Gullickson1 Ashley Gullickson Bryson Newhart English 1010-131 16 September 2013 Fat is a Feminist Issue In the article Fat is a Feminist Issue, Susie Orbach outlines a radical perspective on women, their desire to belong within social context, and the intent of breaking the stereotypes surrounding "fat" in women. These feminists proposed women become fat as a means to break the social mold, and negate the pressure to change themselves with popular trends. Orbach illustrates an exaggerated point of view; she does so through the use of a logical fallacy in order to appeal to a popular opinion. The viewpoints presented in Orbach's article seem slightly hyperbolic. That being said, her method of justification does well to appeal to the intended audience who share her perspective on women in society. I believe that what Orbach expresses as a rebellious act, may in fact be an exaggerated feminist belief. Orbach presents her issue by stating to the audience the overwhelming truth that women in this day and age are unconsciously raised to conform to the patriarchal view that a women's body should be thin. She informs the reader of the idea that women are born and bred to believe they need to be physically thin to reach the overall goal of obtaining a man, and then in turn become a mother." The media present women in a sexual context or frame them in family settings, reflecting a woman's two prescribed roles, first as a sex object, and then a mother. Gullickson2 Orbach writes, “she is brought up to marry by ‘catching’ a man with her good looks and pleasing manner"(450-451). This concept is seen as oppressing to women and leads to Orbach's next argument regarding the female body and trends. The idea that women should not conform to the standards of society and that the female body is not meant to change as a trend are key components of Orbach’s argument. She provides examples of previous trends women have followed, such as starvation and ironing ones hair to conform to the ways of the 1960's. In order to support her claims about women conforming to society's changing fashion trends, Orbach could have used examples of fashion magazines or studies to support her claim. Throwing these supposed facts into her article without validity and proof shows lack of reason behind her claims. It seems in today’s modern society, women are no longer trying to conform to styling trends, women are more or less simply trying to obtain one common goal; a thin figure that is also pleasing to the eye. Trends seem to change almost weekly, yet women are more independent than ever. According to Dr. Naomi Crafti, moderately obese women(BMI 30-35) are three times more likely than men to experience weight discrimination and research shows reported males having significantly less desire to work with a fat female (Crafti). My question to Ms. Orbach would be if fat is indeed a way to rebel against society, why would a woman want to be fat if it means lowering her chance of success in society? Women in today's day and age are encouraged to be independent, this however does not mean that women have lost site of the common goal of maintaining a slim physical body. A common belief held by feminists is the idea that the body of a woman has far more importance than to be visually appealing. An apparent feminist herself, Orbach expresses how Gullickson3 feminist perceive fat in today's society. "Feminism argues that being fat represents an attempt to break free of society's sex stereotypes" (449). In other words women who are fat are purposefully rebelling and saying "no" to the feeling of being worthless. Feminists oppose the idea of a fixed body figure and believe it is a woman's way to rebel against society to in turn say "screw you" to those who oppose a woman’s individual physical self. This statement may seem a bit radical to those in opposition of feminists. There are many reasons a woman could be considered fat. Being overweight is not necessarily the most realistic reason on the list. Many women could be considered overweight to society, yet perfectly comfortable and confident in their own skin. While Orbach presents her article with arguments to appease her feminist readers, she fails to include the possible opposing views. Her direct audience consists of first and second wave feminists, when it should also include the voice of anti-feminists. While Orbach makes some credible points, the central point of view is feminist. The fact that Orbach herself is a feminist and an advocate for women's rights, makes this article biased read. In the context of this manifesto, one can conclude that the desired audience is feminist however a reader with no background of the author, no access to the internet, or higher education could not obtain critical perspective of the author, which could potentially persuade the author in an uninformed direction. In order for the common reader to understand Orbach’s writings, one would need to be provided with background information about the author. In this particular case the authors of “They Say, I Say”, provide a short historical description of Orbach’s conquests. In her opinion the intended audience of the article likely shares the same perspective on the issue, the so called twisted logic does not seem odd to them. In general, feminists are going Gullickson4 to agree with the stance that Orbach has taken, fueling the fire and creating a false sense of truth regarding the issue. Proponents of Orbach's article are right to argue that society has a large and controversial influence on a woman's weight in addition to the way she views herself, but is exaggerated when Orbach claims that weight is a purposeful act. However, non-feminist such as myself, would more than likely interpret women as being overweight for multiple reasons. Genetics, lack of exercise with the addition of a higher calorie intake, and physical illnesses such as cancer or diabetes are just a few reasons one may be overweight. These previously stated reasons of obesity do not always pertain to women. Men are equally as likely to be overweight due to the fact that many men overeat in celebratory circumstances whereas women may indulge due to emotional reasons. "Men are more likely to use food in celebration... whereas women use comforts foods to cope with negative experiences"(Ihrig). Obesity is not limited to being a feminist issue, which Orbach again fails to educate her reader about the other affected sex. Men can also find themselves suffering at the hands of weight and body image issues. To add to the defense of critics, women who are proud of gaining weight seemingly would go to greater lengths to flaunt their weight openly in society, which today is not often seen. More women are trying to get rid of their curves with black clothing, body wraps, and expensive fad diets. While being overweight in today's society has its medical negativities, it may also be that a woman is simply confident and comfortable with herself, along with the possibility that she has already succeeded in finding a man and no longer needs to live up to society beliefs. It is pertinent to consider is that Susan Orbach published this book in 1978. There is no doubt that a woman’s role in society today is different than 30 years ago. However, woman are still expected to change their bodies to fit societies social expectations, the gender roles have Gullickson5 taken quite an evolutionary shift. One has to wonder how Orbach would address the issues of being fat in today's society, where a women's role is no longer limited to a homemaker, but instead is extended to breadwinner and businesswoman. This essay works to disrupt social norms. However, after careful evaluation on the effectiveness of Orbach’s writing, I found this manifesto to be radical. Keeping in mind the importance of credible writing, it lacked the opposing views that may have made her argument stronger. As a critical analyst, of this particular excerpt, I felt she had considerable opportunities to add the provisions of the opposing party. As a reader I felt she neglected to do so, in order to strengthen her feminist stance. As an author, she was extremely knowledgeable, of the topic she was writing on. Her writing was clearly driven by her emotions. It is obvious that this is a topic she is passionate about. It seems her goal is to spread awareness through the reading of her essay. Gullickson6 Works Cited Crafti, Naomi. "The Scavenger." The Scavenger. N.p., 15 Apr. 2012. Web. 28 Oct. 2013. <http://www.thescavenger.net/>. Ihrig, Charles. "Obesity Action Coalition." Obesity Action Coalition Home Comments. N.p., 2013. Web. 28 Oct. 2013. <http://www.obesityaction.org/>. Graff, Gerald, Cathy Birkenstein, and Russel K. Durst. "Fat is a Feminist Issue." "They say/I say": the moves that matter in academic writing : with readings. 2nd ed. New York: W.W. Norton & Co., 2012. 299-309. Print.