The Giver Standard RL8.7: Analyze the extent to which a filmed or live production of a story or drama stays faithful to or departs from the text or script, evaluating the choices made by the director or actors. Assignment Overview: Write a 5 paragraph essay that argues which version of The Giver presents a more powerful or relevant warning about the future. The claim must answer the following question: Consider the book and film versions of The Giver: Which of the two formats explores a warning about the future in a more relevant or powerful way? Parts of the Assignment: Evidence chart: Watch the film version and gather evidence that compares major themes or plot events against equivalent elements from the text version (4 days). Outline: Organize claim, reasons with supporting evidence, and conclusion into an introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion (1 day). Type Argument Essay: Draft and revise argument essay based on outline. Sequence: 1. Evidence chart and film viewing: January 5-8 (4 days). 2. Outline: January 9 (1 day/ weekend as homework if needed) 3. Draft Argument Essay: January 12-14, & 15 (3 days/ homework as needed) _______________________________________________________________ Reminders Signal Phrases (in lieu of citations): Because this essay addresses only two works, the required citations for evidence will be a signal phrase. When a piece of evidence is put forth, it must be made abundantly clear whether it came from the book or the film. Formatting: This essay must be typed using MLA formatting. Basic elements include: Heading Running header with page number Centered title (no bold, underline, font size change, etc) Times New Roman font Size 12, double-spaced text For visual examples, refer to pages 35-38 in the student agenda. This packet includes: Rubric Outline Evidence chart DUE: January 15, at the end of class Argument Writing Rubric Grade 8 Standards: Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence (CCSS.W.1, Common Core State Standards for ELA, p. 42); Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization and style are appropriate to task purpose, and audience (CCSS.W.4, Common Core State Standards for ELA, p. 43). Argument Advanced 6 90-100 Claim is clearly stated and distinguished from alternate or opposing claims Claim is purposefully focused and consistent Complex claim is well-developed Claim, reasons, and evidence are organized into paragraphs: Skillful and varied use of transitions Logical progression of ideas from beginning to end Purposeful introduction and conclusion Strong connections among ideas Proficient 5 70-89 Claim is clearly stated and distinguished from alternate or opposing claims Claim is focused and consistent Basic 4 60-69 Claim is sometimes clear, focused or consistent Below Basic 3 50-59 Claim is unclear, unfocused , inconsistent or missing Claim, reasons, and evidence are organized into paragraphs: Appropriate use of transitions with some variety Adequate progression of ideas from beginning to end Evident introduction and conclusion Adequate connections among ideas Claim, reasons, and evidence are inconsistently organized into paragraphs: Some use of transitions Inadequate progression of ideas from beginning to end Ineffective introduction and conclusion Weak connections among ideas Claim, reasons, and evidence are inconsistently organized into paragraphs: Little or no use of transitions Confusing progression of ideas Missing introduction and/or conclusion No connections among ideas Supporting Reasons: The claim is developed and supported with logical reasoning Provides comprehensive support for the claim through the use of three distinct and powerful reasons The reasons demonstrate a thorough understanding of the topic or text and its message for the audience Provides adequate support for the claim through the use of three clear reasons The reasons demonstrate an adequate understanding of the topic or text and its message for the audience Evidence and Elaboration: Presents 3 pieces of well-chosen evidence (details from the book/movie) for most reasons Skillfully integrates evidence with correct signal phrases Skillfully analyzes and draws strong conclusions from evidence with elaboration Skillfully contrasts the choices made in each text Presents 2 pieces of well-chosen evidence (details from the book/movie) for each reason Integrates evidence from sources with generally correct signal phrases Analyzes and draws logical conclusions from evidence Adequately contrasts the choices made in each text Provides inadequate support for the claim—there may be less than three reasons or the reasons may be too similar to separate The reasons demonstrate an inadequate understanding of the topic or text and its message for the audience Uses some irrelevant, repetitive, or inadequate evidence (details from the book/movie) Some attempt to correctly use signal phrases Inconsistently analyzes evidence Conclusions drawn are sometimes not logical Inadequately contrasts the choices made in each text Uses precise, academic language Use of topic-specific vocabulary is clearly appropriate for the audience and purpose Establishes and consistently maintains a formal/appropriate style Uses a mix of precise with more general language Use of topic-specific vocabulary is generally appropriate for the audience and purpose Establishes and generally maintains a formal/appropriate style Uses simplistic language Inconsistent use of topic-specific vocabulary Lacks a consistent formal/appropriate style Minimal errors/patterns of error in usage, sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and format Skillful use of sentence structure enhances meaning Minimal errors/patterns of error in usage, sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and format Ideas/Purpose: The argument is focused and clearly states the claim(s). Organization: The writing has a clear and effective organizational structure creating unity and completeness. The reasons are developed and supported with relevant evidence, and the evidence is elaborated to prove its relevance. Language and Vocabulary: The writing uses precise and topicspecific language and maintains a formal/appropria te style. Conventions: The writing demonstrates a command of conventions and assigned format. Frequent errors/patterns of error in usage, sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and format Provides little or no support for the claim—too few reasons given or the reasons given may not prove the claim The reasons demonstrate little understanding of the topic or text and its message for the audience Frequently uses irrelevant, repetitive, or inadequate evidence (details from the book/movie) Does not consistently use signal phrases to introduce evidence Fails to analyze evidence Conclusions drawn are not logical or are missing Little attempt to contrast the choices made in each text Uses limited or vague language Lacks topic-specific vocabulary Lack of formal/appropriate style shows little sense of audience and purposes Severe errors/patterns of error in usage, sentence structure, punctuation, capitalization, spelling, and format interfere with understanding Total:________ / 36 Name:___________________Period:________ The Giver Argument Essay Outline Paragraph 1: Introduction Start with a hook Answer the question in the format of a claim: Consider the book and film versions of The Giver: which of the two formats presented the more powerful or relevant warning about the future? Idea for Hook:______________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Write your claim:____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: First Body Paragraph Reason: Supports claim/shows why claim is valid. Your own words and ideas, not cited. Evidence: Include signal phrase. Minimum of 2. Elaboration: Explain why this choice is more powerful/ relevant in your own words. Compare to other format. Not cited. Paragraph 3: Second Body Paragraph Reason: Supports claim/ shows why claim is valid. Your own words and ideas, not cited. Evidence: Include signal phrase. Minimum of 2. Elaboration: Explain why this choice is more powerful/ relevant in your own words. Compare to other format. Not cited. Paragraph 4: Third Body Paragraph Reason: Supports claim/ shows why claim is valid. Your own words & ideas, not cited. Evidence: Include signal phrase. Minimum of 2. Elaboration: Explain why this choice is more powerful/ relevant in your own words. Compare to other format. Not cited. Paragraph 5: Conclusion Reiterate claim without repeating Show how this topic applies to the audience (warrant) Leave the audience with finals thoughts, call to action, or image that circles back to your hook Reiterate Claim:____________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Why does this apply to the audience?:_______________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Final thoughts, call to action, image that circles back to claim:_______________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Reminders for Drafting the Argument Essay Introduction: Hook must be well-developed and grab the reader’s attention. Claim must answer the question completely, and make sense to the reader if he or she did not know what the question was. Body paragraphs: Topic sentence must include a transition and reason that your claim is correct. Cite evidence by using a signal phrase to show if it’s from the book or film. Use your own words to explain how evidence proves your reasoning as sound. Conclusion/transition sentence must be included and must help guide the reader into the next paragraph. Conclusion paragraph: Claim must be restated in a new way Show how this topic applies to the audience (warrant) Leave the audience with finals thoughts, call to action, or image that circles back to your hook Name __________________________________ Period _____ The Giver Book and Movie Comparison The book Detail Exposition The Community Ceremony of Twelve/graduation Technology Surveillance The movie Chief Elder Asher Fiona Jonas Gabe Rosemary Jonas’s family The Giver Content of the memories The pill/the injections Love The escape Climax Resolution Use the space below to record any direct quotations from the movie compelling enough to use as evidence: