setting Tell an oral story based on a plan Use vivid adjectives Respond appropriately to each other’s work Explain why they like a particular poem Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks Literacy Year 4: Autumn – Weeks 1-3 Narrative: Unit 1 Stories with historical settings Book list When Hitler Stole Pink Rabbit by Judith Kerr ISBN: 978-0007137633 Thunder and Lightnings by Jan Mark ISBN: 0-14-031063-0 Friend or Foe by Michael Morpurgo ISBN: 978-0749746902/ 978-1405233378 Blitzed by Robert Swindells ISBN: 978-0552555890 Britannia 100 Great Stories from British History Geraldine McCaughrean & Richard Brassey ISBN: 978-1-85881-876-4 The Fib and other stories by George Layton ISBN: 978-0330397957 The Story Shop compiled by Nikki Gamble ISBN: 978-0-340-91104-4 The Lion and the Unicorn by Shirley Hughes ISBN: 978-0099256083 The Little Ships by Louise Borden (Author) & Michael Foreman (Illustrator) ISBN: 1-86205-347-2 (available to buy from Hamilton Education at www.hamiltoneducation.org.uk or 01865 241245). A new edition of this book is also now available (Frances Lincoln, ISBN: 978-1847800817). Rose Blanche by Ian McEwan (Author) & Roberto Innocenti (Illustrator) 978-0099439509 Websites: http://www.screenonline.org.uk/tv/id/1146693/index.html Carrie’s War http://www.screenonline.org.uk/tv/id/1129198/index.html The Evacuees http://www.screenonline.org.uk/education/id/1161243/index.html List of related WW2 video clips http://www.screenonline.org.uk/tv/id/562736/ The Lion, the Witch and the Wardrobe http://almostangels.org/movies/Goodnigh.html Goodnight Mister Tom http://www.bbc.co.uk/ww2peopleswar/ BBC People’s War The links to the websites and the contents of the web pages associated with such links specified on this list (hereafter collectively referred to as the ‘Links’) have been checked by Hamilton Trust and to the best of Hamilton Trust’s knowledge, are correct and accurate at the time of publication. Notwithstanding the foregoing or any other terms and conditions on the Hamilton Trust website, you acknowledge that Hamilton Trust has no control over such Links and indeed, the owners of such Links may have removed such Links, changed such Links and/or contents associated with such Links. Therefore, it is your sole responsibility to verify any of the Links which you wish you use. Hamilton Trust excludes all responsibility and liability for any loss or damage arising from the use of any Links. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users. Y4 N Unit 1 – Aut – 3Weeks