Course: 3 r d Grade Writing Harlingen CISD Unit One 1st Grading Period (38 Days) 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Unit 1: Persuasive Writing Unit Pacing: 3 Weeks Dates: January 7 - 23 Planning for Instruction Professional Resources Suggested Mentor Texts: Detailed Persuasive Lesson – 3rd Grade I Wanna Iguana by Karen Kaufman Orloff Letters from the Campaign Trail: LaRue for Mayor, by Mark Teague Dear Mrs. La Rue: Letters From Obedience School, by Mark Teague Suggested Sequence: Prewrite & Organize – 3 days Draft – 3 days Revise & Teacher/Peer Conferences – 4 days Edit – 1 day Final Draft/Publish – 2 days William’s Doll, by Charlotte Zolotow Should We Have Pets?, by Sylvia Lollis Should There Be Zoos?, by Tony Stead Treasures Grammar and Writing Handbook, (Resource CD) examples on pp. 28, 29, 45 Areas of Focus: Genre and Audience In persuasive writing, writers state their opinion about something that is important to them and try to convince the reader to agree with their ideas. Authors use persuasive language and strong reasons to convince their readers to agree with their point of view. Persuasive opinions/arguments are most convincing when the writer is passionate about the topic and has a real audience in mind. Persuasive arguments are often communicated in a business letter for which a specific format should be followed. TEKS Persuasive writing is a type of expository writing, and uses the same compositional format as any expository writing: a central idea or thesis, supporting sentences and a concluding statement. However, in persuasive writing, the author presents his/her opinion as the central idea and supports it with convincing reasons and arguments. The supporting sentences explain the reasons further and provide examples, facts, and details to prove each reason is valid. The concluding statement (or paragraph) asks the reader to act on the position/central idea outlined in the paper. Grammar/Editing The following SEs should be taught during this unit: Capitalizing the salutation and closing of a letter should have been taught in 2nd grade, and can be reviewed in this unit, if the persuasive piece is written as a letter. We must also teach our 3rd graders the correct use of coordinating conjunctions to connect words, phrases, and simple sentences. When creating compound sentences, we join two simple sentences with a comma and a conjunction. In all sentences, the subject and verb must agree in number. We will also teach the spelling rule of ‘changing y to i’ when we add certain suffixes. Assessment Persuasive Writing is the most common type of real-world writing, discussion, and debate! Most children practice their persuasive skills on a daily basis and may not be very successful. We can help them improve their attempts to get what they want by teaching the art of persuasive writing and persuasive language! As stated in the TEKS section, good persuasive writing uses a central idea/ thesis, supporting sentences, and a concluding statement to convince the reader. Therefore, it is an excellent way for 3rd graders to practice this compositional form of writing to prepare them to write expository compositions in 4th grade. 1 Course: 3 r d Lesson and Pacing Grade Writing TEKS Student Expectations: 21(A) write persuasive essays for appropriate audiences that establish a position and use supporting details. Harlingen CISD Unit One 1st Grading Period (38 Days) Student will know: In persuasive writing, writers state their opinion about something important to them and try to convince the reader to agree with their ideas. 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Student will be able to: Write an essay or letter, using persuasive language, to convince others and provide support for their point of view (ELPS 5G-Writing, iE- Learning Strategies). Reading and analyzing examples of persuasive Read a variety of persuasive texts and identify the texts helps writers understand the genre, author’s characteristics that make a persuasive text unique (ELPS purpose, and unique characteristics of persuasive 4K-Reading). writing. Is it important to gather information before forming Read informational articles and take notes on important an opinion on a topic. facts that will help the writer form an opinion, after Authors use persuasive language to sway readers to considering all points of view (ELPS 4G-Reading). agree with their point of view. Include in their writing one or more opposing arguments Key Terms: essay, point of view, convince, opinion, and refute it/them (ELPS 1E-Learning Strategies). author’s purpose, unique characteristics, persuasive language Weeks One – Three Jan 7 - 23 Lesson 1: Persuasive Writing 20(A) create brief compositions In persuasive writing, the author presents his/her State their point of view in the introduction and create that: opinion as the central idea and supports it with convincing reasons and evidence to support it (ELPS 5F(i) establish a central idea in a topic convincing reasons and arguments. Writing). sentence; The supporting sentences explain the reasons Use explanations, examples, and facts to support their (ii) include supporting sentences further and provide examples, facts, and details to opinion and to persuade the reader to agree. with simple facts, details, and prove each reason is valid. End the writing with a concluding paragraph that asks the explanations; The concluding statement (or paragraph) asks the reader to act on what he has learned (ELPS 5G-Writing). (iii) contain a concluding statement; reader to act on the position/central idea outlined in Use the correct format when writing a persuasive letter. 20(B) write letters whose language the paper. is tailored to the audience and A fact is a statement that can be checked, by using purpose (e.g., a thank you note to reliable sources. a friend) and that use appropriate Persuasive arguments are often communicated in a conventions (e.g., date, salutation, letter following a specific format. closing); Persuasive writing may also be presented in essays. Key Terms: central idea, convincing reasons, arguments, supporting sentences, facts, details, examples, explanations, concluding statement, salutation, body, closing 2 Course: 3 r d Grade Writing Harlingen CISD Unit One 17(A) plan a first draft by selecting Persuasive writing is often written theDays) form of a 1st Grading Periodin(38 a genre appropriate for conveying letter, but can also be written as an essay. the intended meaning to an audience and generating ideas Persuasive arguments are most convincing when through a range of strategies (e.g., the writer is passionate about the topic and has a brainstorming, graphic organizers, real audience in mind logs, journals); 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Choose an appropriate genre for their persuasive piece, most likely an essay or letter. 17(B) develop drafts by Each paragraph within the body of the text develops categorizing ideas and organizing the reasons the author has given to support his/her them into paragraphs; opinion. Adding, changing, and deleting text help to make a 17(C) revise drafts for coherence, writer’s meaning more clear. organization, use of simple and Authors revise their writing using feedback and compound sentences, and advice from their peers. audience A persuasive argument is most effective when it is free from spelling, mechanics, and grammar errors. 17(D) edit drafts for grammar, Feedback from peers is often most helpful to writers mechanics, and spelling using a as they practice what their writing sounds like in a teacher-developed rubric; and safe, supportive environment. Develop the arguments in favor of the author’s point of view. Use feedback from peers to revise the persuasive writing and make it clear and convincing (ELPS 2E-Listening). 17(E) publish written work for a specific audience. Choose an audience for a persuasive letter or essay and brainstorm ways to make it convincing for that audience. (ELPS 1G-Learning Strategies) Edit the persuasive writing to correct all spelling, mechanics, and grammar errors (ELPS 1B-Learning Strategies). Publish the persuasive writing in a way that celebrates the writer’s commitment to a final product. Key Terms: essay, audience, convincing, persuasive argument, point of view, feedback, mechanics, grammar 22(A) use and understand the Coordinating conjunctions are used to connect Use transition words and phrases to indicate the function of the following parts of words, phrases, and simple sentences. connection between ideas in a composition. speech in the context of reading, writing, and speaking: Transition words and phrases connect the ideas in a Use complete sentences to communicate the flow of (vii) coordinating conjunctions (e.g., composition and show how different ideas are ideas in their composition and, or, but);* related. (viii) time-order transition words Follow the conventions of a business letter when writing a and transitions that indicate a A simple sentence has a subject, a verb, and a persuasive letter (ELPS 1E-Learning Strategies). conclusion;* complete thought. 3 Course: 3 r d Grade Writing Harlingen CISD Unit One 22(C) use complete simple and A compound sentence is made up of two simple 1st Grading Period (38 Days) compound sentences with correct sentences joined by a comma and a conjunction. subject-verb agreement.* Subject-verb agreement means that the subject and *Once these SEs have been explicitly the verb must agree in number. 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Correct fragments and run-on sentences in their own and others’ writing. Combine short sentences to create longer, more sophisticated, compound sentences. taught, it is expected that teachers will (ELPS 5F-Writing) continue to review and imbed these If the subject is singular, the verb must be singular; if SEs into all writing projects for the rest the subject is plural, the verb must be plural. Check to make sure subjects and verbs agree in all of the year. sentences (ELPS 5D-Writing). Key Terms: coordinating conjunctions, transition words, simple sentence, compound sentence, fragments, run-on sentences, subject-verb agreement, singular, plural 23(B) use capitalization for: Writers follow the conventions of business letter writing when they write a persuasive letter to someone they don’t know. Business letter format includes a salutation and closing, both of which are capitalized. Key Terms: conventions, business letter, salutation, closing 24(B) spell words with more advanced orthographic patterns and rules: (iii) changing y to i before adding an ending;* In words that end in a consonant + y, we change the Spell words that end in y correctly when adding a suffix (ELPS 5C-Writing). y to i when we add certain suffixes. Examples include: cries, hurries, babies; non-examples Use available resources to independently find and verify include: studying, plays, obeyed. the correct spellings of words (ELPS 1B-Learning There are different places where students can go to Strategies). 24(G) use print and electronic find the correct spellings of words, including: the resources to find and check correct word wall, charts in the classroom, books, spellings.* dictionaries, thesauruses, www.dictionary.com, the *Once these SEs have been explicitly spell-check function of a Word document, etc. taught, it is expected that teachers will continue to review and imbed these Whenever possible, students should try to find/verify SEs into all writing projects for the rest correct spellings independently. of the year. Key Terms: consonant, vowel, suffix, dictionary, thesaurus In addition to the TEKS listed in this Lesson, every week teachers should also provide rigorous and explicit instruction in the Recurring TEKS: F19 (A-F) Comprehension Skills, 1(A) Fluency: Read aloud grade-level and instructional text, 2(A-E) Vocabulary, 13(A-D) Comprehension of Media, 20 (Bi-Bii) Writing Conventions, 21(A), Oral and Written Conventions/Spelling, 27(A) Listening and Speaking/ Speaking, 28(A) Listening and Speaking/Listening 4 Course: 3 r d Grade Writing Harlingen CISD Unit One 1st Grading Period (38 Days) 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Writing Process: Persuasive Writing - All Attachments (in RED) for this Page can be found here Prewriting: Gretchen Bernabei, in Why We Must Run With Scissors, recommends Organizing: Students can use this online interactive tool to map out an argument for their using good open-ended questions to have students free write, then talk and share stories to get ideas flowing for topics that students are passionate about. Persuasive Discussion Questions, p.1 persuasive essay. Guide students to write the topic for their persuasive piece in the following form. This will make it easier for students to generate strong persuading reasons to support their topic. Here are a few more persuasive writing ideas, p.2 from this blog: http://www.proteacher.org/c/650_Persuasive_Writing.html Set up a contest for children to nominate ‘The Best Relative of the Year’. Students must write an essay to convince others to vote for the person they are nominating. http://www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/interactives/persuasion_map/ Once students have chosen their topic, they can use this graphic organizer to brainstorm and organize their reasons for their persuasive piece. Always model your thinking about how to use the graphic organizer before sending students off to write. http://www.teachervision.fen.com/tv/printables/read_3_U6_WP2.pdf One more way for children to organize their thoughts for a persuasive writing: Persuasive Graphic Organizer, p.3 Final Draft/Publishing: Persuasive opinions/arguments Conferencing: Drafting: Using any of the above graphic organizers, are most convincing when the writer is passionate about the topic and has a real audience in mind. If possible, send the student writings to real people who have a stake in what the writer is voicing his/her opinion about. Other suggestions for publishing include: A Conferencing Tip from Georgia Heard, p.7 – Read a student’s writing back to him/her. show students how to take the brainstormed ideas and compose sentences and paragraphs with supporting ideas that are well connected to the central idea of the writing. Think aloud about your thought process!, p.4 • Create a class newspaper of letters/essays or bind the letters/essays into a class book. Conference with students about any item on the criteria chart that you create with your class. Persuasive Peer Conference Form, p.8 • Create a bulletin board arrangement to display at a local library or other public facility. Editing: Moving from a graphic organizer to a written draft is not a natural process for many children. You may have to model this many times before children understand how you take individual phrases and ideas and turn them into sentences that flow together to communicate your main argument. Revising: If your students will be writing letters, make sure to teach them the conventions of The common coordinating conjunctions to teach 3rd graders are: and, but, or, so, yet. See Combining Sentences, pp. 9-11 for teaching suggestions. a business letter. Remind writers to capitalize the salutation and closing of the letter. Changing the y to i Spelling Rule: In words that end in a consonant + y, we change the y to i when we add certain suffixes. Examples include: cries, hurries, babies; non-examples include: studying, plays, obeyed. For more practice, go to Treasures Phonics/Spelling Practice Book (Resource CD) pp.127-132 There are different places where students can go to find the correct spellings of words, including: the word wall, charts in the classroom, books, dictionaries, thesauruses, www.dictionary.com, the spell-check function of a Word document, etc. Whenever possible, students should try to find/verify correct spellings independently. Peer Editing Checklist, p. 12 Read aloud some of the mentor texts listed above. After each reading, help writers create and refine a class list of criteria for a good persuasive writing. A possible Persuasive Criteria List, p.5 can be found here. Any item on this criteria list is a topic for a revising minilesson. Can readers follow my order of importance?, p.6 Once students are sure they have written their reasons in order so that their most convincing reason comes last, they can use transition words to help show the order of importance. 5