Course: 4 t h G r a d e W r i t i n g Harlingen CISD Unit One 1st Grading Period (38 Days) 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Unit 1: Persuasive Writing Unit Pacing: 3 Weeks Dates: January 7 - 23 Planning for Instruction Professional Resources Suggested Mentor Texts: Detailed Persuasive Lesson – 4th Grade I Wanna Iguana by Karen Kaufman Orloff Letters from the Campaign Trail: LaRue for Mayor, by Mark Teague Dear Mrs. La Rue: Letters From Obedience School, by Mark Teague Suggested Sequence: Prewrite & Organize – 3 days Draft – 2 days Revise & Teacher/Peer Conferences – 3 days Edit – 1 day Final Draft/Publish – 2 days William’s Doll, by Charlotte Zolotow Should We Have Pets?, by Sylvia Lollis Should There Be Zoos?, by Tony Stead Can I Keep Him?, by Steven Kellogg Hey Little Ant by Phillip M. Hoose Dear Mr. Blueberry, by Simon James Messages in the Mailbox:How to Write a Letter, by Loreen Leady Areas of Focus: Genre and Audience In persuasive writing, writers state their opinion about something that is important to them and try to convince the reader to agree with their ideas. Authors use persuasive language and strong reasons to convince their readers to agree with their point of view. Persuasive opinions/arguments are most convincing when the writer is passionate about the topic and has a real audience in mind. Persuasive arguments are often communicated in a business letter for which a specific format should be followed. TEKS Persuasive writing is a type of expository writing, and uses the same compositional format as any expository writing: a central idea or thesis, supporting sentences and a concluding statement. However, in persuasive writing, the author presents his/her opinion as the central idea and supports it with convincing reasons and arguments. The supporting sentences explain the reasons further and provide examples, facts, and details to prove each reason is valid. The concluding statement (or paragraph) asks the reader to act on the position/central idea outlined in the paper. Grammar/Editing There are only a few grammar and editing skills that have not already been taught in previous writing units. Capitalizing the salutation and closing of a letter which should have been taught in previous years, and can be reviewed in this unit, if the persuasive piece is written as a letter. We must also teach the correct spelling of words with silent letters (silent k, silent w, silent b, and silent h), as well as homophones that are commonly used in 4th grade writing. The editing section of this lesson gives several good examples. Assessment Persuasive Writing is the most common type of real-world writing, discussion, and debate! Most children practice their persuasive skills on a daily basis and may not be very successful. We can help them improve their attempts to get what they want by teaching the art of persuasive writing and persuasive language! As stated in the TEKS section, good persuasive writing uses a central idea/ thesis, supporting sentences, and a concluding statement to convince the reader. Therefore, it is an excellent way for 4th graders to practice this compositional form of writing that they will also use to write their expository composition for the STAAR Writing Test. 1 Course: 4 t h G r a d e W r i t i n g Lesson and Pacing TEKS Student Expectations: 19(A) write persuasive essays for appropriate audiences that establish a position and use supporting details. Week Nine Eleven Oct. 20 – Nov 7 Lesson 1: Report Harlingen CISD Unit One 1st Grading Period (38 Days) Student will know: 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Student will be able to: In persuasive writing, writers state their opinion about Write a letter to convince others and provide support for something that is important to them and try to convince their point of view. the reader to agree with their ideas. Authors use persuasive language to sway their Use convincing reasons and language that will persuade readers to agree with their point of view. Reading and others to agree with their opinion. analyzing examples of persuasive texts helps writers understand the genre, author’s purpose, and unique Read a variety of persuasive texts and identify the characteristics of persuasive writing. characteristics that make a persuasive text unique. Key Terms: position, point of view, convince, persuasive language, opinion, unique characteristics Use the vocabulary to describe their writing process while writing a persuasive piece. 18(A) create brief compositions that: (i) establish a central idea in a topic sentence; (ii) include supporting sentences with simple facts, details, and explanations; and (iii) contain a concluding statement. In persuasive writing, the author presents his/her State their point of view in a main idea sentence and opinion in a main idea and supports it with convincing create convincing reasons to support it. reasons and arguments. Use explanations, examples, and facts to support their Supporting details include explanations, examples and opinion and to persuade the reader to agree. facts. Write a formal, persuasive letter with the correct letter A fact is a statement that can be checked, by using format. reliable sources. 18(B) write letters whose language is tailored to the audience and purpose (e.g., a thank you note to a friend) and that use appropriate conventions (e.g., date, salutation, closing); Persuasive arguments are often communicated in a letter with a specific format to be followed. Key Terms: central idea, topic sentence, argument, supporting sentence, facts, details, examples, explanations, concluding statement, salutation, body, closing, formal letter 2 Course: 4 t h G r a d e W r i t i n g Harlingen CISD Unit One 15(A) plan a first draft by Persuasive writing is Grading often written in the of a 1st Period (38form Days) selecting a genre appropriate for letter, but can also be written as an essay. conveying the intended meaning to an audience and generating Persuasive arguments are most convincing when the ideas through a range of writer is passionate about the topic and has a real strategies (e.g., brainstorming, audience in mind. graphic organizers, logs, journals); Each paragraph within the body of the text develops the arguments in favor of the author’s opinion. 15(B) develop drafts by categorizing ideas and Adding, changing, and deleting text help to make a organizing them into paragraphs; writer’s meaning more clear. Write a persuasive letter or essay. 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Choose an audience for a persuasive letter or essay and brainstorm ways to make it convincing. Develop the arguments in favor of the author’s point of view. Use feedback from peers to revise the persuasive writing and make it clear and convincing. Edit the persuasive writing to correct all spelling, mechanics, and grammar errors. 15(C) revise drafts for focus and Authors revise their writing using feedback and advice coherence, organization, voice, from their peers. Publish the persuasive writing in a way that celebrates development of ideas, word the writer’s commitment to a final product. choice, use of simple and A persuasive argument is most effective when it is free compound sentences, and from spelling, mechanics, and grammar errors. audience independently and in response to feedback from peers Feedback from peers is often the most helpful to and teachers; writers as they practice what their writing sounds like in a safe, supportive environment. 15(D) edit drafts for grammar, mechanics, and spelling using a Key Terms: essay, convincing, persuasive argument, teacher-developed rubric; and point of view, feedback, mechanics, grammar 15(E) revise final draft in response to feedback from peers and teacher and publish written work for a specific audience. In addition to the TEKS listed in this Lesson, every week teachers should also provide rigorous and explicit instruction in the Recurring TEKS: F19 (A-F) Comprehension Skills, 1(A) Fluency: Read aloud grade-level and instructional text, 2(A-E) Vocabulary, 13(A-D) Comprehension of Media, 20 (Bi-Bii) Writing Conventions, 21(A), Oral and Written Conventions/Spelling, 27(A) Listening and Speaking/ Speaking, 28(A) Listening and Speaking/Listening 3 Course: 4 t h G r a d e W r i t i n g Harlingen CISD Unit One 1st Grading Period (38 Days) 2014-2015 Quarter 3 Writing Process: Persuasive Writing - All Attachments (in RED) for this Page can be found here Prewriting: Gretchen Bernabei, in Why We Must Run With Scissors, recommends Organizing: Students can use this online interactive tool to map out an argument for their using good open-ended questions to have students free write, then talk and share stories to get ideas flowing for topics that students are passionate about. Persuasive Discussion Questions, p.1 persuasive essay. Guide students to write the topic for their persuasive piece in the following form. This will make it easier for students to generate strong persuading reasons to support their topic. Here are a few more persuasive writing ideas, p.2 from this blog: http://www.proteacher.org/c/650_Persuasive_Writing.html Set up a contest for children to nominate ‘The Best Relative of the Year’. Students must write an essay to convince others to vote for the person they are nominating. http://www.readwritethink.org/files/resources/interactives/persuasion_map/ Once students have chosen their topic, they can use this graphic organizer to brainstorm and organize their reasons for their persuasive piece. Always model your thinking about how to use the graphic organizer before sending students off to write. http://www.teachervision.fen.com/tv/printables/read_3_U6_WP2.pdf One more way for children to organize their thoughts for a persuasive writing: Persuasive Graphic Organizer, p.3 Final Draft/Publishing: Persuasive opinions/arguments Conferencing: Drafting: Using any of the above graphic organizers, are most convincing when the writer is passionate about the topic and has a real audience in mind. If possible, send the student writings to real people who have a stake in what the writer is voicing his/her opinion about. Other suggestions for publishing include: A Conferencing Tip from Georgia Heard, p.7 – Read a student’s writing back to him/her. show students how to take the brainstormed ideas and compose sentences and paragraphs with supporting ideas that are well connected to the central idea of the writing. Think aloud about your thought process!, p.4 • Create a class newspaper of letters/essays or bind the letters/essays into a class book. Conference with students about any item on the criteria chart that you create with your class. Persuasive Peer Conference Form, p.8 • Create a bulletin board arrangement to display at a local library or other public facility. Moving from a graphic organizer to a written draft is not a natural process for many children. You may have to model this many times before children understand how you take individual phrases and ideas and turn them into sentences that flow together to communicate your main argument. Editing: Some words are spelled with letters that have no sound. Revising: If your students will be writing letters, make sure to teach them the conventions of Words with silent k include: knee, knock, knife, kneel, know, knead, and knuckle. Words with silent w include: wrench, wring, answer, wrapper, wriggle, wrinkle, and wrestle. Words with silent b include: lamb, thumb, plumber, comb, and doubt. Words with silent h include: hour, honor, heir, hour, honest A homophone is a word that is pronounced the same as another word but has a different meaning. Examples of homophones include: eye and I, rose and rows, bear and bare, break and brake, buy and by, scent and cent, deer and dear, hear and here, one and won, etc. Peer Editing Checklist, p.9 a business letter found in Texas Write Source, pp. 242-243. Remind writers to capitalize the salutation and closing of the letter. Read aloud some of the mentor texts listed above. After each reading, help writers create and refine a class list of criteria for a good persuasive writing. A possible Persuasive Criteria List, p.5 can be found here. Any item on this criteria list is a topic for a revising minilesson. Can readers follow my order of importance?, p.6 Once students are sure they have written their reasons in order so that their most convincing reason comes last, they can use transition words to help show the order of importance. 4