Smarter Balanced Argumentative Writing Rubric Checklist grades 6-12 (Revised) S C O R E O F 4 Statement of Purpose/Focus (weighted x2) The response is fully sustained and consistently and purposefully focused: 1--claim is clearly stated, focused and strongly maintained 2--alternate or opposing claims achieve substantial depth* 3--claim is introduced and communicated clearly within the context Areas of the essay being checked: Introduction Body Do you have in the introduction □ a clear claim that explains what you are arguing and why? (1) □ your claim in an appropriate spot (not in the beginning of the introduction)? (3) C H E C K L I S T in the body □ clear and strong references back to your claim throughout the text (especially in topic and concluding sentences of paragraphs)? (3) □ information that is clearly aligned with the claim? (3) □ opposing claim(s), including evidence? (2)* □ a clear and strong refutation to the opposing claim(s)? (2)* * only if a counterclaim is required CONTENT RUBRIC Elaboration of Evidence (weighted x2) The response provides thorough and convincing support/evidence for the writer’s claim that includes the (1) effective use of sources, facts, and details. The response achieves (2) substantial depth that is (3) specific and (4) relevant: 5--use of evidence from sources is smoothly integrated, comprehensive, and concrete 6--all evidence is properly cited 7--effective use of a variety of elaborative techniques Area of the essay being checked: Body Do you include □ the required number of sources or quotes? (1, 2) □ quotes and/or paraphrasing that strongly proves your claim? (1, 3, 4) □ enough information to fully make your argument, leaving no holes or room for questions? (2) □ quotes that are properly integrated? (5) □ in-text citations for all of the evidence you quoted and paraphrased? (6) □ properly formatted in-text citations? (6) □ proper use of PPS format? (7) □ fully developed paragraphs? (7) □ support that analyzes the proof’s relation to the point and topic sentence rather than providing more information from the text? (7) LANGUAGE/CONVENTIONS RUBRIC Organization Language & Vocab Conventions The response has a clear and effective organizational structure creating unity and completeness: 1--effective, consistent use of a variety of transitional strategies 2--logical progression of ideas from beginning to end 3--effective introduction and conclusion for audience and purpose 4--strong connections among ideas, with some syntactic variety The response clearly and effectively expresses ideas, using precise language: --use of (1) academic and (2) domain-specific vocabulary is clearly appropriate for the audience and purpose 3--the entire piece of writing includes an appropriate (i.e. formal) tone and use of language The response demonstrates a strong command of conventions: --few, if any, errors are present in (1) usage and (2) sentence formation --effective and consistent use of (3) punctuation, (4) capitalization, and (5) spelling Areas of the essay being checked: Introduction Body Conclusion Area of the essay being checked: Introduction Body Conclusion Area of the essay being checked: Introduction Body Conclusion Do you include □ vocabulary from the unit of study—i.e. terms from the texts that have been studied or terms assigned in class? (1) □ English-specific vocabulary terms—i.e. terms like claim, irony, etc.? (2) □ NO USE of personal pronouns (I, you, we, our, my, etc.) unless appropriate for the purpose of the writing Did you look for and correct □ subject/verb agreement? (1) □ pronoun/antecedent agreement? (1) □ commonly misspelled and/or confused words? (1) □ other grammar errors? (1) □ sentence fragments? (2) □ sentence run-ons? (2) □ awkwardly worded phrases and/or sentences? (2) □ italics or quotation mark use with titles? (3) □ comma use (i.e. comma splices, comma use with subjunctive and coordinating conjunctions)? (3) □ semicolon use? (3) □ colon use? (4) □ capitalization (i.e. at the beginning of sentences, proper nouns, titles, etc.)? (4) □ spelling errors? (5) Do you have in the introduction □ three or more well-developed sentences? (3) □ an effective attention grabber/hook? (3) □ background information that introduces the topic without restating the prompt? (3) □ an effective claim that does not restate the prompt? (3) throughout the body □ transitional phrases, sentences, and words that logically connect your ideas? (1, 4) □ an organization that makes sense for the topic, where one idea clearly leads into the next? (2) in the conclusion □ three or more well developed sentences? (3) □ a further extension of your hook? (3) □ a final reflection upon or point about your most important argument? (3) □ a deeply reflective final statement (i.e. that explains the topic’s implications or significance) or calls the reader to action? (3) throughout the essay □ a variety of sentence types? (4) □ a variety of ways you begin your sentences? (4) Total score: _____ / 20 = _____% Total score: _____/8 = _____%