Strategic Instruction Model™ University of Kansas Center for Research on Learning Sentence Writing Memory Devices and Sentence Formulas Please review the prerequisite information for professional development sessions in the SIM™ Paragraph Writing Strategy noted below: The precursors to the Paragraph Writing Strategy training are the Sentence Writing Strategies (“Fundamentals in the Sentence Writing Strategy” and “Proficiency in the Sentence Writing Strategy”). These provide a strategies which are recalled by mnemonic devices to help students construct sentences. In addition, sentence formulas are taught to students so they have a structure in which to put the words/statements they want to use in order to effectively express themselves in writing. Please familiarize yourself with the information contained in this document, so that you can be adequately prepared for the Paragraph Writing Strategy professional development sessions: The Strategy for Sentence Writing, known as “PENS”, is as follows: P ick a formula (see sentence formulas below) E xplore words to fit the formula. (think about what you need to write) N ote the words (write the words down following the formula) S earch and check….. The Search and Check Step consists of these steps to assure that a complete and accurate sentence was written: Search: (a complete sentence must have both a subject and a verb/predicate) Look for the action or state-of-being word(s) to find the verb(s). Example: Kevin ran track after school. (verb: ran) Tiffany was sick today. (verb: is) Ask yourself "Who or What (fill in the verb) " to find the subject(s). Example: “Who or what ran?” (Kevin) “Who or what is?” (Tiffany) Check: (to be correct, make sure the sentence has…) Capital letters (at the beginning of the sentence) End punctuation (at the end of the sentence) Makes sense (read it to yourself—does is make sense?) SENTENCE WRITING FORMULAS: During SIM™ Sentence Writing Strategy Training, the following parts of sentences are taught and students practice identifying them in sentences before they begin to write their own: SIMPLE SENTENCE A sentence that has one independent clause INDEPENDENT CLAUSE A group of words that 1. makes a complete statement 2. has a subject and a verb SUBJECT The subject is the person place thing quality idea that the sentence is about. VERB A verb** is a word that shows the state of being or action of the subject of the sentence. **in addition to action verbs all state of being, linking, and helping verbs are taught INFINITIVES Infinitive • usually made up of two words • made up of “to” plus a verb: Jessica likes (to + verb) to eat pizza. Cross out all Infinitives!! They are NOT verbs! PREPOSITIONS Prepositional Phrase: A group of words that shows place or time (where or when an action takes place) and contains a preposition word plus a noun. Examples: S V I P Jane likes to go (to the camp). S V P My sister eats (before noon). S V The cat sits Adjective P (behind the door). A word that describes a noun Example: That whining baby is getting on my frazzled nerves! Main Subject Example: The one word that best tells what the sentence is about My poor old dog panted heavily after out morning run. (dog is the Main Subject) Complete Subject Example: Helping Verbs Example: Complete Verb Example: Adverbs Example: All the words that describe the main subject My poor old dog panted heavily after out morning run. (My poor old dog is the Complete Subject) Words that help the main verb show the action She should have eaten all of her vegetables. (should have are the helping verbs) All the words that describe the main verb She should have eaten all of her vegetables. (should have eaten is the complete verb) Words that add information about the action of the subject of the sentence. They show: when, where, how, to what extent (how often, how much) the action takes place The children shouted loudly as they waved to the passing cars. (loudly is the adverb describing waved) SENTENCE WRITING FORMULAS Below are the formulas for writing different types of sentences followed by an example. Note that 4 different types of sentences are taught, each of which have several different formulas: SIMPLE SENTENCES: SV: Simple Subject, Simple Verb The monkey hangs by his tail. SVV: Compound Subject, Simple Verb The plane and the helicopter flew over the stadium. My brother and his friend camped out in our backyard. SVV: Simple Subject, Compound Verb Lightning struck and burned our house beyond repair. SSVV: Compound Subject, Compound Verb The man and boy ate hot dogs and watched the game on TV. COMPOUND SENTENCES: A compound sentence has two or more independent clauses. A coordinating conjunction is a word that is used with a comma to join two independent clauses. Coordinating Conjunctions: for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so Compound Sentence Formulas: I , c I formula: I = Independent clause, comma, c = coordinating conjunction, (2nd) Independent clause Example: Kevin did not want to hurt Amy's feelings , so he said nothing about her mistake. I ; I formula: I = Independent clause, semicolon, (2nd) Independent clause Example: There is no time to go back to the house now; the plane leaves in one hour! Common Conjunctive Adverbs used in which independent clauses are joined with a semicolon: besides however because meanwhile furthermore otherwise similarly then therefore Example: The gray horse galloped across the glistening field; meanwhile, the sun slowly sank below the tree-lined horizon. COMPLEX SENTENCES: A complex sentence has one independent clause and one or more dependent clauses. A dependent clause is a group of words with a subject and verb that cannot stand alone. Example: I like Sally because she is funny. (because is a subordinating conjunction) Note: Subordinating conjunctions are words that show the relationship of the dependent clause to the independent clause. Other examples of subordinating conjunctions: as if as long as as soon as as though because before in order that just as like once provided rather than Complex Sentence Formulas: DI Dependent Clause First (comma needed) Example: When I get to Phoenix, you will be sleeping. ID Independent Clause First (comma not needed) Example: You will be sleeping when I get to Phoenix. COMPOUND-COMPLEX SENTENCES: though unless until when whenever while A compound-complex sentence has two or more independent clauses and at least one dependent clause. Compound-Complex Sentence Formulas: Dependent Clause First: D, I, c I Example: When you are ready, I will call the store, and we can talk to Tim. D, I; I Example: Before the trick-or-treaters came, Jill made candied apples; they were delicious. Dependent Clause Second: I D, c I Example: Jean had a headache after the party was over, so Paul cleaned up the house. ID;I Example: Jennifer calls Chris whenever she feels sad; he cheers her up. Dependent Clause Third: I, c I D Example: Jean had a headache, so Paul cleaned up the house after the party was over I;ID Example: The doctors were busy with the serious cases; the slightly wounded soldier quietly waited while they worked. Summary of Sentence Writing Formulas SIMPLE: COMPOUND: SV SSV SVV SSVV I,CI I;I COMPLEX: COMPOUND-COMPLEX: D, I ID D,I,cI ID,cI I, c I D ID;I I, c I D I;ID