Title Ancient Greece – The Iliad Author Kate Millins, Buckinghamshire Background The children attend a rural school with a mixed catchment area - children come from both the surrounding villages and a local small town. Most of the previous history teaching had been undertaken using information books as secondary sources of information and I was keen to use challenging text material both as a primary source of historical investigation and as a stimulus for poetry writing. I chose the Iliad rather than the Odyssey as a large proportion of the class were already familiar with the Odyssey and the Iliad seemed to be a good source of information about Greek warfare. The topic of the Ancient Greeks had been started a few weeks previously through work on time-lines, location and geography of Ancient Greece, city-states and democracy. The children had also investigated the Greek gods and their importance in the lives of the ancient Greeks. Year group - class The composition of the class changes during each day – in the mornings (including literacy hour) it is composed of 21 Year 4 children, whilst in the afternoon 10 Year 5 children join the class to make a class of 31 mixed gender and mixed ability children. I chose to do some of the background historical work with the mixed Year groups in the history lesson followed by literacy work with just the Year 4 group. Teaching time Approximately three sessions of about 1 hour (these sessions can be split if wished) Learning Objectives (intended learning outcomes) History to develop an understanding of the weapons and tactics used in Greek warfare to be able to read and understand a challenging text and to be able to extract information from it. Literacy to develop the skills of - extracting information from a narrative poem re-structuring the poem writing poems in different forms, Key Questions 1 History How can we use The Iliad as source material to find out about Greek battles? What equipment did the Greeks use? Can we find any information on their armour? Did they use horses? Literacy What are the features of a narrative poem? Can you use the same vocabulary as Homer to write a descriptive poem or a Haiku? Assessment the children’s knowledge and understanding was assessed from their oral responses in class and the drawings and poetry produced. The poems show the use of new vocabulary, used appropriately. Resources 1. Extracts from the Iliad, chosen mainly for the descriptions of battle scenes that included the types of weaponry used and clothing worn. Six different passages were used so that each group had a different extract. 2. Text 1, which is a description of the confrontation between Menelaus and Paris. Previous Teaching Familiarisation with the story of the Trojan War: I read parts of the book Black Ships Before Troy by Rosemary Sutcliffe to give the children an overview of the main events and characters in the Trojan War. The role of the gods became apparent and this led to lively discussion about how much of this could be true. The children initially found it hard to remember who the different characters were – whether they were Trojans, Greeks or gods. I spent several short sessions using the ‘hot-seat technique’: I wrote the names of gods, Trojans and Greeks on different coloured card and the children picked a card to take on the role of that character whilst the rest of the class questioned them. Teaching activities Reading - developing an understanding of difficult and challenging texts through breaking into the text at a word and phrase level, transforming the texts into a visual form and discussion of interpretations Writing - using the knowledge gained to create own poems that drew upon existing understanding of poetic genres. 2 LESSON 1: Greek Warfare. History Lesson, Year 4 and 5 Episode 1 Discussion of Trojan War leading to introduction of the extracts from the Iliad Focus Scanning poetic texts for words or phrases relating to warfare, vocabulary bank First of all we had a general discussion about the Trojan War and how historians found the information to put into textbooks. The children made suggestions, e.g. digging up remains, and I then introduced the idea of looking at literature from the time. I split the children into groups of 6 with each group having copies of the same extract from the Iliad. Working in mixed ability pairs they then highlighted any words or phrases that they thought referred to equipment or methods of fighting. We then collected all the words and phrases as a vocabulary bank on the board. Episode 2 Visualing the text through transforming it into pictures Focus Representing the information in pictorial form I then asked the children to draw a scene to show what they had found out. I provided the children with dictionaries to help them with defining some of the objects referred to. (We found we had to resort to a very large, adult dictionary for some of the vocabulary.) The children then visualised the scenes and drew labelled pictures to represent the information. Episode 3 Discussion and comparison of interpretations Focus Plenary – pooling of ideas The children shared the finished sketches and we discussed them. They realised that some pairs had more information on their pictures than others and that this related directly to the text they had been given initially. We then referred back to the original problem and the children realised that the materials available to work with limit the accuracy of historical evidence LESSON 2: Writing descriptive poetry based on the Iliad. (Literacy Hour, Year 4) Episode 1 Reading a passage describing the fight between Menelaus and Paris Focus: Building up a vocabulary bank (20 mins) I gave the children a copy of the passage from the Iliad describing the fight between Menelaus and Paris. (See Text Extract). I read it aloud and we discussed the setting, remembering the story of the Trojan War. I explained that this time we were focussing on descriptive words used by Homer. We thought about types of words in sentences and I put up four headings: Nouns, Verbs, Adjectives and Adverbs. Working in pairs the children highlighted nouns in one colour and verbs in another colour. These were added to the lists. Lists were discussed and definitions written by the children at the side. 3 (I gave each pair just one word to define and then we pooled our knowledge in the plenary) Episode 2 Continuation of episode 1 with focus on adverbs and adjectives Focus Vocabulary bank (continued in next Literacy hour) identification of adverbs and adjectives completion of lists addition of a further heading asked for by children of phrases, metaphors and similes definitions found and added. Episode 3 Writing – Using previously assimilated poetic ‘genres’ Focus Individual writing task.(20-30 mins) Using the vocabulary collected, children were asked to write their own descriptive poem on the battle of Troy. Some children wanted to try it as a Haiku straight away (they had been writing haikus the previous week). Learning Outcomes The information found from the texts was successfully displayed as labelled pictures and this was shared amongst the class. The children used a wide variety of unfamiliar vocabulary in their poetry writing and recreated the atmosphere of the battle scene. Reflection / Evaluation This series of lessons were very successful – the children were engaged and involved in all stages. They liked the idea of being detectives and this theme ran through all the stages; investigating historical evidence and also investigating the meanings of unfamiliar vocabulary. They could see the purpose of the tasks. I was pleased with their ability to use the vocabulary to create new poems in the literacy work – their work showed that they could manipulate the language, demonstrating a good understanding of the vocabulary they had acquired. The children were very interested and involved in this work - it could be extended further by: 1. Asking the children to write a description of the battle as told by a Trojan or Greek soldiers. 2. Writing different narrative poems in the style of Homer. 4 TEXT 1 from THE ILIAD Book 3 The Trojan squadrons flanked by officers drew up and sortied, in a din of arms and shouting voices – wave on wave, like cranes in clamorous lines before the face of heaven, beating away from winters gloom and storms, over the streams of Ocean, hoarsely calling, to bring a slaughter on the Pygmy warriors – cranes at dawn descending, beaked in cruel attack. The Achaeans for their part came on in silence, raging under their breath, shoulder to shoulder sworn. (a) Imagine mist the south wind rolls on hills, a blowing bane for shepherds, but for thieves better than nightfall – mist where a man can see a stone’s throw and no more: so dense the dust that clouded up from these advancing hosts as they devoured the plain. (b) And nearer and nearer the front ranks came, till one from the Trojan front detached himself to be the first in battle – Alexandrus, vivid and beautiful, wearing a cowl of leopard skin, a bow hung on his back, a longsword at his hip, with two spears capped in pointed bronze. He shook them and called out to the best men of the Argives to meet him in the melee face to face. Menelaus, watching that figure come with long strides in the clear before the others, Knew him and thrilled with joy. A hungry lion that falls on heavy game – an altered deer or a wild goat – will rend and feed upon it even though hunters and their hounds assail him. (c) So Menelaus thrilled when he beheld Alexandrus before his eyes; he thought I’ll cut him to bits, adulterous dog! – and vaulted down from his car at once with all his gear. (d) But when Alexandrus caught sight of him emerging from the ranks, his heart misgave, and he recoiled on his companions, not to incur the deadly clash. (e) A man who stumbles upon a viper in a mountain glen will jump aside: a trembling takes his knees, pallor his cheeks; he backs and backs away. In the same way Alexandrus paced backward into the Trojan lines and edged among them, dreading the son of Atreus. (f) HOMER 5 EXAMPLES OF PUPILS’ WORK An example of a descriptive poem A TROJAN WAR Spears capped in poisonous bronze A din of arms Deadly shouting Devoured the plains Cruel attack in the night Mist rolling on the hills Advancing warriors Raging under their breath Like a hungry lion that falls on heavy game ALL FALLS SILENCE An example of a Haiku A CHARIOT Golden chariots Moving through the misty ground Pulled by black horses 6