Unit Design This unit will be covering persuasive writing and the strategy of how to read persuasive writing, how to spot persuasive language, and how to write persuasively. Smagorinsky (2008) talks about strategy units as ways to reinforce a particular way of approaching reading and writing and that it should focus on a particular skill (pg. 47), in this case persuasive writing. Overarching questions for this unit would include: What is the difference between opinion and fact? How do writers elicit emotion from their audience? How do writers use evidence to prove their point? How can persuasive writing convince a skeptical audience to change their position on a heated topic? Unit Goals By the end of this unit students will be able to write their own persuasive editorials and letters. They will be able to read persuasive writing and identify the author’s position and their use of persuasive language. Students will be able to tell the difference between persuasive writing and other forms of writing previously studied (i.e. narrative, informational). Students will also be able to use persuasive writing to write editorials for their school newspaper focusing on school-wide issues that concern them. Texts Speeches: Martin Luther King Jr. - I Had a Dream Franklin Delano Roosevelt - Inaugural Address Barak Obama - Inaugural Address Magazine Ads: Students will bring in their own texts and analyze advertisements Editorials: Local, National, and World Newspapers Magazines – Library search or brought into class Debates: 2012 Presidential Debates Debate Team Grammar Incorporation In grammar, parallelism is a balance within one or more sentences of similar phrases or clauses that have the same grammatical structure. For example: lacking parallelism is “Corey admires people with integrity and who have character”, with parallelism it would look like: “Corey admires people with integrity and character” or “Corey admires people who have integrity and character.” Using parallelism can help create a rhythm or balance that will help students be more persuasive and elicit stronger emotion from their audience. Teaching parallelism will give students a wider variety of sentence patterns to work with and will help them to be better persuasive writers. Also, persuasive language and it’s use in writing will greatly help improve student writing. There is a wide range of persuasive language techniques. I would use this website to show examples: changingminds.org/techniques/language/persuasive/persuasive.htm Writing Prompt An editorial is a brief persuasive essay that presents and defends an opinion. For the school newspaper, write an editorial that deals with a school-wide issue or concern (ex: hall passes, truancy, dress code, standardized testing, cafeteria, and more!). Make a clear opinion statement, letting your audience knows your stance on the issue, and provide evidence that supports your opinion. Be convincing! Use persuasive language and parallelism to convince your audience. Also, think of your audience, who (ex: teachers, students, parents, principal) are you trying to convince? Writing Prompt Parameters Has a clear opinion statement Provides evidence that supports your position Argument anticipates and answer any readers’ objections (counterarguments) Argument is made with a specific audience in mind Introduction begins with a hook or attention grabber Organization Persuasive language and parallelism are used to add force and emotion to your argument Evaluation Students will be evaluated by their ability to create an effective persuasive argument in regards to a school-wide concern. Students must pay attention to their use of persuasive language to elicit emotion from the reader, their use of evidence to support their position, and their introduction, which must contain a hook or attention grabber common in editorials. Writing will also be evaluated on how well the student understands the audience that is reading their editorial and how well their argument tries to convince that audience. Students will also be evaluated on grammar, spelling, and sentence structure. They must show at least one example of parallelism and a couple uses of persuasive language. Goals to Guide Teaching The major goal of this unit is the strategy to analyze and interpret persuasive writing. As the teacher, it is your goal to expose students to a wide variety of persuasive writing to allow students to see how persuasive writing is used and how it differs from other writing styles covered in class. The goal is to give students the strategy to analyze persuasive writing and thus create their own persuasive writing. Teaching should focus on how to identify persuasive language, how to identify opinions versus facts, and how to identify the audience for each text. What does the teacher need to teach students to do? Identify parallelism and persuasive language in texts Analyze texts for opinions Identify opinions versus facts Write for a specific audience Create a clear and concise opinion statement Use evidence to support their opinions Criteria for assessment: Writing Prompt Rubric Category 1 – Below Expectations Opinion statement has no clear topic, focus, or author position. No introduction hook. Does not grab audience’s attention at the beginning. 2 – Approaching Expectations Opinion statement has a clear topic but focus and author’s position is not stated or unclear. The author has an introduction hook but it does not connect to opinion statement. Evidence Evidence is not relevant, not present, and/or not explained. Audience and CounterArguments Not clear who the audience is. Counterarguments are not addressed. Evidence is present but is not relevant or connected to the author’s position. No explanations on why certain evidence was used. Potential audience is understood. Counterarguments have been made but show no Introduction and Opinion Statement 3 – Meets Expectations The opinion statement names the topic and focus but the author’s position is unclear. The introduction has a hook or attention grabber, but it is weak or inappropriate for the audience, shows little connection to the opinion statement. Evidence is relevant to author’s position but is not specific. Explanations of evidence is given and supports author’s position 4 – Exceeds Expectations The opinion statement names topic, focus, and author’s position. The introduction has a strong hook or attention grabber that is appropriate for the audience and connects to the opinion statement. Clear who the audience is. Counterarguments are used and are appropriate for the intended Clear who the audience is. Persuasive language is used to specifically target that audience. Counter- Evidence is relevant, specific, and connected to author’s positions. Clear examples are given to connect evidence directly to author’s position. Grammar and Mechanics No use of persuasive language or parallelism. Contains many spelling and grammatical errors. connection to the potential audience. audience. Uses persuasive language but no clear use of parallelism is present. Some spelling and grammatical errors. Uses both persuasive language and parallelism. Few spelling or grammatical errors. arguments are appropriate for the intended audience and used to help further support the opinion statement. Uses persuasive language and parallelism to create a balance and rhythm to the writing. None or almost no spelling or grammatical errors. How does this writing prompt map onto the unit goals? This writing prompt is a culminating assignment for a unit on persuasive writing. Throughout the unit students would have been exposed to different types of persuasive writing and would have been working on how to identify opinions and positions. By doing this writing prompt, students will be taking the strategies they have learned to identify persuasive writing and using them to create their own positions and opinions. The prompt is meant to give students the freedom to choose their own topic but focused on a schoolwide concern to help focus their attention on how editorials can be used to bring up concerns and opinions. Students will be expected to use sentence patterns and persuasive language covered in class in their writing thus giving them the chance to diversify their own writing style. Reference: Smagorinsky, P. (2008). Teaching English by design. Heinemann; Portsmouth, NH.