Paired Texts plan – Atonement & The Lives of Others Copy this table and complete with as many detailed & significant connections as possible including textual references “Ground” for comparison sociocultural and situational contexts Text 1 Text 2 Atonement The Lives of Others British Middle Class during the Empire’s 20th C. decline – 1930’s to 1999 Set in 1984 at the height of East Germany’s communist GDR repression of political freedom & surveillance of its citizens, the film comments obliquely on post-Berlin Wall ‘Ostalgie’ for the East, through its documentary realist style. The story is centred on the Tallis family, who represent the degeneracy of Britain’s aristocracy in particular and the class system in general. Jack Tallis’ patronage of Robbie foreshadows the broader social changes of the century which will lead to Briony’s West Indian taxi driver at the novel’s end – a postgraduate student at the LSE, whose social and professional prospects in 1999 are even brighter, without class patronage (ironically echoed by Briony’s assumptions about him) than Robbie’s were in the 1930’s. Writing at the end of the millennium, McEwan looks back at both the long history of the novel as a literary genre and the 20th C’s shorter history of Modernism as a movement that attempted to renovate the novel as a form for representing and making sense of the human condition. Atonement seems to view both of these as failures, symbolised by the macrocosm of WWII – a political failure of modernism’s promise of a ‘brave new world’ – and the microcosm of Briony’s attempt to atone for her childhood error through the novelist’s art, initially in the problematic form of the classic realist novel. Protagonist’s (and other characters’) ‘journey’ textual references Briony’s = as putative author of the novel and thus the only character who holds the entire narrative together, Briony’s journey of atonement is its raison d’etre. Her relationship with the two lovers, Robbie & Cecilia, provides the novel’s moral centre and connects McEwan’s critiques of Modernism and the classic realist novel, both as failures of the imagination, with the doomed love affair that had been a cliché from Thomas Hardy to D.H. Lawrence. Robbie’s = beginning as a cliché of aspiration like Charles Dickens’ Pip from Great Expectations, his imaginary journey at the hands of Briony the author becomes a metaphor for all the failed promise of the 20th C. As a projection of Briony’s imagination, he also represents her greatest achievement of imagining herself into the feelings of others. NB: Robbie’s journey towards Dunkirk in Part Two, as a return to Cecilia and exposé of war’s evils, echoes Amir’s return to Afghanistan, where his rescue of Sohrab acts as both an indictment of the nation’s civil wars and a rehabilitation of Hassan’s legacy. The story is centred on an artistic couple – successful playwright & committed socialist Georg Dreyman and his lover, renowned actress Christa-Maria Sieland – whose position in society is threatened by the attentions of Minister Hempf, a party official who uses his power to break them up in order to maintain his ongoing affair with the actress. Von Donnersmarck imagines the ‘one good man’ who could have resisted the state through the character of expert Stasi spy Gerd Wiesler. His surveillance of Dreyman and Sieland becomes the catalyst for a personal transformation in rejecting the corrupt values of the police state. The film embodies various forms of atonement, from Wiesler’s repudiation of the system he has served so faithfully, through Sieland’s suicide to Dreyman’s publication of his novel Sonata for a Good Man. Cecilia’s = from the awkward, slightly snobbish and self-important young woman of Part One, she grows up through suffering – separated from Robbie, alienated from her parents, despising her once-loved sister and living the hard life of a nurse in wartime. There is no space for a spoilt, upper-middle class ingénue. As a projection of the older Briony’s desire to mould her to her own purpose, none of the younger Cecilia’s faults is in evidence in Part Three: a nearperfect character for posterity atoning for Briony’s sin. Lola’s = as an allusion to two eponymous heroines – parodying Richardson’s Clarissa with her name echoing Vladimir Nabokov’s Lolita – Lola’s social advancement stands as a morally bankrupt foil to Robbie’s failure. Paul Marshall = Psychological insights Briony’s rewriting of the novel again and again is her act of atonement for her crime of bearing false witness against Robbie that wrecks his and Cecilia’s lives. But her lifetime of guilt needs to be moderated by her original youth, innocent (though foolish) motives and lack of any real opportunity to retract her evidence once adults had begun to act on her original statement. Her guilt must also be shared by Paul Marshall, the actual perpetrator who also lets an innocent man pay for his crime; Lola for remaining silent to escape the humiliation and difficulty of accusing Paul (or accounting for herself, if she was a willing partner); and Briony’s family, the police and other experts who know her and should recognise her love of drama and need to be the centre of attention make it very difficult for her to relinquish the position she has won by her certainty. Yet Briony cannot be completely absolved. When given the clearest opportunity to change her evidence, she refuses it: ‘Yes, I saw him. I saw him.’ (p.181) The war in the novel extends guilt to the whole of society. As the most destructive event in human history, WW2 sees Robbie, the most guiltless of characters, reflect on his own guilt. The span of the novel has seen ‘First his own life ruined, then everybody else’s’ (p.217). No one remains innocent. ‘Everyone was guilty, and no one was … there weren’t enough people, enough paper and pens, enough patience and peace, to take down the statements of all the witnesses and gather the facts. The witnesses were guilty too.’ (p.216) It is a stark message of social responsibility, as relevant to the time of McEwan writing as it is to when Robbie is speaking. The fragile peace of Europe, patched together at after WW1, has been shattered. Guilt extends backwards in time, as well as forwards. When Betty is blamed for breaking Uncle Clem’s vase, we know it was not her fault. It, too, had been pieced together inexpertly. But many of the novel’s small acts of guilt are sins of omission, of staying silent: Emily is guilty of neglecting Briony and of neither searching for the twins nor calling the police; Lola is guilty of keeping silent; Cecilia is guilty of hiding her breaking of the vase; Robbie, largely set apart from this general trend of guilt through inactivity by his tendency to decisive action, is almost guilty of doing nothing to save the RAF man, but is redeemed by Mace prompting him. The message extends to all of society, then and now: ‘You’ve killed no one today? But how many did you leave to die?’ (p.261) More important than guilt to the novel, but curiously implicated by it, is love. Briony’s family is largely dysfunctional. Emily says she loves her children, but it is an ineffectual love, never visibly resulting in any benefit or care. Briony and Cecilia love each other, but their love is squandered and destroyed by inappropriate actions. Cecilia adores and admires Leon at the start, but realises later that he is spineless and superficial. The only love left is the core loves of Cecilia and Robbie, which nothing can alter. It is Robbie’s love for Cecilia that keeps him alive in prison and in France. There is, for him, only love or oblivion. The change in Robbie and Cecilia’s relationship from friends to lovers begins in awkwardness and antagonism. Their episode of passion is so intense it is aggressive, and the description of the sex is astonishingly eloquent and sensual. But there is embarrassment, fumbling, and Briony’s interruption, which adds bathos. The lovers’ heightened sensual awareness during dinner keeps the emotional charge and tension alive, extending it for hours. By the time the lovers are seen together again in Part Three their love has the weight of worldly experience behind it and has been hard won through years of waiting and suffering. It also has a purpose and immense strength. They have earned the right to compare themselves with the great lovers of history, recited in their letters of Part Two (‘In the deserts of the heart/Let the healing fountain start.’ p.242 is Robbie quoting from W. H. Auden’s 1940 poem “In Memory of W. B. Yeats”). NB: While almost a minor subplot in The Kite Runner, Amir’s marriage to Soraya is given equivalent literary (and ironic) allusions, to Rostam and Tamineh. Cecilia’s love draws Robbie back from the brink when he wants to hit Briony, just as it once used to bring Briony back from the brink of childhood nightmares. It is, Briony acknowledges at the end, unbearable that such love should not find fulfilment. She cannot allow Cecilia and Robbie to die, as she suggests they did in ‘real life’, but makes their love transcend death by writing a happy ending. Their love is not diminished in any way if they do not survive, but it is tragically wasted. Is Briony being idealistic in bringing Robbie and Cecilia together happily? We might wonder how much chance this relationship would really have, limited as it was to a single episode of interrupted love-making and then an extended correspondence from prison. McEwan confronts this issue head on in the tea Robbie and Cecilia share in London before he goes to war. But in the end it barely matters whether they could have lived happily ever after. Their story has become a fiction, but also an atonement and a tribute. As Briony says, they would all be forgotten anyway, without the book, and then what difference would it make what ‘really happened’ (p.371)? The novel – hers and McEwan’s – stands as testament to love, and in that it deserves the ending which best suits its enduring purpose. In a novel that claims to be constructed from events remembered from the past, memory is closely entwined with the truth. Has Briony remembered accurately? If she has made up details, is she lying? Whether fiction lies has a long philosophical history. Sometimes, she steps in as narrator and acknowledges that she does not remember: ‘it was not the long-ago morning she was recalling so much as her subsequent accounts of it’ (p.41). There are many lapses of memory and failures of understanding. The French boy, Luc Cornet, believes Briony is his French girlfriend. Briony answers his question by confirming that she loves him, as no other answer is possible and at that moment she does. It is both true and untrue. Robbie, delirious in France, imagines and recalls things that are not real. Emily wrongly thinks that Paul Marshall is good with children. Cecilia and Robbie are convinced that Danny Hardman was really the rapist. In the end, the truth a novel tells is a truth about, and distilled from, human experience and therefore immeasurably more valuable than tiny technical details. [adapted from York Advanced Readers Guide to Atonement, by Anne Rooney] Narrative and stylistic form textual references Tripartite chronological structure with an epilogue – organised to reflect movements in time and space and concentration on different characters (focalisation). Symmetry resides in the pattern begining with all the characters together at the Tallis house, with attention focused on Briony. Parts Two and Three divide the narrative to focus on Robbie in France and Briony in London, with Cecilia a shadowy presence in both. Finally, the stories come together again to end back in the family house, with Briony at the centre and the remaining surviving characters around her. Asymmetry occurs in Part One’s half novel length and the short twenty page epilogue’s very different status. The latter’s meta-narrative – an outer fiction enclosing all that has come before – moves the novel’s preoccupation with truth to a new level of complex ambiguity. The divison of the main text into three parts allows McEwan to concentrate on key moments in time and place without the need to fill gaps or account for passing time. Rather than showing how Briony came to feel guilty, how Robbie changed, or what Cecilia does in the meantime, we see what happened and then are shown moments of what look like resolution. The epilogue proves this to be a misrepresentation.. Part One is quite different from Parts Two and Three: in its division into numbered chapters, unlike their continuous narratives with only slight pauses to indicate scene changes or passing time; its varied focalisation or different points of view contrasts with Robbie’s dominating Part Two and Briony’s dominating Part Three and the epilogue. The multiple voices that crowd Part One also give this part its elusive, hazy quality as if shimmering through a heat haze with indistinct edges, where little can be pinned down. Little is happening and nothing is seen head-on, but glimpsed or recalled later: the rape is a key example, not even seen by Briony. The structure is deceptive. Before we read the epilogue, it looks as though the novel has presented an event then the key points that lead towards its resolution: Robbie’s survival in France and Briony growing up enough to face a meeting with the lovers where they will start the process of mending the damage done. By denying that this is what happened, the epilogue wrenches the structure out of shape and pulls the two stories apart so that Robbie’s and Cecilia’s endings are split between parts of the novel and between England and France. This messy, frustrating lack of resolution is the very thing Briony tried to avoid in her childhood stories. Themes / motifs: 1. Love & friendship 2. Guilt 3. Justice 4. Time 5. Betrayal 6. Empathy 7. Potential for change \ metamorphosis & growth 8. textual references 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. Taking a stand against oblivion – the persistence of genuine human contact through the power of the imagination. Robbie’s & Cecilia’s relationship has all the hallmarks of a doomed passionate love. Grown out of childhood familiarity and consummated in the heat of young adulthood, they are separated by fate almost as soon as they recognise each other’s true feelings. Through Briony’s imagination, their love sustains them through the separation of prison and war. Her part in their reunion is to smooth over the pain caused by her false witness, ending in a memory of Cecilia calming her nightmares: ‘Come back. It was only a bad dream, Briony, come back.’ (p.349). The view of the lovers through the perceptions of a child makes them highly ambiguous: initially causing their tragic separation, Briony’s romantic atonement seeks to reunite them in fiction. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. Robbie’s & Cecilia’s relationship has all the hallmarks of a doomed passionate love. Grown out of childhood familiarity and consummated in the heat of young adulthood, they are separated by fate almost as soon as they recognise each other’s true feelings. Through Briony’s imagination, their love sustains them through the separation of prison and war. Her part in their reunion is to smooth over the pain caused by her false witness, ending in a memory of Cecilia calming her nightmares: ‘Come back. It was only a bad dream, Briony, come back.’ (p.349). The view of the lovers through the perceptions of a child makes them highly ambiguous: initially causing their tragic separation, Briony’s romantic atonement seeks to reunite them in fiction.