English 393: Technical Writing
University of Maryland, College Park
Fall 2015 Syllabus
EN393 Section _____
Day & Time: Tu, Th _______ am
phone: 301-305-5572
Caleb Kriesberg
Office Hours: T, Wed 1:00 – 1:30 pm by appointment
Bldg. Rm.: __________
ckriesbe@umd.edu
Office: Tawes 1202
Overview and Objectives of the Course:
English 393 is a hands-on workshop in preparing, reviewing, revising, and finalizing documents typical of
the workplace, including letters and resumes, memos, proposals, and both written and oral reports.
Students learn to improve the readability and usefulness of their writing in a variety of professional styles
and formats. Students are graded not only on their ability to produce individual work, but also on their
ability to collaborate in research and writing, as well as in evaluating and improving one another’s work.
This course hopes to advise and coach students how to communicate their technical expertise to a reader
or listener who may not know their topic. All writing assignments acquaint the students with the
importance of persuading or accommodating a particular, varying audience.
Required Text: Mike Markel, Technical Communication, 10th ed. (Boston: Bedford/St. Martin’s Press,
2012); hyperlink http://www.bedfordstmartins.com/techcomm. Later editions may be acceptable.
Recommended Text: I strongly recommend a grammar and style guide such as Diana Hacker The Bedford
Handbook or Hodges’ Harbrace Handbook. (Other possibilities include Little, Brown Compact
Handbook or Maimon and Peritz’s Writer’s Resource.) Most students arrive in their junior and senior
years of college with an inadequate grasp of standard English usage in grammar, spelling, and punctuation.
Although English 393 is not designed to focus on these skills, it is impossible to excel in the course
without them. Refer also to the Writing Center listing below, page 4 of this syllabus.
Sequence of Assignments/Grade Percentage: Brevity is emphasized: most completed assignments
should be one page in length. Assignments will be graded according to the following percentages:
1. Assignments 1A. Résumé, and 1B. Cover letter (or Personal Statement) (15%); 
The resume and the cover letter or personal statement (1A, B) will be due at end of semester, though drafts
will be due earlier.
2. Assignment 2 Memo: Proposal memo and annotated bibliography (10%); 
3. Assignments 3: Claim letter, adjustment letter, other correspondence (some drafts may be due early in
semester) (15%); 
4. Assignment 4 Memo: Progress report (10%); 
5. Major project (25%); 
6. Oral presentation (10%);
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7. Class Participation: Together, the above assignments total 85%; the remaining 15% of the grade is
based on the self-reflective writings, class participation such as memo on oral reports and peer review, and
quizzes. Also note that absences can influence the class participation grade. 
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Assignment Submission Requirements: Assignments are due at the start of class on the date indicated
on the course schedule and assignment sheet. Papers should meet, not exceed, required length. In general,
use 12-point font size, one inch margins, and left-side justification only. Title or cover pages should
follow format in text, such as p. 533, but should include section number; no font larger than 14,
no bold, no italics, no “quotes,” nor underlines except for references to other sources; include date and
student and teacher’s name. Staple the pages. On rare occasions I may accept papers submitted via
email. Keep all of your drafts, as well as in-class work.
Late Papers: Late papers may be lowered one letter grade. No computer or illness excuses (without offcampus doctors’ notes) for late papers will be accepted. Please be aware that, this course encourages
revisions, sometimes after the due date, but there must be an end to collecting revised papers, so be alert to
deadlines for revisions.
Grade Requirements for Passing: Warning Note: You must attempt all of the required papers listed
1.-5., above, to pass the course. You generally may rewrite the graded paper one time, after consulting
with me, to attempt to raise the grade, for example to a C or better. But progress reports (Assignment 4)
and probably one of the correspondence letters cannot be revised for a higher grade. Deadlines for these
revisions will be announced (also see Course Schedule).
Attendance and Class Environment: You should notify me ahead of time if you expect to be absent, or
at least send me a note of explanation after. Students are allowed a maximum of two absences. Each
additional absence may reduce the class participation portion of the grade (each absence counts as a 5%
penalty, up to a maximum of 15% total). Absences due to illness or a death in the family do not count in
this tally, but still need to be accounted for, either via email or by talking to me prior to class. Two
tardinesses of ten minutes or more count as one absence. If you are absent, stay current with the class by
contacting another student about what was covered that day; do not write requesting me to do so. During
class, I expect attentiveness and participation. Turn off all cell-phones and other electronic equipment
before you enter class. Check with me if you take class notes via computer. Students are responsible for all
material covered in class. As this is not a lecture course, your contribution is critical. Listen actively,
share from your experiences, and ask informed questions. Thank you.
Grading Criteria: The letter grades you receive in this course might be considered equivalent to
evaluations received in the workplace, thusly:
An A document is excellent work: it succeeds and receives praise. The audience analysis is insightful, the
topic precise, the organization of the argument is clear and logical. The document contains sufficient
detail, the information is accurate, timely, clear, and comprehensive. Your supervisor would be impressed
and would pass the document along to other supervisors, without revision.
A B document is good work. It might have almost all the virtues of an A document, but one or more of
the elements is flawed. For instance, persistent spelling errors could reduce an A document to a B. Your
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supervisor would appreciate your work but would want you to revise it before passing it along.
A C document indicates work that is merely adequate. It may technically satisfy the requirements of the
assignment, but is significantly flawed. Your supervisor would be disappointed with the document, and
would want someone else to revise it before passing it along. In addition, the supervisor would begin to
doubt your ability to complete similar assignments successfully.
A D document is unsatisfactory. Although some aspects of the document might be well done,
on the whole there are significant problems with conception or execution. Your employer would question
your basic competence and suitability for your position.
An F document is failing work. It is submitted after the deadline, it does not respond to the assignment, it
is extremely difficult to read, or it is unprofessional in appearance or writing quality. Your supervisor may
advise you to update your resume and visit Human Resources.
Self-Reflective Writings: These short writing assignments are designed to gauge your response to issues
arising in class as well as in the everyday professional world. You might reflect on the process of writing,
on experiences in the work place, and the development of your major project. Please keep a record or
copy of this work. I will call for these writings three times during the semester and evaluate them -- ( +,
, or -) -- according to the degree of engagement. These evaluations eventually are included in the
15% class participation score.
Major Project (Assignment 5): Students examine a current problem or need, and after research and
analysis, propose a feasible solution; OR, students prepare a manual on how to make or do something
professionally. Either option must be researched, and should be original and fully documented. Both will
continue the research begun in Assignment 2 (project memo and annotated bibliography) and Assignment
4 (progress report and audience analysis). As you choose your topic, you should consider credibility,
jurisdiction, time-frame, and – especially -- audience.
Oral Presentation: Each student will be called upon to give brief oral presentation (Assignment 6), on the
major project (Assignment 5). You might choose to begin by checking the class’s knowledge of your
topic, and end with a question for the class to discuss. (Later, as part of class participation, each student
will write a memo reporting on one of these oral presentations.)
Professional Writing Program Office: The PWP Office is located in Tawes 1220. Any documents
submitted through the PWP should go in the drop box outside the main PWP entrance. Be sure to put my
name on any document you submit, and let me know you are sending me the work this way. The PWP
website is: http://www.engl-pw.umd.edu/index.htm.
Academic Integrity: The University has approved a Code of Academic Integrity
(http://www.shc.umd.edu/code.html) which prohibits students from cheating on exams, plagiarizing
papers, submitting the same paper for credit in two courses without authorization, buying papers,
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facilitating academic dishonesty, submitting fraudulent documents, and forging signatures. Plagiarism
policy: all quotations taken from other authors, including from the Internet, must be indicated by quotation
marks and referenced. Paraphrasing must be referenced. If you copy more than two consecutive
words of a text source without attribution, it may also be considered plagiarism. If you get your ideas
from someone else, even from a student, you should credit that source.
In this class, as in all other endeavors at the University of Maryland, scholarly integrity is indispensable.
Intentional, egregiously deceptive plagiarism, especially for the research project, would result in automatic
failure for the paper, if not for the course. A plagiarist may also be called before the Student Honor
Council, the Office of Judicial Programs, and expelled from the university. You are expected to do your
own work, and are responsible for reading and understanding the definition of plagiarism. If you have
questions, ask me, or see the Office of Judicial Programs and Student Ethical Development website
(www.jpo.umd.edu/).
The Writing Center: Individual tutoring is available at the Writing Center at no cost for all students.
Open beginning the second week of classes, the center’s hours are Monday-Thursday 9:00 a.m.-4:00 p.m.,
Friday 9:00 a.m.-2:00 p.m.; and Monday, Tuesday, and Wednesday 5:00-8:00 p.m. The location is Tawes
1205; the phone is (301) 405-3785. For appointments and information, log on to
www.english.umd.edu/writingcenter. Remember, this is a tutoring center, not an editing service. It will
help both the tutor and yourself if you clarify your goals on a given writing project at the start of your
session. The center also sponsors The Grammar Hotline, available at (301) 405-3785.
Disabilities: Inform me at the beginning of the semester if you have a verified disability. If you need
course adaptations or accommodations because of a documented disability or if you have emergency
information to share, please contact the Disability Support Service at (301) 314-7682. This will ensure that
you are properly registered for services.
Career Center: Students may wish to make use of the resources of the Career Center on the 3rd floor of
Hornbake Library. The center is designed to help you prepare job, internship, graduate school, or
professional school application materials.
Course Evaluation: Confidential on-line course evaluation will be open during the final two weeks of
classes via the website www.courseevalum.umd.edu. I hope all students will participate. We may also
conduct written course evaluations in class.
Syllabus and schedule adapted, with permission and appreciation, from Prof. Kelly Cresap. Last edited 8/2015
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Fall 2015 EN393 Schedule
Tuesday, September 1 – Thursday, December 10
This course schedule is subject to revision!
Read the day’s text assignments before class. All chapter and page numbers refer to
Mike Markel’s Technical Communication, 10th Edition.
Sept. 1
Introduction to Technical Writing. Student questionnaire, in-class
introductions. Introduction to Major Project (Assignment 5). Introduction
to audience.
Sept. 3
Introduction to Ethos/Logos/Pathos. What are exigence and jurisdiction?
Read Markel Ch. 1 (Intro), Ch. 4 (Collaboration), pp. 405-417 (Writing Paper
Résumés). Brainstorm Major Project (Assignment 5) topics and strategies.
Bring the latest draft of your résumé, with job ad (Assignment 1A), for an inclass peer review. Possible introduction to complaint-adjustment
correspondence. Possible in-class self-reflective writing.
Sept. 8
Read Ch. 5 (Audience and Purpose). Work on Major Project strategies
and development, brainstorming. Read Ch. 6 (Research). Read Ch. 15,
pp. 371-375 and 425-431(Job Application Letters); bring to class cover
letter (Assignment 1B) to go with resume, for peer review. Possibly more
on complaint-adjustment letters. Possible ELMS discussion board post
on Jack London’s “Cruise of the Snark” – “Adventure” due.
Sept. 10
Discuss peer review strategies and methods. Read Ch. 2 (Ethics), More
rhetorical Triangle discussion: audience, context, purpose. Discussion
of Snow’s “Two Cultures” and ELMS discussion board posting due.
Sept. 15
Major Project brainstorming day. Possible in-class quiz on syllabus
and first lessons.
Note: The Fall Career and Internship Fair 2015 is set for Sept. 16 & 17, Wednesday &
Thursday, at the XFINITY / Comcast Center.
Sept. 17
Read Ch. 3 (Planning), Ch. 16 (Proposals), Ch 20 pp. 598-604 (Manuals).
Group info-gathering for Major Project topics. Choose your Major Project
options. Possible review of grammar, punctuation, etc.
Sept. 22
Possible Alternate venue: Individual conferences (possibly no regularly
scheduled class). Conferences would meet in my office, in Tawes 1202. All
students must come with Major Project topic to discuss. It’s best to have
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more than one topic in mind. Also, read Ch. 14 pp 369-390 (Letters, memos,
emails); bring draft of complaint adjustment letter (part of Assignment 3).
Possibly, read Ch. 19 pp. 513-523 (Recommendation Reports) and Ch. 10
(Effective Sentences). Bring draft of Project Report Memo (Assignment 2)
along with list of sources for annotated bibliography.
Sept. 24
Possible Alternate venue (continued): Individual conferences (possibly
no regularly scheduled class). See previous class’s reading assignments.
Sept. 29
Possible Alternate venue: Class may meet at McKeldin 6101 (6th floor)
for a guided Library Research Session led by librarian.
Oct. 1
Bring draft of Assignment 2 (Project Report memo and annotated
bibliography) for peer review. Possible further review of grammar,
punctuation, style, etc.
Oct. 6
Assignment 2 Memo due (Project Report memo and annotated
bibliography). Read Ch. 14 pp 369-390 (Letters, memos, emails).
Oct. 8
Bring copy of Assignment 3 Claim Letter draft for peer review. Review
Markel Chs. 8 and 11 on written and visual forms of persuasion.
Oct. 13
Discuss Audience Analysis writing. Mid-semester in-class reflective writing.
(Keep working, also, on your major project, Assignment 5, this week.)
Oct. 15
Read Ch. 9 (Coherence), Ch. 19, pp. 523-531 (Front and Back Matter).
Catch-up on class work, including Complaint-Adjustment letter.
Oct. 20
Assignment 3 Complaint-Adjustment letter due. Verbal pitch exercise
– possible coaching, individual follow-up.
Oct. 22
Assignment 3 Claim letter due. Bring two copies of Assignment 3 Claim
letter, one for me and one for classmate. Read Ch. 17 (Informational
Reports).
Oct. 27
Bring all materials related to Major Project. Write Assignment 4 (Progress
Report/Audience Analysis) draft in class. Discuss Claim-Adjustment
letter.
Oct. 29
Assignment 3 Claim-adjustment letter due.
Nov. 3
Bring draft of Assignment 4 (Progress Report/Audience Analysis) for
peer review.
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Nov. 5
Read Ch. 20 (Definitions and Descriptions). Bring to class a definition
from a government or company website, for use either as a model or good
or bad definition writing. (This is especially useful for those writing a
manual for Assignment 5.)
Nov. 10
Assignment 4 Memo due (Progress Report/Audience Analysis). Read
Ch. 7 (Organizing Information). Bring a draft of two to three pages from
the introduction, or at least your table of contents, of your Major Project for
peer review.
Nov. 12
Bring a revised draft of at least three pages from the middle section of
your Major Project for peer review. Introduction to Oral Presentations.
Possible viewing of online oral presentations.
Nov. 17
Prepare for, plan oral presentations: discuss strategies for writing (as well
as receiving) a performance review. Vocal coaching, troubleshooting, and
viewing of online oral presentations. Read Ch. 21 (Oral Presentations).
Nov. 19
How to write a memo about an oral presentation. Begin Oral
Presentations (Assignment 6)
Nov. 24
Oral Presentations and/or more discussion, feedback on Major Project.
NO CLASS THURSDAY NOVEMBER 26 – THANKSGIVING BREAK
Dec. 1
Assignment 5 due (Major Project). Oral Presentations.
Dec. 3
Oral Presentations (continued). Gather resume and cover letter material.
Dec. 8
Assignment 1A, 1B due: Résumé and cover letter or personal
statement. Oral Presentations. Last (third) reflective writing, in-class.
Dec. 10
Complete Oral Presentations. Memo on oral presentation due. Course
wrap-up and evaluation.
(Last edited 8/2015. Adapted, with permission and my appreciation, from syllabus and schedule of
colleague Dr. Kelly Cresap with additional input from colleague Pam Orel)
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