Name: _____________ Class: _________ Ma’am Booker Short Story Rubric Indicators Ideas Students can develop main ideas and supporting details on a topic, story, or idea in a paragraph format. How developed are the characters, setting and theme of the story? Exemplary 100% Writer has a clear, focused and compelling vision - holds reader’s attention Striking insight; impressive knowledge of topic Takes reader on a journey of understanding Clear main idea and significant, intriguing details Organization Students can choose and use organizational structures that give their audience the ability to access and understand their writing. How effectively have your structured your story to include the different components of the plot? Word Choice Students use accuracy and precision in choosing words that are specific to topic, genre, purpose How do the writer’s words enhance the reading experience? Sentence Fluency Students produce pieces of text that display well crafted sentences and a specific mood. Does the author vary sentences to enhance the reading experience? Writer has a clear and focused vision more often than not Knows topic well enough to write in broad terms Some new info, some common knowledge Clear main idea well supported by details Developing 76% Writer has a vision that is overshadowed by undeveloped, rambling text Needs more knowledge of topic – gaps apparent Mostly common knowledge and best guesses Generalities dominate; writer has a weak grip on main ideas Emerging 64% Writer lacks vision – still defining topic or key question Main idea never emerges, due to writer’s lack of knowledge Hastily assembled notes; random thoughts Filler dominates; main idea wanders in and out of focus Writer has a loose organization that may be out of synch with ideas reader must be attentive Writer’s organization is hard to follow , even with effort – a faint light in the distance Strong lead – conclusion that provides closure Lead and/or conclusion need work Lead and/or conclusion missing or formulaic, minimally helpful Helpful transitions often suggest connections Transitions sometimes missing or formulaic Structure helps reader track / process ideas Structure relies too much on formula – or necessitates a re-reading Writer’s voice as individual as fingerprints Writer demonstrates some sparks of individuality Writer’s voice emerges sporadically – not too strong or distinctive Uses voice as tool to enhance meaning for the audience Voice appealing and acceptable to topic/audience Voice often distant, not always directed to audience Writer has thoughtful organization guides reader through the text like a bright beacon Provocative opening – enlightening conclusion Smooth, well-crafted transitions give whole piece cohesion Structure enhances reader’s understanding Voice Students can create a voice as a writer that defines the work as their own. How vividly has the writer’s personality come through in the writing? Proficient 88% Passionate, vibrant, electric, compelling Writer has an organization that works in harmony with ideas Pleasant, sincere, emerging, earnest Writer’s word choice allows readers to read with ease and determine meaning Writer’s word choice easy to understand, some eye-catching phrases Writer has virtually crafted every sentence to begin differently P Writer has crafted purposeful sentence beginnings Quiet, subdued, restrained, inconsistent Transitions often unclear or missing Significant re-organization needed – reader often baffled Writer individual voice not evident Voice faint –OR, not right for audience/ purpose Distant, encyclopedic – OR inappropriately informal Writer’s word choice includes vague words or wordiness waters down the message Writer’s word choice and wordiness cloud message, leave reader confused Writer has crafted understandable sentences that occasionally repeat in structure Writer has repetitive beginnings Name: _____________ Class: _________ Learning about the strategies to read short fiction as well as about the elements and structures; using the writing process to create an original piece of short fiction; preparing to present and talk about the new fiction and its influences. Writing Process Students can use the appropriate steps of the writing process as needed, including planning, drafting, peer reviewing, editing/revising, and publishing. Reading Strategies Students can use a range of reading and viewing strategies for a specific purpose and apply metacognitive strategies as appropriate to specific genres of text. Elements of Fiction Students can describe and explore the roles of the elements of fiction. The writer uses the writing process fluidly as a tool to create an original and thought-provoking story The writer follows the steps of the writing process The writer uses some steps of the writing process The writer does not use the writing process in any logical way Uses all steps to create a published story Struggles somewhat with self and/or peer editing/revising Planning, drafting, editing and revising haphazard at best The reader cannot indentify or define key reading strategies Able to self and peer edit/revise The reader is highly skilled with the metacognitive strategies The reader can identify and define metacognitive reading strategies The reader can define reading strategies Can identify and define Can apply these strategies while reading and identify some examples Struggles with applying reading strategies and giving examples The reader can identify and define all studied elements of short story writing The reader understands, on a basic level, the elements of fiction Use strategies fluidly with clear examples The reader works well with all elements of fiction Can use and adapt elements to create an original short story Uses these element to create an understandable short story The reader cannot identify or use the elements of fiction Struggles with identifying them in works of fiction Struggles with using them in a short story Writing Structures Students can use their understanding of specific language forms, features, and structures of text to shape meaning as a reader. Organization (Transdisciplinary) How does time management help me prioritize and complete tasks? What preparation is necessary to complete this learning task? The writer can define the 4 basic writing structures in writing The writer can define the 4 writing structures Balances these structures in an understandable short story Can balance the structures in mechanistic way in a short story The student completes all assignments in a timely manner and continue learning with extension activities or further inquiry into the topic The student completes all assignments in a timely manner The student completes all assignments in a timely manner with guidance and redirection The student completes some assignments in a timely manner with guidance and redirection. Prepares thoroughly and effectively for use class time Prioritizes responsibilities and activities with the intention of meeting expectations and achieving goals Uses class time inconsistently dependent on prior preparation and effective teacher redirection as necessary Uses class time inconsistently requiring ongoing interventions to identify what will be required to complete a task or assignment Attempts to prioritize responsibilities and activities Attempts to prioritize responsibilities and activities with guidance and redirection The writer uses the 4 structures of writing to create a balanced and original short story Prioritize responsibilities and activities to meet expectations, achieve goals and feel fulfilled Oral Communication Students will understand how to communicate coherently and appropriately in a range of oral settings. The speaker speaks confidently with main ideas and support detail Prepares well and uses class time effectively Changes tone and approaches depending on audience The speaker develops main ideas and supporting details while speaking Expresses points of view in impromptu Able to express strong and clear opinions in a diplomatic and appropriate way Demonstrates a personal opinion or effective speaking in formal and informal contexts The writer does not understand or use the 4 writing structures The speaker can express main ideas and detail The speaker struggles with all forms of communication Is starting to express a point of view in different speaking situations Is unable to express ideas in a clear or concise manner Does not consistently demonstrate effective speaking in different context Cannot demonstrate personal opinion or effective speaking in different contexts