Collaborative Research Paper (9th grade English) Grading Rubric Scales 4 10 3.5 9 3 8 2.5 7 2 6 1.5 5 1 4 .5 3 Name: ____________________________________ ______ 50 points Composing Written Expression Usage & Mechanics MLA In-text Citations MLA Works Cited Page * Generally unified, all of the parts contribute to a sharply focused central idea that is elaborated with key examples, illustrations, & reasons * Transitions logically connect the whole essay within paragraphs makes for an easy flowing assignment * Strong organizational plan is apparent. *Minor organizational lapses do not detract from meaning. * Consistent use of point of view * Sources work together effectively to present all sides of the topic * Clearly focused, central idea supported with key examples, illustrations, reasons, etc. * Appropriate transitions connect throughout the essay * Organizational plan is apparent. Some organizational lapses do not detract from meaning * Consistent point of view with some lapses into use of 2nd person point of view * An attempt is made to weave together all source information to present all sides of the topic. * Purposefully crafted message that causes reader to remember it * Highly specific word choice and information creates tone and enhances voice * Varied sentence structure creates rhythm and flow *Writing contains complete sentences with little to no errors *Uses capitalization and punctuation correctly *Uses comma rules effectively to create sentence variety while avoiding run-ons and fragments * Uses semi-colons effectively to create sentence variety while avoiding run-ons and fragments *In-text citations are used throughout the paper with correct formatting *Citations are supported with elaboration or explanation * Citations provide relevant, useful information that supports the thesis of the paper *Contains all sources cited in the paper * Sources are alphabetized * Citations properly follow MLA rules *Variety of sources lead to a welldeveloped, detailed paper *Evidence of the student’s evaluation of quality sources can be seen in the types of sources selected (ie. “.gov” and “.edu” websites, databases, etc) * Doesn’t contain any extra information * Is labeled as the Works Cited page * On the whole, specific word choice and information cause message to be clear * Occasional vivid, purposeful language * Varied sentence structure adds to writer’s message in some places * While the writing may contain some errors in construction, they do not detract from meaning or understanding * Writer makes minor errors with capitalization and punctuation * Uses commas and semicolons with some effectiveness, but creates minor errors with run-ons and fragments *In-text citations are used throughout most of the paper with minor errors in correct formatting * Citations are supported in most places with elaboration or an explanation * Citations mostly provide useful information, though some restate basic information and could have been paraphrased instead * Contains all sources cited in the paper * Sources are alphabetized * Citations attempt to follow MLA rules * Some sources used show evidence of the student’s evaluation of the quality of the source * Doesn’t contain any extra information * Is labeled as the Works Cited page * Student provides some information and reasoning that suggest little comprehension or connection with the topic * Student has ideas and has attempted to support them with evidence from sources, but relies heavily on opinion or speculation * Inconsistent point of view throughout paper * Source information is present, but ideas are disjointed or simply listed; lacks a cohesive connection between all parts of the research * Weak use of words cause the message to drift and lack clarity * Vague words or general statements flatten tone and voice * Some sentence variation, but also awkward construction which may make the assignment difficult to read * Sentence construction errors detract from the writer’s message * Capitalization and punctuation errors make content very difficult to comprehend * Message is jumbled and disjointed because of major grammatical errors * Major errors with commas and semi-colons *Contains some of the sources used in the paper but is missing others; lists items not cited in the paper at all. * Sources are listed in random order * Citations have major issues with MLA formatting and are missing key pieces of information * Contains irrelevant information or annotations * Shows little evidence of an evaluation of quality sources * Student provides some information and reasoning but little evidence of original thinking * Student has ideas but has not attempted to support them with evidence from the sources *Student can describe the task but has not begun to attempt an individual response and is still working to decipher the immediate significance of the information * Redundant word choice makes the essay dull and lacking in “voice” * Feels repetitive or formulaic * Major awkward sentence construction throughout * General, vague statements throughout leave the response feeling like nothing is really ‘said’ only restated or summarized repeatedly * Major errors in basic grammar make the paper nearly impossible to comprehend * Run-ons and fragments detract from the message of the response and make it hard to comprehend *In-text citations are minimally used and show a lack of quality sources *Citations don’t follow MLA standards in most places *Citations are dropped into the paper in most instances and lack elaboration or explanation to connect them to the thesis or topic sentence *Huge citations are used in place of quality analysis and evidence of original thought *There are no in-text citations in the paper *Most of the material appears to be cut/pasted from original sources without any attempts at crediting sources. * Contains few sources or is incomplete or missing * Sources are listed in random order with no regard for the MLA citations rules for different types of sources * Contains irrelevant or incorrect information * Shows no evidence of an evaluation of quality sources Collaborative Research Paper (9th grade English) Grading Rubric Name: ____________________________________ ______ 50 points