CRITERION Clear Focus/ Assignment (5%) Parameters Instructions Purpose EXCELLENT (A) Student exceeds what is merely required Focused and coherent on the assignment. Focused and coherent Student has carefully considered type of Student has adequately considered type of reader reader audience Structure (5%) Abstract Introduction Body Conclusion Thesis Paragraphs Transitions Content/ Thought (80%) Knowledge Research Analysis Content Conclusions Creativity ADEQUATE (C) Focused and coherent UNSATISFACTORY (D) Unfocused, incoherent Student has not adequately Student has given little consideration to considered type of reader audience the type of reader audience FAILING (F) Little is written Student has neglected consideration of the type of reader audience audience Little consideration given to assignment’s No consideration given to purpose, scope assignment’s purpose, scope Sentence structure is sophisticated, creative, varied Paper shows lack of care in considering assignment’s scope and purpose Paper does not follow all instructions Sentences are clear, complete Little variety or sophistication in and varied in structure length and structure of sentences Format follows guidelines Format follows guidelines Format inconsistent or does not always follow guidelines Format is sloppy and does not follow guidelines Format is chaotic and does not attempt to follow guidelines Writing is occasionally wordy and unclear Writing is wordy and unclear Writing is erratic and incoherent Errors appear in word usage, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, citations, etc. Some grammatical errors appear (fragmentation, subject/verb agreement) Organization is not always logical. Abstract, introduction, body or conclusions may be incomplete Frequent errors in usage, word choice, spelling, punctuation, capitalization, citations, etc. Major grammatical errors are frequent (fragmentation, agreement, pronouns) Word usage is inappropriate, errors in spelling, punctuation, capitalization, citations are common Paper is poorly organized and poorly developed Paper is disorganized and chaotic Paper addresses scope and purpose of the assignment Paper follows instructions Style (10%) Mechanics Format Usage Syntax Grammar Citations GOOD (B) Paper addresses scope and purpose of the assignment adequately Paper follows instructions Facility with language is apparent, with Language usage is generally correct and appropriate usage correct and language is appropriate Punctuation, spelling, capitalization, Punctuation, spelling, citations, etc., are correct capitalization, citations, etc., are generally correct No grammatical errors Very few grammatical errors Paper is logically organized (abstract, introduction, body, conclusion) Paper generally focused with abstract, introduction, body, conclusions Thesis or controlling idea clearly articulated Thesis or controlling idea clearly articulated Conclusions follow from information presented Thesis or controlling idea is supported with evidence, reasons, quotes, etc. Good analysis Conclusions follow from information presented Paper fails to follow instructions Sentence length and structure lack variety Sentence length and structure have no variety Grammatical errors are pervasive (fragmentation, agreement, pronouns) Controlling idea unfocused and only Thesis is poorly defined, too narrow, too No thesis or controlling idea partially developed. Thesis too broad narrow or too broad Student attempts to provide Paragraphs do not stick with a single Incoherent paragraphs, no unity coherence and unity but is not topic, lack coherence and unity always successful Paper occasionally skips around Frequent problems with transitions No transitions without adequate transitions Coherent paragraphs, substantially Coherent paragraphs, developed, unified around single topic substantially developed, unified around single topic Logical transitions, signaled by Logical transitions, normally connecting language signaled by connecting language Paper demonstrates in-depth knowledge Paper demonstrates knowledge Knowledge of subject is adequate of subject and excellent research of subject and good research but not deep. Adequate research Thesis or controlling idea is fully supported with evidence, reasons, quotes, etc. Excellent analysis Paper fails to follow instructions Thesis or controlling idea is supported but not extensively. Adequate analysis Knowledge of subject is shallow. Little research No knowledge of subject. No research Thesis or controlling idea is not supported. Little analysis No attempt at supporting thesis or controlling idea. No analysis Conclusions are incomplete or do Conclusions are missing or do not follow not follow directly from information from information presented presented Sources of information are examined Sources of information are Information sources are flawed or Student makes little effort to consider critically and weighed against other examined critically and accepted uncritically critically the sources of information, if sources weighed against other sources any Writer shows ability to think critically Writer shows some ability to Writer occasionally shows ability to Writer shows little ability to think and creatively think critically and creatively think critically and creatively critically and creatively No conclusions or inconsistent with information presented No attempt to consider critically sources of information, if any Writer shows no ability to think critically and creatively Total Score SCORE