Name : Mochamad Rasyid Karim Class : English 101 Professor : Teddy Chocos Topic : Boosting the Idea of Outer Beauty. Name: Mochamad Rasyid Karim Topic: Not everyone is beautiful and they should not be, if everyone is beautiful than no one is. Beauty is a characteristic that is owned by a person which brings pleasure to anyone that sees it or feels it, including the person who has it as well. It is mostly referred to by the person’s outer appearance by the society, whether it’s the beauty of the face or the body of that person. Society itself uses beautiful person to promote what is beautiful as well because it is the most efficient and the best way to do so. Commercials use the body of a woman with slim, slender and sexy body to make people believe that the image of beauty is portrayed by the beautiful lady. This method of commercials plants an idea to the people of the world that if they want to be beautiful they have to look like the lady in the commercials and if they want to pursue the beauty they will have to consume the products which are displayed on the commercial. However lots of people in this world have an opinion where commercials should not promote outer beauty whereas they should boost the inner beauty of a person because everyone is beautiful in their own way. This should not be the case, beauty is a pure and holistic thing to behold, saying that everyone is beautiful insults the meaning of beauty itself. A showcase of beauty should be displayed if they do bring pleasure to people who are seeing it, if there are no singular definition of what is beautiful and everyone in the world believes that everyone is beautiful in their own way then no one would be beautiful as well. There are a lot of things that can create the idea of beauty into someone’s mind. A person’s personal looks affects heavily on the idea of what beauty is. When a person looks in the mirror and sees his/her own face they are able to look at their own physical appearance. When the person is beautiful he/she will find pleasure in seeing his/her own face, however when they are not beautiful they will feel uncomfortable therefore plants an idea in his/her own mind on what beauty is. A quote from Mirrors a poet by Lucy Grealy, a writer who has a pretty unpleasant physical appearance because she had a cancer in her jaw causing the right side of her jaw to be totally removed she then mentioned, There was a long period of time, almost a year during which I never looked in a mirror. It wasn’t easy; just as you only notice how often people eat on television when you yourself are on a diet, I’d never suspected just how omnipresent were our own images. (Grealy)” From the writings she mentioned that she suspected which means when she was looking at herself she also creates an idea in her brain about what beauty really is which is the idea that she is not beautiful and there are a lot of people who are more beautiful than she is. If she adapts the idea of everyone is beautiful which makes her believes that she is beautiful will change the meaning of beautiful itself as there are no pleasure in seeing an unattractive face. Not just how a person pleasantly looks as well as their race. When a person has a certain race people always stereotype the person as what the race is usually do. This kind of ideas grown by people can be seen easily from one of the readings made by Edward Iwata entitled Race without Face. In this reading Edward quoted, “Indeed to many Anglos, the males of our culture are a mystery. Most whites know us only through the neutered images: Japanese salary men. Sumo Wrestlers. Sushi Chefs. We’re judged by our slant of eye and color of skin. We’re seen only as eunuchs, as timid dentists and engineers. Books and movies portray us as ugly and demonic. We are truly a race of invisible man. (Iwata)” This is all true, the fact that most Japanese Man do all these sorts of stuff, most people always categorized Japanese man as people who do such things eventhough some of them does not want to become the stereotype Japanese man. The fact that after knowing that all white people judges all Asian people as the typical stereo types he wanted to change his own face with plastic surgery. This shows really well how a peer pressure can really pressure someone to think what beauty really is. The next factor which causes a person to develop an idea on what the meaning of beauty is peer pressure. People love to judge how other people looks like because they like comparing themselves with other people, especially about their own looks. Most people in the society judge by their looks first, which is the outer appearance of the person such as their facial structure body structure and whether they have any impairment in their looks. When a person has a better look which means they have a symmetrical facial structure, they have no impairments on their outer appearance, they automatically judge the person to be friendly, nice to hang out with and easy to mingle with, when a person has an unpleasant look however they tend to make themselves to avoid such person because the ugly factor of that person would automatically give the sense of unfriendly vibes. This forces the person to have a different meaning of beauty as well to the point where they want to change their outer appearance to earn that beauty. Another quote from Edward Iwata which made him change his own face can also be seen again from one of his articles called Race Without a Face, where he quoted, “My friend already loaned me the money, whole 1500 dollars so there is no going back.” A person could’ve easily refused to get a plastic surgery if they finance it themselves. However when someone else is paying for it, there is a feeling of uneasiness because it is rude to reject someone’s offer, especially if it is a big one. Therefore peer pressure can be a heavy factor on how person decides what is beauty to him/her and how he/she wants to obtain such beauty. The third factor which causes a person to develop the sense beauty is media pressure from commercial and other social media tools that are able to spread the different ideas of beauty. Literally the amount of advertisement that are used by the media social to influence of beauty to the society has been very strong and the point of doing it is to keep shoving the amount of beauty product that they are selling to be sold highly. From the facts every human in the world in average actually see around 3000 advertisement every day (Kilbourne), that’s 125 advertisements per hour, and the facts are not wrong. If you walk around the city of New York you can actually see the number of advertisement around the city not just from the TV but buses, taxis and buildings as well even the chairs that we sit on has an advertisement. Clearly this fact shows the number of people trying to change the idea of what beauty really. All the factors that are shown on the top are the ways that are used by the society to bring up the idea of what is beauty to the people who wants beauty and consumes anything that they have to earn such beauty. It is a must as well for the people to show what is beauty because without it people will have no idea what beauty is. Bibliography Grealy, Lucy. "Mirrors." Autobiography of a Face (1994): 53-73. Iwata, Edward. "Race Without A Face." The Asian American Movement (1991): 50-53. Kilbourne, Jean. Cant Buy My love. New York: Simon and Schuster, 2000.