Topic
What do you want to do on Christmas?
Reviewing Date 12/18&12/20
Group Name Group Jane
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Janet
In these days, we heard "The Last Christmas" almost every evening in school.
And noticed that more and more stores started to decorate their shop front.
Yeah~ The Christmas is coming!!!
If all of us still alive after The End Of The World(2012/12/21), we need to think about what the thing we will want to do on Christmas.
If you have nice voice, maybe you can sing the choral.
If you are good at decorate, you can help your mom decorated your home.
If you many money, you can donate some to the people who need.
If you have love, then bless to your family and friends.
So, what do you want to do on Christmas?

Jane:
I think my family and I will go out to eat dinner, or maybe I will watch the latest movie
“Life of Pi.” I don’t know, but I am sure that I will have a nice day on that day. Before I sleep, I want to prepare some milk and cookies to Santa. Haha~~ ^^
I think my family and I will go out to eat dinner, or maybe I will watch the latest movie
“Life of Pi.” I don’t know, but I am sure that I will have a nice day on that day. Before I sleep, I want to prepare some milk and cookies for Santa. Haha~~ ^^
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Jenny:
If i really so lucky that i will still alive after 10/21 , i think i will celebrate with my family and best friends. I will go to see movie and play with my friends because i think they are my best property. And then i will have a great dinner with my family for they always see me through while i encounter any difficulty. In my opinion, Christmas is the best time to express your appreciation.
If I am really so lucky that I will still be alive after 12/21, I think I will celebrate with my family and best friends. I will go to see a movie and play with my friends because I think they are the best things I have . And then I will have a great dinner with my family for they always see me through while I encounter any difficulty. In my opinion, Christmas is the best time to express your appreciation.
Be sure you don’t miss things that link statements and try to capitalize your “I” letters.
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Tina:
I want to celebrate Christmas with my family and my best friends. Because I appreciate them saw me through this year. With their accompanist, I am not lonely. Moreover, they

always make me happy. On Christmas day, I will give them some gifts to express my love to them. Anyway, I am so excited that Christmas is coming!!
I want to celebrate Christmas with my family and my best friends. Because I appreciate how they saw me through this year. With their accompaniment , I am not lonely.
Moreover, they always make me happy. On Christmas day, I will give them some gifts to express my love to them. Anyway, I am so excited that Christmas is coming!!
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Linda:
On Christmas day, I will change gifts with my friends, dance in the party, and have a dinner at that day. I think, Christmas day is a day that we thank people who help us in this year. I also write Christmas cards to my friends. Thanks them be with me this year.
I can’t wait to celebrate it in this year!
On Christmas day, I will exchange gifts with my friends, dance in the party, and have a dinner on that day. I think Christmas day is a day that we thank people who help us in this year. I also write Christmas cards to my friends and thank them for being with me this year. I can’t wait to celebrate christmas this year!
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Janet:
''Tiger`s Curse'' is the best book I 've ever read. It mixed some ancient stories of India.
Its style is a little like hunger game. Have many kinds of missions waiting the leading roles to face. But the biggest different is the two male title roles are tigers!!!
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Lisa:
We have a Christmas Present Exchange event in our class, so I'm excited what present will i draw out. On Christmas, lots of people sing Christmas songs like "last Christmas" or" all I want for Christmas is you" and I love the atmosphere that people sing together, it's full of joyfulness.
Also, I'll write some Christmas card to my friends to express my appreciation of the whole year, and eat a good meal with my family. I just can't wait to celebrate Christmas!
We have a Christmas Present Exchange event in our class; so I'm excited t o know what present I draw out. On Christmas, lots of people sing Christmas songs like "last
Christmas" or" all I want for Christmas is you" and I love the atmosphere when people

sing together, it's full of joy.
Also, I'll write some Christmas cards to my friends to express my appreciation of the whole year, and eat a good meal with my family. I just can't wait to celebrate Christmas!
Good.