Name: ___________________________________________________ Hour: ______________ Date: ______________ Nothing Ever Happens on 90th Street- Idea Development Activity Mr. Sims, the actor What advice about writing does he give Eva? Mr. Morley, the mousse maker What advice about writing does he give Eva? Paraphrase his advice with your own words: Paraphrase his advice with your own words: Record the best sentence from the Baby Joshua page that follows his advice: Record the best sentence from the Baby Joshua page that follows his advice: Alexis Leora, the dancer What advice about writing does she give Eva? Mrs. Martinez, the soup maker What advice about writing does she give Eva? Paraphrase her advice with your own words: Paraphrase her advice with your own words: Record the best sentence from the Baby Joshua page that follows her advice: Record the best sentence from the Baby Joshua page that follows her advice: The Alleyway Steve enjoyed being a dogcatcher…until tonight. His trusty “catching net” displayed scratches from hundreds of dogs who had tried to bite him during capture, but Steve always managed to go home unharmed. The alley that lay before him tonight, however, seemed more dangerous than any he had ever seen. Dented garbage cans lined the alley walls like soldiers, perhaps armed and ready to harm him. The alley’s walls- bright red in daylight- turned puce on this overcast night. Steve stepped forward, his huge hands gripping his net, and he moved towards the one garbage can that was trembling at the back of the alley. Was the dog he was looking for hiding behind it? This paragraph was influenced by the four pieces of advice given in the book, Nothing Ever Happens on 90th Street. Look closely at the sentences and phrases in the seven sentences above. Whose advice from the book seems to have influenced this piece of writing, and where do you see their influence? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Could this paragraph become part of a longer story? What could the longer story be about? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Brainstorm the names of interesting jobs that people have. Brainstorm the names of interesting places. Brainstorm the names of interesting items that people might have in their pockets, on their persons, or that can be carried in the hand. Feel free to add adjectives. Brainstorming for Ideas Details Ideas ______ Topic • ______ • ______ ______ ______ • ______ • ______ Details Ideas ______ Topic • ______ • ______ ______ ______ • ______ • ______ • ______ • ______ • ______ • ______ Name: _____________________________________________________ Date: _________________ Hour:____________ 90th Street Brainstorming Worksheet- Play with idea development before composing your paragraph My Person: My Place: My Thing: (write it below) (write it below) (write it below) (write a sentence or phrase in these spaces) (write a sentence or phrase in these spaces) How might you describe this (write a sentence or phrase in noun using Mr. Sim’s advice these spaces) to ____________________? How might you describe this noun using Mr. Morley’s advice to ______________________? How might you describe this noun using Mrs. Martinez’s advice to_____________________? What’s a “What if?” question about this noun that Alexis Leora’s advice might inspire? Now…use your favorite sentences and phrases from above to write a descriptive paragraph that mentions your person, your place, and your thing. Name: _______teacher model____________________________ Date: _________________ Hour:____________ 90th Street Brainstorming Worksheet- Play with idea development before composing your paragraph How might you describe this noun using Mr. Sim’s advice to focus on interesting details? How might you describe this noun using Mr. Morley’s advice to find poetry in your words? How might you describe this noun using Mrs. Martinez’s advice to spice it up with action? What’s a “What if?” question about this noun that Alexis Leora’s advice might inspire? My Person: My Place: My Thing: (write it below) (write it below) (write it below) A dog catcher An alley at night A net (write a sentence or phrase in these spaces) (write a sentence or phrase in these spaces) (write a sentence or phrase in these spaces) His name is stitched into his uniform with bright yellow thread. These bright red brick walls turn puce in this darkness. The aluminum pole is scratched from previous dogs’ gnashings. He shivers suspiciously with sweat and seems scared. He has huge hands. (alliteration) This net is a weapon against his fear. (metaphor) Stumbling in pot holes… spinning around when he hears creaks and thunks. Garbage cans line the walls like soldiers. The cans dare him to look behind them.(simile & personification) One garbage can quakes with tremors… something hides behind it… What if the dogcatcher finds his own dog behind that garbage can? What if the alley has one of those motion-detecting lights that come on? What if there’s a hole in the net that he doesn’t know about? It scrapes the alley’s sides as the dogcatcher moves forward toward the can. Now…use your favorite sentences and phrases from above to write a descriptive paragraph that mentions your person, your place, and your thing.