Francesca Eraso 9/16/2014 Goodbye Flatrions, Welcome to NYC and A Self Portrait (Self Portrait Series) by Elizabeth Fox Watercolor and ink on paper An Interpretation Elizabeth Fox’s Self portrait series represent her transition from home in Colorado to New York City. This series of three 11”x14” watercolor paintings depict two different locations: the flatirons in Colorado and the buildings in the city of New York and a more literal self-portrait. Although each piece in this series is unique in terms of their formal qualities, the three paintings are unified in terms of meaning and possibility for improvements. The three pieces together suggest a level of insight into the artist’s personal identity. The first painting, “Goodbye Flatirons”, is a horizontal landscape of large boulders. The piece is broken up by a blue sky background, four orange, triangular flatirons on the right in the middle ground and two large, round and green hills at the bottom in the foreground. The composition is horizontal and asymmetrical. The direction of the flatirons creates movement towards the right of the piece. The lines are generally 1 Francesca Eraso soft except for in the dark green texture at the top of the hills. The use of brush strokes helps to add depth. The colors used are light blue, orange-brown, light and dark green. The second painting, “Welcome to NYC”, is a vertical one-point perspective scene of a city street. This piece is composed an orange sky background, two rows of buildings with blue windows leading towards the center and an outlined silhouette of a girl in the middle of the foreground. The composition is vertical and asymmetrical due to variation in the buildings on the right. This creates a forward movement towards the center focal point. There is a strong use of black outlines in this piece for the buildings and human figure. The colors used are yellow, orange, grey and blue with varying hues and values. The third painting, “A Self Portrait”, is a vertical self-portrait of a girl with blonde hair and white t-shirt on a blue background. This piece is composed of a light blue washed background with a smiling girl in the foreground. The composition is vertical. This painting is rougher due to the rough brush strokes in the background and darker brown brush strokes at the bottom of the hair. The shirt and facial features are also outlined in black. The colors used are yellow, peach, red, blue, brown and black. The subject matter in the first painting is the large orange-brown flatirons in Colorado. This may allude to the artist feeling a large sense of identity in the Colorado area. The lightness and less intense colors give a sense of reminiscence in the landscape. The title also alludes to a past time with the word “goodbye”. 2 Francesca Eraso The subject matter in the second painting is the human figure in the middle foreground and the blue New York buildings. The buildings are very small in scale compared with the person. They also look very claustrophobic around the person, suggesting a sense of discomfort in her new environment. The grey color of the person’s silhouette blends in with the grey color of the street, suggesting the same sense of entrapment. The piece hence serves as a bridge between the artist’s past in Colorado and present life in New York City. The subject matter in the third painting is a girl’s face with distinctive and outlined facial features. The title, “A Self-Portrait” indicates that this girl’s face is the artist’s own selfportrait. Her positioning on the paper is institutional and is allows for open interpretation. Her facial expression is a smile, however it does not seem natural due to her still body language. The piece therefore emphasizes the intention of the artist for this series to be about her own personal identity, while also contrasting the emotions portrayed in the previous piece. In terms of judging the artwork, it is a moderately cohesive self-portrait series. This is due to a slight disconnect between the aesthetics and meaning of each piece. Each piece maintains a varying use of line weights, brush strokes, color and composition. If the series is read as a timeline, the first two pieces demonstrate a transition from living in Colorado to New York. However, the last piece, “A Self Portrait”, is vague and does not 3 Francesca Eraso allow for much insight into the artist’s life or emotions. As separate pieces, the paintings may actually be more successful. The pieces also lack originality in composition and subject matter. It could help to be more intentional and conscious of each aesthetic decision so that the meaning would come across more clearly. Another improvement might be staying visually consistent throughout the series. In Conclusion, this series is comprised of three paintings that are distinct visually yet united in terms of meaning and possibility for improvement. Each piece varies in color and subject matter. The meaning of each piece is also distinct but each relates back to a different aspect of the artist’s identity. The series is not entirely cohesive yet still somewhat successful in terms of being a series that represents personal identity during a time of change in the artist’s life. As a viewer, one might look for more unity to bring insight into this period of time in the artist’s life. It would be a better understanding of her emotional reactions after moving from Colorado to New York as well as how this event has shifted or altered who she is. 4