Unit of Study: Narrative Writing Grade: 3 Title: Unit 2 Length of Study: 6 to 7 weeks Genre Description: What is narrative writing? Priority Standards: Supporting Standards: W.3.3.1.b.ii. Use dialogue and descriptions of actions, thoughts, and feelings to develop experiences and events or show the response of characters to situations. (CCSS: W.3.3b) W.3.3.1.b i. Establish a situation and introduce a narrator and/or characters; organize an event sequence that unfolds naturally. (CCSS: W.3.3a) W.3.3.1.b iii. Use temporal words and phrases to signal event order. (CCSS: W.3c) W.3.3.3.a. With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (CCSS: W.3.4) W.3.3.1.b iv. Provide a sense of closure. (CCSS: W.3.3d) W.3.3.3.e. ix. Produce simple, compound, and complex sentences. (CCSS: L.3.1i) W.3.3.3.e.x. Vary sentence beginnings, and use long and short sentences to create sentence fluency in longer texts W.3.3.3.b. With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. (CCSS: W.3.5) W.3.3.3.c. With guidance and support from adults, use technology to produce and publish writing (using keyboarding skills) as well as to interact and collaborate with others. (CCSS: W.3.6) W.3.3.3.d.i. Choose words and phrases for effect. (CCSS: L.3.3a) W.3.3.3.d.ii. Recognize and observe differences between the conventions of spoken and written standard English. (CCSS: L.3.3b) W.3.3.3.e. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. (CCSS: L.3.1) W.3.3.3.e. i. Explain the function of nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives, and adverbs in general and their functions in particular sentences. (CCSS: L.3.1a) W.3.3.3.f.v. Use conventional spelling for high-frequency and other studied words and for adding suffixes to base words (e.g., sitting, smiled, cries, happiness). (CCSS: L.3.2e) W.3.3.3.f.vi. Use spelling patterns and generalizations (e.g., word families, position-based spellings, syllable patterns, ending rules, meaningful word parts) in writing words. (CCSS: L.3.2f) W.3.3.3.f.vii. Consult reference materials, including beginning dictionaries, as needed to check and correct spellings. (CCSS: L.3.2g) 1 Unit of Study: Narrative Writing Grade: 3 Title: Unit 2 Length of Study: 6 to 7 weeks Essential Questions: Mini Lesson Concepts/Topics Resources Mentor Text Day 1: Pre-Assessment Unassisted Gather seed ideas (ideas for writing) Anchor Chart A person that matters to you A place that matters to you Objects that spark a memory Narrow the Focus/Small Moments (Get students to focus on small moments within a larger moment. No bed-to-bed stories!) Discuss the difference between larger topics and small moments Model narrowing the topic orally (i.e. trip to Elitches vs. going on The Tower of Doom ride) Model with inverted triangle from Mentor Texts Watermelon vs. watermelon seeds (the watermelon is a large idea and watermelon seeds are the small Mentor Texts p. 54 by Lynne R. Dorfman & Rose Cappelli Launching the Writing Workshop by Denise Leograndis Launching the Writing Workshop by Lucy Calkins In Our Backyard by Eileen Spinelli In My Momma’s Kitchen by Jerdine Nolen All the Places to Love Patricia MacLachlan My Map Book by Sara Fanelli Rim Shots: Basketballs, pix by Charles Smith Wilford Gordon McDonald Partridge by Mem Fox The Relatives Came by Cynthia Rylant Tar Beach by Faith Ringgold Family Pictures by Sandra Cisneros 1. Formative Assessment: Check student’s Writer’s Notebook for seed ideas Mentor Texts “Using an Inverted Triangle to Shortcut by Donald Crews Find a Specific Writing Topic” pp. 60-62 One Lucky Girl by George Ella Lyon Launching the Writing Workshop – Session 3 by When I was Five by Arthur Howard Lucy Calkins I’m in Charge of Celebrations by Byrd Baylor Dad and Me by Peter Catalonotto 2 Unit of Study: Narrative Writing stories that happened within the whole watermelon) Begin an Anchor Chart “Qualities of Good Personal Narrative Writing” (-Write a little seed story; don’t write all about a giant watermelon topic; -Zoom in so you tell the most important parts of the story) Writing Step-by-Step/Using signal and temporal words Model an example of “talking about or commenting on (summarizing)” your seed idea versus telling your story step-by-step or sequentially (what happened first, next, etc.) Students share their stories with their partner using verbal rehearsal (using motions, acting out) Add to Anchor Chart Show, not Tell (actions, thoughts, feelings) Model telling about a seed idea (vague, lacking description). Using the same seed idea, create a clear picture of what is happening (specific details) Add to Anchor Chart Leads 2. Formative Assessment: Student has narrowed the focus by listing small moments. Student identifies the difference between large topics (bed-to-bed) and small moments. Launching the Writing Workshop Session 5 by Lucy Calkins Mentor Texts Chapter 4 Mentor Texts Chapter 4 and Your Turn Lessons 1-3 pp. 92-97 Feelings Chart or create a class chart 3. Formative Assessment: Students tell story step-by-step. Lily’s Purple Plastic Purse by Kevin Henkes Dad & Me by Peter Catalanotto I Remember Papa by Helen Ketterman The Memory String by Eve Bunting Crab Moon by Ruth Horowitz 4. Formative Assessment: Students include specific details about their topic (show, not tell). Launching the Writing Workshop Session 7 by Peter’s Chair by Ezra Jack Keats Read leads in mentor texts. Only Lucy Calkins Whistling by Elizabeth Partridge read the beginning of the text. Mentor Texts Chapter 5 and Your Turn Lesson 2 Fireflies! By Julie Brinckloe Discuss the different types of leads p. 129 Witch of Blackbird Pond by Elizabeth Speare in the mentor texts (character Because of Winn-Dixie by Kate DiCamillo description, setting, dialogue, action) Too Many Tamales by Gary Soto Add to Anchor Chart Owl Moon by Jane Yolen Students choose a piece of writing Cocoa Ice by Diana Applebaum and craft 2-3 different leads 5. Formative Assessment Student is able to generate 2-3 different leads. 3 Unit of Study: Narrative Writing Endings Sentence Dialogue Read endings in mentor texts. Discuss the different types of endings (surprise, lesson learned, memory, feeling, wish, strong line, question, circular ending, important action, dialogue, images) Add to Anchor Chart Students choose a piece of writing and craft 2-3 different endings Variety Circle first word in each sentence Sentence stretchers – Begin with a simple sentence and practice adding where, when, what, and why to each sentence. Vivid verbs and specific/precise nouns – Look through writing and change any label words (nouns) to specific/precise nouns. Change boring/dead/passive verbs to vivid verbs. Take one sentence and write it three different ways. Combine simple sentences to create compound and complex sentences In partners, take turns writing a conversation back and forth to each other (no talking). Have students rewrite the conversation using correct punctuation for dialogue Read mentor texts, pointing out the use of dialogue Show students how characters often think in stories Launching the Writing Workshop Session 9 by Lucy Calkins Mentor Texts Chapter 5 and Your Turn Your Lesson 3 p. 131 The Writing Diner Chapter 3 pp. 110-152 (Anema) Fireflies! By Julie Brickloe Thunder Cake by Patricial Polacco Big Mama’s by Donald Crews Salt Hands by Chelsea Aragon Blowing Away the State Writing Assessment Writing Alive – Sentence Building Chart, Sentence Styling, Complex Sentences Need a Chocolate Clauses! Daily Language Instruction Sentence Structures handout (Anema) Mentor Texts Chapter 8, p. 201 Thirteen Different Ways to Start a Sentence – sheet What is a ______? Books by Brian P. Cleary Ruth Heller books Commas Really Do Matter Eats, Shoots & Leaves Why, Commas Really DO Make a Difference! By Lynne Truss The Sign of the Seahorse by Graeme Base Hoops by Robert Burleigh The Ghost Dance by Alice McLerran 6. Formative Assessment Student generates 2-3 different endings. 7. Formative Assessment Student writing contains a variety of sentence types and lengths. Student writing contains strong verbs. Razzle Dazzle Writing pp. 39-45 Words for “said” chart Words for “ask” chart If You Give a Teacher A Book - Library Lil’ lesson Frog and Toad books Hey, Little Any by Hoose Fireflies! by Julie Brinkloe David Goes to School by David Shannon Peter’s Chair by Jack Ezra Keats 8. Formative Assessment Student writing contains dialogue with correct punctuation. 4 Unit of Study: Narrative Writing Conferencing Individual or small group Brief conversations Students does most of the talking Student reads their writing, teacher listens Model partner conferencing Revising Use student work or your own writing to model revising. Read the writing, focusing on one type of revision each time you read through it (sentence variety, sentence beginnings, vivid verbs, specific nouns, etc.). Editing Conferring questions sheet Small-Group Writing Conferences How to Use Your Instructional Time More Efficiently by Holly Slaughter Launching the Writing Workshop – Session IV America’s Choice: Mini-Lesson Series MiniLessons: Establishing the Writers Workshop – p. 29 How’s It Going? Chapters 2&3 Writing Essentials Chapter 9 p. 205 Launching the Writing Workshop Session 15 by Lucy Calkins Mentor Texts Editing Checklist/Poster Students individually use editing checklist to check their writing Peer editing 9. Formative Assessment Student provides verbal feedback to partner to improve their partner’s writing. 10. Formative Assessment Student writing has evidence of revision. 11. Formative Assessment Student writing has evidence of editing. Publishing Students type or hand-write their final copy On Demand Writing Prompts: 1. There are often people in our lives who are really important to us. Write about one moment you spent with a person who really matters to you. Tell the story of that moment. 2. There are often places in our lives that are really important to us. Write about one moment you spent in that important place that really matters to you. Tell the story of that moment. Common Formative Assessment Tasks: Checks for Understanding 1. Formative Assessment: 2. Formative Assessment: bed) and small moments. 3. Formative Assessment: 4. Formative Assessment: Check student’s Writer’s Notebook for seed ideas. Student has narrowed the focus by listing small moments. Student identifies the difference between large topics (bed-to Students tell story step-by-step. Students include specific details about their topic (show, not tell). 5 Unit of Study: Narrative Writing 5. Formative 6. Formative 7. Formative 8. Formative 9. Formative 10.Formative 11.Formative Assessment: Assessment: Assessment: Assessment: Assessment: Assessment: Assessment: Student Student Student Student Student Student Student is able to generate 2-3 different leads. generates 2-3 different endings. writing contains a variety of sentence types and lengths. Student writing contains strong verbs. writing contains dialogue with correct punctuation. provides verbal feedback to partner to improve their partner’s writing. writing has evidence of revision. writing has evidence of editing. 6