Self-Evaluation Essay Rubric Ask for Help Has written a limited opening statement, but no thesis was written. Good Start Has both an opening statement and a thesis, but has not completely developed the sentences. It may be too short. Well Done Has a clear opening statement and thesis, and has met the criteria for both. It should be about five sentences. W.9-10.1b Development of Arguments Reports some examples from the descriptor evidence. May need to work on creating three distinct body sections with additional evidence. Develops claim(s) and gives ample evidence for each body paragraph. The claims support the thesis, and is well thought out. W.9-10.1c. Transitions and Coherence Uses some transition words or phrases to link sections of the text. Uses some effective examples, reasons and details to support evidence. Has three distinct body sections for academic, special interests and future plans. May need more evidence to be given. Uses some transition words and phrases to link sections of the text and to make connections between areas. W.9-10.1d Conventions of Standard English There are fragments or runons. Sentences are choppy. There are many errors. W.9-10.1e Conclusion Restates opening paragraph only. W.9-10.1a. Introduction Punctuation is almost perfect but some sentences are awkward or there is little sentence variety. There are some errors; some of these distract the reader. Student attempted to answer some reflective questions, as well as made a closing statement . Awesome Has a clear opening statement and thesis, and creates an organization that establishes clear relationships among claim(s), counterclaims, reasons, and evidence. Convincingly develops claim(s) and gives exemplary evidence for each clearly defined body paragraph. The claims support the thesis statement, and prove they are ready to graduate. Uses words, phrases, and clauses to link the major sections of the text, create cohesion, and clarify the relationships between claim(s) and reasons, between reasons and evidence, and between claim(s). Punctuation is almost perfect and there is some sentence variety. Most sentences read smoothly. Writes a cohesive essay that makes a powerful case in favor of graduation readiness. Provides a concluding statement or section that follows from and supports the argument presented. Writes a compelling and memorable final statement. Sentences are varied, well worded, and punctuated correctly. The language is strong and convincing.