IGCSE First Language English (0500/04) Band: points SFS Grade Equiv W1 Content and development of ideas W2 Organization W3 Language use & sentence structure W4 Style and register W5 Mechanics: spelling, punctuation, grammar Mature, confident & stylistic. 1: 40-36 SFS: 100-96% Challenging task completed. Detailed use & analysis of experience, feelings and imagination. Points well supported with detail & explained. Arguments are interesting & well developed. Logical or creative plan in linked stages (effective transitions). Strong paragraphing & well- ordered sentences. Confident use of strong diction and strong, varied syntax. Style & register suits audience & context with sophistication. Writer’s voice is strong. Highly accurate punctuation, spelling, and grammar, the use of which expresses shades of meaning. TOTAL MARK (Writing) = PORTFOLIO ESSAYS 1-3 Name: Frequently interesting. 2: 35-31 SFS: 95-91% Analyses experience, feelings and imagination. Points usually supported with detail & explained. Arguments well developed. Competent Satisfactory Clear and simple Frequent Errors Unclear 3: 30-26 SFS: 90-86% Clear expression of experience, feelings & imagination. Some use of evidence, detail & explanation to support points. Some development of relevant arguments. 4:25-21 SFS: 84-77% Some expression of feelings and imagination. Some brief use of evidence and explanation to support points. Arguments are relevant and partially developed. 5: 20-16 SFS: 76-71 Feelings and imagination are intelligible. Arguments have variable relevance, logic, evidence and development. 6: 15-11 SFS: 68-53% Simple attempt to express feelings and imagination. Arguments very simple and brief. 7: 6-10 SFS: 30-50% Occasional expression of meaning, feelings and imagination. Poor command of language may make it hard to follow. Clear, well ordered plan with good transitions. Usually well ordered sentences. Paragraph planning and sentence order are mostly clear. Transitions may be inconsistent or less well chosen. Evidence of overall structure, but sometimes planning and sentence order are less clear. Material may be in wrong paragraph. Plan sometimes muddled, hard to follow. Paragraphs used but often partial & disordered. Beginning & end attempted. Plan is very unclear or absent. May be some signs of structure. Use of appropriate & varied diction, accurate & somewhat varied syntax Style & register suit audience & context Some varied diction. Basic, but accurate syntax. Occasionally Varied, but mainly simple diction and syntax . Simple or straightforward diction and syntax. Some syntax unclear. Mainly accurate use of simple diction and syntax. Some confusing syntax. Very narrow range or inaccurate use of diction and syntax. Style shows clear attempt to consider audience & context. Occasionally considers audience & context. Slight variation for audience & context, maybe not deliberate. Punctuation & grammar used to aid communication. A few minor errors. Punctuation and grammar used competently. Some minor and a few serious errors. Punctuation and grammar used, though errors might cause reading difficulty. Possibly numerous errors. Still readable, but with frequent errors (tense, prepositions, stops). Little variation of style or inappropriate style for audience/purpose. Correct simple spelling & a little, punctuation, but inadequate understanding of grammar. No consideration of audience, context. Inappropriate style. Significant weaknesses and errors. Reader can follow at least part of the writing. /40 IGCSE SFS : From IGCSE First Language English Syllabus p. 26-28 (6.2.3 Assessment Criteria, Table A for portfolio assignments 1-3)