Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing Grade: 4 Title: Unit Length of Study: 6 to 7 weeks Genre Description: What is opinion writing? What is persuasive writing? In persuasive writing, writers state their opinion about something that is important to them and try to convince the reader to agree with their ideas. Authors use persuasive language and strong reasons to convince the readers to agree with their point of view. Priority Standards: Supporting Standards: W.4.3.1.a Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information. (CCSS: W.4.1) W.4.3.1.a.i Introduce a topic or text clearly, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure in which related ideas are grouped to support the writer’s purpose. (CCSS: W.4.1a) W.4.3.3.e.i Choose words and phrases to convey ideas precisely. (CCSS: L.4.3a) W.4.3.3.e.ii Choose punctuation for effect. (CCSS: L.4.3b) W.4.3.3.f.vi Use compound subjects (Tom and Pat went to the store) and compound verbs (Harry thought and worried about the things he said to Jane) to create sentence fluency in writing W.4.3.3.f.vii Produce complete sentences, recognizing and correcting inappropriate fragments and run-ons. (CCSS: L.4.1f) W.4.3.1.a.iii Link opinion and reasons using words and phrases (e.g., for instance, in order to, in addition). (CCSS: W.4.1c) W.4.3.3.a Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (CCSS: W.4.4) W.4.3.3.b With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. (CCSS: W.4.5) W.4.3.3.c With some guidance and support from adults, use technology, including the Internet, to produce and publish writing as well as to interact and collaborate with others; demonstrate sufficient command of keyboarding skills to type a minimum of one page in a single sitting. (CCSS: W.4.6) W.3.3.3.d Use correct format (indenting paragraphs, parts of a letter, poem, etc.) for intended purpose W.4.3.1.a.iv Provide a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented. (CCSS: W.4.1d) Essential Questions: What is persuasive writing? How do we identify persuasive writing? How do writers use language to persuade? How do we build a strong argument and justify our stance? How do we organize our thoughts to be more persuasive? Where do we find persuasive writing? Mini Lesson Concepts/Topics Resources Mentor Text Day 1: Pre-Assessment Prompt: Think of an idea or topic that you have strong feelings about. Write your opinion and give reasons that tell why you feel this way. Use everything you know about essay writing and/or letter writing. 1 Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing Show examples of persuasive text Discuss key components that distinguish persuasive writing from narrative and informative In small groups, have students examine one or more persuasive mentor texts and generate a list of reasons why it’s a good example of persuasive text. Create an anchor/criteria chart of characteristics of persuasive writing Persuasive Essay Criteria Chart on S Drive (scan) http://www.hallco.org/literacy/index.php?opti on=com_content&view=article&id=7&Itemid =6 What We Notice About Persuasive Writing • States an opinion or position • Gives reasons for opinions • Backs up opinions with data, evidence, expert quotes, examples, and so on. • Offers possible solutions • Restates position in conclusion Point of View Read aloud William’s Doll by Charlotte Zolotow Discuss the different points of view of the characters Ask students to think about this statement: “It’s snowing!” Fold a piece of paper in half (pro and con Nonfiction Mentor Texts Teaching Informational Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-8 “Writing from a Point of View Using a Pro/Con Chart” by Lynne Dorfman & Rose Cappelli pp. 101-102, 127-129 Hey, Little Ant! by Phillip and Hannah Hoose I Wanna Iguana by Karen Kaufman Orloff I Wanna New Room by Karen Kaufman Orloff One Grain of Rice bu Demi and Demi Duck! Rabbit! (perspective) Click, Clack, Moo: Cows That Type by Doreen Cronin Can I Keep Him? By Steven Kellogg Somewhere Today by Bert Kitchen (persuasive lead) In November by Cynthia Rylant (pros/cons) “Belinda Blue” in Something Big Has Been Here by Jack Prelutsky(pros/cons) I Miss Franklin P. Shuckles by Ulana Snihura I Know It’s Autumn by Eileen Spinelli Should There Be Zoos? by Tony Stead When Winter Comes by Nancy Van Laan The Seashore Book by Charlotte Zolotow Dear Mr. Blueberry by Simon James Wildfires by Seymore Simon So You Want to be President by Judith St. George Don’t Let the Pigeon Drive the Bus by Mo Willems Should We Have Pets? by Sylvia Lollis Should There Be Zoos? by Tony Stead I Want a Pet by Lauren Child The Salamander Room by Anne Mazer William’s Doll by Charlotte Zolotow Earrings! By Judith Voirst I Miss Franklin P. Shuckles by Ulana Snihura Dancing in the Wings by Debbie Allen 2 Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing column) Divide class in half (half in point of view children and other half point of view of parents and teachers) Put students in partnership (one student with each point of view) Whole group – Have students share orally and record some of their ideas on chart paper – 2 columns W.4.3.1.a Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information. (CCSS: W.4.1) Gather Seed Ideas Questions to ask yourself: How could the world change for the better? Is there anything that people do that I think is wrong or unfair? Some people think. . . but I think. . W.4.3.1.a Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information. (CCSS: W.4.1) Write a thesis/Choose an argument W.4.3.1.a Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information. (CCSS: W.4.1) Plan Create an outline, a tree map (boxes and bullets), or persuasion map for your essay Add elaborated supports for each bullet (Remind students that their strongest reason should be their final reason.) A Curricular Plan for the Writing Workshop Grade 4 p. 65 by Lucy Calkins A Curricular Plan for the Writing Workshop Grade 4 p. 66 by Lucy Calkins Nonfiction Mentor Texts Teaching Informational Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-8 by Lynne Dorfman & Rose Cappelli pp. 98-101 http:www.readwritethink.org/classroomresources/lesson-plans/convince-developingpersuasive-writing-56.html (persuasion map) http:/www.teachervision.fen.com/creativewriting/graphic-organizers/33547.html http://www.hallco.org/literacy/index.php?opti on=com_content&view=article&id=7&Itemid =6 3 Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing A Curricular Plan for the Writing Workshop Grade 4 p. 66 by Lucy Calkins W.4.3.1.a Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information. (CCSS: W.4.1) Add Facts to Support Thesis Use everything from previous learning about good essay writing Anecdotes Adding other people’s stories Supporting ideas with quotes Read aloud I Wanna Iguana Have students call out general information and specific details On a 2-column chart, categorize each sentence. Model how to add specific details to a general information sentence. Nonfiction Mentor Texts Teaching Informational Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-8 by Lynne Dorfman & Rose Cappelli pp. 120-121 I Wanna Iguana by Karen Kaufman Orloff For example, “Schools should not require students to wear uniforms” is a general information sentence. “School uniforms can be too expensive for some families to buy” would be a specific sentence with details. 4 Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing W.4.3.1.a Write opinion pieces on topics or texts, supporting a point of view with reasons and information. (CCSS: W.4.1) Determining Audience On chart paper, brainstorm some different audiences (principal, parent, business, peers, younger children, sibling) Explain that you wouldn’t use big words for Kindergartners just like you wouldn’t use easy words with grown-ups Partner Talk – Share who you think your audience will be for your essay Drafting Write a quick draft of essay Nonfiction Mentor Texts Teaching Informational Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-8 by Lynne Dorfman & Rose Cappelli pp. 105 W.5.3.3.d With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach. W.4.3.3.a Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. (CCSS: W.4.4) Linking words, phrases, and clauses In my opinion, it is necessary It be said that, some people suggest, the opposing view might argue that The chart “Young Author’s List of Transitions” comes from Razzle Dazzle Writing: Achieving Excellence Through 50 Target Skills by Melissa Forney W.4.3.1.a.iii Link opinion and reasons using words and phrases (e.g., for instance, in order to, in addition). (CCSS: W.4.1c) Introduction Creating a scene Write a thesis followed by the elaboration of the writer’s opinion Nonfiction Mentor Texts Teaching Informational Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-8 by Lynne Dorfman & Rose Cappelli pp. 69-83,112 AlmostGone: The World’s Rarest Animals by Steve Jenkins Imagine a Day by Sarah Thomson Somewhere Today by Bert Kitchen W.4.3.1.a.i Introduce a topic or text clearly, state an opinion, and create an organizational structure in which related ideas are grouped to support the writer’s purpose. (CCSS: W.4.1a) 5 Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing Conclusion Model “Take 5” strategy with one of your persuasive essays (Take 5 strategy – trying different endings and then choosing the best one) http://www.hallco.org/literacy/index.php?opti on=com_content&view=article&id=7&Itemid =6 (Lesson 16) Types of Conclusions for Persuasive Writing Restate your lead sentence Call to action Create a positive or memorable image Summarize and connect to central message Clever or thought provoking comment W.4.3.1.a.iv Provide a concluding statement or section related to the opinion presented. (CCSS: W.4.1d) Revising Look for sections that are convincing Look for sections that are weak Rewrite parts that aren’t powerful Add parts that are missing Delete repeated or unnecessary information Move sections around to end with the strongest argument Nonfiction Mentor Texts Teaching Informational Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-8 by Lynne Dorfman & Rose Cappelli pp. 130-131 W.4.3.3.b With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. (CCSS: 6 Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing W.4.5) Examples of Persuasive Writing Book Review - Amazon Toy Review (Toys ‘r Us catalogue or online) Restaurant Review Food Review – clip from the movie Ratatoui (food critic at end of movie) Letter (to lunchroom lady, principal, authors, parents, librarian) Blog Newspaper ads Editorials Infomercial Can you convince me? http://www.readwritethink.org/classroomresources/lesson-plans/convince-developingpersuasive-writing-56.html Nonfiction Mentor Texts Teaching Informational Writing Through Children’s Literature, K-8 by Lynne Dorfman & Rose Cappelli pp. 116-120 (Book Reviews) www.studyzone.org www.jefferson.kyschools.us/Departments/Gheen s/LiteracyCloset/grade_5_writing_ondemand_GP_unitone-SI-pdf (opinion writing for 5th grade) www.greatsource.com/iwrite/educators/e_minile ssons_elem.html Scanned documents can be found on the S Drive On Demand Writing Prompts: Your principal is considering uniforms for the next school year. Take a position on this topic. In several paragraphs, write a letter to your principal to persuade him or her to agree with your position. Write a letter to your parent/guardian persuading him/her in several paragraphs why you should have __________. Your school is thinking about adding a class or activity for students next year. Pick an activity or class you think your school should have. Write a letter to your principal to persuade him/her why your school should have this class. Is there anything that people do that you think is wrong or unfair? Think about your favorite amusement ride. In several paragraphs, persuade other fifth graders that your favorite ride is the best and why. Should soda machines be allowed in elementary school? 7 Unit of Study: Persuasive Writing Think about a book you have read in the past year. Write a multiple paragraph letter to your teacher persuading him/her to read this book aloud to the class. Be sure to give multiple reasons why. The school has been given $5000 to buy a piece of playground equipment. Think about what piece of equipment would be best. Write a multiple paragraph letter to your principal to persuade him/her to purchase the piece of equipment that you want. Common Formative Assessment Tasks: Checks for Understanding 8