Essay Grading Rubric Author:______________________________ Body Paragraphs (3) 30% Introducing Paragraph 10% Excellent Average Below Average The introductory paragraph has a strong hook or attention grabber that is appropriate for the audience. (3%) The introductory paragraph has a hook or attention grabber, but it is weak, rambling or inappropriate for the audience. (2%) The author has an interesting introductory paragraph but the connection to the topic is not clear. (1%) Within the introduction paragraph, the reader is introduced to the author and the book will be discussed. (2%) Within the introduction paragraph, the Within the introduction paragraph, the reader is introduced to the author that will reader is introduced to the book will be be discussed but not the book. (1%) discussed but not the author. (.5%) The thesis statement names the topic of the essay and outlines the main points to be discussed and is located as the last sentence of the essay. (5%) The thesis statement names the topic of the essay and is located as the last sentence of the essay. (3%) Missing a thesis statement; however, the essay map outlines some or all of the main points to be discussed but does not name the topic and is located as the last sentence of the essay. (2%) Includes 3 or more pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement. (12%/ 4% each) BP1: _____ BP2:_____ BP 3:________ Includes 2 pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences) that support the position statement. (9%/ 3% each) Includes 1 or fewer pieces of evidence (facts, statistics, examples, real-life experiences). (6%/ 2% each) BP1: _____ BP2:_____ BP 3:________ BP1: _____ BP2:_____ BP 3:________ Evidence and examples are NOT relevant AND/OR are not explained. (6%/ 2% each) All of the evidence and examples are specific, relevant and explanations are given that show how each piece of evidence supports the author\'s position. (15%/ 5% each) Most of the evidence and examples are specific, relevant and explanations are given that show how each piece of evidence supports the author\'s position. (9%/ 3% each) BP1:____ BP1: _____ BP2:_____ BP 3:________ BP1: _____ BP2:_____ BP 3:________ BP2:____ BP1: _____ BP2:_____ BP 3:________ The writer anticipates the reader\'s concerns, biases or arguments and has provided at least 1 counter-argument in one of the three paragraphs. (3%) BP3:____ BP1: _____ BP2:_____ BP 3:________ Closing paragraph 10% Total Effective restatement of thesis statement begins the closing paragraph. (3%) Summary of each point into an individual sentence per paragraph. (6%) The author's position is restated within the The author\'s position is restated within first two sentences of the closing the closing paragraph, but not near the paragraph. (2%) beginning. (1%) Summary of each point into one sentence (4%) The conclusion possesses a final statement that connects the essay discussion to the The conclusions possess a final statement bigger world. (1%) concerning the topic. (.5%) Evaluation of Writing (50%) /3% /5% /2% /5% /5% /10% Grasp of writing mechanics: punctuations/ capitalization. □ excellent (0-1) □ good (2-3) □ average (4-5) □ Okay (6-7) □ poor (8-9) □ very poor (10≤) Grasp of grammar: problems may include: comma splices, run-ons and/or fragments, misplaces modifiers, word order, conciseness, wordiness, subject/pronoun agreement □ excellent (0-1) □ good (2-3) □ average (4-5) □ Okay (6-7) □ poor (8-9) □ very poor (10≤) Grasp of spelling: □ excellent (0-1) □ good (2-3) □ average (4-5) □ Okay (6-7) □ poor (8-9) □ very poor (10≤) Word choice: common issues include words not meaning what you intended, are used incorrectly or are RIP words. □ excellent (0-1) □ good (2-3) □ average (4-5) □ Okay (6-7) □ poor (8-9) □ very poor (10≤) You are careful to avoid starting sentences with words like “It,” “It is,” “This,” “There is,” “There are.” □ excellent (0-1) □ good (2-3) □ average (4-5) □ Okay (6-7) □ poor (8-9) □ very poor (10≤) Your sentences and ideas have an easy and logical flow. □ excellent (0-1) □ good (2-3) □ average (4-5) □ Okay (6-7) □ poor (8-9) □ very poor (10≤) MLA Formatting: this includes proper □ excellent (0) □ good (1) □ average (2) □ poor (3-4) □ very poor (5≤) Items with issues regarding formatting include: □ font type □ font size □ margins □ title □ header □ pg #s □ spacing □ in-text cit. □ works cited page. /10% /5% /5% The use of correct tense throughout the essay—past when appropriate, and present when appropriate. □ excellent (0-1) □ good (2-3) □ average (4-5) □ Okay (6-7) □ poor (8-9) □ very poor (10≤) The use of third person point of view (POV) □ excellent (0) □average (2-3) □ poor (4-5) □ very poor (6 ≤) Problematic POV used in this essay include: □ I □ me □ my □ our □ we □ us □ you Evaluation: ______ None of the following are precisely accurate. Your writing/ grammar/ mechanics is (are): very good/ excellent. You have a clear knowledge of proper writing conventions. You have worked very hard on this essay; it satisfies the requirements of this assignment completely/almost completely. I am extremely proud of your work here. (45-50%) Your writing/ grammar/ mechanics is (are) pretty good here; you have a fairly decent knowledge of proper writing conventions, but you either didn’t completely apply the knowledge you have, or lack sufficient knowledge about writing to warrant a higher grade. (40-44)% Your writing/ grammar/ mechanics is (are) average; it is not terribly bad, but it is not particularly good either. It is advised you revise this essay. (35-99%) You appear to have attempted to create a quality essay, but ultimately did not succeed to do so, and the result was an essay lacking in a number of significant areas, specifically writing/ grammar/ mechanics. You have the ability to do better than this. You are required to complete a rewrite. Percentage of Points Received =_______ Possible Extra Credit Categories: Title—Topic Sent.—Thesis – Intro—Conclusion Comments: