SCOTTISH TEXT (POETRY) Practice Paper Questions Read the poem below and then attempt the following questions. ‘Anne Hathaway’ 'Item I gyve unto my wife my second best bed ...' (from Shakespeare's will) The bed we loved in was a spinning world of forests, castles, torchlight, clifftops, seas where we would dive for pearls. My lover's words were shooting stars which fell to earth as kisses on these lips; my body now a softer rhyme to his, now echo, assonance; his touch a verb dancing in the centre of a noun. Some nights, I dreamed he'd written me, the bed a page beneath his writer's hands. Romance and drama played by touch, by scent, by taste. In the other bed, the best, our guests dozed on, dribbling their prose. My living laughing love I hold him in the casket of my widow's head as he held me upon that next best bed. Questions 1.(a) The poem is about Anne Hathaway’s relationship with Shakespeare. Explain fully what impression is given of their relationship in lines 1-3. (2) (b) Show how one example of Duffy’s language highlights their relationship. (2) 2. How does Duffy’s use of imagery and sound emphasise the desire between the couple in lines 3-7? (“My lover’s…centre of a noun”) (4) 3. How effective do you find the use of the idea of literature to convey Hathaway’s relationship in lines 8-10? (2) 4. With close reference to lines 12-14 explain the closing impression we are given of the relationship. (“My living laughing love…”) (2) 5. Duffy often deals with the idea of relationships in her poetry. Refer briefly to the central relationship in this poem and go on to discuss a central relationship in at least one other poem by Carol Ann Duffy. (8) Scottish Set Text – Practise Paper Marking Scheme 1. A) Any two of: romantic relationship, excitement, passion, ‘magical’/over-the-top, or any other appropriate answer. 1. B) Quote +comment : Suggested answers: “spinning world” = metaphor; suggesting intoxicating, excitement, passion “world”= word choice; all encompassing, nothing else matters “forests, castles…” =list; enchantment, love takes her to new places, wild, passionate “where…pearls”= imagery; passion, enchantment “lover’s”=word choice; sexual relationship; loving “words were shooting stars”=metaphor; magic, intensity, exceptional /rare “fell to earth as kisses” = imagery; romantic, celestial, out of this world. 2. Quote +comment x2 Imagery – suggested answers: “my body…rhyme” = metaphor; closeness and togetherness “now echo” = imagery; resonance /closeness; becoming one entity… “assonance” = word choice/imagery; as above “his touch…noun” = metaphor; loving being a “verb” emphasise their feelings are brought to life through actions Sound – suggested answers: Assonance – suggests longing for one another Rhyme scheme is more natural than strict Elizabethan sonnet mirroring their natural relationship /closeness. Natural with one another. 3. Comment on speaker’s feelings of completeness/ being given life through his love + reference to one of: “he’d written me” “page...writer’s hands” “Romance and drama” “dribbling their prose” 4. Quotation+ Comment “living laughing love” = alliteration; eternal nature; happy memories… “I hold him..casket of my widow’s head” = never forgotten even after death; tenderness… “next best bed”= marital bed being the most important; significance of their everyday lives and the natural love.. 5. Duffy often deals with the idea of relationships in her poetry. Refer briefly to the central relationship in this poem and go on to discuss a central relationship in at least one other poem by Carol Ann Duffy. (8 marks) Answer Establish commonality ( 2 marks) Give an example from the poem in front of you (2 marks) Give two examples from one or two other poems (4 marks) I) Commonality: many of the poems deal with relationships. Havisham – the broken relationship with the lover who jilted her at the altar Anne Hathaway – the love/hate relationship between Anne and Shakespeare Mrs Midas – the breaking relationship between Midas and his wife. (2 marks) II) An example from the text in front of you (Anne Hathaway). We know the relationship is harmonious because Anne refers to Shakespeare as her “ living, laughing love.” The use of the words “laughing” and “love” show the positive and happy nature of their relationship. (2 marks) III) Two examples from other Duffy poems. In Havisham we know there is a love hate relationship between Havisham and the lover who spurned her because she calls him “Beloved Sweetheart Bastard”. This oxymoron shows she still loves him despite what he did to her – “Beloved” but at the same time she hates him for ruining her – “Bastard”. (2 marks) In Mrs Midas we know the relationship between Midas and his wife is breaking up because she says “Separate beds. In fact, I put a chair against my door”. The use of the word “separate” shows they are living apart and by putting a chair against the door we realise Mrs Midas cannot stand to be near her husband because she fears his gold touch and she is hurt by his greedy actions. (2 marks) 8 marks all together