Curriculum Leaders/NRRC Summer Writing Institute Rubric Template 2012-13 Grade: 6 Subject: Writing Narrative Informative Argument Writing Prompt There are probably many things you like about your school. But, is there anything you think seems unfair or unreasonable? Think about the rules, expectations, and requirements. Compose a letter to your principal convincing him or her to change one thing about the school policy. Give at least three reasons to support your argument. Standards 6.W.1. Write arguments to support claims with clear reasons and relevant evidence. a. Introduce claim(s) and organize the reasons and evidence clearly. b. Support claim(s) with clear reasons and relevant evidence, using credible sources and demonstrating an understanding of the topic or text. c. Use words, phrases, and clauses to clarify the relationships among claim(s) and reasons. d. Establish and maintain a formal style. e. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from the argument presented. 6.W.4 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. 6.L.1. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. a. Ensure that pronouns are in the proper case (subjective, objective, possessive). b. Use intensive pronouns (e.g., myself, ourselves). c. Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in pronoun number and person. d. Recognize and correct vague pronouns (i.e., ones with unclear or ambiguous antecedents). e. Recognize variations from standard English in their own and others' writing and speaking, and identify and use strategies to improve expression in conventional language. 6.L.2. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. a. Use punctuation (commas, parentheses, dashes) to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements. b. Spell correctly. 6.L3 Use knowledge of language and its conventions when writing, speaking, reading, or listening. a. Vary sentence patterns for meaning, reader/listener interest, and style.* Maintain consistency in style and tone.* 6.L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases based on grade 6 reading and content, choosing flexibly from a range of strategies. a. Use context (e.g., the overall meaning of a sentence or paragraph; a word’s position or function in a sentence) as a clue to the meaning of a word or phrase. b. Use common, grade-appropriate Greek or Latin affixes and roots as clues to the meaning of a word (e.g., audience, auditory, audible). c. Consult reference materials (e.g., dictionaries, glossaries, thesauruses), both print and digital, to find the pronunciation of a word or determine or clarify its precise meaning or its part of speech. Verify the preliminary determination of the meaning of a word or phrase (e.g., by checking the inferred meaning in context or in a dictionary). 6.L.5 Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. a. Interpret figures of speech (e.g., personification) in context. b. Use the relationship between particular words (e.g., cause/effect, part/whole, item/category) to better understand each of the words. c. Distinguish among the connotations (associations) of words with similar denotations (definitions) (e.g., stingy, scrimping, economical, unwasteful, thrifty). 6.L.6 Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general academic and domain-specific words and phrases; gather vocabulary knowledge when considering a word or phrase important to comprehension or expression. Suggested Administration (for example- accommodations, timeframes, etc): 2 /45 minute session First session- Planning and Drafting - Second Session Revising and Editing Trait Ideas Organization Voice Word Choice Sentence Fluency Conventions (See Language Standard pg. 1) 4 Exceeding Claim(s) are introduced clearly and creatively Claim(s) are supported with many clear reasons and relevant evidence, demonstrating that the writer has an in-depth understanding of the topic or text All reasons and evidence are logically organized Uses sophisticated words phrases and clauses to clarify the relationships among claims and reasons Provides an interesting concluding statement or section that follows from the argument presented Includes evidence of writer’s personality and begs to be read aloud Writer thoughtfully creates a personal connection with the reader Voice is consistently appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre Includes carefully chosen, precise words to convey meaning Words are engaging and consistently appropriate for audience and purpose Uses no overused words Establishes and maintains a sophisticated , formal style throughout the piece Includes all complete sentences Creatively uses a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and complex) Includes many varied sentence beginnings and lengths purposefully for effect Has no errors in grade level appropriate grammar Has no errors in grade level appropriate punctuation and capitalization Has no errors in grade level conventional spelling, spelling patterns and generalizations and few errors on above grade level words 3 Meeting Claim(s) introduced clearly Claim(s) are supported with clear reasons and relevant evidence, using credible sources demonstrating that the writer has an understanding of the topic or text Establishes and maintains a formal style throughout the piece Most reasons and evidence are logically organized Uses words phrases and clauses to clarify the relationships among claims and reasons Provides a concluding statement or section that follows from the argument presented Includes evidence of writer’s personality Reader feels a connection with the writer Voice is mostly appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre Includes precise words to convey meaning Words are consistently appropriate for audience and purpose Mostly avoids overused words Includes a few incomplete sentences relative to the length of the piece Includes a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and complex) Includes many varied sentence beginnings and lengths Has few errors in grade level appropriate grammar Has few errors in grade level appropriate punctuation and capitalization Has no errors in grade level conventional spelling and spelling patterns and generalizations 2 Developing Claim(s) introduced but may be vague Inconsistently supports the claim(s) with reasons that may not be clear, and evidence that may not be relevant Beginning to establish a formal style but not maintained throughout the piece 1 Beginning Claim is not evident Does not support the claim with reasons and/or credible evidence A formal style throughout the piece is not evident Some reasons and evidence are logically organized Uses some words, phrases and clauses to clarify the relationships among claims and reasons Provides a concluding statement or section that is weak and/or may not follow from the argument presented Beginning to show evidence of writer’s personality Reader begins to feel a connection with the writer Voice is somewhat appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre No evidence of writer’s personality Reader feels no connection with the writer Voice is not appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre Includes some precise words to convey meaning Some words are appropriate for audience and purpose Includes some overused words Includes no precise words and/or uses them incorrectly Many words are not appropriate for audience and purpose Includes many overused words Includes some incomplete sentences relative to the length of the piece Includes some variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and complex) Includes some varied sentence beginnings and lengths Has some errors in grade level appropriate grammar Has some errors in grade level appropriate punctuation and capitalization Has few errors in grade level conventional spelling and spelling patterns and generalizations Topic Development: _____/20 _________________ Conventions: _____/4 __________________ Exceeds (17-20), Meets (14-16), Developing (8-13), Beginning (5-7), Exceeds (4), Meets (3), Developing (2), Beginning (1) Name:________________________________________________ Date:_______________________________________ Reasons and evidence are not logically organized Does not use words, phrases and clauses to clarify the relationships among claims and reasons No concluding statement or section is evident Includes many incomplete sentences relative to the length of the piece Includes a limited variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and complex) Includes few or no varied sentence beginnings and lengths Has multiple errors in grade level appropriate grammar Has multiple errors in grade level appropriate punctuation and capitalization Has some errors in grade level conventional spelling and spelling patterns and generalizations Total Score Combined: ______/24__________________ Exceeds (20-24), Meets (16-19), Developing (9-15), Beginning (6-8)