CAP 3 Worksheet Many of the Language Focus sections of AWG provide specific ideas that will help you analyze the language choices in your CAP 3 article: Verb tenses: See p. 365, “Purpose statements & tense” See p. 344, “Citation & tense” Hedges/boosters See pp. 156-157, “An introduction to qualifications and strength of claim” See pp. 159-163, “Specific ways of moderating or qualifying a claim” Evaluative language See p. 242, “Evaluative language” See p. 262-264, “Evaluative language revisited” Data commentaries: location statements See pp. 149-151, “Verbs in indicative and informative location statements” See p. 152, “Linking as clauses” CAP 3 Worksheet Example Paper section Introduction Does the writer use I/we? If so, for what purpose? What 2-3 verb tenses are most common? What does the writer typically do with each tense? Yes—the writer frequently uses “I”, especially when she describes her theoretical orientation and assumptions (e.g. “I view academic discourse socialization primarily as…; I understand that culture…; I assume that…”) Present tense: to describe her beliefs (e.g. when she uses “I”; to make claims about the implications of her study (e.g. “The present study contributes to this current line of research by…”; “this study demonstrates…”); to describe the current state of knowledge (e.g. “A growing body of research concerns…”) or general descriptions of theoretical positions (e.g. “These frameworks also recognize the importance of…”) Past tense: to indicate the results of specific a specific study (e.g. Kota was highly motivated and had a fairly extensive academic background…” Which is more common—active or passive voice? When does the writer use the passive voice? Does the author use any boosters, hedges, attitude markers, or evaluative language that contribute to author positioning? What is the effect of these devices? Anything else to note about the language in this section? Present perfect: to indicate the results of general areas of inquiry (e.g. “an emerging line of research in this area has revealed…”) Mostly active voice, but she does shift from active to passive in order to maintain paragraph old/new information flow or paragraph focus (e.g. “A growing body of research concerns how students with diverse cultural and linguistic backgrounds participate in and become socialized into the discursive practices of various academic disciplines or content areas in their second language…This process, which is generally called ‘L2 academic discourse socialization’ in the recent literature, has been studied…”) Boosters: “More importantly, as I will show, the case provides significant theoretical implications…” Evaluative language: “The present study contributes to this current line of research by closely examining…”; “A detailed investigation of such a case is insightful...” Through the boosters and evaluative language, the writer makes strong claims for the rigor and value of her work. The frequent use of “I” also contributes to a strong authorial voice and together with the frequent attitude markers (“view,” “assume,” “understand”) this communicates a strong subjective stance.