Academic Skills Advice Grammar: Sentence Structure This workshop will: - Refresh your understanding of grammar terminology - Cover subjects and objects of sentences; simple, compound and complex sentences: and different clause types for speakers of English - Provide an opportunity to practice within the workshop and via follow-on activities for you to be able to continue to improve your grammar Teaching points: 1. 2. 3. 4. Subjects and objects in sentences Complete and incomplete sentences What a clause is Different types of clauses and sentences Directly adapted from Cottrell (2008) and Harrison, Jakeman and Patterson (2012). www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 1 Academic Skills Advice 1. Parts of a sentence A sentence must have a subject and a verb connected to it; it may also have an object. A SUBJECT ‘does’ the ‘doing’ or action of a verb, e.g. The DOG bit the cat – DOG is the subject as it is doing the biting. A VERB is the ‘doing’ part of a sentence, e.g. The dog BIT the cat – BIT is the verb as it is the action An OBJECT is the one that is having the ‘doing’ or action ‘done’ to it, e.g. The dog bit the CAT – CAT is the object as it is the thing that is being bitten. (Pet care tips; advice and information, 2012) Many English speakers are not aware of their ability to construct sentences correctly even though they have not been taught these building blocks. However, it is important in your academic writing to ensure your grammar is correct at all times, as if you don’t, it could mean your marker has difficulty understanding what you are trying to say or you could write something with a different meaning to what you intended. Which is the subject, the verb and the object of the following sentences? Bradford University attracts students from all over the world. Matt tidied his room and washed the breakfast dishes. It was Mothers’ Day and he’d forgotten to buy a card and present. As you can see, the order of these three elements does not have to be object-verbsubject, they can move around. Let’s go back to that pesky dog and victim cat. The cat was bitten by the dog object verb subject www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 2 Academic Skills Advice Even though the order of the words has changed, it is still the dog doing the biting so he/she remains the subject, and the cat is still being bitten and so remains the object. Activity 1: Identifying the object and subject Highlight the object and subject in the following sentences. Check with your neighbour to see if your results tally. A. 30 English Language students were invited to participate in the study by their tutor. B. The researcher injected the bacterium with solution A. C. Measuring the model’s speed proved difficult due to problems with the device the students developed. D. A high temperature in a patient can indicate the presence of many diseases or infections. Arranging these three elements in different ways not only changes how we actually read the content, but also how we perceive what we have written. The writer wants us to think or feel a certain way. This is connected with ‘voice’ which is one of the subjects of another workshop we run. 2. Complete and incomplete sentences To be complete, a sentence needs a subject and a main verb. As such, it carries an idea and makes sense on its own. But a sentence does not need an object. See below: The results of the experiment were recorded. subject verb If you are unsure about the above example, there is a silent bit – ‘by me’ – which would be the object, the one who is doing the recording. So it would read: The results of the experiment were recorded. (by me) subject verb (object) www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 3 Academic Skills Advice Sentences can also be incomplete due to clauses missing (more about clauses soon) or missing links between different parts of a sentence. Let’s look at the sentence below: Using statistics to confuse the reader as much as anything else. There is an issue with this incomplete sentence. The first part of the sentence: ‘Using statistics to confuse the reader...’ sets up an expectation that something happened or will happen. You are waiting for the main verb similar to ‘meant’ or ‘will’ or ‘ensures’ or ‘is’, so it could read… Using statistics to confuse the reader is a deliberate ploy by the government. In this sentence we have our expectation met – we know what the confusion over statistics was for. Also, what does ‘as much as anything else’ mean? It doesn’t make sense in this context AND is too vague a phrase to use in academic writing anyway. Complete or incomplete? In spite of all the changes that had taken place and how much the situation had altered in the intervening years. Activity 2: Complete or incomplete and why? (You’ll get more practice later.) A. With the arrival of environmental engineering, approaches to some projects required fresh thinking. B. It’s about being clear, ensuring your marker is able to see the point you are making easily. www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 4 Academic Skills Advice 3. What a clause is Many people find the term ‘clause’ daunting, but a clause is just a building block of a sentence with each one adding to the overall detail of a sentence. Without clauses, writing can be boring and child-like. A clause is a group of words that may or may not have a complete meaning on their own. A sentence may contain more than one clause, but must have one main clause. 4. Different types of clauses and sentences Main clauses: a sentence must have one a sentence may consist only of one clause (all the sentence examples above are one clause long) Co-ordinated clauses: a sentence may consist of two main clauses that make sense on their own, linked by a conjunction – this is a compound sentence. Two separate sentences combine into one compound sentence: sentence and main clause sentence and main clause The results of the experiment were recorded. The data was put in a spreadsheet. The results of the experiment were recorded and the data was put in a spreadsheet. one main clause conjunction one main clause There are many words that can be used as conjunctions including ‘or’, ‘but’, and ‘so’. www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 5 Academic Skills Advice Other clauses: a sentence may consist of a main clause and one or more other nonmain clauses which would not make sense on their own; they may follow one another or one may be within another – this is a complex sentence. One sentence which is a main clause and one other non-main clause combine into a complex sentence: sentence and one main clause The results of the experiment were recorded. non–main clause that more sugar can be dissolved in water the higher the temperature of the liquid start of original sentence start of non-main clause The results of the experiment, that more sugar can be dissolved in water the higher the temperature of the liquid, were recorded. end of non-main clause end of original sentence Non-main clauses can go in the middle or the end of complex sentences. A bit more information - Clauses are normally separated by commas or conjunctions A main clause does not does not have to begin a sentence A clause that is not a main clause does not have to have a verb or subject Quick reminder - a sentence contains a subject and verb to make sense on its own Bored yet? www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 6 Academic Skills Advice Let’s try putting this all together by re-writing the following so it makes grammatical sense and is appropriate academic writing. The jury system is a central plank of the British legal system. A number of critics of it who say that it is outdated. Many cases too complex for ordinary members of the public. The result they feel that juries should not be used any longer. Suggested answer: Activity 3: Sentences and clauses Read these paragraphs and highlight where there are errors. With your neighbour, rewrite the paragraphs so that they contain only complete sentences. To do this you may need to add linking words to join some sentences together, create clauses and/or re-word some parts. a)A number of reasons why the ruling party might lose the next election. The state of the economy is probably the top one. Many people are losing jobs and businesses are unable to attract investment. A growing loss of faith in the government. Suggested answer: b)TV watchers could not believe how many people the protest attracted. Despite one of the wettest days of the year. On every street in the city centre, hundreds of protestors. Carrying slogans and denounced the government’s policies. Suggested answer: www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 7 Academic Skills Advice If you would like help with other aspects of grammar such as voice, common mistake and homophones, or with punctuation we run workshops on these subjects. You can also visit The Language Centre at Bradford University who will be able to provided additional support to ALL students: http://www.brad.ac.uk/study/languages/international-study-centre/ References Clip art: alarm/tired/question Cottrell, S. (2008) The Study Skills Handbook, 3rd ed. Basingstoke: Palgrave Macmillan. Harrison, V., Jakeman, M., and Paterson K. (2012) Improve your Grammar. Basingstoke: Palgrave MacMillan Pet care tips; advice and information (2012) Cat bitten by dog. Available at: http://www.petcaregt.com/blog/cat-bitten-by-dog.html (Accessed 18.6.2014) Answers Parts of a sentence Bradford University attracts students from all over the world. object verb subject Matt tidied his room and washed the breakfast dishes. objectverb subject verb subject It was Mothers’ Day and he’d forgotten to buy a card and present. ob v subject ob verbs subject www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 8 Academic Skills Advice Activity 1: Identifying the object and subject Underlined is object and emboldened is subject 30 English Language students were invited to participate in the study by their tutor. The researcher injected the bacterium with solution A. Measuring the model’s speed proved difficult due to problems with the device the students developed. A high temperature in a patient can indicate the presence of many diseases or infections. is this sentence complete or incomplete? In spite of all the changes that had taken place and how much the situation had altered in the intervening years. This is an incomplete sentence. The above clause sets the scene, it sets up an expectation that although all these changes and alterations have been made, something will not or has not happened. It’s called a causal link, ie. X therefore Y The sentence could read… In spite of all the changes that had taken place and how much the situation had altered in the intervening years, education is still the subject of debate regarding examination pass standards. X therefore Y Because even though all these changes and alterations have been made, there is still room for discussion about examination pass standards. Activity 2: Complete or incomplete With the arrival of environmental engineering, approaches to some projects required fresh thinking. This sentence is complete. There is a link between each clause. This sentence is written in a particularly stylistic way so it may be easier to see the link if you rearrange it: www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 9 Academic Skills Advice Approaches to some projects required fresh thinking with (meaning ‘due to’) the arrival of environmental engineering. So X therefore Y and Activity 3: Clauses and sentences The jury system is a central plank of the British legal system, although a number of critics of it say that it is outdated with many cases being too complex for ordinary members of the public. Therefore, they feel juries should not be used any longer. There are a number of reasons why the ruling party might lose the next election, with the state of the economy probably being the top one. Many people are losing jobs and businesses are unable to attract investment generating a growing loss of faith in the government. TV watchers could not believe how many people the protest attracted, despite it being held on one of the wettest days of the year. On every street in the city centre, hundreds of protestors carried slogans and denounced the government’s policies. www.brad.ac.uk/academic-skills 10