English 427W: Topics in Romantic Literature Reading the Literary Manuscripts of the Romantics Instructor: M. Levy Summer 2015 Instructor: Michelle Levy Meeting Time: HC 2235 E-mail: mnl@sfu.ca Time: M 9:30 am – 1:20 pm Telephone: 778-782-5393 Office Hours: M 1:30-2:30 pm Office: HC 2156 and by appointment The recent publication of many major Romantic-era literary manuscripts in digital form has greatly expanded the possibilities for engagement with archival materials (materials that are typically held in special collections, in the US and the UK, and accessible only to senior experts in the field). In this course, we will closely read and interpret a range of these digital manuscripts to ask a series of questions about them, including: What can we learn -- about literary history, authorship, and the texts themselves -- by studying original manuscripts? How does reading a text in its original manuscript form (via a digital copy) differ from reading a printed text? How successfully do digital editions represent the original manuscripts? Our readings will focus on the manuscripts of Jane Austen, Lord Byron, John Keats, Mary Shelley, and Dorothy Wordsworth. Some of the specific questions we will ask are: How (and why) did Jane Austen have to modify her style and subject matter to get her fiction into print? What strategies did Byron use to negotiate the problems of censorship, as his texts moved from manuscript to print? Did Percy Shelley improve or diminish Mary Shelley’s novel, Frankenstein, with his extensive edits? Why are there so few corrections to Keats’s poetic manuscripts? Why did Dorothy Wordsworth publish so little of her writing during her lifetime? In addition to focusing on these authors, we will also explore the manuscript writings of many other more obscure or unknown authors of the period. We will also study theories of textual editing and digital remediation. For their final project, students can choose between creating an annotated and contextualized digital or print “edition” of a manuscript text, we read in class, or a research essay. REQUIRED TEXTS: Jane Austen, Manuscript Works (Broadview) 9781554810581 Lord Byron, Byron’s Poetry and Prose (Norton) 9780393925609 John Keats, Keats’s Poetry and Prose (Norton) 9780393924916 Mary Shelley, The Original Frankenstein (Vintage) 9780307474421 Dorothy Wordsworth, Dorothy Wordsworth (Longman) 9780321277756 Many other course readings will be available online via the SFU library website and canvas; students must have web access to obtain these materials. RECOMMENDED TEXTS: Diane Hacker, A Canadian Writer’s Reference (3rd) M.H. Abrams, Glossary of Literary Terms COURSE REQUIREMENTS: 15% Participation 15% Presentation #1 (secondary material on an author we are reading that week) [throughout term] 10% Presentation #2 (Final Project Presentations & Peer Review) [July 27] 15% Essay (5-7 pages; can be related to one of your presentations; can be used in your final project) [due June 22] 15% Final Project Proposal (3-5 pages) and an Annotated Bibliography (min. 10-12 sources) [due July 13] 30% Final Digital Editorial Project/Print Editorial Project/Research Paper [due August 10] Reading Schedule [week 1] May 11: Dorothy Wordsworth’s Journals Reading: · Dorothy Wordsworth, Grasmere Journals (Longman), 25-88 · Marta Werner, “‘Reportless Places': Facing the Modern Manuscript’” After reading Dorothy’s journals in the Longman, everyone (during class) will be given one entry from the original manuscript of the Grasmere Journal (found here). Working in pairs, you will compare the entries in manuscript with the edited version we read, to answer the following questions: (1) what are the differences between the manuscript and print versions?; (2) what has been omitted, how are omissions noted, and why do you think these omissions have been made?; (3) what are the differences you experience while reading the two versions?; (4) if you were editing the manuscript, how would you go about it, and why? would you make different choices than what you find in the Longman? May 18: Victoria Day, class cancelled [week 2] May 25: Dorothy Wordsworth’s Journals and William Wordsworth’s Poems; Dorothy’s Poetry Reading: · Grasmere Journal, Woof, 1-137 · Read 4-5 poems by Dorothy (Longman 177-221) · Anna Chen, In One's Own Hand: Seeing Manuscripts in a Digital Age Presentations: #1: Lucy Newlyn, “Dorothy Wordsworth’s Experimental Style” #2: Mary Ellen Bellanca, “After-Life-Writing: Dorothy Wordsworth's Journals in the Memoirs of William Wordsworth” Last week, I will have assigned you to one of the following journal entries (by Dorothy) and paired to a poem (by William). Here are the questions to consider when comparing D’s journal to W’s poem: (1) How would you describe the textual relationship between the two texts? How are they different/similar? (2) What does/might the textual relationship between the two tell us about the personal/emotional relationship between brother and sister? (3) In what other ways, in terms of subject matter/style, are brother and sister aligned, or not? (4) Is one clearly the product of manuscript/manuscript culture, the other of print/print culture, and if so, why? DW’s Journal (all references to Pamela Woof’s edition) WW’s poems (all references to Poems in Two Volumes (1815)) 1 Jan. 25, 1798 (I: 4) “A Night Piece” (1815) 2 April 20, 1798 (I: 17) “The Thorn”(1798) 3 June 4, 1800 (I: 37); May 28, 1802 (I: 124) “Green Linnet” (1803; 1807) 4 June 10, 1800 (I: 38-40) “Beggars” (March 13, 1802); “Sequel to the Foregoing” (composed in 1817; sixth stanza added in 1827); “To a Butterfly” (March 1802) 5 Oct. 3, 1800 (I: 50-51) “Resolution and Independence” (4 May 1802 – July 4, 1802, written; DW copying May 8-9, 1802; 1807) 6 Oct 11, 1800 (I: 52-3) “Michael” (Oct-Nov, 1800; finished 9 Dec. 1800) 7 Feb. 16, 1802 (I: 93) “Alice Fell” (12-13 March 1802) 8 April 15, 16, 21, 1802 (I: 105-111) “To the Lesser Celadine” (April 30, 1802) 9 April 15, 1802 (I: 105107) “I wandered lonely as a cloud” [week 3] June 1: Jane Austen’s Juvenilia Reading: · Jane Austen, Juvenilia (Broadview), 45-204 · Paul Eggert, “Apparatus, text, interface: how to read a printed critical edition” (PDF) Presentations: #3 [two presenters]: Peter Sabor, Juvenilia (Cambridge) #4: Margaret Ann Doody, The Short Fiction The week prior, everyone will be assigned one text, about which you are to be the designated expert. There are two sets of questions to answer. For the first, you will simply rely on the Broadview printed text. As we have all read these texts, please focus your responses for discussion on the following questions: (1) These stories are funny – largely because they parody existing fictional conventions. Even if you aren’t steeped in the 18th c. fiction Austen was reading, find at least two comical elements from the stories to discuss; (2) What might make these stories more suitable for circulation within a family, as opposed to public circulation via print? Specific examples are helpful. (3) What are some of the serious elements in this fiction? How does Austen speak to the predicament of women in her society; or issues of class, or politics, in these works? Please read your one work in manuscript (http://www.janeausten.ac.uk/index.html). Then prepare responses for the following questions: (1) what can we learn about the text and its social function by examining the manuscript version (that we do not learn reading the print version)? (2) how are changes/cancellations dealt with in the print version? In the digital version? (3) how is the reading experience different in print and on screen? (4) which version of the text do you prefer to read, and why? Please also consider the general questions, above, in relation to your experience of reading the manuscript. Assignments: Frederic and Elfrida; Jack and Alice; Edgar and Emma; Henry and Eliza; Mr Harley; Sir William Montague; Mr Clifford; The beautifull Cassandra; Amelia Webster; The Visit; The Mystery; the Three Sisters; Love and Friendship; Lesley Castle; The History of England; Collection of Letters; The First Act of a Comedy; Evelyn; Kitty, or the Bower. [week 4] June 8: Jane Austen and Revision Reading: · Jane Austen, Sanditon (205-268); “Plan of a Novel”; “Opinions on Mansfield Park and Emma”; and Persuasion · Cancelled Persuasion chapters on http://www.janeausten.ac.uk/index.html and the substituted chapters (from Chapter 10 to the end), here: https://archive.org/details/northangerabbey10austgoog. · M. Levy, “Austen’s Manuscripts and the Publicity of Print” Presentations: #5: B.C. Southam, Jane Austen's literary manuscripts: a study of the novelist's development through the surviving papers #6: K. Sutherland, Jane Austen’s Textual Lives: From Aeschylus to Bollywood #7: L. Bree and J. Todd, Later Manuscripts (Cambridge Edition of the Works of Jane Austen) This class, we are dealing with our first drafts (as opposed to fair copies) – Persuasion and Sanditon – which are the only texts of Austen’s we have in both manuscript and print forms. Please carefully study the revisions to the manuscript, and be prepared to discuss the nature and significance of the revisions. What do we learn about Austen’s writing process from examining these chapters? What effect do the revisions have on the meaning of the story? We will also be experimenting with Juxta, please click this link to see comparisons between the two Persuasion texts: http://www.juxtacommons.org/shares/ZlBzIv Assignments: Chapter I Persuasion (1-17) Chapter II Persuasion (18-34) Sanditon (Chapter 1, b1-1-16) Sanditon (Chapter 2, b1-16-25) Sanditon (Chapter 3, b1-25-b2-1) Sanditon (Chapter 4, b2-1 -9) Sanditon (Chapter 5, b2-9 -17) Sanditon (Chapter 6, b2-17 - 26) Sanditon (Chapter 7, b2-26 - 40) [week 5] June 15: Lord Byron, in Manuscript Reading: · Lord Byron, “When We Two Parted”; “Fare Thee Well!”; “Epistle to Augusta” (241245); “A Sketch from Private Life”; “To the Po” (373); Childe Harold’s Pilgrimage, Canto III (196-229) [from Norton] and in manuscript · Jerome McGann, “The Socialization of Texts” Presentations: #8: Andrew Stauffer, “The Career of Byron’s ‘To the Po’” #9: J. McGann, Fiery dust: Byron's poetic development [week 6] June 22: Lord Byron’s Don Juan Essay #1 Due Reading: · Lord Byron, “Dedication” to Don Juan; Canto I, Don Juan (Norton, 375-426) · William St. Clair, “Preparatory schools for the brothel and the gallows” (PDF) Presentations: #10: Paul Magnuson, “The Dedication of Don Juan” (PDF) #11: Gary Dyer, “Thieves, Boxers, Sodomites, Poets: Being Flash to Byron's Don Juan” [week 7] June 29: Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein Reading: · Mary Shelley, Frankenstein (1818) · Robinson, “The Original Frankenstein” · http://shelleygodwinarchive.org/ · Charles Robinson, “Editing and Contextualizing the Frankenstein notebooks” Presentations: #12 [pair]: Charles Robinson, The Frankenstein Notebooks #13: Anne Mellor, “Choosing a Text of Frankenstein to Teach” (PDF) Background: Mary Shelley wrote a draft of Frankenstein, which survives. This draft is the basis for Robinson’s text in The Original Frankenstein (and for some of the online MSS in the Shelley-Godwin Archive). Robinson, in The Original Frankenstein, includes two versions of the draft: the first includes Percy’s revisions in italics. It also supplies missing sections of the draft with chapters from the printed 1818 edition; the second version removes Percy’s revisions – taking us back (as far as possible) to Mary’s draft before Percy intervened. Mary Shelley published a first edition of the novel (incorporating Percy’s revisions) in 1818 and a subsequent, heavily revised edition in 1831. For this class, we will be mostly exploring the draft version and the 1818 print version. The week prior, everyone will be assigned, in pairs, to work on a chapter of Frankenstein from the site http://shelleygodwinarchive.org/. Please read the assigned chapter in manuscript (and the transcriptions) and compare to the printed version of the novel, in this edition: Mary Shelley, Frankenstein (1818). Focus your analysis on the following questions: (1) what are the major omissions and additions in the chapter, and what is their significance? (2) Are Percy Shelley’s additions/corrections retained in the printed edition, and, if so, what is their effect of the meaning? (3) Does Mary Shelley make any significant changes between manuscript and print, and if so, why? Assignments: (Vol. 1, Chapter 1) (Vol. 1, Chapter 4) (Vol. 1, Chapter 7A) (Vol. 1, Chapter 12) (Vol. 2, Chapter 2) (Vol. 2, Chapter 7) (Vol. 2, Chapter 11) (Vol. 2, Chapter 17) (Vol. 3, Chapter 6) [week 8] July 6: Special Guest Lecturers: Ashley Morford (U of Toronto) and Lindsey Seatter (U of Victoria). Reading: · Mary Shelley, Frankenstein (1831) · Peter Shillingsburg, “Manuscript, book, and text in the twenty-first century” PDF Presentations: #14: The Annotated Frankenstein #15: Julie Carlson, England's first family of writers: Mary Wollstonecraft, William Godwin, Mary Shelley [week 9] July 13: John Keats’ Poems in Manuscript Final Paper/project proposal and Annotated bibliography due Reading: · John Keats, “On first looking into Chapman’s Homer” (54); "On Seeing the Elgin Marbles" (73); “Ode to a Nightingale” (456); "Ode on Melancholy" (473); "Ode to Psyche" (463); "On Sitting Down to Read King Lear Once Again" (114); “Ode on Indolence: (333); “La Belle Dame sans Merci: A Ballad" (338); "Ode on Indolence"; "To Autumn" (472); "Ode on a Grecian Urn" (460) [all from the Norton] · Jack Stillinger, “Fifty-nine ways to Read “Ode on a Grecian Urn” · Jack Stillinger, “The Text of Keats's "Ode on Indolence” Presentations: #16: Jack Stillinger, Multiple Authorship and the Myth of Solitary Genius #17: Stephen Hebron, John Keats: A Poet and his Manuscripts The week prior, everyone will be assigned one poem to read in manuscript(s) available here: http://oasis.lib.harvard.edu//oasis/deliver/deepLink?_collection=oasis&uniqueId= hou00062. You can find the poems simply by searching this page by title. Please identify the single most important change between MS and print version in each of the poems you have been assigned. Those working on "Ode on a Grecian Urn" also please consider the differences between the two print versions, discussed in this essay: http://www.rc.umd.edu/praxis/grecianurn/contributorsessays/grecianurnwolfson .html [week 10] July 20: Reading Keats’ letters Reading: · All letters in the Norton and “The Eve of St. Agnes” · Susan Wolfson, “Keats the Letter-Writer: Epistolary Poetics” PDF Presentations: #18: Nicholas Roe, John Keats: A New Life We will finish our readings by returning to another “manuscript” genre, the letter (like the journal, where we began). [week 11] July 27: Final project presentations & Peer Review August 3rd: August long weekend -- no class [ongoing peer review] August 10th: Class Cancelled -- Final projects due via email