Academic Writing and Editing Checklist Professor Caroline Strange Writing – start by planning the overall structure. Then write and refine later. Keep your writing simple – never use a long word/sentence when a short one will do. Structure Writing a sentence Writing a paragraph What constitutes a section / part of a chapter? The complete chapter? How long? Order of the sentence. Does the sentence convey what you intended? Have you succumbed to journalistic writing, overused clichés? Have you used topic, body wrap? Badley (2009) How long? How should you start the paragraph? What about the end of the paragraph? Are you making assumptions / drawing conclusions without justifying them? Is there some link between the sentences in your paragraph? How long? Is there a theme? How will you make the section a cohesive piece of writing? How will the reader know when they have reached the end of the section? Start of the chapter: is it clear to the reader what to expect in the chapter? Have you structured the chapter so that the reader’s journey through the chapter has plenty of signposts? Have you abandoned the reader in a maze of text or run so fast through your ideas that the reader arrives ‘breathless’? The complete thesis? Appendices In reading the thesis is the reader always clear where they are in the overall scheme of things? The contents page – can you gain an overview of the thesis from your chapter / parts headings? Have you provided sufficient signposts? Does the abstract truly reflect your thesis? Reading the abstract and conclusions - do they make a ‘matched pair’? Do your conclusions answer your research question(s)? Have you observed the required format for the thesis? - check the Research Degrees Regulations. Is the thesis the correct length? You have 40,000 – 80,000 words: is the balance of words between the chapters/parts correct? The thesis should focus on your research placed in the context of research in this area: does your ‘literature survey’ use too many words? Do you need lists of abbreviations / diagrams / figures/ a glossary? Do I need them? Are they referenced in the main text? Editing Edit in stages Check the structure of your thesis, then chapter… Read your writing afresh Is the structure logical? In supporting your argument have you used sufficient evidence? Appropriately referenced? Draws upon your research: data to support – experimental data / simulation to support theory developed, triangulation of data from different approaches/sources. Is it clear why you have used the approach you have adopted? Are you consistent in your use of tenses? Mixing present and past tenses? Is your referencing consistent and accurate? Are you using an appropriate referencing system for your subject area? Check grammar, punctuation, hyphenated words? Apostrophes – have you used them correctly? Overuse of abbreviations? All abbreviations given in full? Writing of numbers? Numbers up to nine should be written out in full, e.g. nine, except where decimals are involved, e.g. 9.7 What does it convey? Does the text support your conclusions? Is the text in the relevant section? Some helpful sources of information Plain English websites include: http://www.askoxford.com/betterwriting/plainenglish/?view=uk http://www.plainenglish.co.uk Our workshop booklet for Academic Writing – Stage 2B. This includes many writing tips. Download it from the Research Training web page: http://web.anglia.ac.uk/anet/rdcs/research/training.phtml#stage2b Badley, G (2009) Editing for academics. http://web.anglia.ac.uk/anet/rdcs/research/info/Editing%20for%20academics.pdf For advice on punctuation: Truss, L (2003) Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation. London: Profile Books October 2009