Definition Peer review Worksheet Author’s name: Class period: Due Date: November 5 Editor’s name: How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work The Introduction should: Engage and orient the reader by setting out a context for the discussion of duplicitous language. Does the introduction to the essay: ____Effectively hook the reader with a creative, original, and compelling hook? If so, what is the hook? _____________________________________________________________ ____Effectively provide the context for the discussion of duplicitous language? If so, where is the specific category of duplicitous language named?______________________________ ____ Include a specific thesis that names the category of duplicitous language, that establishes the function and meaning of the language type, and that identifies the impact of that duplicitous language? If so, what is the category? ________________________________________________ If so, what is the stated function and meaning? __________________________________________ If so, what is the stated impact? ____________________________________________________ Body Paragraph: Using SPES, the body paragraph should explore the meaning and impact of a specific form of duplicitous language. Does the body paragraph: ____Include a Statement that clearly identifies the specific language type and the impact of this language? If so, which language type is discussed? ______________________________________ If so, what is the impact? _____________________________________________________ ____ Discuss the various meanings and functions of the language type? If so, what are some of those meanings? ________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ ____ Include synthesis that discusses the impact of the language type? If so, what is the impact? _________________________________________________________ Definition Peer review Worksheet Author’s name: Class period: Due Date: November 5 Editor’s name: How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work The Introduction should: Engage and orient the reader by setting out a context for the discussion of duplicitous language. Does the introduction to the essay: ____Effectively hook the reader with a creative, original, and compelling hook? If so, what is the hook? _____________________________________________________________ ____Effectively provide the context for the discussion of duplicitous language? If so, where is the specific category of duplicitous language named?______________________________ ____ Include a specific thesis that names the category of duplicitous language, that establishes the function and meaning of that language type, and that identifies the impact of that duplicitous language? If so, what is the category? ________________________________________________ If so, what is the stated function and meaning? __________________________________________ If so, what is the stated impact? ____________________________________________________ Body Paragraph: Using SPES, the body paragraph should explore the meaning and impact of a specific form of duplicitous language. Does the body paragraph: ____Include a Statement that clearly identifies the specific language type and the impact of this language? If so, which language type is discussed? ______________________________________ If so, what is the impact? _____________________________________________________ ____ Discuss the various meanings and functions of the language type? If so, what are some of those meanings? ________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ ____ Include synthesis that discusses the impact of the language type? If so, what is the impact? _________________________________________________________ Author’s name: Class period: Due Date: November 5 Definition Peer review Worksheet Editor’s name: How well does the introduction catch your attention? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How well does the introduction introduce the topic? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work The Introduction should: Engage and orient the reader by setting out a context for the discussion of epithets. Does the introduction to the essay: ____Effectively hook the reader with a creative, original, and compelling hook? If so, what is the hook? _____________________________________________________________ ____Effectively provide the context for the discussion of epithets? If so, where is the specific category of epithets named? ___________________________________ ____ Include a specific thesis that names the category of epithet, that establishes the function and meaning of the epithets, and that identifies the impact of those epithets? If so, what is the category? ________________________________________________ If so, what is the stated function and meaning? __________________________________________ If so, what is the stated impact? ____________________________________________________ Body Paragraph: Using SPES, the body paragraph should explore the meaning and impact of a specific epithet (or two). Does the body paragraph: ____Include a Statement that clearly identifies the specific epithet and the impact of this epithet? If so, which epithet is discussed? ______________________________________ If so, what is the impact? _____________________________________________________ ____ Discuss the various meanings and functions of the epithet? If so, what are some of those meanings? ________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ ____ Include synthesis that discusses the impact of the epithet? If so, what is the impact? _________________________________________________________ Organization - Use a variety of techniques to sequence events so that they build on one another to create a Definition Peer review Worksheet coherent whole. Does the organization: ____Create a smooth progression of experiences or events that is logical, creative, and sophisticated? List at least one major conflict in this narrative: ____________________________________________ What is the climax in this story? _______________________________________________________ Is this climax appropriate given the story laid out in the narrative? _______________________________ Language - Use precise words and phrases, telling details, and sensory language to convey a vivid picture of the experiences, events, setting, and/or characters. Does the language used in the essay: ____Use precise, detailed and sophisticated words, phrases, and sensory language to engage the reader and convey a vivid picture? List two examples of imagery found in the essay: 1. __________________________________________ 2. ______________________________________ Conclusion: Provide a conclusion that follows from and reflects on what is experienced, observed, or resolved over the course of the narrative. How well does the conclusion relate to the introduction? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work Excellent Good Okay Needs Work Is the thesis restated in the conclusion? How well does the conclusion tie the paper together? Does this conclusion: ____Provide a conclusion that reflects on what is experienced, observed, or resolves? If so, what is the resolution? _________________________________________________________ ____Extends the meaning and purpose to connect to the audience and convey a complex and original theme? If so, what is that theme? ____________________________________________________________ Grammar and style: Are words or phrases repeated excessively? Does the author use words correctly (led vs. lead, their vs. there, effect vs. affect)? Are there parts of the paper you had to read multiple times to understand? (If so, which parts?) _____________________________________________________________________ How well does the paper flow within paragraphs? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work How is the flow between paragraphs? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work Does the author use a college level vocabulary? Excellent Good Okay Needs Work