Topic
Reviewing Date
Group Name
Green House
12/18.20
Chu-Pei Group Sunny
Preparer
Essay Editer
Tony
Singapore’s public housing goes green
In Singapore, nearly 80 percent of the city state’s residents live in public housing.
This has led government officials to advance sustainable development principles in
its newest public housing projects, creating new environmental awareness in
Singapore.
This is Singapore’s first green public housing district. From far away, it looks like any
other public housing area, though there seems to be a special design when it
comes to ventilation.
In addition to this green roof which helps regulate the temperature of the building,
the walls of the building are also painted white, which has a cooling effect and also
brings natural light inside. Keeping white walls clean is quite difficult, but the paint
has a self cleaning feature, so it won’t get dirty.
NG Bingrong
Project Manager
We put in various eco friendly features that capitalize on the wind, greenery,
reducing energy consumption, water usage, how to promote waste recycling etc, all
in one development.
The solar panels on the roof are leased, helping the government reduce the cost of
this facility, and other work such as installation, maintenance, and electricity
charges are all handed over to private contractors.
The lighting in the living room as well as electricity for the elevator is generated
through solar power, and this garden in the middle of the public housing block also
helps reduce the temperature of the area and absorb noise.
Sunny :
Nowadays, global warming is a serious problem to our earth and the
air, water, surroundings are becoming worse and worse. We should be
more aware of the important issues! There’re a lot of ways to help our
earth, such as, building green houses, solar panels and taking public
transportation instead of driving our own cars, which might produces
less carbon dioxide. According to the article, it says that building green
houses is a good choice for environmental protection. And I can’t agree
with it more. It provide a better place for people to study and help our
earth out of danger.
Corrections: commas are used to list more than 2 things
Nowadays, global warming is a serious problem to our earth and the
air, water, and other surroundings are becoming worse and worse. We
should be more aware of the important issues! There’re a lot of ways to
help our earth, such as, building green houses, solar panels and taking
public transportation instead of driving our own cars, which might
produces less carbon dioxide. According to the article, it says that
building greenhouses is a good choice for environmental protection.
And I can’t agree with it more. It provides a better place for people to
study and help our earth out of danger.
Tina :
Our earth is getting worse and worse. We only have one earth , and we
have to save our beautiful earth. In the recent year, governments do a
lot of things to reduce the pollution. ‘‘Green Buildings’’ is a good way
to help us save our environment. In Taiwan, we have a library which is
the first green building. The library has a lot of windows so that the
sunlight can through these windows and bright the library. In addition
to ,it recycles rains and uses solar power. The library is located in a
park , so if you are in the library , you can listen birds humming and
enjoy the special library.
Corrections: don’t put a space between a word then a comma
Our earth is getting worse and worse. We only have one earth, and we
have to save our beautiful earth. In the recent year, governments do a
lot of things to reduce the pollution. ‘‘Green Buildings’’ is a good way
to help us save our environment. In Taiwan, we have a library which is
the first green building. The library has a lot of windows so that the
sunlight can go through these windows and bright the library. In
addition to, it recycles rains and uses solar power. The library is located
in a park, so if you are in the library, you can listen to birds humming
and enjoy the special library.
Philip :
James :
Tony:
After industrial development, the environment has been big broken
because of the economy need. People found all was in change when
the economic became good. The forest was gone. The animals was
gone. The air became dirty. Thus,people make the environment as well
as before. We comment is Singapore's environmental protection
house, green building. The new building make less pollution and more
comfortable than old. It is not only convenient for us but contribute the
power to our Earth.
Corrections: need a spare and make the sentences less choppy
The forest was gone and the animals were gone. The air became dirty.
Thus, people make the environment as well as before.
Eunice:
Eric:
Environmental awareness is more and more important .
The government
advance sustainable development principles including solar
power , waste
recycling and energy conservation........
Environmental protection is something that everyone
should do because
we have one earth only . If you pick up the garbage
on the ground
that it is an important step on the earth . Let's start
doing environmental .
corrections: don’t put two spaces between each word and no space
between punctuation
Environmental awareness is more and more important. The
government advance sustainable development principles including
solar power, waste recycling and energy conservation........
Environmental protection is something that everyone should do
because we have one earth only. If you pick up the garbage on the
ground that it is an important step on the earth. Let's start doing
environmental.