IELTS Preparation WRITING 2 Let’s Write More! A Guide to IELTS Writing (2) Let’s learn more about the IELTS Writing Test Task 2. Work in pairs. Read this information and do the task that follows. You have completed task 1, which took 20 minutes. Let’s move on to task 2. Task 2 is 2/3 of the total marks, so spend 40 minutes on it. Task 2 can include presenting an argument, giving opinions, solving problems and stating advantages and disadvantages. You will analyse, explore, and perhaps challenge the statement. When writing task 2, ...... introduce the topic in your own words. support your view using your knowledge and personal experience. state your own ideas; support and justify your view. show that you can summarise and evaluate your argument logically. If you have a clear opinion on the subject or if the question asks, Do you agree?, then you will present your argument. State your opinion clearly in the introduction. Write the same viewpoint in your conclusion. When answering any Writing Task 2, introduce the topic in an effective manner to attract the reader’s interest. conclude by stating your point clearly, logically and effectively. You must remember: write in paragraphs (approximately four) using clear, logical, connected sentences. You will write at least 250 words. If you write less, you will lose marks. Choose the best answers. 1. Task 2 should take ….. to complete. a. 20 minutes b. 40 minutes c. 1 hour 2. You can use your ….. to support your view. a. knowledge b. introduction c. question 3. It is important to introduce the topic using ….. . a. a logical conclusion b. your own words c. the same words as the question 4. Your ….. should be interesting to attract the reader’s attention. a. opinion b. conclusion c. introduction 5. Your essay should ideally contain ….. paragraphs. a. six b. four c. two 1 IELTS Preparation WRITING 2 Introduction Read the exam question in the box and the three introductions. The problems caused by work-related stress (such as a fall in production) have become a major problem for both employers and workers. What do you think are the main causes of work-related stress and how can they be avoided? A. Everybody agrees that the problems caused by work-related stress (such as a fall in production) have become a major problem for both employers and workers. Stress has many causes and it is my view that the main causes are difficult work and not enough time. In this essay, I will explain my views. B. Work related stress has become a major cause for concern for both managers and employees having a negative effect on the health of workers. Consequently, productivity in the workplace suffers. I believe that the issues of unrealistic expectations and lack of time must be addressed to solve this stress problem. C. Time lost at work through stress and ill-health is a considerable problem for both managers and employees. It can cause employees to miss work for long periods due to ill health and, of course, this can cause problems for the company. Obviously, this will cause economic problems as many businesses will close and this in turn will affect foreign exchange. Complete the sentences by matching the two parts. Draw lines. 1. Introduction A 2. Introduction B 3. Introduction C goes off topic. has a clear opinion, but uses the same words as the question. has a clear opinion and uses different words and phrases from the question. Work with a partner. Carry out these tasks. 1. You will lose marks if you use too many words copied from the question. Underline the part of the introduction that copies the words. 2. Underline the parts of introductions A and B that give opinion. 3. Underline the part of introduction C that if off topic. 2 IELTS Preparation WRITING 2 Write your own introduction to the exam question below. Schools do not teach the skills that students require to be successful in a career. Therefore, only subjects applicable to the workplace should be taught at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… Presenting and justifying your point Each point you make must be clearly justified with supporting material. You can use the following: a. Statistics (figures and data) b. Personal knowledge or experience c. A reason (an explanation), cause and effect Look at the supporting material (1 - 3) below and match them to the correct technique for justifying your opinion (a - c) above. 1. Work-related stress is a serious problem, as it makes performance worse and therefore costs employers more. 2. Research carried out by the government discovered that a 80% of workers in the UK experience work-related stress at a level that affects their health. 3. Stress can have extreme psychological effects. For example, a colleague of mine said that he had suffered a nervous breakdown after his workload had been increased to such an extent that it had become unmanageable. …… …… …… Look at the statement below. Show why this statement is correct. Use a reason statistics and personal knowledge or opinion. Traffic in Qatar is a major problem. 1. Reason …………………………………………………………..……………………………………………………… 2. Statistics …………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………… 3. personal knowledge or experience …………………………………………………………..…………….… 3 IELTS Preparation WRITING 2 Presenting the other side It is useful to include a section of your essay that presents the other side of the argument. However you can also show why you disagree. Look at the language in the box. We use these to present the other side of the argument and to disagree. 1. Some people may argue that winter is the best time of the year. However, it is clear that holidays in the summer are much more popular. 2. It could be argued that winter is the best time of the year. However, it is clear that holidays in the summer are much more popular. 3. It is difficult to accept this point of view as/because/since holidays in the summer are much more popular. 4. Although some people argue that winter is the best time of the year, we should consider holidays in the summer are much more popular. 5. Despite claims that winter is the best time of the year, facts show that holidays in the summer are much more popular. 6. Though it is true that …, we should bear in mind (that) … . Work with a partner and write sentences about these subjects. Give your opinion and the other side of the argument. Use the language from the box above. Example: Using the internet every day. Some people may argue that using the internet every day is very educational. However, it can waste a lot of time and damage your health. 1. Smoking ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………..… …………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………..…. 2. Mobiles when driving ……………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 3. Holidays ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………….. ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 4. Following fashion …………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 5. Exercising ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………………… 4 IELTS Preparation WRITING 2 Writing the conclusion Do not add new information to your conclusion. Summarise and/or paraphrase the main points, including your point of view. Re-read introduction B on page 2. Now read the conclusion below and answer the questions. 1. To conclude, the problem of work related stress has negative consequences for both the health of workers and for productivity. Therefore, Ii is extremely important that the issues of unrealistic expectations and time pressures are addressed. 2. To sum up, work-related stress has become a major cause for concern for both managers and employees, as it affects productivity. Therefore, managers need to reduce work levels. Training can be provided to improve workers’ skills. Doctors can also be available in to workplace to offer help and advice. Which conclusion rephrases the introduction B and summarises the main points? Which conclusion contains new information and does not paraphrase introduction B? …… …… Now read the introduction you wrote on page 3 and write a conclusion. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ………………………………………………………………………………………………………………….… ……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………. 5