ESSAY PRACTICE II – USING AN ESSAY QUESTION TO REVIEW WORK THROUGH THE STRUCTURAL FRAME Q: Evaluate how practitioners use texts, symbols and compositional strategies to construct meaning in artworks. (2008 paper, Q. 8) What heading is this question likely to be under? FRAMES. Composition, text, symbols are all part of the structural frame. However our cultural frame will determine how we interpret things, so we would include this too. A question like this is a good springboard for us to review material using the structural frame. We can start though by looking at it like an essay question. STEP 1. Make sure we understand the question. What is meant by ‘Compositional strategies’??? Composition: Is what goes into making a work. Formal aspects – tonal variation; e.g. Turner media (oil paint? Perspex? Concrete?) & expressive form (Painting? Installation? Video?) colour, line,- it’s quality; direction. texture, expressive mark-making / lack of it e.g. Pollock & Ruscha. Use of space; (Gormley, Inside Australia; Kollwitz, mother and dead child; Scale (Christo & Jeanne-Claude; LeWitt; Tillers; Gormley; Choices about other things – posture and position of figures (Manet) use of readymades (Duchamp’s Fountain; Dali’s Lobster telephone; ) Use of text within a work (Cubist collage newspaper; Imants Tillers quotations LeWitt’s instructions; or Joseph Kosuth’s definition of water; Janet Laurence’s names of first white settlers; botanical names of plants in the Governor’s garden in BOTH languages); Symbols of any type…. (such as numerals; swastika; apple logo; marijuana leaf; skull; a cat;) e.g. Ricky Swallow with his skull / imacs Other actions which have some sort of cultural meaning (e.g. the ‘wrapping and packaging’ of Wrapped Coast or Pont Neuf….what that might see this as a comment on the ephemeral; the presented; the nomadic.) Drawing directly onto a wall instead of in a framed work (Sol LeWitt) makes us consider the work in different ways. Location of a work is relevant too…in a gallery? Note artists often use art historical references in their work, or appropriate other artworks. (Remember last week we were talking about how artists often look back in order to look forward.) Our knowledge of art history will effect our reading of the symbols and compositional strategies in various artworks. If we didn’t know that Von Guerard was a European who settled in the new Colony of Victoria in the 19th century and whose painting of Mt Kosciusko was an icon of Australian art, we would have a different opinion of Tillers’ 1980s appropriation in Mt Analogue. There is a connection there with foreigners coming to settle in Australia; and the effect of Von Guerard’s European heritage and art education that affected how he painted. We know that Tillers is concerned with Australia’s place in the world and the connections between European art and art from ‘the peripheries’ such as Australia and New Zealand. So a compositional aspects of an artwork. strategy is just the decisions an artist makes about So the question is asking you to look at various compositional strategies that various artists have used. There is a keyword there also: EVALUATE. This means what? To make a judgement about just how effective the compositional strategies are in conveying meaning. To say what you think is good and not-so-good. So you are expected to describe some examples of various compositional strategies… AND they also want you to make some judgements on them somewhere along the line. Even if you wonder how you could possibly do that, you MUST BEAR IT IN MIND. Examples of an evaluative statement. The use of tonal variation in an artwork can be highly effective. JMW Turner uses this strategy often in his work e.g. “ Snowstorm: Hannibal and his army crossing the Alps”, 1812.) The extremes of dark and light create drama and makes me keep looking at the work. The more I look, the more I can reflect upon the emotion of the scene he described. It develops more meaning for me over time. What has happened here? I’ve used a specific example, gone into detail about what I mean, and said what I thought of it. End of. If you say you like, or dislike something, try to say WHY you have that position. It’s not sufficient to merely express a preference about something in an exam. Answering the question. Our first topic sentence would be something that directly responds to the question, and uses some of the language from the question. Example ‘Compositional strategies’ are decisions that are made about how to create a work. These decisions will determine what message the artwork will convey. Or In order to create meaning in a work, various formal, textual and symbolic aspects need to be considered. These considerations are called ‘compositional strategies’. Topic sentences moving on from that could include various compositional strategies. We could make another topic sentence such as :over time, different strategies were employed and meanings changed. Over the Modernist and Postmodernist periods, the type of meaning that artists want to convey has changed. You could then go on to mention how as technologies have changed (eg camera, film) the requirement to represent things realistically changed. Also you could mention something about the Romantic thread that runs through art, throughout the Modernist and Postmodernist periods. What do we mean by this? The subjective; the personal; the inner. This became more important as the 19th century ended. Symbolism; Expressionism; Surrealism; Abstract Expressionism; So different strategies were employed as different meanings were conveyed. Question 8 MARKER’S NOTES Responses to this question presented explanations of how practitioners construct meaning through symbolism, text and composition. A broad range of artists and their works were discussed including Kahlo, Kruger, Holzer, Dali, Picasso and Bennett. Some responses also considered the work of performance and conceptual artists and architects. Most responses investigated interpretations of symbolism and many explored the ways in which written text determined the meaning of works. Analysis of compositional techniques was less well developed. Many responses used case study themes such as war or feminism as a way of creating a cohesive argument. Better responses provided well-synthesised and complex discussions of key components of the structural frame, evaluating the success of particular strategies as a way to create meanings for audiences. These responses demonstrated a thorough understanding of the complexities and subtleties of symbolism, text and composition beyond the literal and the descriptive. Responses suggested that a number of interpretations of symbols were possible and these were often linked to the cultural conventions of a particular time and place. A range of interpretations of text, including visual texts, were often included. Well-chosen examples that were thoroughly explained and evaluated supported a well-developed argument.