The Book Review A book review is not simply a plot summary or an unsupported opinion of how well the reader did or did not like the book. A book review includes information about the book (plot, characters, setting, mood, theme, etc.) and the reviewer's opinion of how well the author has succeeded in writing an effective story. A good book review presents evidence to support this opinion, and, in the process, helps the reader gain an insight into the story. In general, the writer of a book review gives enough information to help the reader decide whether he or she wants to read the book, but not so much as to spoil the joy of discovery that comes from reading a good book. To do a good job of reviewing a book, the writer must know the book thoroughly. This requires a careful, attentive reading (and rereading of certain parts). The writer must also know what kind of book it is he or she is reading (romance novel, biography, historical novel - science fiction, etc.) and what characterizes good literature of this type. For example, it would be wrong to criticize a biography because it lacked a strong plot or to find fault with a science fiction novel because it had an unrealistic setting. As you read, consider the following points: 1 As You Read 1. Determine the author's purpose in writing this book. Read the preface and introduction— they often contain Clues and occasionally a specific statement of the author's purpose or intention. 2. Look closely at the title and subtitle. Sometimes (but not always) the title or subtitle can provide important clues as to the "meaning" of the book. 3. As you read, take notes on anything that you feel could be useful to you later when you attempt to piece everything together. (Example: "The author's description of the character's first day of school is very believable. The overly friendly attitude of the teacher is especially effective.") 4. Make a list of especially good or especially weak passages, as well as any passages that you might use as quotations in your review. 5. Summarize each chapter (or every 15-20 pages). React to your summaries: Are you enjoying the story to this point? Why or why not? Are you confused about anything in the story? What questions would you like to ask someone else about the book? Before You Write 1. Read about the author in other sources, especially if you find yourself needing to know more about his or her background, qualifications, or philosophy. (Include this information in your actual review only if it will help the reader understand the book or your review more clearly.) 2. Decide what the theme or central point of your review is going to be. Be sure you have a significant and well-defined theme. Avoid themes which are too obvious, too general, or vague. Word your theme (thesis statement) carefully, making certain you understand all the key literary terms used. 3. Go over your notes and list the evidence (examples, quotations, summaries), which supports your theme. 4. Arrange into an outline or plan your evidence and all other points you plan to cover in your review. Make sure that all of the information relates to your thesis. Arrange your points in a logical way so that your reader will be able to follow your thinking and how you came to the conclusion you did. 2 Things NOT to Do in Your Review!!!!!! 1. Do not attempt to write a review unless you have read the book carefully and completely. 2. Do not simply write a plot or character summary, or include so much summary that it buries your interpretation. 3. Do not make general statements about the book without supporting them with specific examples or quotations. 4. Do not include so much factual information in your review that it becomes more of a "report" than a review. Use personal, colourful language and include your opinions, interpretations, and observations. Book Review Structure Intro: Catchy opening sentence Brief plot summary (don’t spoil the punch) Relevant information about the author Thesis statement (your overall opinion about the novel) Body: A discussion of your thesis statement. In other words, a discussion of each literary element as it relates to your thesis statement and how effectively the author succeeded in creating the story (one paragraph each element discussed: either characters, setting, mood, plot and/or theme). You must also include examples and quotations to support your opinions. Conclusion: Your conclusion should stress the importance of the thesis statement. Give the essay a sense of completeness (come full circle) Would you recommend it to others? Why or why not? Leave a final impression on the reader A Father’s Legacy. A Review of: The Princess Bride, by William Goldman 3 Some forms of fantasy are pure escapism. Other forms use magic and myth to promote social consciousness. And then there's The Princess Bride, a book that exists in a class all its own. William Goldman's tale of True Love, Harsh Revenge and Rodents of Unusual Size exhibits a gleeful audacity seldom seen in literature before or since. To begin with, Goldman's masterpiece is not simply The Princess Bride. Rather, it's S. Morgenstern's Classic Tale of True Love and High Adventure, the 'good parts' version abridged by William Goldman. In a lengthy preface, Goldman recounts how his father read The Princess Bride to him, as he lay sick as a child. Once Goldman reached adulthood, he discovered that his father hadn't read the book exactly as written, leaving out a lot of boring social satire and commentary. This, Goldman proudly states, is the abridged version he remembers, the "good parts version," and happily interrupts the narrative time and again to make some point or other about this particular sequence of events. Everything he says is well thought-out, reasonable, and such a bald-faced lie that it's difficult to not to take anything Goldman says as true. Princess Buttercup lives in Florin, a mythical country (from which the equally mythic S. Morgenstern and Goldman's family supposedly hail) located in some obscure part of Europe next to the equally obscure country of Guilder. At the beginning of the tale, Buttercup is one of the 20 most beautiful women in the world, and after her true love, Westley, is apparently lost at sea to the Dread Pirate Roberts, she quickly rises up the ranks to become the Most Beautiful in all the world. This attracts the attention of fiendish Florin Prince Humperdink, who plans to marry her and then have her killed to provoke a war with neighboring Guilder. At the last moment, a mysterious masked stranger (Westley, of course) arrives to save her, and the real story begins. Needless to say, there's a lot of Stuff with a capital "S" in here. Goldman himself wrote the screen adaption for the wonderfully quirky movie of the same name, and it's simply amazing how similar the two are to each other -- a rarity, as anyone who's ever seen a favorite novel butchered by Hollywood. The trio of villians who kidnap Buttercup -- the wily Sicilian Vizzini, Turkish giant Fezzik and Spanish swordsman Inigo Montoya -- are much more than the evil cutouts so common in fantasy works. Each one has his own personal quest, personal goals that are ultimately fulfilled in some form or fashion. Inigo's quest of avenging his father's death is particularly rousing, especially when he finally confronts the murderer and says the famous line: "Hello. My name is Inigo Montoya. You killed my father. Prepare to die." There's a lot of fun here, and anyone looking for a straightforward narrative is likely to be very confused. There are no dark overlords, no magic rings to be thrown into burning mountains. Anyone not looking for those things will be pleasantly surprised. Goldman proves you don't have to be a Tolkein clone to write rousing fantasy. It's just too bad that more writers today don't seem believe that. Now that you’ve read this review, answer the following questions: 4 Vocabulary Building: copy the words in bold letters from the text in the column below. Find the definition using the context, then use the dictionary to verify. Word Definition Questions: Answer the following questions. Make your answers as complete as possible. 1. What is the author’s thesis statement (his opinion)? ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 2. How did William Goldman find the inspiration to write this novel? Explain. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 3. Where did the story originally come from? ________________________________________________________________________ 4. Who are the main characters? ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 5. Who are the villains? ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 6. What does the reviewer think of the movie adaptation? ________________________________________________________________________ 7. Where does the story take place (setting)? ________________________________________________________________________ 8. What is the story about? ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 9. Would you read this book? Why or why not? ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 5 Instructions: A) Annotate this review with elements in the box below. Use the margins for your annotations. Author’s description, body, book title, characters, conclusion, intro, mood, plot, plot summary, review title, setting, theme (message), thesis statement. B) Highlight the opinions stated by the reviewer. Then, underline the justification. The Art of Combining a Thrilling Story with Hard Science A Review of the Novel Timeline, by Michael Crichton, (Ballantine, 1999) It's very rarely that a book attempts to combine both elements of science fiction and medievalism, and one would be predisposed to think the idea somewhat foolish. However, Michael Crichton has done just that in his latest novel, Timeline, and his results are none too shabby. Crichton is a master of catching a reader's attention. If this wasn't made obvious in some of his prior notable stories (Jurassic Park, Eaters Of The Dead, Sphere), then it should definitely be obvious after this book. From the very onset of the story I found myself enthralled in the events and characters, eager to see what would happen next. Of course, I did find a small portion of the story to be a bit slow-paced. There are easily more than a 100 pages before any real swords-and-guts action begins for the group that obviously becomes the protagonists. This is not necessarily a bad thing because even during this lull of straightforward action there is a great deal going on and the story never becomes boring. Crichton has the ability to explain complex theory in a way that is interesting and thought-provoking. I would have never tried to grasp the fundamentals of quantum theory on my own, but Timeline manages to present it all in a fairly easy (or at least as easy as quantum physics gets) manner. I found the theories expressed to be highly intriguing and went 6 so far as to do my own research after finishing the novel. I've never come across such an ingenious concept for time travel. Crichton even managed to eliminate the problem of paradox normally associated with stories such as these. This story primarily revolves around a small group of scientists who are all specialists in various areas of 14th-century history. They are trying to rebuild two ancient castles at an archaeological site in France. The company funding the research suddenly decides it wants more immediate results in the restoration, and the lead man on the restoration site vanishes during an attempt to find out why the research and rebuilding are suddenly being pushed along. His colleagues, worried at his lengthy absence, soon find themselves on a much grander adventure than they ever anticipated. The whole story is wonderful, though somewhat predictable in places. Most people will have figured out the ending long before they reach it, but that takes nothing away from the way the story is told. Crichton has a magical way with weaving tales, a way of putting the images directly into your mind and making you really live them, and Timeline is one of his best examples of that to date. You will always feel wrapped up in what the characters are feeling and doing. Timeline manages to be a story for just about everyone. Of course, it will take a slightly more mature reader to fully comprehend the slimmed down quantum physics explanation, but you don't need to really understand how they time travel to understand the plot. This story has everything from futuristic supercomputers to medieval jousting, and it does this all without coming off as ridiculous. Fans of Crichton will adore this book, and even those who have never picked up a Crichton story before won't be able to avoid liking it. Timeline is definitely a piece of highly recommended reading. 7 8 ANNEX 1 TRANSITIONS AND LINKING EXPRESSION accordingly after after all after that after which afterward in the second place, etc. in the meantime in the future in summation later presently previously similarly subsequently simultaneously soon likewise that is and another an additional earlier even if even if even so eventually finally first (second, third, etc.) for example for instance for this reason meanwhile moreover nevertheless as a result from that moment next as soon as at first at last at the same moment before long besides but conclusively conversely consequently furthermore hence hereafter one . . . the other one . . . and another once . . . now then therefore to begin with to illustrate this to support this thus ultimately however on the contrary when in addition in comparison in fact indeed initially in the first place on this occasion or other otherwise preceding this prior to this while whenever yet also To begin introduce first or main point: at the outset first from the inception first of all from the beginning in the first place initially one . . . the other one . . . another originally primarily to begin (with) To continue with other points or details: accordingly consistent with this also in addition another in succession besides in the next place To conclude or summarize: in the second (third) place in turn to continue next as a result at last conclusively therefore thus to conclude in brief in other words it is apparent 9 to sum up ultimately finally in conclusion it is evident in summation to recapitulate to review To introduce examples: an example of this for instance an illustration of such as this a further example to exemplify this for example to illustrate this there are several examples . . there are (two, three, etc.) To indicate time or chronological sequence or progression: Past--that which occurred before: before beforehand before this earlier in earlier time in the past preceding this previously prior to this Present--that which is occurring: at present currently on this occasion presently now at this moment now Future--that which is yet to come: from this time hereafter eventually in the future at the same time at that moment as this occurred during the same time in the future in the course of events in future generations in time to come in the approaching sooner or later days (years, ages, etc.) Same time as another occurrence: concurrent with this meanwhile in concert simultaneously in the meantime together just as while 10 To introduce evidence or support or reasons: to bear this out to corroborate to confirm this furthermore to attest to this to endorse this to affirm this to support this to substantiate this to verify this to further (confirm, verify, etc.) moreover there are several . . . there are (two, three, etc.) To introduce a contrast or difference: antithetical to this conversely at variance with in contrast to this this contradictory to inconsistent with this this in opposition to contrarily this contrasting this dissimilarly differing from this on the contrary in spite of this on the other hand instead yet notwithstanding unlike this nevertheless To introduce a comparison or similarity: accordingly analogous in concurrence similarly with compatible with similar to this this in keeping with just as . . . so this in comparison to likewise this to balance to collate 11 to parallel Questions for Self-Evaluation. Don’t Judge a Book by Its Cover Name: ____________________________________________ Title: ___________________________________ Answer the following questions. Evaluate when necessary. 1. Did you read the book you chose in its entirety? ______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________/5 2. Did you do all of the exercises and readings leading up to the production of your book critique? ______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________/5 3. What did you learn from reading your novel? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 4. What did you find difficult? How would you evaluate your effort in solving your difficulties? ______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________/5 5. What must you do perfect or improve writing and reading? (Set a goal) ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 6. What did you like most about your novel? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 7. What didn’t you like about your novel? ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ Total: 12 /15