EXPRESSION ORGANIZATION & FOCUS CONTENT Big Question Final Exam Essay = 25% of your exam grade 4 3 2 1 Uses 3 works & 3 artifacts to clearly & strongly support answer Uses 3 works & 3 artifacts to support answer Uses 3 works & 3 artifacts to support answer Uses 3 works & 3 artifacts to support answer Argument shows conviction and thoroughness Arguments shows conviction and thoroughness Argument is made but lacks conviction or thoroughness Argument is not defined Textual evidence is strong and compelling w/ at least 4 integrated quotes Textual evidence is ample w/ at least 4 integrated quotes. It may not be as thorough or carefully chosen as “4s” Textual evidence is not thorough. Very little or no textual evidence Evidence lacks clear analysis and there is more telling and listing the answer to your BQ instead of showing Intro. Par. includes BQ & arguable answer/opinion Analysis of evidence is missing or too general. Paper tells and lists the answer to your BQ instead of showing Intro. Par. includes BQ & vague or incomplete opinion/answer/argument Evidence is analyzed to clearly show how you derived the answer to your BQ Intro Par. includes BQ & rich/arguable answer/opinion Evidence is analyzed to show how you derived the answer to your BQ Intro Par. includes BQ & rich/arguable answer/ opinion 3 or more wellorganized body par. with strong topic & conc. sentences 3 or more well-organized body par. with good topic & conc. sentences 3 or more organized body par. with topic & conc. sentences 3 or more body par. with attempts at topic & conc. sentences Strong Conc. Par. synthesizes evidence & discusses universality of BQ. May have personal reflection Strong writing with minor errors that don’t interfere with meaning Distinct Conc. Par. synthesizes evidence & discusses universality of BQ. May have personal reflection Strong writing with minor errors that distract, but don’t interfere with meaning Distinct Conc. Par. tries to synthesize evidence & discuss universality of BQ, but more general and perfunctory Competent writing with minor errors that distract, but meaning is still conveyed Distinct Conc. Par. lacks synthesis of evidence. Discusses universality of BQ, but is more general and perfunctory Inconsistent writing with errors that interfere with meaning Distinct and consistent writer’s voice from varied sentence structure and vocab Distinct and consistent writer’s voice attempted from varied sentence structure and vocab Distinct and consistent writer’s voice lacking No attempt at writer’s voice Big Question Paper Directions The second portfolio document will be a culmination of students’ exploration and inquiry throughout the year in regards to their “big question.” Students will write a paper answering their big question. Their answer/assertion should be based off of the evidence they have gathered on their portfolio artifact and portfolio works organizers. The final assessment portfolio will give students a chance to synthesize their own writings with the documents they have gathered independently and to attempt to formulate an answer that can apply to all of the material presented. Ways to think about your evidence: If your answer to the Big Question has changed since your Quarter One response, how has your reading of the literature in this class affected your perception of the issue? If your answer has not changed, how does the literature support your Quarter One answer? If your answer has changed, how did your independently gathered artifacts affect your perception of the issue? If your answer has not changed, how do the artifacts you have independently gathered support your Quarter One answer? Remember, you may have not completely changed your answer, but you probably broadened your answer or are now considering some ideas you had not previously thought about. Perhaps you still have the same answer, but now you feel the other side holds more merit/is more credible. Your answer in your essay should be an exploration, showing all your thoughts about your question; it is not one simple straightforward answer. Assignment Details: Double-spaced, 12-pt font, Times New Roman, 1-inch margins Give specific examples from at least three works we have read together (OMAM, TKAM, R&J, or a poem) Give specific examples from at least three artifacts you found this year Evidence should mostly be in the form of quotes. You will also do a fair amount of discussing scenes a character that answers your big question. Explain enough so that someone who has not looked at your artifact or read your work would understand what you are saying. Your quotes should be integrated like we have practiced. Within the paragraph or the lead-in to the quote, you will state the title of the work or artifact you are speaking about. If it is an artifact, you will say what it is (poem, song, picture, etc) and probably need to give some background on it or an overview of what it is about. Your quotes will need to be cited properly (author and page at end after “” and before period). You will be turning it the artifacts you use with the paper. Be sure the citation info is on the artifact. Use a consistent and engaging tone. Your voice should emerge without being too chatty or conversational. First person references are expected. You will have a mixture of tenses—what you thought and what you now think. Grading: This essay will be graded according to the rubric provided by the county, included on the back of this page. There will be NO REDO opportunities, so please ensure your final essay is of a high quality. Feel free to email me drafts before the deadline if you would like more feedback. Final draft is 25% of your final exam grade.