“Poetry can communicate before it is understood” T.S. Elliot introduction 1. Wat zou deze uitspraak te betekenen hebben? Overleg in je groep en noteer de antwoorden hier (je hoeft het niet met elkaar eens te zijn, maar let erop dat iedereen een mening weergeeft): ………………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………...……………………………………………………………………………….… Types of poetry There are many types of poetry, each “invented” in a particular era (= tijdperk), or created with a special purpose: - Mother Goose Rhymes: Many different forms of verse, included in traditional nursery rhymes, some set to music. Limericks: Lines 1, 2 and 5 rhyme.; Lines 3 and 4 rhyme. There was an old man named Tim and he was very slim He had no clue of what should he do so he changed his name to Jim - - Free Verse: Lacks rhyme and has less predictable rhythm. Concrete Poetry: Words and phrases are arranged on paper to capture and extend the meaning. Each line should be a complete unit of thought. Cinquain : Syllabic verse form. Gradually increasing number of syllables in each line until the last line, which returns to two syllables. First Line: 2 syllables One word, giving title. Second Line: 4 syllables Two words, describing title. Third Line: 6 syllables Three words, expressing action. Fourth Line: 8 syllables Four words, expressing a feeling. Fifth Line: 2 syllables Another word for the title. Winter cool air snow falls down briskly children frolic across the yard, happiness can be found in winter - Ballads: Ballads are narrative poetry [tells a story] set to music. Couplet: A pair of lines of poetry that are usually rhymed. Shakespearean sonnet; poem of fourteen lines: three quatrains (3x4 rules) and a couplet: ababcdcdefefgg Petrarchan sonnet; poem of fourteen lines: octave and sextet abbaabba cdecde - And many, many more. Now you are going to work with two types of poetry. Because it is going to be Valentine’s Day very soon, you are going to write your own ”Friendship Cinquain”. Workshop poetry (A cinquain is a simple five-line poem that follows a pattern. Interview a friend and use what you learn to write a cinquain about that person. Copy the cinquain onto a heart pattern. Interview a Friend 1. What is your name? ………………………………………………………………………………………… 2. What are some adjectives that describe you? ………………………………………………………………………………………… 3. What are some activities that you enjoy? ………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………… 4. What do you think makes you a good friend to others? ………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………… 5. Do you have a nickname? ………………………………………………………………………………………… 6. What else do you want to tell me about yourself? ………………………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………………………… Write the Friendship Cinquain ____________________ (Person’s Name) ___________________ , ____________________ (Two adjectives describing the person.) ____________________ , ___________________, ____________________ (Three action words) ___________________ __________________ ___________________ ___________________ (A four-word phrase about friendship) ____________________ (Nickname or noun) Well done ! You have written your first poem in your life ! Now put this on a red piece of paper, and cut it out into a heart. There is no need to put your name on it, unless you want to of course. Now we’ll move to more creative writing. Read the two following poems by William Carlos Williams. Poem 1 As the cat climbed over the top of the jamcloset first the right forefoot carefully then the hind stepped down into the pit of the empty flowerpot. Workshop poetry Poem 2 “This is just to say” I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox and which you were probably saving for breakfast Forgive me they were delicious so sweet and so cold Your assignment is to write your own version of each of the poems above, following the “skeleton” poems below. After you have written a rough draft for each, choose the one you like the best and write a final draft of the poem on the white paper. Decorate your poem in any way you choose. Poem 1 [create title…] poem 2: “This is just to say As the [noun] climbed [over/on/under/in] the [top/center/bottom of] I have [verb] the [noun(s)] That [were/was] [in/out/on] the [noun] the [noun] First the [……….] [……….] [adverb] then the [……….] stepped [……….] into the [……….] of the [adjective] [noun] and which you were probably saving for [……….] Forgive me [it/they was/were] [adjective] so [adjective] and so [adjective] 7. Here there’s place to write down your final draft version: ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. Now, you’re all on your own. Read the poem below: Valentine Carol Ann Duffy Not a red rose or a satin heart. I give you an onion. It is a moon wrapped in brown paper. It promises light like the careful undressing of love. Here. It will blind you with tears like a lover. It will make your reflection a wobbling photo of grief. I am trying to be truthful. Not a cute card or a kissogram. Workshop poetry I give you an onion. Its fierce kiss will stay on your lips, possessive and faithful as we are, for as long as we are. Take it. Its platinum loops shrink to a wedding-ring, if you like. Lethal. Its scent will cling to your fingers, cling to your knife. …………………………………………… ………………………………………….… …….……………………………………… …………………………………………… ………….………………………………… ….………………………………………… …………………………………………… ……….…………………………………… …………………………………………… …………….……………………………… …………………………………………… ………………….………………………… …………………………………………… ……………………….…………………… …………………………………………… …………………………………………… ……………….…………………………… …………………………………………… …………………….……………………… …………………………………………… ………………………….………………… …………………………………………… ……………………………….…………… …………………………………….……… Now, write a fill-in-the-blank poem. In the poem above, phrases and words are underlined. Write your own poem, changing the underlined portion to words of your own. You must keep the same structure and phrases as in the original poem! For example, the line It is a moon (noun) wrapped (verb) in brown paper (prepositional phrase), should keep the same basic structure. It could be changed in this way (the gift is a car): It is a cheetah (noun) running (verb) after its prey (prepositional phrase). When there is time left, do the following exercise Final assignment: choose with your group one type of poetry from the list on the previous page(s), and write your own poem. So, this can be anything: a sonnet, free verse or a limerick. Try to pay attention to the characteristics of your particular poem, and pay attention to these “rules”. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………….. 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